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First off, sorry for the title. Haha I didn't have a snazzy title, so I just made it original.

Now, I would like to point out... I actually liked this trailer! Most of you had probably seen me griping about the previous New Moon trailers saying as how they do not portray the books. (well, the first and second New Moon trailers didn't anyways)

But, I really liked this trailer. Of course I have to critique it, so there are positives and negatives, but overall, I'm a happy sailor... for now. :P

Enough of the introduction, onto the review!

I'm going to start off with the over all look of the trailer.

-The cinematography is beautiful! Even more so than New Moon! The contrast between cool tones and warm tones. Spectacular!

-I liked how they did the Summit Logo. I thought it looked "neat" as in clean. It was simple, but it looks nice and polished. I don't know if I'm making sense. lol

-I love that they are keeping the same themes throughout the trailers of each movie. They always have a shot of the landscape.

Now, to the footage! I'll start with positives first.

Positives:
-I liked the balance. In New Moon, we saw a trailer with almost all Jacob, which I thought was unfair since we didn't have a "Meet Bella Swan" or "Meet Edward Cullen". But in this one, it wasn't centered on one character. However, i'll comment later on the center-focus of this trailer...

-The meadow, I thought was beautiful. In Twilight, the meadow was lacking...to put it nicely. But, this meadow, was perfect.

-The make up, judging from this trailer, looked way better. Edward actually looks 17! The Bella wig... I don't find anything wrong with it. I've heard some complaints about it, but I don't really see the big deal.

Negatives:
-The trailer was focused on the "love triangle". I like how at the end of New Moon, Bella chooses Edward. The audience, who haven't read the books, will be wondering what's going on when they see this trailer. I think the main reason why they focused on the "love triangle" was to lure people in out of curiousty, or to "tease" since this is a "tease"er trailer. However, I hope that is not the center-focus of the movie. We all know Summit likes to pimp the "love triangle" as seen in New Moon, when there should NOT be one. The "love triangle" in the books didn't even happen til after Chapter 22. Hopefully, for the 2nd teaser and the final trailer, they will touch on everything such as the vampire army for the second teaser then maybe a little bit of everything on the third and final trailer :)

-Sorry, but the panning to Jacob shirtless? That was SO unecessary. This is again, completely transparent to what Summit is trying to do. What did that give to the trailer? NOTHING. They put that in there out of spite. The series is not about the shirtless guys Summit! No matter how much money you rake in. Completely unnecessary.

Now to the dialog:

For the mostpart, I thought the voiceovers were pretty good.

The lines were a little dramatic, but I think that's what Summit was trying to do here. They were going for a dramtic feel. However, I will say this. And this is going to be critical about Jacob's lines.

In the trailer, you see soft-spoken Jacob. But, as most of you know, he can be a jerk sometimes. Who isn't? I hope they portray that rough side to him and not just make him look like this sensitive guy.

Same thing with Edward. You see him a little angry in the books. I would like to see a little spark of anger with him. Also, in the books, he has some light moments. Alot actually. People just forget about them because of the movies. But, I hope Summit puts his light moments in there too. Give him some fluff!

Bella, they do a pretty good job with her. However, the script, there are inconsistencies, so I can't judge her yet. From the looks of it, they changed the script a little. I don't remember some of the lines from the trailer that were in the script.

And, since this is kind of a touchy subject, I'm going to post a paragraph about Bryce Dallas Howard as Victoria:
-When they showed Bryce Dallas Howard as Victoria, I have to say, I'm still bitter about Summit replacing Rachelle Lefevre. You can tell that it's a different person. However, the wig isn't as bad as everyone is making it out to be. Well, not to me anyways. I can't judge her acting since she had no lines, but from the looks of it, the new Victoria isn't bad, but it's not Rachelle. We can't write off Bryce just yet :)

So, this is my review! Like, I said, I was overall pleased. this is probably the first time I am.

Comments would be lovely. I love hearing what you guys have to say. :)
it's a long and last one for today, i'm almost heading to bed ENJOY oh btw it's from bella's pov so you don't hear much of the fight, but I will mention it later about what happened to those witches.

Bella's pov

I knew from where they were coming so I had to take the same path otherwise I would miss them and they would still go after my family.
I started running thru the forest as fast I could till I was at this open field. I stopped I could smell there sent now, they were getting closer. I was glad I hunted before with Edward so I wouldn’t be weak but instead allot stronger.
I took a deep breath....
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posted by just_bella
Hey guys, here's the next chapter. I'm not sure if i will continue this one much longer...unless I do a rose and emmett story. Sorry I didn't get this up last night, but here ya go.
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Recap:

I passed in and out of conciousness, trying to hold on like I had promised her. I remember one point where she stopped and put me down on the grass and I came too.

The surrounds were diffrent, it looked like we were just out side a town. The strange thing was that it was unlike any town that I had ever seen. There were many buildings that I could see from this...
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enjoy, sorry for any mistakes again

Bella's pov

We both got up and I grabbed Mason in my arms and walked towards the car with Edward and Alice following behind me.
I suddenly heard Alice “there really attached to each other” and I looked at her and she smiled and I gave her a smile back and than looked at Mason. He was doing it again, letting me read other peoples thoughts , I was reading Alice her mind. Then I heard Edward “I hope this wouldn’t effect anything tonight otherwise I’m getting mason back” I giggled a little hearing him think that. Now I know how Edward feels when he reads...
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posted by _madz_
im sorry i took so long but i wont bore you with excuses. i know this is very short but i didnt want to leave you guys hanging.the next one should be longer :)

Bella must have felt me hesitating. Her beautiful face looked up at me, her gorgeous, melting chocolate brown eyes shining, even though she was faint from exhaustion. The crease between her eyebrows showed that she was slightly irritated. I wanted to raise my finger to her brow and smooth it out, but before I got the chance, Bella started talking.
“Please, Edward.” She whispered, the words slurred together.
Anything, I wanted to say,...
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posted by misjones39
I have began to write a story of my own. Ive had quite a few people tell me they absolutely LOVE it so far. Its about this girl named Lilly, who I have made Paul's sister. I mean everyone knows Stephenie never gave Paul a sister, but i decided too. She moved away from La push after there mother dies, but has been brought back by the pack because of her fate. She has no idea whats in store for her. Than she falls in love with Jacob. (considering they grew up together its akward, but undenying love.) THIS IS MY STORY FOR THOSE WHO ARE JACOB LOVERS. and what would have happened if he never imprinted...
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I'll try to put another one later today :D ENJOY!!!

Bella's POV

When we finally got home from our evening courses, we saw Jake and Renesmee sleeping in the couch. Edward grabbed her very gentile and took her to her bedroom. I followed him and kissed Renesmee on the forehead and whispered: “Sweet dreams, angel”
Edward gave Renesmee a quick kiss on the forehead too and we left the room.
Edward looked at Jake and said to me
“Are you going to wake him up”
“No, let him sleep, it’s only 4 hours till the sun comes up again” I whispered to Edward.
“We could go visit Alice and the others”,...
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posted by ktbminnie12
You're in for a real treat!!!!

Bella’s POV

    It’s been 4 months. I’m still sitting in this dark basement, alone and scarred. I missed Edward so much. I hope they find me soon. I don’t know how much more of the beatings I could take.
    Every night, Lorenzo would come in and beat me until I passed out. I don’t know why he did it. I didn’t do anything to him. One night he beat me so hard, I started bleeding. I could feel the marks on my arms where he beat me so hard.
    Three days ago, I asked him to leave me alone. Actually,...
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posted by dinosteph
I'm just gonna make a point here. Something I wanted to share with everyone haha.

I just reread eclipse.
I paid close attention to Jacob and Bella's relationship.
Especially the morning after they spend the night in the tent.
Bella asks Jake to kiss her, trying to prove a point.
The last couple chapters opened my eyes to their relationship completely.
I love Edward, and I love Jake.
I can see that Bella loves both of them. It breaks my heart that she had to choose.

I'm just sayin.
<3


(Apparently this needs to be longer, otherwise I have to post it to the forum.)
Friends Don't Let Friends Scoop Poop

Prologue

I knew what had to be done. I knew I would regret this. She was my best and only friend. I hope she wouldn’t regret any of this or hate me at all. I just don’t want her to have this job and no home, but I wasn’t sure if I could live with a human in my house. I looked into her eyes to think of a way to word this. I opened my mouth and it all blurted out, “ Erin, I’m a vampire.”


Disclaimer: I don't own Twilight though I dearly wish I did but it belongs to the awesome Stephenie Meyer
posted by CharmedVamp101
She stirred. Finally her eyes opened, I could see the ocean in her deep blue eyes. Crystal clear.
"Where am I,"she asked in a delicate soprano voice.
"General Hospital," I answered her.
"Who are you?"
"My name isn't important, but I'll tell you that my first name is Edward."
"Why am I here?"
"I found you nearly beaten to death in alley. I brought you here. Your right radius is broken in three places, but I think you'll be able to go home soon."
"Are you an angel?"
"Hardly," I couldn't let these words get to me, couldn't let them remind me of the one I lost.
"You're very handsome, and you're...
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According to Twilighters Italia & Lion Lamb:

New Moon will not be shot in Volterra but in Montepulciano
Despite advertisements, anticipations and every kind of proposal from the major and the township, New Moon will be shot in Montepulciano because the locations are "more beautiful for the movie" than Volterra."

And, they were nice enough to post pictures of possible locations in Montepulciano. Although the movie may not be filmed in Volterra, these locations look accurate to the descriptions in the book.
The Plaza
The Plaza
The alley
The alley
So Bella passes out after seeing Edward and Eward is really shaken cos' he really wasn't expecting this. So Alice takes Bella upstairs and stays with her in her room. Bella is recovers and this is what happens.

"Alice, he's, what's he doing here? When I get my hands on him...uh! I dont care if I break my hand by trying to knock him out I just...Argh!"
"C'mon Bella, I get how angry you are but then he'll know I told you,"
"Sorry Alice, but I really don't care right now anyway how could you do that to me, there must be a reason other than a Porsche'!"
They rambled on and Edward was under the stairs...
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posted by wanderingk
Chapter 5 - School
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It had been exactly two weeks since my accident. Renee and Phil had to leave but left me here for school. I tried to moan my way out but it didnt work, I was staying here, that was that.

I was on the couch watching telivison the night before my first day of school. Rose came down and sat next to me. She pulled me to her and patted my back.
"Katrina, school will be fine. I promise," Rose said with a smile. After a while I fell asleep, my head on her shoulder.
My dreams were unpleasant. Dreams of humiliaton at school and even...
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posted by bitten_byedward
Ch 5 : Who Am I?

A/N: I own no characters. All belong to Stephine Meyer (excpet for the new doctor, not much of a role but, maybe we'll see more of him in the future.) Plz R&R! Thanks for reading!

I remember waking up. The first thought that popped into my mind, I said aloud. "Who Am I?" I asked. "Bella, what did you just say?" asked a man. He had a mustache and dark black hair. He was wearing a police outfit, so, he must've been a police officer, unless it was Halloween. Was it? Yay, I remembered what Halloween was.

"Well, officer, I asked 'Who Am I?"

"Officer? Did you just call me officer?"...
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posted by angiehomas
how frustrating life can be to many centurys of the same thing.always searching never finding what i am looking for.jumping from one figure to the next.how can i intraduce myself when i have no permanent form to call my own.so to explain.i can take on any form of my choosing i have been nearly every animal i have even been the wind blowing through ones nose and out the mouth that was extremly weird.i have been dirt of which you walk on doors being closed.i am not whole because until i find my soulmate i cannot find a permanent body.all of them creatures i have inhabited and there enampt chatter...
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posted by twilight-7
This is short, I know, but enjoy it anyway!




The wolf continued to growl at me and I continued to back away. Again today I feared for my life. But would Jacob really hurt me? He wouldn’t would he? Not if he had his own mind. But did he have his own mind? I reached out to the wolf’s mind and sighed with relief when I heard Jacob’s thoughts. I was so preoccupied with finding Jacob in this enormous beast that I wasn’t paying attention to the beast itself. The wolf was advancing on me, fast. I tried to get away but I stumbled over the roots of trees and eventually walked backwards into one....
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posted by wanderingk
Chapter 4 - Running Through The Night
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I had woken myself up with a loud, piercing scream.
I had heard footsteps that night, running.
"Katrina? Are you alright?" Carlisle asked. I had tears all ovre my face and hair. Some made their way down my tank-top. Alice sat next to me, brushing my hair through her fingers. I sighed a long sigh. My head hurt. I touched my head and felt a sticky wet goo or something. I looked at the bedstand and screamed.
Blood.
Alice got to the blood on my head and froze, not breathing, a statue. She was like this for a few...
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posted by wanderingk
Chapter Two - Living Life The Vampire Way
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I woke up with the smell of bacon and eggs. I jumped up and realized the smell was from the big house so I walked over(I had changed into jeans and a tank top). To my suprise they were waiting for me--except Phil and Renee, they were still asleep.
"Hi Katty!" Renesmee said, hugging my waist. I blinked in suprise. Renesmee laughed.
"You do remember me aunt Katrina! I met you just last night!" She exclaimed. I nodded. She was almost my height--and I was fourteen. She was only two and today she was the height...
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posted by twilight-7
This bit i forgot to add on, sorry.


End of Chapter 5




“Can I touch your hand?” I glanced at his hands that were resting on his lap.
His eyebrows creased together in confusion at my question.
“I just want to know what your skin feels like,” I hurried to explain. “See, in my head it says that your skin should be cold and hard. I just want to know if it’s true.”
He smiled at my curiosity and placed a hand on my cheek. His skin was cold. I place my hand over his and could feel that his skin was silky to touch. I smiled and removed my hand from his.
“Thanks.” He removed his hand from...
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posted by 2bearz
PS, this like before Bellas wedding when she's still in school, like right after fighting Victoria and the newborns.


I sat with Bella and the rest of her family during lunch. I would've forgot that I promised Jessica that I would sit with her if she hadn't been throwing words at me that you don't even hear on the rez. They were mostly about how I got accepted into their group so easily. Me and Edward were having a hard time bearing it. Bella told me all about her future family and their talents, and about my Seth's family. I told her I could read minds but couldn't read hers. She had Edward...
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