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posted by DarkGirl23
The first time I went on a hunt, was the first time I really saw death in any sort of being’s eyes.
I don’t know who I am, what I am. I mean, I couldn’t possibly be considered part of the Hunters. Yet, their blood runs through my veins. They may own an incapability of understanding the true emotions of life, for we have been Genetically-Altered Experiments planned all the way back in 2012. Our bodies and our emotions have become that of a true fighter, a warrior of destruction itself in a world of Nature’s grace that becomes altered in the palms of our Humanoid Species.
We can defeat any oncoming dangers in our path, bodies of strength and dexterity and all the while, plenty of Stamina as well. Like I said, it not only changes our physical features, but our emotional and mental understandings as well. We’re more strict in such things, we do not bother to take pity upon another life form.
All we understand is the pleasure in killing, and in destruction. Yet also, in invention as well. We are the next form of Humanity, except advanced way more on so many levels.We know adaptation, and evolution. We are the next step into alien territory, and into an advanced placement of discovery.
Gods and Goddesses of such is Humanly. Us Hunters are not aloud to participate in any such form of Religious ideas or experimentation. For death only awaits those who lose their sense of Pride and Curiosity.
“Such nonsense is only participated by those of a lack of understanding, those who stand low before us.” My Creators would claim, “Those bastardous Humans we use to Hunt. They participate in the foolish stuff around us that help us declare ourselves as more... Intelligent than them.”
My Male Creator looked upon me, “Our Gods are what they call Parents. A god is A creator, so us, your “parents”, are your creators.” He sniffled a bit, chin held high in Pride to show me who really is in control of my understandings, in control of my sketched out life. “Therefore, you must treat us with the most of respect, and appreciate us as your Leaders.” He glared down upon me once again, “Or else, there shall be the most perishable of punishments for you.”
I knew this game, despite my years, I could see through the trickery each individual came across with their Creators. I wondered then, if this is how Human Creators, or parents, came across their Inventions. is this what they treated them as? A prize, or tool, used to highlight their “perfection” ?
The way we perceive things, we only understand the rules of the world and of chaos. Like survival, taking in both such things when it comes to us Hunters. The way we bother to evolve and expand and continue our species... We don’t participate in the weakness of passion, unless in destruction. Such desire remains undiscovered in our such minds. We breed with those we are paired with, creating our offspring that allows our advantages to mix, of which will destroy our disadvantages. We only care to survive, only to destroy in the end.
And yet, I feel myself different from my kind. For as I stood here and now, I felt one thing for that poor female dying there on the ground: Pity. To my amazement, she had the capability to get up and stand, yet limping heavily and blood covered her hand which was covering the wound my Male Creator delivered to her.
Those with us on the hunt knew not to finish her, for she would surely die and they wanted nothing but pain in her final moments.
“As nice as that clear shot was, this one seems like her cry will be fainter than most, considering she’s obviously young.” The rest of the boys agreed, and they traveled on to Hunt for more.
I however, stayed behind watching the female bleed and suffer silently. She didn’t bother whimpering, or screaming. I knew she knew that would bring more attention as she tried to get away... Smart and Strong she was. She was young, too.
She looked back at me with color-fading eyes which widened when she saw me watching her.
Tears streamed her eyes, yet there was a smile on her face.
Glad to leave, glad to be able to look one of us in the eyes as she knew, despite her body’s urge to fight, that this were in her final moments before she collapsed and let out one of her final hollow howls.
And so she stood there, looking me in the eye, I could not look away from her final demise...
It filled me with lust, watching her death. But, also with sorrow. Blood dripped, and my knees shook.
Finally, I took a step towards her, and just as I did she fell and stumbled into a pile of helpless soon-to-be death. She let out a final cry of misery, A Hunted Howl... So Faint, yet beautiful in a Hunter’s ears such as mine....
    ...And I rushed to her side. Pulling at my emergency kit, I grabbed a Health vial and injected it into her veins. I watched as the wound magically healed and she gasped, the life coming back to her beautiful emerald-Brown sparked Hazel eyes.
She wasn’t like us, genetically altered, short and yet she looked stronger than most humans. I guess it was the training for the Hunt. She took three shaky breaths and looked at me, sitting up fast and scooting away from me. She was obviously afraid of my touch. Afraid of me.
posted by CullenProperty
Nick pulls up to the curb and knows something is wrong the minute I get in the car;
“Grace, what the hell were you doing out there in the rain?” he asks, breaking his own rules. “It’s freezing out there, sweetheart,” he says, cranking the heater up all the way. “I mean really Grace, are you okay?” he asks, placing his hand on my knee.
I swallow and purse my lips, trying to clear my throat because it’s so dry from crying.
“Nick,” I breathe, moving closer to his face, my hands hesitating around the pile of CD's in between us, trying to get a grip on something so I don't topple...
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posted by CullenProperty
I wake up with a feeling that something has been taken from me, but in a good way. I lay in my warm, comfortable, pillow surrounded bed for a little while longer before I decide to get up. I go into the bathroom and turn on the shower. The warm water that penetrates my body feels so good and after my thoughts wander to Nick, the water feels even warmer. I wrap a towel around my body when I'm done and quietly tip toe into my room where I see Nick's hoodie lying on my office chair, where I put it last night. I pick it up and take in his essence, smells exactly like Nick. An aroma I can't explain...
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posted by mitchie19
8. C O N C E R N E D H E A R T


My vision was black. Just plain black. It’s like I’m falling into a deep dark room where I can’t see but the darkness and falling into nothing. It felt cold. The deep dark room was cold.
I slowly opened my eyes. All I can hear was the sound of the heart monitor beeping. I was in a hospital. What happened to me?
Beside me, Norah—sleeping with her head tilted down the side of the bed.
“Norah,” I heard me whisper. I felt the IV dripped into my arm.
Norah had awoken. Her arms around me and sobbed. “Thank God, you’re okay,”
I managed to rub her head...
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On a beautiful Friday after noon the students prepaired to leave school for the day.
{In Katherines P.O.V.}
{In the last class}
"Hmmm..."
"Whats wrong Kate?" Asked Krista.
"Nothing..." Replied Katherine.
"I've been your friend since kindergarden... I know when somethings wrong! Now spill it."
"Okay well...I want to tell Chris I love him but I'm so afraid of what he'll say..."
"Ugh! I've heard so many rumors from his friends and everyone else...he loves you too!"
"Its a rumor! Sometimes rumors are false!"
"Yes but some are true."
"Yeah SOME. It would be nice if he told me..."
"Ugh fine, i'm not gonna...
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posted by sexiitreysongz
Chapter 2
The next morning I woke up feeling tired and worst than usually. Swollen feet, aching back, I was up all night long treating people who thought they had the flu. I knew I had to get up and go to work, I lived alone for now and somebody has to pay the rent. And right now, it's me. Just as I was about to get up the phone rang. "Hello?", "ohh thank goodness I caught you before you left. Listen jasmine, I know you really need this job to keep your rent up but you've been working yourself crazy down here at this clinic. You’re pregnant and I think you should really take the day off, stay...
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                                     January 15, 1815

Journal,
    Its cold. My food is almost gone, I can’t feel my hands. I lost my hat; my ears are frozen. My sisters are dying. Sasha has pneumonia, and Nastea’s lost her coat and shoes. My hair is falling out. I look at the broken down train behind us. Tree’s sleep soundlessly on top of it. I sit at a tree trunk, with you on my lap, and a scrawny pencil in my hand. Nastea sits beside Sasha, feeding her berries and herbs. I hope things get better, Journal. I hope things get better.
    Bye Journal,
        Nadia
posted by Vixie79
In a world of his
she unloads his gun

She and he waits for this
he releases his love

In blue and green orbs
she gives him more and more

A million miles away
A million years girl

In a black woven chest
he digs his nails deep

She trusts in him for what he does
live in a house in the suburbs

He kisses the pain with blood and light
sleeping it off in the morning

A million miles away
A million years girl

In her world of his
she unloads his gun

In a world of his
she covers the sun

A million miles away
A million years
A million years girl
posted by jacob_lover5253
My story is about a girl named Karleigh. It's summer time and she is down the shore. Her mom bought a place at a campground outside of sea isle. The campground is called Driftwood. She has been going there since she was 8 1/2. Now she is 13.
******

I woke up to a knock at the front door. Why is kelsey's friend here so early?! "Hello, Leigha. I'll go get kelsey." Leigha came in and sat down while I went to get kelsey. "Kels, wake up!" I said. "Go away, Karleigh." She murmered. "Leigha's here." I yelled walking away. Kelsey jerked up right and flew into the bathroom. Am I allowed to go back to...
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posted by juicyjossy9
DREAMER AND FAITH
OR THE CREATION
OF A NEW DAWN

In the beginning, the heavens and the earth were one. The sky was a mass of angry black clouds and the sea was nothing more than a seething, murky swamp. Life as we know it did not exist.

Then one day the clouds began to swirl and grow, thunder crashed and a terrible rain began to fall. It rained night and day for weeks and months, as if it had done so forever.

At last the rain stopped, and the heavens and the earth had separated. From the waters and the mud, the gods began to appear, like young shoots of grass spinging forth from the earth.

This...
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posted by house_of_nightx
THE LEGEND OF THE VAMPIRE PRINCESS:
THE LEGEND COMES TO LIFE

CHARPTER1:STARSTRUCK

STAR
16 YEARS LATER

I woke to a brisk summers morning in a small town just outside of New York City in my parents best friend Kachiri and her daughter Quinns apartment.Kachiri has been looking after me since i was a baby since my parents had died in a car accident when i was very younge and i had no other family,Kachiri said my parents wanted her to look after me anyway.

As i got out of bed to go downstairs i made my way into my bathroom brushed my hair,cleaned my teeth and examined the sapphire dragon that streached...
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posted by mitchie19
3. P H O N E C A L L

The phone rang about 9am I was the one who answered. Norah went to the store to buy groceries and my sister is upstairs still asleep. I picked up the phone, “Hello?” I spoke the word softly. “Mariah? This is your aunt Lourdes How are you?” She said happily. I didn’t expect her to call at this moment but I was surprised. “Hi Aunt Lourdes um, I’m fine. Why’d you call?” is the
why’d-you-call-thing the right thing to say to someone ten times older than me?
She didn’t mind me saying that.
“I told your mom that you are welcome to stay here for the summer....
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Chapter 4
When I woke up I was in an un-familiar place I Jumped from where I was laying down and walked down a flight of stairs
To a room full of people who were pale, I saw Edward and Bella so I
Thought this must be something that Bella knows about. I walked down the
Stairs and demanded I know what was going on, this pale man with blonde
Hair who looked so young came up to me and told me that Bella had come
To save me from losing my life and that Edward brought you here. I
Started asking questions:
"Why are you guys so pale?"
"Well we are vampires like you"
"But I am not as pale as you, and YOU...
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posted by hannah_vampire
I started to wake up and open my eyes to see Tilly, 'Hey sorry bout that, Tyler should have been more aware but he is stupid oh damm his going to kill me'. I sat there puzzled 'Umm what do you mean' she laughed and sat down beside me 'WE can hear each others thoughts except yours only your soul mate can do that but hey it seems like you have to of them'.

She walked out and I rubbed my eye's and looked at my phone it said One new message, I opened it and it was from Oni: Hey your dads coming out today so maybe you should go back home with him if you know what I mean but you can stay if you want...
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posted by sexiitreysongz
CHAPTER 1
10 years ago I lost both my parents in a car crash. I've been living on my own for about 8 years, I lived with my grandmother for a while untill I got a job and found an apartment for real cheep. I never realized what it was like to lose your parents and feel this bad. I never knew my self would be in this postion. Alone, no true family, a baby on the way. How do these girls deal with kind of stuff. They act like everything is so easy,and they have nothing to worry about. Maybe becasue they have moms and grandmothers to help them out. I have no body. My grandmother kicked me out after...
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posted by hannah_vampire
Its pretty Long thxs for the comments :)

I woke up to the sound of my phone ringing, I looked at the screen and I saw melissa.baker :) and no this was not Damons sister it was the melissa I got drunk with.

'Hey mel whats up?' I hearded her laugh, 'Finally were have you been it's like you had dropped off the face of earth'. I laughed and started to walk to the mirror, 'Melissa you have no idea and It's good to hear you other then the same people all the time and if your gonna ask if I can come out no I cant visting my dad and I have shit to work out, so i better go love ya mwaa', She laughed...
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posted by PrinceLover1999
Angie hears her mom and stepdad fights. She sits there and cries..and hope it's over. Then she hears a loud gun pow!! She hurrys to the living room and see's her mom laying on the floor..with blood all over. She cries over her mom's bloody body...her mom looked at her and whisperd "help". She called the police and after she hung up. Her stepdad beat her..then rapped her. Then the police busted in. Her mom fighting for breath. Angie to weak to get up yelled "Help, please help" They came to resuce her, too. After her and her mom recoverd. The mom found a new guy. He only beated the daughter...everytime...
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posted by inexplicable
I ran against the wind which came contrary to me.
I ran against the wind which approached me till I adhered to the parapet panting. Hardly anybody was more in the park although it was rather warmly and still not at all so dark. The sun just set and the water under me turned orange-red now. I needed a while, before I came to the quiet, then I did not bear it any more and the tears forced her way. I knew that she lied. I knew that this not corresponded to the truth what she had said to me. I did not have any proof for it but I could feel that there was something wrong. I did not want any more....
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posted by MileySelena982
*Note; This is a variation of RachelGal97’s Endless Pain. Same names; just a different plot. Please comment and tell me if you like and what’s your favorite part*

Endless Pain: Chapter Three

“Are you sure it was David?” Mom asked as she comforted Selena on the couch.

“I’m positive.” Selena replied. “I’d know that face from anywhere. And… if I was never his girlfriend, he never would have gone to that jewelry store, and he never would have died!”

Mom didn’t reply. She knew her daughter was feeling guilty, and nothing could help it. Instead she said, “But, sweetie, he loved...
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posted by mitchie19
2. B I G D A Y

One, two, three, go! I breathed. My right leg went first up the stairs and then my left leg.
This is it, this is really it. I squealed nervously. “Marhion Angeles Pearson, daughter of Mr. and Mrs. Pearson” the school directress announced. I went up the stage. The audience clapped.
I felt like a star on a rise.
I saw Riley on the crowd, my eyes glued to him. Ah! I tripped. The audience gasp some stood up to see if I’m okay some of them laughed and snickered. Drake Cell, the school news anchor video taped my clumsiness, he smiled. I quickly stood up. My cheeks were red, I...
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Dizzy:

As I weaved through the crowded hallways, I focussed on the rhythm of my footsteps. I was lost. It was as if I was a new student or something. Now that Annabella was gone, the hallways made me dizzy with fear. When you're with your best friend, nothing matters. When you know you'll never see her again, not even a faint light of happiness appears at the end of the freight tunnel.
I'm still me, I reminded myself. But who was I? Before knew it, a bib of tears flooded down my chest. I hear red-headed Abigail whisper to Elisa. Faint words saying, 'They're actually crying?' I wished those...
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