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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 17
Bella pov
We were playing chess on the sofa and as always I was winning! Hehehe it feels so great every time I beat him
-u lose again!
I said and clapped my hands
-yeah your good at this thing
-well what can I say……………
He sttood up and hugged me
-tell me how you do this?
He whispered
I touched his head and tapped it hard and said
-just think.
-ok
He kissed my forehead and went upstaires to change cause we were going hunting
He came back and we raced deep in the green greeny jungel I always hated that color I like bron ,warm colors like the sun…………………….
I stopped at my place not moving there was vampire scent every where there was 12 of them I could tell from the diffrebt tastes matt just looked at me confused he really isnt good at this stuff
-the scent do you know it?
He breathed the aire and gasped he turned white as a ghost whiter than any vampire I have ever seen in my life
-oh yes
He said and pain filled his eyes
-what
-they are the ones that killed her……………..
Oh the ones that killed her mate suzi! So what are they doing here?
He looked so sad so I rushed to him and hugged him he hugged him back he hugged me tighter then I realized he was shaking ……he was subbing tearless subs
-what's wrong?
He took a deep breath
-theire back….for me they told me they would come back in a few years but they never came and know theire here……………
-I wont let anyone hurt you!
I said and kissed him hard on his lips he dragged me to him and kissed me like this was are last moment I kissed him back with all the force in my body not wanting to let him go. I was feeling his pain I couldn’t stand 1 min away from him let alone the rest of my life but I will do anything in my power to help him I wanted to ask him if he can teleports us when he saw the question in my face
-I cant teleport when there here one of them the darck browm haired guy has a power he can controll ypur power so then u cant use it .
I sighed and kissed him another time
-I love you,I love you I love you I love you I lovr you……………………………………
O broke into subs
-shhh shhh its ok…….look they are getting closer every second so run as fast as you can and save yourself..
-no!no…I will never leave you
I shook my head disgused at the idea when I heard footsstepps I turned around matt was in fron of me in his crouching zone
-hello matt long time no see
-yeah I hoped there wouldn’t be any at all
-so you found a new mate that's cool……..poor suzie…..im sorry for your loss bythe way…you know she diserved to die
-what do you want?
-I just came to fullfill my promise as I told you 360 years ago I would come and kill you soon ……..none of you diserved to live …..
-what did she do to you?
-she killed my daughter when she was a new born …my little angel was wanderring in the jungel chasing a butterfly when YOUR suzie kille my only CHILED!!!!!!!!!
He screamed
-what have I done to you?
He was confused
-matt you protected her from me 4 times you kept teleporting her different places you knew what she had done but YOU TOOK HER SIDE I thought we were friends……..WE WERE friends before she showed up and changed you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Then you became like me …so then we could have had lots of fun! But you…………..CHOSE her againe!!!!!!! YOU DISERVE TO DIE TOO!!!
Matt just looked at him then at me
-I will do you one favor and I wont kill her cause she didn’t have a part in this!
-no!
I shouted
-Bella he's right you have no part in this you should live a long happy life………………….
I went to attack the men in front off matt but 4 huge hands caugh me not letting me go the other ones moved closer to matt
-no PLEASE PLEASE DON’T DO THIS…….
-Bella…….
Matt said
-no no no no no no I don’t want to let go of you I LOVE YOU I don’t want to be alone again I don’t want to suffer PLEASE
I begged the dark haired guys standing in front of matt they looked so cold wsith red eyes like they couldn’t understand the pain I was in
Matt just looked down closing his eyes
-please don’t do this please DON’T KILL HIM HE'S EVERY THING I HAVE PLEASE……………
I used all my energy and loosend the hands that were grabbing me rushing towards matt but I hit something hard and the hand caugh me and pulled me back there hold was so strong that my dress had 1000 holes in it already I tried to fight them but there hold was so strong but I still didn’t give up
-please don’t please
It felt like tears were running down my cheeks but……….nothing
They didn’t pay attention to me and went closer to matt
-I love you
He said his eyes fulll of pain
-I love you too
I said my voice shaking
The big guy went closer to matt he broke matts neck matt screamed in pain then every thing went silent
-no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no
I kept saying sheking violently matt was dead
This pain was too much it was like my life had ended likei was empty this lose wase too much even worse than edward or when my parents pased away
-eeeeeeeeh eeeeh eeeh
I was subbing so hard and kind of creepy noises came out of me I didn’t want to live anymore I wanted to die
I looked at matt hoping he will wake up or move but nothing the huge guy ripped matt into pieces and burned him a purpel smoke filled the sky
-no no no no no no no no no no no no no
I kept saying again shaking my head like it would go away or I will wake up from my night mare I was shaking again I couldn’t controll myself the guards let me fel on the ground and ran away with their masters
I was punching the ground as hard as I could I was alone I was alone I was alone……….no I cant take this I just lay there on the ground still shaking when I fainted……………………………………………………………..
Creating a world, whether for fantasy of sci-fi, is no easy task. Worlds contain wonders of all kinds, plus various cultures, climates, and creatures. From my own research, many writers use parts of this world, the "real" world, as the basis for their own worlds. I've compiled this guide from personal experience. Wherever possible, I've included examples. (Note: othe examples can be found in various places on this site. The avid user can find them with relative ease.)
LOCATION
The universe is a big place. Your world has to be somewhere. Its position in the universe could affect your characters...
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posted by Grintforever
Alone!

There once was a girl who biked and ran
with her best friend who had a bright orange tan
But then one day she when biking alone
and thats when she fell along way from home.

She lay still on the ground
not makeing a sound,and thats when she found
that she could not talk
let alone walk

As she slowly made her way home
she wished that she had a phone
so she could call for help
insted of put up with the pain that made her yelp.

She pushed her bike down the dusty track
with a sore haed and an acking back
Then she came to the place where her and her best friend met
just as the sun was begining to set

The next day at school she was no where in sight
which gave her best frined a very big fright
but she was a home tucked up in bed
with a sore leg and an acking head

Thats when she remebered what her best friend had said
about not going out bikeing alone
along way from home.

What do you think?(I think it is very bad) and sorry of the spelling.
posted by theanimemaster
You
It's the middle of the night,



And I can't sleep




Your face, planted with a smile



Are the only things I see




Your voice calling my name



Is the only thing I hear




I can feel your hand rubbing my back



Hearing you whisper ''good night''




I jump and look around,



And soon realize you are not there




I sob, tightly holding the gift you once gave me



It's right here, on my bed, in perfect condition.




30 minutes later, I wipe my face and go back to sleep…




I wake up once again



And the cycle starts all over again…
added by zanhar1
posted by zutaradragon
your mistakes don't define you, now. they don't tell you who you're not, or who you can never be. what's it take to get you to say you'll try? you've got to live this life like it's the only one you've got. what would you say, what would you do, if this was your last day? so, you found out today that life's not the same. not quite as good as yesterday.
and, yes, i know it hurts & i know your pain, but u never gave up this easily befor. such a beautiful thing to just throw away. i think you need to know that, of all the colors that you shine, this is surely not your best, it's really not your style. you should think about what you do, befor you do it, over and over again. i know you feel alone, that know one can figure you out, but you sould know that we just love to see you smile.i know you feel like you're lost, feel like you've drifted way to far away, but we can help you come back.
posted by alicia386
Shane Gildmen stared at the roaring waves. In just a couple of days his girlfriend would be back from her trip to Europe. He had no idea how he was going to deliever the tragic news. His girlfriend was so fragile. He didn't want to crush her feelings.
A week after she left, he cheated on her with Emily Tones. Emily was there for him. While his girlfriend, Trinity, went on vacation. Emily talked with him when he thought Trinity was cheating on him with some european dude. He kissed Emily. He daydreamed about Emily. He even wanted more from Emily then just a kiss. Soon he depended on Emily....
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added by axemnas
Source: Lindsay Reddick, axemnas
posted by madening_mahem
Example of the Maiden
Example of the Maiden
At night, far away, in ancient Japan...
A fair maiden slumbered, only to be awakened by blood curdling screams. She open her eyes to a frightening sight, the bodies of her most beloved servants and close relatives astray on the floor, lifeless, dead. She hastily slide open the doors to her room, and ran down the corridor, which was lit with the moonlight that seeped through the paper doors, which were now drenched in blood.
Though her limbs felt heavy, she ran as fast as her heart beat. Running away from the cries of her family still being slaughtered by an unknown murderer, away from what...
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posted by Epismatic
The Man With No Eyes Collection (1): The Actor




Sundown, sunrise.

Big smile!

(Tired eyes.)

I vanish into thin air.

An actor never fails.

(Lies.)

To give the world a rousing show

(While begging to be recognized.)

To shine as brightly as the sun

Upon the throne that we’ve devised.

A patchwork-quilt protagonist

A villain from the shadow realm

The work of the illusionist

When I, the actor, take the helm.

“Hey, wouldn’t it be cool to see…”

The whisper marks my story’s birth.

The audience will gather ‘round.

(The jury to decide my worth.)


"The Man With No Eyes" is a series of poems, all of which are unfolding from one character's point of view. They are meant to represent an ongoing journey. So if you liked this one, stay tuned for more. :)
posted by Dearheart
A/N: I finished writing this about five minutes ago, lol. It's actually a song, but I figured it would fit as a poem as well.

This poem/song was inspired by two things: 1) A few of my favorite anime couples, namely Ed x Winry from Fullmetal Alchemist and Hoshino x Tanabe from Planetes (AWESOME series). And 2) while my dad was in Iraq, he heard "My Immortal" for the first time and said he loved the idea behind it...but it was too sad/depressing because "the chorus was in past tense instead of present tense." So he asked me if maybe I could take the same concept and do my own thing with it. I...
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posted by vanelandsisters
I remember your books
In the hallway
I remember you cracking up
Microscopes in the garage
Those old parts
I love you more than anything

I remember your blue eyes
Looking into my emeralds
Like we lived in our own world
I remember you chasing
Our brother
Then falling asleep in my lap
I can still feel you curled up by my side
Little man
And even through that night I knew
You fought it hard as you could
Remember I
Held you and whispered

Come on, baby
With me
I'm never gonna leave
You behind
You were
My best
Thirteen years

I remember the first night
When my hope
Turned to crying and screaming your name
Flowers pile up in the...
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added by segafan
She was beauty woven into a living being... If only that were the case. But as I stepped towards her, opening my mouth to speak, she faced me, never moving her feet to turn. We held eachother's gaze for a few agonizing moments. It seemed as though she was just going to stare at me until I did something.
When I reached this conclusion, i decided to take a step forward. As I did so, she began to shiver. Another step, and she began to twitch anxiously. Another step, this one seemed to be all she could take. Yet, I had to know. So I took one last step, and she broke.
Her eyes flashed and her hair...
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posted by dragonsmemory
Creating your own universe is a great way to pass time. It will also give you a rough outline for your writings. These are the steps I follow in creating Eden.
Step 1: Establish main geographical features. This will be crucial in establishing the settings in your stories. If a certain river has magical properties, you have to knw where the source of the river is to be able to pinpoint the source of the power.
Step 2: Establish lifeforms present on your world. You have to know what creatures live there before you can write their histories. If the dragons had not attempted to merge themselves with...
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posted by sasuhia4ever
    “It all started about six years ago…my mom and dad were at the park playing with my younger brother, Tyler, on his fourth birthday. I had decided to hang out with my friends instead… now I wish that I had never made such an idiotic decision. Cause of that day at the park, someone came and murdered my parents and stole away my little brother. I know all of this because that dirt bag left a letter saying “ I murdered both of your parents and stole your little brother because when I went to kill him I just couldn’t bring myself to do it. So, I haven’t decided...
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added by khaledodeh
posted by uniquezandy
Sams POV
I am your normal, typical everyday teen who is 16 years old. Samatha is my real name; say it to my face and I will bite your head off. People say when there young, (girls anyway,) "Look mummy, I want to be a princess when I grow up, and I'm going to marry a handsome prince." To tell the truth, I used to be a girl like that. A girl who read every fairy tale she could get her hands on, and believe that they are real. It is a load of poison now. I had to learn that in real life, true love is rubbish and you won't grow up to be want you want. And in life, change happens quite alot and...
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added by Nostariel510
Source: google
Taylor Mali lovingly mocks his own genre.
video
parody
funny
comedy
poems
slam poetry
taylor mali
i could be a poet
posted by para-scence
**6 months later...***

Bride laughed and giggled as I bounced her on my leg; just another day at the park. It was summer, finally, a break from school. I guess I was looking forward to being a sophomore. School wasn't that bad anymore now that I had my friends. Felicity wasn't that bad either. We're not exactly the greatest of friends, but we can tolerate each other now. Also, Trace and I started dating. It was great; he's really sweet and funny. I couldn't ask for a better guy.

"Come on, Harley! Gail said to be home by three!" Aspen called. Everyone else was already at the sidewalk, starting...
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