This is the first story i've written so please tell me what you think
I was in the worst pain imaginable.
I was burning.
There were people talking but i had no idea what they were saying, their voices were too quick for me to hear no matter how hard i listened.If i was on fire then why weren't they helping me?why didn't they put it out?the pain was too much too bare, thinking about it only made it worse so i tried to remeber how this burning had started to help keep me pre-occupied...
The last thing i remember was walking out of the jewellers, i had just had my ring resized and i was in a rush to pick it up before the store closed. i was too late though and the Jewllers had already closed. It was as i turned to walk away that i saw the most beautiful pale faces i had ever seen-their beauty was painful even to think about it-staring back at me.They came towards me then and everything became dark.Their were three of them one,the female, had long brunette hair with natural looking blonde highlights, grown just past her waste she was so graceful looking it made me want to cry. One of males was tall about 6ft9inches with curly hair grown down to his chin his arm was wrapped around the female so i assumed they were together. The second male had short midnight black hair and was so charming even in silence. The last thing i saw was the sparkle of their skin disappear as the sunset, and the colour of their eyes.Their bright crimson eyes.
to be continued...
I was in the worst pain imaginable.
I was burning.
There were people talking but i had no idea what they were saying, their voices were too quick for me to hear no matter how hard i listened.If i was on fire then why weren't they helping me?why didn't they put it out?the pain was too much too bare, thinking about it only made it worse so i tried to remeber how this burning had started to help keep me pre-occupied...
The last thing i remember was walking out of the jewellers, i had just had my ring resized and i was in a rush to pick it up before the store closed. i was too late though and the Jewllers had already closed. It was as i turned to walk away that i saw the most beautiful pale faces i had ever seen-their beauty was painful even to think about it-staring back at me.They came towards me then and everything became dark.Their were three of them one,the female, had long brunette hair with natural looking blonde highlights, grown just past her waste she was so graceful looking it made me want to cry. One of males was tall about 6ft9inches with curly hair grown down to his chin his arm was wrapped around the female so i assumed they were together. The second male had short midnight black hair and was so charming even in silence. The last thing i saw was the sparkle of their skin disappear as the sunset, and the colour of their eyes.Their bright crimson eyes.
to be continued...
okay so we all know that edward is the best charcter in twilight. why? because of how loving he is. He treats bella like if she were gold and his biggest treasure.Many of us wish to have a boyfriend or girlfriend like edward. It makes someone really happy to be loved so greatly.
Edward is amazing. That is why he is the best character of twilight because he really shows how much hes in love and protects bella through alot of troubles. Another reason why we would love edward would be because he is so hot!! hes the best looking in the movie! He is so GOOD looking...We all think that right? Cuz its so true!! hes awesome!!
okay so i havent read any of the books yet...but im judging from all the previews ive seen of the movie. Dont worry, ima read the book this week...ima go buy it at the store to read it! im so excited...!!!!! >.<
thank you for taking your time to read this (if u did read it...) please comment of wat u think of my article...=þ
Edward is amazing. That is why he is the best character of twilight because he really shows how much hes in love and protects bella through alot of troubles. Another reason why we would love edward would be because he is so hot!! hes the best looking in the movie! He is so GOOD looking...We all think that right? Cuz its so true!! hes awesome!!
okay so i havent read any of the books yet...but im judging from all the previews ive seen of the movie. Dont worry, ima read the book this week...ima go buy it at the store to read it! im so excited...!!!!! >.<
thank you for taking your time to read this (if u did read it...) please comment of wat u think of my article...=þ