This is the first story i've written so please tell me what you think
I was in the worst pain imaginable.
I was burning.
There were people talking but i had no idea what they were saying, their voices were too quick for me to hear no matter how hard i listened.If i was on fire then why weren't they helping me?why didn't they put it out?the pain was too much too bare, thinking about it only made it worse so i tried to remeber how this burning had started to help keep me pre-occupied...
The last thing i remember was walking out of the jewellers, i had just had my ring resized and i was in a rush to pick it up before the store closed. i was too late though and the Jewllers had already closed. It was as i turned to walk away that i saw the most beautiful pale faces i had ever seen-their beauty was painful even to think about it-staring back at me.They came towards me then and everything became dark.Their were three of them one,the female, had long brunette hair with natural looking blonde highlights, grown just past her waste she was so graceful looking it made me want to cry. One of males was tall about 6ft9inches with curly hair grown down to his chin his arm was wrapped around the female so i assumed they were together. The second male had short midnight black hair and was so charming even in silence. The last thing i saw was the sparkle of their skin disappear as the sunset, and the colour of their eyes.Their bright crimson eyes.
to be continued...
I was in the worst pain imaginable.
I was burning.
There were people talking but i had no idea what they were saying, their voices were too quick for me to hear no matter how hard i listened.If i was on fire then why weren't they helping me?why didn't they put it out?the pain was too much too bare, thinking about it only made it worse so i tried to remeber how this burning had started to help keep me pre-occupied...
The last thing i remember was walking out of the jewellers, i had just had my ring resized and i was in a rush to pick it up before the store closed. i was too late though and the Jewllers had already closed. It was as i turned to walk away that i saw the most beautiful pale faces i had ever seen-their beauty was painful even to think about it-staring back at me.They came towards me then and everything became dark.Their were three of them one,the female, had long brunette hair with natural looking blonde highlights, grown just past her waste she was so graceful looking it made me want to cry. One of males was tall about 6ft9inches with curly hair grown down to his chin his arm was wrapped around the female so i assumed they were together. The second male had short midnight black hair and was so charming even in silence. The last thing i saw was the sparkle of their skin disappear as the sunset, and the colour of their eyes.Their bright crimson eyes.
to be continued...
Bella's Pov.
I ran and ran in the castle. The middle door. There was Jasper and the man
with...ROSALIE!!??
"So, you decided to marry me, my love?"
"Well...let's just say that I'm ready to defeat you! AND YOUR SO CALLED
'MASTER'" I said loudly.
I grabbed Rosalie untied her and said quickly to get the others free.
SHE REGAINED HER STRENGTH!!
"Now, it's time to deal with YOU!!"
I threw a potion at Jasper that Carisle gave me for my birthday. Jasper
yelled and screamed. I threw the potion at the "Master" too.
Then he fell to the fround, and the cloak disappeared. I saw his bare face.
Then, an image appeared. Then, I realized there was a mask! The real trouble
maker was...ESME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I ran and ran in the castle. The middle door. There was Jasper and the man
with...ROSALIE!!??
"So, you decided to marry me, my love?"
"Well...let's just say that I'm ready to defeat you! AND YOUR SO CALLED
'MASTER'" I said loudly.
I grabbed Rosalie untied her and said quickly to get the others free.
SHE REGAINED HER STRENGTH!!
"Now, it's time to deal with YOU!!"
I threw a potion at Jasper that Carisle gave me for my birthday. Jasper
yelled and screamed. I threw the potion at the "Master" too.
Then he fell to the fround, and the cloak disappeared. I saw his bare face.
Then, an image appeared. Then, I realized there was a mask! The real trouble
maker was...ESME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edward Cullen (born Edward Anthony Masen) was born on June 20, 1901 in Chicago, Illinois, and is frozen in his 17-year-old body. While dying of the Spanish influenza, he was changed into a vampire by Dr. Carlisle Cullen after Edward's mother, Elizabeth, begged him to save Edward as her dying wish. Edward only drinks animal blood and has the special ability to read minds, with the exception of Bella Swan's. He falls in love with Bella soon after she arrives in Forks. Edward knows that he could kill Bella easily, a fact that torments him so much that, in the book New Moon, he decides to leave Forks with his family so they won't be able to hurt her. He returns, however, because he realizes he cannot live without her. Edward marries Bella in Breaking Dawn and they have a child, Renesmee.
OK EVERYONE IS LIKE TOTALLY HEAD OVER HEALS FOR EDWARD AND WHEN ALL COMES DOWN TO THE FACTS EDWARD JUST LEFT HER WITHOUTH THE APPROPRATE GOODBYE. JACOB WHOS WAS THERE FOR HER ALL THOSES MONTHS EDWARD WAS GONE. THE PROTECTED HER AND LET HER IN ON HIS WEREWOLF SECRET WHILE MAINTAINIGN A REALATIONSHIP WITH HER EVEN THOUGH HIS WOLF PACHK SAID NO. THATS TELLS ALOT ABOUT WHAT KIND OF FRIEND JACOB IS AND THEN OUT OF NOWHERE EDWARD COMES BACK INTO HER LIFE.WAT A LOOSER. AND THEN BECAUSE OF THE TREATY ITS LIEK EDWARD EXPECTS BELLA TO JUST STOP BEING JACOBS FRIEND. EDWARD JUST NEEDS TO TRUST BELLA I MEAN WATS CHANGES NOW SHES KNOWN HIS SECRET SINCE BEFORE EDWARD CAME BACK AND THEN SOME.