Writing Article: black moon chapter 17

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posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 17
Bella pov
We were playing chess on the sofa and as always I was winning! Hehehe it feels so great every time I beat him
-u lose again!
I said and clapped my hands
-yeah your good at this thing
-well what can I say……………
He sttood up and hugged me
-tell me how you do this?
He whispered
I touched his head and tapped it hard and said
-just think.
-ok
He kissed my forehead and went upstaires to change cause we were going hunting
He came back and we raced deep in the green greeny jungel I always hated that color I like bron ,warm colors like the sun…………………….
I stopped at my place not moving there was vampire scent every where there was 12 of them I could tell from the diffrebt tastes matt just looked at me confused he really isnt good at this stuff
-the scent do you know it?
He breathed the aire and gasped he turned white as a ghost whiter than any vampire I have ever seen in my life
-oh yes
He said and pain filled his eyes
-what
-they are the ones that killed her……………..
Oh the ones that killed her mate suzi! So what are they doing here?
He looked so sad so I rushed to him and hugged him he hugged him back he hugged me tighter then I realized he was shaking ……he was subbing tearless subs
-what's wrong?
He took a deep breath
-theire back….for me they told me they would come back in a few years but they never came and know theire here……………
-I wont let anyone hurt you!
I said and kissed him hard on his lips he dragged me to him and kissed me like this was are last moment I kissed him back with all the force in my body not wanting to let him go. I was feeling his pain I couldn’t stand 1 min away from him let alone the rest of my life but I will do anything in my power to help him I wanted to ask him if he can teleports us when he saw the question in my face
-I cant teleport when there here one of them the darck browm haired guy has a power he can controll ypur power so then u cant use it .
I sighed and kissed him another time
-I love you,I love you I love you I love you I lovr you……………………………………
O broke into subs
-shhh shhh its ok…….look they are getting closer every second so run as fast as you can and save yourself..
-no!no…I will never leave you
I shook my head disgused at the idea when I heard footsstepps I turned around matt was in fron of me in his crouching zone
-hello matt long time no see
-yeah I hoped there wouldn’t be any at all
-so you found a new mate that's cool……..poor suzie…..im sorry for your loss bythe way…you know she diserved to die
-what do you want?
-I just came to fullfill my promise as I told you 360 years ago I would come and kill you soon ……..none of you diserved to live …..
-what did she do to you?
-she killed my daughter when she was a new born …my little angel was wanderring in the jungel chasing a butterfly when YOUR suzie kille my only CHILED!!!!!!!!!
He screamed
-what have I done to you?
He was confused
-matt you protected her from me 4 times you kept teleporting her different places you knew what she had done but YOU TOOK HER SIDE I thought we were friends……..WE WERE friends before she showed up and changed you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Then you became like me …so then we could have had lots of fun! But you…………..CHOSE her againe!!!!!!! YOU DISERVE TO DIE TOO!!!
Matt just looked at him then at me
-I will do you one favor and I wont kill her cause she didn’t have a part in this!
-no!
I shouted
-Bella he's right you have no part in this you should live a long happy life………………….
I went to attack the men in front off matt but 4 huge hands caugh me not letting me go the other ones moved closer to matt
-no PLEASE PLEASE DON’T DO THIS…….
-Bella…….
Matt said
-no no no no no no I don’t want to let go of you I LOVE YOU I don’t want to be alone again I don’t want to suffer PLEASE
I begged the dark haired guys standing in front of matt they looked so cold wsith red eyes like they couldn’t understand the pain I was in
Matt just looked down closing his eyes
-please don’t do this please DON’T KILL HIM HE'S EVERY THING I HAVE PLEASE……………
I used all my energy and loosend the hands that were grabbing me rushing towards matt but I hit something hard and the hand caugh me and pulled me back there hold was so strong that my dress had 1000 holes in it already I tried to fight them but there hold was so strong but I still didn’t give up
-please don’t please
It felt like tears were running down my cheeks but……….nothing
They didn’t pay attention to me and went closer to matt
-I love you
He said his eyes fulll of pain
-I love you too
I said my voice shaking
The big guy went closer to matt he broke matts neck matt screamed in pain then every thing went silent
-no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no
I kept saying sheking violently matt was dead
This pain was too much it was like my life had ended likei was empty this lose wase too much even worse than edward or when my parents pased away
-eeeeeeeeh eeeeh eeeh
I was subbing so hard and kind of creepy noises came out of me I didn’t want to live anymore I wanted to die
I looked at matt hoping he will wake up or move but nothing the huge guy ripped matt into pieces and burned him a purpel smoke filled the sky
-no no no no no no no no no no no no no
I kept saying again shaking my head like it would go away or I will wake up from my night mare I was shaking again I couldn’t controll myself the guards let me fel on the ground and ran away with their masters
I was punching the ground as hard as I could I was alone I was alone I was alone……….no I cant take this I just lay there on the ground still shaking when I fainted……………………………………………………………..

LabraLege and arianaggs like this

joe-edwardfan chap 17! i really love this chap i hope i described how much pain bella was in i kinda was crying when i was writing it because like i could feel the pain ...like when you lose someone you really love its just so hard to cope with it.... and tell me should i continue or start a new cool story!!!!

leisha4 do both lol just let e know when you do it. i loved it, i felt her pain too.

Hunter157 cool i cant wait for the next chapter hey u should write a book caz i think u would write good books keep writing Peace out!!

arianaggs NO NO NO NO MATT COME ON THAT WAS SOOO SAD POOR BELLA !!!!

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Sleep Deprivation Exercise

posted by Cinders

Exercise: Sleep Deprivation: 4:00AM Tuesday October 7, 2008*

The black spiders of mania are crawling over my brain, searching for a plump place to sink their pincers into. It’s been four days. I haven’t left the house for anything, not even a tuna sandwich. The space in my bed is empty, indented, as if something used to rest there, but I’m beginning to forget more and more what that may have been. Maybe it was a coffin, its contents shaken, risen, defeated, dazed, meandering around with its arms stretched out and a dull expression on its face as it mutters something indecipherable that...

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The voices

posted by t_direction

So, this is a kind of short story that I wrote one evening when I was just bored out of my mind. Please tell your opinion, feel free to criticize, it is much appreciated =)
Thanks ^_^

The voices buzzed inside my head, making me feel dizzy. I couldn't help but hold onto the bed post for support. In a state of exhaustion, I collapsed on the bed with a sigh. The voices never let me sleep. They were like many people were talking all at once, screaming all at once.

Madness, rage, worry, sadness were the emotions that those voices gave off. I couldn't understand a word of what the people were saying,...

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Writing

added by SymmaGirl2

who am I?

posted by madening_mahem

who am I ?
what can I do?
I'm self-centered, self-induldged, self-absorbed, hateful, short-tepered, implusive, in a complete state of denial, confused and lonely, yet I don't try to think.
a creature of the night
a princess of darkness
I long for light
colors
but all is midnight
and my only companions are the moon and the darkness
thought it comforts me when no one can
I wish to be out of darkness for once
to be clear, understood, unquestioned, and loved.
but who am I to ask for this?
who am I to want this?
is that what makes me human?
why?
all I want to know is why?

Change

posted by Fyrwenn

Change

The way I feel has changed
When we met I was a fool, thought
You weren’t gonna treat me like a tool
I tell myself that I care ‘bout you
But deep inside I know we’re through.

Change is never easy
But what am I supposed to do?
I can’t sit around, cry and wait for you,

I guess we were too naive
Believing it would work
Why didn’t I see,
that you were such a jerk?

Change is never easy
But what am I supposed to do?
I can’t sit around, cry and wait for you

In the future we might get another chance
Maybe, it was just a short romance
Then what I’m feeling is really wrong
I felt I had to write this...

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Swing, Batter, Batter, Swing

posted by disneyworld007

Swing, Batter, Batter, Swing!
Putting my weight on my right foot, the foot closest to the catcher. Leaning back re-gripping my bat. I watched as that black haired pitcher powered up her pitch, rocking back and forth on her heals, taking in her glove now to her side and starting the wind-up. 'This is it,' I thought to myself, now taking the best grip on my bat, 2 balls and 2 strikes have passed by this plate and I am not letting this pitcher strike me out, or walk me! I got ready the ball was realeased, and I heard the 'ump' say "Ball Outside".
I stepped out of the batters box, and took a couple...

Yaouta Kamakami, pilot.

posted by samuraibond005

Yaouta lived on a farm in Missouri, he had only recently graduated high school, had a pilot's license, and even a couple of airplanes used in war. He had an old A6M zero that belonged to his rich father, grandfather, and his great grandfather before him. His father was assassinated by a rival corporation (His father owned a wealthy publishing corporation) and the corporation decided to target his family afterward. 5 black cars pulled up in his front yard, though the yard was big enough to hold just about 10 times as much. Yaouta's younger brother, who was 15 at the time, walked out to greet...

Stay and Run Chapter 1

posted by Me_Iz_Here

A/N: I've gotten a few title suggestions, but for now I'm just gonna keep it to Stay and Run. And this chapter has a lot of unnecessary details and unrelated dialogue, the first few chapters will, I just wanted to get the general idea of the girls' life.
Prologue: link

1: An Average Day in Spencer’s Life

Spencer sat at her desk. Tomorrow was her twenty-second birthday. The first of the girls’ birthdays with Star missing. Spencer had been sad ever since she disappeared. Star was one of her best friends. And after losing three when they were recruits, she couldn’t take it.

There was a lot...

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A short moment

posted by coolie

Step, creak, step, creak! the floor boards speak to me as I slowly tremble on its hard, splintery wood. Each step feels so daring. I feel danger crawling up my dangling spine. Thump, thump, my heart tries to refuse to my wishes of moving forward. Nothing has happened so far.
I carefully make my way towards the forbidden wooden chair. Creeeeeeek! goes the seat as I lower my self to its level and sit on it. SHHHHHHHH!
“What was that?” I whisper to my self with my eyes wide open. I slowly start to climb the fence to view the streets of emptiness and quietness. My heart starts to beat even louder. Thump, thump. I slowly turn my anxious head to look. But it was only a car passing by my house.

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The Room. A short story.

posted by wierdgem7

I felt the tape on my mouth and the long rope that was binding me to the chair. The Room was so black, I couldn't see. I recalled how I had got there. The new family next door invited me to their housewarming party. So I went. Then, as I was going home, some-one grabbed me. A rough hand covered my mouth, so I couldn't scream. All I saw of my kidnapper was a pair of shocking green eyes. I was thrown into the back of a white van and tied up. I was there for only five minutes, but time slowed down and took five hours.Why did anyone want to kidnap me? I had done nothing wrong. The van doors opened,...

Getting By Ch. 4

posted by para-scence

My breaths were trapped in the back of my throat. I was afraid to breathe, because they'd probably come out as screams. The barrel of the gun pressed harder into my head, probably leaving a mark.

"Give me your money," the voice said. I tried to speak, but I couldn't. A couple moments later he took his hand away from my mouth so I could speak.

"I-- I-- I-- don't ha-- a-- ave an-- n-- n--y," I said, my voice shaking so much it took him a while to tell what I was saying. Then he laughed darkly.

"Well, that sucks for you." I felt the gun move a little, as he put his finger on the trigger. I took a...

Unknown: Chapter 2

posted by flabaloobalah

I stare at the screen with my mouth hanging wide open in shock and horror. The caption reads: SIXTEEN YEAR OLD BOY BRUTALLY MURDERED IN LOS ANGELES
The anchorwoman says, "Late last night in Los Angeles, California, sixteen year old Wyatt Starmount was killed. The identity of his murderer is unclear, but authorities say he's hispanic, six feet tall, and was last seen wearing a gray hoodie.
Now here's a video of Wyatt's death. Due to the graphic nature of this video, viewer discretion is advised." the lady informs me.
The video starts. The boy I realize is Wyatt is walking down the street. Sure...

Modern Day Princess Ch. 10

posted by para-scence

I was torn. On one hand, I really liked Foster. But, I wasn't sure if he really liked me back. He completely cut me off at school, but acted like he was totally in love with me when we were alone. It was strange. I could usually read people really well, but Foster left me speechless, and I had no clue what to think.

"Do you whatever you feel is right," Grandma said. That did not help. I had no idea what was "right." And honestly, I wasn't sure there was a right and wrong in this situation. I wasn't so sure about asking Echo. She still hated Foster no matter what.

Echo came over one day after...

Modern Day Princess Ch. 9

posted by para-scence

I couldn't believe it. He actually liked me back. This was the best thing ever. We hung out on Saturday, and part of Sunday as well. It was like something out of those romance movies; only it wasn't as cheesy, and people weren't watching us from their living rooms holding buckets of ice cream and quietly crying.

At least I didn't think so... o.O

If they were, I wouldn't be surprised. The whole thing was so amazing I wouldn't be surprised if I was on a prank TV show or something. I was sad when the weekend came to an end. I didn't want to lose this feeling.

"I'll see you tomorrow, right?" I asked,...

Modern Day Princess Ch. 7

posted by para-scence

"...My parents are alcoholics," Echo confided with me. "They're almost never sober. Then I'm stuck caring for my little brother. And it's... it's just hard," her voice cracked. I put my arm around her and pulled her close. I opened my mouth, but I had no idea what to say. She wiped her eyes and sniffed. "I'm sorry."

"Don't be. I can't imagine what it's like for you..." She shrugged. Then a bell rang and students started filing out of the lunch room. Lunch was over already? We stood up, and went to our next class.

***

"How was your first day, honey?" Grandmother asked when I got home. I shrugged,...

Rhinestones Chapter 2

posted by StarWarsFan7

After the lesson about the Cold War, the bell rings at 9:11 a.m. I grab my tan book bag and put it over my head and the bag lands near my waist. "Wow. She's got a nice outfit. Where did she get it? A thrift store?" I hear Raquelle gossiping about me. I growl under my breath. "Don't worry about her, Bree. She's just jealous. I like your outfit." says my friend, Josh. "Thanks, Josh." We walk out the door together. Everything's fine until I hear people spreading rumors. "Bree Komor is dating Josh Matthews. "I heard they started dating a year ago!" "No way!" Ugh. They're making fools of themselves....

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The Players- 4

posted by rebaj2010

Chapter 4

I walked into Damion Sal High School right before the bell rang. I grabbed my paper work from the women working at the front desk. The bell rang above my head and soon the halls were overflowing with students. I pushed my way through, getting shocked stares. I finally made it to the front door and push through them.
People were already outside already, talking and laughing. One boy had a girl in an embrace for a short second and when the girl he was hugging turned at walked away he looked over his shoulder and took hold of a brown haired girls hand a strodded away.
There were boys...

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love you forever part 2

posted by Cullens4eva

i walked to homeroom in a daze. still thinking what i had done or said wrong. when faye, evie and josie caught up with me. then they loaded me with questions.

"Whats their names?"
"Why did they walk off?"
"whats that girls problem?"
"Do you think he would go out with any of us?"

i was at the door to class. so i turned to them and answered.

"their names are penelope and john. i dont know why they walked off john just dragged her away. the girl hasnt got a problem john has. and i couldnt care less if he wanted to go out with any of us." then i spun on my heel and entered the class. i threw my books...

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Anger

posted by ellie_bellie135

Anger

I’m Furious
But words can’t describe what I’m feeling now.
The sheer frustration cuts through me like a blunt knife, too cowardly to take it’s annoyance to the next level.
It stays, inkling away at me, making me feel more hopeless every second.
Hopeless, because the more this white anger burns away at me the more I want to hurt something.
But the more I destroy, the more they seem to mock me.
I beat my face as hard as I can, but I have been numbed by my rage.
I run outside and scream as loud as I can. I curse. Words have failed me. I am at the mercy of filth.
I look for things to ruin....

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Love You Forever. Part 1

posted by Cullens4eva

I was sitting their next to the ocean. Did i really want to do this? Kill myself? I sat wondering, i loved them too much, more than my own father. He'd destroyed my life in so many ways for once i was happy and he had to ruin it.
-----------(3 months earlier)------------------
I skipped down the stairs into the kitchen, banging on Katie and Sam's doors on the way. It was the first day of term, and i hadnt seen Josie, Faye and Evie in soooooo long. The six weeks had been lovely dad had taken us to Paris for 4 weeks. it was lovely exploring the city and the country. but id missed my friends too...