This is the first story i've written so please tell me what you think
I was in the worst pain imaginable.
I was burning.
There were people talking but i had no idea what they were saying, their voices were too quick for me to hear no matter how hard i listened.If i was on fire then why weren't they helping me?why didn't they put it out?the pain was too much too bare, thinking about it only made it worse so i tried to remeber how this burning had started to help keep me pre-occupied...
The last thing i remember was walking out of the jewellers, i had just had my ring resized and i was in a rush to pick it up before the store closed. i was too late though and the Jewllers had already closed. It was as i turned to walk away that i saw the most beautiful pale faces i had ever seen-their beauty was painful even to think about it-staring back at me.They came towards me then and everything became dark.Their were three of them one,the female, had long brunette hair with natural looking blonde highlights, grown just past her waste she was so graceful looking it made me want to cry. One of males was tall about 6ft9inches with curly hair grown down to his chin his arm was wrapped around the female so i assumed they were together. The second male had short midnight black hair and was so charming even in silence. The last thing i saw was the sparkle of their skin disappear as the sunset, and the colour of their eyes.Their bright crimson eyes.
to be continued...
I was in the worst pain imaginable.
I was burning.
There were people talking but i had no idea what they were saying, their voices were too quick for me to hear no matter how hard i listened.If i was on fire then why weren't they helping me?why didn't they put it out?the pain was too much too bare, thinking about it only made it worse so i tried to remeber how this burning had started to help keep me pre-occupied...
The last thing i remember was walking out of the jewellers, i had just had my ring resized and i was in a rush to pick it up before the store closed. i was too late though and the Jewllers had already closed. It was as i turned to walk away that i saw the most beautiful pale faces i had ever seen-their beauty was painful even to think about it-staring back at me.They came towards me then and everything became dark.Their were three of them one,the female, had long brunette hair with natural looking blonde highlights, grown just past her waste she was so graceful looking it made me want to cry. One of males was tall about 6ft9inches with curly hair grown down to his chin his arm was wrapped around the female so i assumed they were together. The second male had short midnight black hair and was so charming even in silence. The last thing i saw was the sparkle of their skin disappear as the sunset, and the colour of their eyes.Their bright crimson eyes.
to be continued...
10. Ask about Mike.
9. Ask about Eric.
8. Ask about Jacob.
7. Ask about Edward.
6. After asking about all these boys, inquire as to how much she is paying them, and where in the White Pages she looked for fake fan-boys.
5. When she complains about not being a vampire, throw glitter on her and claim she sparkles just like a vampire in the sun.
4. Ask if the thought of Edward biting her makes her… happy.
3. Say that since Edward is technically dead, she is into necrophilia. Tell her that is sick and wrong, and she should stop with her weird fetishes.
2. Tell her we all know about the real reason she married Edward – the honeymoon.
And the Number One way to annoy Bella Swan?
1. Tell her that you and Jacob imprinted on each other, and are getting married. Tell her you are pregnant, and will be with him forever. Videotape the reaction.
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9. Ask about Eric.
8. Ask about Jacob.
7. Ask about Edward.
6. After asking about all these boys, inquire as to how much she is paying them, and where in the White Pages she looked for fake fan-boys.
5. When she complains about not being a vampire, throw glitter on her and claim she sparkles just like a vampire in the sun.
4. Ask if the thought of Edward biting her makes her… happy.
3. Say that since Edward is technically dead, she is into necrophilia. Tell her that is sick and wrong, and she should stop with her weird fetishes.
2. Tell her we all know about the real reason she married Edward – the honeymoon.
And the Number One way to annoy Bella Swan?
1. Tell her that you and Jacob imprinted on each other, and are getting married. Tell her you are pregnant, and will be with him forever. Videotape the reaction.
Source: link
10. Take her credit cards and shopping vouchers, hold them above your head and tell her to “jump for it”.
9. Tell her if she was just a few centimetres shorter she could legally be a midget.
8. Wear the trashiest possible clothing whenever you can.
7. Tie her up in a straightjacket. When she protests, tell her she needs to go back to the loony bin.
6. When you go into the sun with her, fall into a twitching heap on the ground and moan “I’m melting.”
5. Pelt her with cloves of garlic.
4. When she gets a vision, ask if her “spidey senses” are tingling.
3. Trip her up and ask if she saw it coming.
2. Ask her what you will be doing in five minutes every ten minutes.
And the Number One way to annoy Alice Cullen?
1. Email her dozens of application forms for the position of speaker on psychic hotlines.
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9. Tell her if she was just a few centimetres shorter she could legally be a midget.
8. Wear the trashiest possible clothing whenever you can.
7. Tie her up in a straightjacket. When she protests, tell her she needs to go back to the loony bin.
6. When you go into the sun with her, fall into a twitching heap on the ground and moan “I’m melting.”
5. Pelt her with cloves of garlic.
4. When she gets a vision, ask if her “spidey senses” are tingling.
3. Trip her up and ask if she saw it coming.
2. Ask her what you will be doing in five minutes every ten minutes.
And the Number One way to annoy Alice Cullen?
1. Email her dozens of application forms for the position of speaker on psychic hotlines.
Source: link
YOu know what my friend Adriana I got her this awesome Chritmas preasent it is a Twilight shrit that I got a the Willowbrick Mall (Also Adriana is obsesed with Twlight)
thanks for reading im really new at this as some of guys can tell