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First off, sorry for the title. Haha I didn't have a snazzy title, so I just made it original.

Now, I would like to point out... I actually liked this trailer! Most of you had probably seen me griping about the previous New Moon trailers saying as how they do not portray the books. (well, the first and second New Moon trailers didn't anyways)

But, I really liked this trailer. Of course I have to critique it, so there are positives and negatives, but overall, I'm a happy sailor... for now. :P

Enough of the introduction, onto the review!

I'm going to start off with the over all look of the trailer.

-The cinematography is beautiful! Even more so than New Moon! The contrast between cool tones and warm tones. Spectacular!

-I liked how they did the Summit Logo. I thought it looked "neat" as in clean. It was simple, but it looks nice and polished. I don't know if I'm making sense. lol

-I love that they are keeping the same themes throughout the trailers of each movie. They always have a shot of the landscape.

Now, to the footage! I'll start with positives first.

Positives:
-I liked the balance. In New Moon, we saw a trailer with almost all Jacob, which I thought was unfair since we didn't have a "Meet Bella Swan" or "Meet Edward Cullen". But in this one, it wasn't centered on one character. However, i'll comment later on the center-focus of this trailer...

-The meadow, I thought was beautiful. In Twilight, the meadow was lacking...to put it nicely. But, this meadow, was perfect.

-The make up, judging from this trailer, looked way better. Edward actually looks 17! The Bella wig... I don't find anything wrong with it. I've heard some complaints about it, but I don't really see the big deal.

Negatives:
-The trailer was focused on the "love triangle". I like how at the end of New Moon, Bella chooses Edward. The audience, who haven't read the books, will be wondering what's going on when they see this trailer. I think the main reason why they focused on the "love triangle" was to lure people in out of curiousty, or to "tease" since this is a "tease"er trailer. However, I hope that is not the center-focus of the movie. We all know Summit likes to pimp the "love triangle" as seen in New Moon, when there should NOT be one. The "love triangle" in the books didn't even happen til after Chapter 22. Hopefully, for the 2nd teaser and the final trailer, they will touch on everything such as the vampire army for the second teaser then maybe a little bit of everything on the third and final trailer :)

-Sorry, but the panning to Jacob shirtless? That was SO unecessary. This is again, completely transparent to what Summit is trying to do. What did that give to the trailer? NOTHING. They put that in there out of spite. The series is not about the shirtless guys Summit! No matter how much money you rake in. Completely unnecessary.

Now to the dialog:

For the mostpart, I thought the voiceovers were pretty good.

The lines were a little dramatic, but I think that's what Summit was trying to do here. They were going for a dramtic feel. However, I will say this. And this is going to be critical about Jacob's lines.

In the trailer, you see soft-spoken Jacob. But, as most of you know, he can be a jerk sometimes. Who isn't? I hope they portray that rough side to him and not just make him look like this sensitive guy.

Same thing with Edward. You see him a little angry in the books. I would like to see a little spark of anger with him. Also, in the books, he has some light moments. Alot actually. People just forget about them because of the movies. But, I hope Summit puts his light moments in there too. Give him some fluff!

Bella, they do a pretty good job with her. However, the script, there are inconsistencies, so I can't judge her yet. From the looks of it, they changed the script a little. I don't remember some of the lines from the trailer that were in the script.

And, since this is kind of a touchy subject, I'm going to post a paragraph about Bryce Dallas Howard as Victoria:
-When they showed Bryce Dallas Howard as Victoria, I have to say, I'm still bitter about Summit replacing Rachelle Lefevre. You can tell that it's a different person. However, the wig isn't as bad as everyone is making it out to be. Well, not to me anyways. I can't judge her acting since she had no lines, but from the looks of it, the new Victoria isn't bad, but it's not Rachelle. We can't write off Bryce just yet :)

So, this is my review! Like, I said, I was overall pleased. this is probably the first time I am.

Comments would be lovely. I love hearing what you guys have to say. :)
posted by Alice_Cullen_
The Character
Name: Demetri

Type: Vampire

Special Ability: Tracker

About Them: Demetri is a member of the empire like Volturi who can can track anyone once he has the tenor of their mind. He can sense and is drawn to a person's mind once he has the ability to recognize it. It is impossible to escape him just as it is impossible to escape (unless you are Bella who is protected from mind-based abilities) Edward being able to read your mind. Appearing very polite, Demetri is a formidable foe. He has an olive complexion with a chalky pallor, dark hair that reaches his shoulders, and crimson eyes....
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posted by AdaLove
Angela Weber is described as being kind, shy, and somewhat insightful. She likes to give space to others, and this characteristic is very much appreciated by Bella. She plays a minor role in Twilight, but after Bella's depression in New Moon they become very good friends. She is portrayed as one of the most decent human characters in the series.


Twilight

Angela played a minor part in Twilight, as one of the many friends that Bella Swan made after moving to Forks. She was also in Bella's Biology II class. Angela went shopping with Bella and Jessica for dresses for the spring dance in Port Angeles....
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posted by AdaLove
Emily Young is Sam Uley's fianceé, second cousin to Leah Clearwater and Seth Clearwater, and Claire's aunt.

Emily and Leah are second cousins, but they were said to be like sisters. Sam had been dating Leah when he imprinted on Emily, which caused conflict between the two women and ruined their friendship. Emily is like a second mother to the pack as she cooks and cares for them on regular occasions, while being treated like part of the pack in return. Most of her family is close to the pack along with her — Leah and Seth being wolves, while her niece Claire was imprinted on by Quil.

*******...
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posted by renesmeblack
Okay, you know that Bella killed herself in my last chapter right? Did you think I'd stop writing? I HOPE NOT!!!
This still is Alice, but I'll interrupt a little bit later and show you Jacob's POV. Thank you, all you fabulous readers! Keep commenting!!!
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Can vampires go into shock? I'd like to think so, because here I am still ignoring Jasper's annoying questions while holding the phone in my hand, staring at the call button. It took me eleven tries to call somebody, all without success. At first I tried Edward's cell a couple of times, I tried Bella's, I tried Emmett's, Rosalie's,...
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posted by dangjessica
There's Twilight Dolls, Twilight Body Shimmer, Twilight Band-Aids, and now... Twilight Lip Gloss!

So in case you haven't heard, the lipglosses are going around for $16, 2 lip glosses being the maximum for one buyer. It's the same brand they use on the set as well.


Here is how DuWop describes it: "Instead of a gloss, Lip Venom V is a shimmering crimson lip stain suspended in a venom-laced liquid lip conditioner with a bite, and contains argan, avocado, olive oils and vitamin E. This product should be shaken before use to represent the blending of the human and vampire worlds ..."



So are you going to buy it?
posted by twilightGGlost
This is my first fanfic so I hope u like it…I was inspired to write because I had a dream about this. (Yes I did pull a Steph Meyer Lmao)…I wanna thank just_bella for convincing me to write this and make sure u read all her AMAZING stories…ok so I’ll give u a little background on whats going on: Its during New Moon right before Edward is deciding to come back to Bella but she hasn’t jumped of the cliff so here goes…

Bella’s POV

“WAIT!”

I’m having one of those horrible dreams again…but something different is happening this time.

“Please don’t leave me,” I’m on my knees...
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posted by WritenOnTheSand
I can feel my self loosing breath. The look on his face leaves me speachless. His eyes feel cold for their warm color. I can almost see the wheels turning in his head.

"Whats wrong with me?" I ask as I reach for his hand. His head jurks to the side when Billy calls out his name. He immediatly jumps up and quickly gets to the door.

"I'll be back Rennesme." He says quietly as he leaves the room. I can't help but look away. I mean I know I have not been hungry and the scent of blood has made me feel sick but it can't be that bad can it?. My stomach turns as i think over what just happend. I can...
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posted by AdaLove
>>>>>Jane is a sadistic guard of the Volturi and a pet of Aro's. She seems rather bitter and easily justifies inflicting pain on anyone with her power. Jane has a twin brother named Alec and they both reside in Volterra, Italy.

>>>>>>>The Volturi had their eyes on Jane and Alec as potential people to change back when they were still human, but were waiting until they were older to change them. When frightened humans tried to burn the twins at the stake, because of witchcraft. Because of all she went through this is why she has this power. Aro was forced to...
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Hey ... This is different to the twilight sage. It has all the characters in it but Bella and Edward meet differently (: hope you like it :D



Chapter one



I woke up already dreading the day ahead. All i had to do was eat, go to school and sleep again. Fun.
I decided to wake myself up with a shower. So i went in and turn the hot water on. I let it soothe all my muscles when i heard my mum shout up.
"Bella your going to be late hurry up!" I sighed and turned of the shower. I quickly got dressed into my favourite pair of jeans and green top. I tied my hair up without drying it. With a quick glance...
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posted by Bella_Swan3
-Renee-

It's been almost twenty years since I had to see my own daughter. Dead. I had been in to identify her, and make myself believe the unbelievable. But I had barely held it together when I saw her.

The Cullens had been miserable, Edward seemed the one who was hating himself the most.

I didn't go to her funeral. I hadn't wanted to see it.

My daughter had died eighteen years ago, and I was starting to forgive myself for not seeing her alive since her wedding day, when someone rang the doorbell.

I answered the door, not expecting anyone special.

A beautiful girl, maybe, eighteen, nineteen,...
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posted by Bella_Swan3
-Jacob-

When I looked up, Renesmee was standing in the doorway. Slowly, I crossed the room and put my arms around her waist. Her lips met mine, and I hugged her closer.

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When I woke up, Renesmee was facing me, her pale arms clutched the duvet to her chest. Her eyes were closed, and she was breathing lightly and evenly. The light of the sunrise filtered through the glass, and cast Renesmee in a spotlight. She was glowing.

I glanced at the digital clock, and noticing that it was quarter to seven, I got up very quietly and slowly so as not to wake her up.

I had a shower in the bathroom at...
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Chapter 37: Sacrifices of the Heart (Jacob’s POV)

“Renesmee!” I growled as I tried to break free of the power that the little Volturi vampire had over me but it was no use. I watched in horror as Seth lay crumpled on the ground, and Renesmee and Amore were out of my reach. I closed my eyes and in my mind I shouted, “Edward where the hell are you!” I wished that I was in wolf form so that I could call for Leah, and Sam’s pack. Yet part of me was secretly glad that I couldn’t involve them, it would have been a senseless massacre. We couldn’t beat them alone not with Jane and Alec’s...
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posted by just_bella
Alright...I wasn't going to write another one but people were confused so I figured I would clear it up...well try. Hope this explains things and isn't dumb, I had this part planned for a while. :)

End of Part 29

"Aaron...did you see Emmett again?" Father asked as he moved to sit beside him on the tree.

Aaron took a deep breath and looked around at the trees before he could answer. I began to wonder if he saw me because he stopped and stared at my tree for a long time before continuing.

"I thought I did..but I got out here and realized I must have been wrong." He said sadly.

"Should we go look...
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posted by sh0rtiinedward
All night i started thinking in Julius, he is the most beautiful thing i ever seen, but there's something about him that make me scare but i don't know what it is.
"Nessi baby, can we talk" i turn around when i hear my dad's voice and i froze, i know that he will tell me that i was grounded of something.
"Mm sure dad, what's up?"
"Well like you know, i know what happen today in the woods, i just want to let you know that I'm not mad at you i just, want you to be happy, and meet new people, but take it easy you know that we have a secret to hide from the real word" he said as he huge me
"i know...
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hello, i'm still at work but it's pretty calm now and i wrote till article 8 :D but i'm going to put just 2 up for today :-) Enjoy

Bella's pov

I saw Alice coming towards me in a hurry
“I’m so sorry, Bella. I shouldn’t have said it. I’m so sorry ...” She started saying but I interrupted her
“It’s okay Alice, I’m sorry too I overreact.....” I wasn’t even finished apologizing and she gave me a hug
“I know, we are both sorry” she said back and she stopped hugging me and then looked at me with a big smile.
“You still have to receive your present” she said
“What present”...
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posted by just_bella
YEAH! When I finish this I will have written all 3 of my stories in one day. I don't know if this is something I will do often, but hey it was fun for tonight.

Last time:

We all went into our tents to get ready/go to bed. Jasper and I laid down, I rest my head on his chest as he wrapped his arms around me. It seemed like we were laying there forever when I heard a zipper on another tent.

"Jazz, before you go can I ask you a question?" I said quietly.

He wrapped his arms around me again and kissed my nose.

"Anything, you know that." He said, concerned about my tone.

"Do you mind if I bring the...
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posted by just_bella
Ok here's the 2nd one for tonight, hopefully I will get all 3 up and then I will be done for a few days. :)

Last time:

"Carlisle, Esme, Edward please could you let us have time to talk?" She asked.

"Rosalie I don't think it's smart to be alone with him right now. He's new and his emotions are all over the place, he's not safe." Ed said.

I was still angry about before when he answered me when I thought something, and his attitude was not helping anything at all.

"Edward, I know you will all be close. If anything goes wrong I will let you know and we can take care of things." She said.

"Come on,...
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Enjoy the story :D oh btw i changed the previous article 47 a little, not much, only the phone conversation between Charlie and bella, because i'm going to use it in articles 50

Bella's pov

Suddenly I heard noise, inside and outside the house.
“Stay here” I told Renesmee and she nodded. I walked outside the bedroom to the window. I saw Emmett and then Carlisle and Edward. I was glad to see them I turned myself and walked into the bedroom and grabbed the suitcases, when suddenly I felt Edward’s hand over mine.
“I’ll take them, you take Mason” he said with regular voice
I let go of the...
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posted by just_bella
Here's the next chapter, I think everyone should be happy. It's so much fun to write now. Please comment, thanks again!!

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My anger began to boil up to the surface again and I found myself opening my mouth to tell him a few choice words.

When I did I instantly began screaming again. I tried to stop, but my mouth would not close. The screams felt like they had been building inside me and I couldn't contain them any more.

The doctor stood up and moved so he was infront of my face.

"Emmett! EMMETT!!!" He yelled hoping to break me of the sceaming fit.

He yelled my name a...
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posted by just_bella
I swore up and down that I wasn't going to write any stories tonight. I thought I should take a night off...and well, here I am...sad huh? :)
Just kidding, thanks for the support!!!

Remember when:

"Mr. and Mrs. Brandon I would like to speek with you in private. Susan, could you please take the girls out to the pond, or the maze while I speak to their parents." He asked the receptionist.

"Yes Dr. G." Susan said

She reached her hands out so that we could take her hands, I wasn't sure I wanted to this but Cynthia grabbed on right away and I knew I had to go to protect her if nothing else.

Oh no,...
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