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posted by twilight_james
hehe! edits! tell me if I forget to put ina chapter!
Chapter 5
(Carlisle’s POV)
My son came down to see me. Oh how joyful I was, at first thinking that he was going to try me way of life again. But he came with girl, a vampire from whom I knew from many years ago. Edward introduced her
“Hello, this is-“
“Jane,” I cut him off. “Nice to see you again” Edward looked mildly amazed. I guessed that Jane had either not told him about the Volturi, or that I used to be a part of it. Probably the former.
“Come in,” I said, breaking the awkward silence. Jane and Edward came and sat down.
“So Carlisle, I see that you are still a “vegetarian” How do you do it?” Jane asked
“Well, it’s quite easy really; all you need is to learn some self-control. Unlike this one here-“I nodded at Edward “he went on a killing spree in the city”
We laughed uncomfortably. The rest of the conversation continued like much like that, but before long, they had to hunt. I advised them to hunt outside of town, as we did not want to attract attention to ourselves. They started to take of, but I knew Jane would not look back, and as they started to leave, I held Edward back. He struggled against my arm, and I was tempted to let him go, but I resisted. I knew, even though my first instinct was to let him go, I had to make sure that he knew.
I flipped Edward onto my back and ran the opposite way. I knew that there was an abandoned castle now far away from here, but it was far enough that no one could hear him. He was calling for Jane now, with all the strength he could muster, while trying to get off my back.
“Jane, JANE!” he yelled. My heart wrenched. I was usually the kind one. Usually I wouldn’t even take him away from his mate. But I had to make sure he knew the truth. He cried out again, and I would of cried myself if that was possible, with the amount of pain I was causing my son.

We arrived at the castle, and I put him in a stone room, in the middle of the castle that wouldn’t fall down. When I put him down he rammed into me, his eyes focused on the door, in essence, focused on the way to Jane. “Jane!” he cried out again, as he tried to get to get past me. His expression was sorrowful: the equivalent of the pain I was causing him was like the Spanish inquisition to a human: twice. I slipped out the room and shut the door just as he rammed into it, causing the whole building to shake. He cried out again: a tortured, pained cry, and this time a string of snarls and growls came as well. I sank down to the ground, ready to kill myself for what I had done to my son.

The growling and snarling finally stopped, and I let myself into the room. I would have been crying, but that wasn’t possible. I pulled up a stool and sat in the middle of the room, unable to look at Edward, both ashamed at what I had done, and my disgust for what he had become. After a few minutes, he came and put his hand on my shoulder in a comforting gesture. I spoke
“Edward, what have you done to yourself. Your eyes are a bright red, you are with a girl from the Volturi, you've killed, what, how many people now? Edward, I would not have changed you if I thought that you were going to turn out like this. You've become a monster. I've lost you. And I don't think..." my voice broke off, hardly able to say the words coming, “I don't think that I'll ever find you again. I brought you here to tell you this. Jane would never let me say this”
I stopped looking at him then.
"Edward", I continued, "this girl." My voice broke off then, not sure whether I should tell him the words.
I plowed on. "Remember how I told you when I changed you that humans could not know that you are a vampire. Well this girl is part of the reason. Have you", my voice broke off again. "Have you ever heard of the Volturi, Edward?"
He shook his head. I was shocked. "Well they are the reason, why humans can't know about us. They have taken on the duty of making sure everyone follows the rules. That translates to punishing transgressors. Edward..." my voice broke of yet again. "Edward, they are the worst of our kind. They are the monsters, not only ending humans lives, but vampires as well. I believe that they would make up rules just to torture people. This Jane..."I couldn’t think of a word to describe her. “her gift...Well the Volturi keep people for their gifts. Aro, who can see your thoughts, much like you, Edward, Marcus, who sees relationships, and Jane, who.." I wasn’t sure whether I could tell him this. I just gave him a warning. "Well, just don't let her smile at you, okay?" He stood rooted to the ground. I left, and left the door open. He could go back now. He knew.

He went back to Italy the following night.
Chapter 6
(Edwards POV)

I wondered if Jane was really as evil as Carlisle had implied. She seemed to be the only good thing in, oh what did Carlisle call it, the Volturi. I couldn’t deny that what he said was true; it explained the whole thing with Aro perfectly. As I was pondering this, she came down the hall, a fresh meal in hand. We fed, but I could sense that she was disturbed about something. She guarded her thoughts, so eventually I had to take a break from hunting and ask her.
“Jane, what’s wrong”
“Nothing!” she replied a little too quickly.
I pressed on. “Jane, I know something’s up. Tell me what it is. Please.”
“Well,” she hesitated.
“Yes?”
“It’s kind of about…Well what did Carlisle tell you when he took you away?”
“When?” I asked, stalling for time as I tried to come up with a good story.
She let out an exasperated sigh. “Edward, you know exactly what I’m talking about. Just tell me”
“Okay well...” I was still trying to come up with a story. Suddenly it hit me “He just wanted to know whether we were planning to stay near him for a while or if we were going”
Jane laughed, a silvery, tinkering sound like bells, but immediately cut it off. In that second though, she left her thoughts unguarded, and I knew my worst fears had been confirmed.

She thought that he told me about the Volturi

What was so bad and secret about the Volturi? I resolved to find out, though I didn’t need to. No, shortly after this, they came for me.
posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
It was not a plasent day when I woke up at lunch. My hand was killing me and I felt bad for getting mad at Jacob. I know sooner or later I would have to talk about to some body, I am just not that good on sharing my feelings. I would just rather keep them to myself. I heard people talking in the kitchen, it sounded like Charlie was over. Great, that is all that I need. I liked Charlie but he didn't know any of the secrets, so I would need to lie. I got mad and punched a brick wall? Um, that one would work, unless they already told them. I could here them talking about what happen last night....
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posted by surfergal
The next morning was school and as usual I got up showered which is
very hard with a broken knee by the way. I put on some shorts cause
none of my pants would go over my cast and then I put on a sweat
shirt. Max cam and got me to take me to school. We talked the whole
way there an I told him sorry for falling off his porch and squishing
his flower bed. He said it was fine and that I didn't have to
apologize anymore. I arrived at school and saw Cody before I got out
if the car. I ask Max if he thought that Cody was good looking and max
said it's not about the looks it's about what's inside that...
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posted by surfergal
When I got to his house I could see him standing on his side walk. It
makes me happy when I see him. When I got out he said sweet ride sis.
I know it's awesome my favorite kind of car in the world. He ask if it
had a good base in it and I said there's only one way to find that
out. So we hoped in my jeep turned up the music and went for a
drive,then he got a call so I took him to the base. He told me sorry
for having to leave and that he would call later.

I had the best people in my life. People to take care of me people who
actually cared. I went back to the house and of course Jacob and Seth...
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posted by surfergal
I remembered that Edward could read minds so as I was running I was
screaming Edward! Help! Soon I was in so much I couldn't stand running
anymore so I slowed down as I was still screaming at Edward. I was
breathing so heavy that it hurt my ribs to breathe. If Edward
couldn't hear me through his mind maybe he could actually hear me so
I screamed his name. Soon the guy that was following me was right
in front of me with his hand over my mouth saying don't scream you'll
scare the animals away. I moved back cause I needed to breathe through
my mouth. I asked the boy who he was and he told me his...
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posted by surfergal
As the weeks went on one Sergeant didn't like me I could tell he was
always making me work harder. His name was Sergeant Ray. He was weird.
Me and Max formed a brother sister kind of relation ship through the
weeks and I told him about the way Sergeant Ray was toward me and Max said “that be wouldn’t let him harm me in any way”. That night Senior Chief Randal came and woke us up around 3 am to teach us about hypothermia. We had to get in a cold pool full of ice in none other 5 degree weather. In 15 minutes we felt the full effect of it. I could barely walk. Once we got out Sergeant Ray...
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posted by scarlet13
Thank you to the people who commented on my last fan fiction even if there werent alot of you, come on people if you dont comment I cant get ideas and I need idea's!!!

"EDWARD!!!" I screamed and started to run towards him but he was being pulled into the forest, so I pushed my self to run faster, as I got to the forest edge some one wrapped their arms around me, to restrict me and then they whispered into my ear....

" My cousin wouldnt want you to get hurt now would he, not after all the planning it took to get everything ready for you, and dont even try to scream for him because if you dont...
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posted by bubble_babe
(heehee Ho NO)

I walked down the street well in the middle. I was going up into the woods to find a nice hole to die in. all i did to day was save this small pretty girl from gitting hit my a truck and all her husben did was yell at me saying it was stupied and i could have killed myslef. He cared about me more than his wife. shure she was walking rather fast, but still a nice thank you would have been nice. i finley came across the woods. without thinking i walking right into the woods.
After i was far into the woods where noone could find or see me, i reached into my pocket and pulled out...
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posted by renesmeblack
Hey! Sorry this took so long! I was working on two other stories in my spare time, not to mention going to a wedding. I hope you are all still reading. Sorry!
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End of Chapter 9

"I heard we needed a doctor," Carlisle said as he entered. "Lucky enough Alice caught me while I was in North America."
Searching through his thoughts, he was half wondering how I can stand breathing in this room. I was even surprised. I haven't hunted for six weeks. And yet I was breathing, no attention towards my thirst, at all.
"This will take a little while. Jacob, please take Edward out if you're...
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posted by scarlet13
Sorry for the wait everyone I've not had time lately, but I hope you like this and please comment!!



I frozein my seat ( a habit I picked up from the cullens) and stopped breathing for a few seconds and then I let the air escape my lungs all at once, realization hit, I was dreaming.
I had to be because he would never come back for a petty human like me.
I stood up takig another deep breath and turned to my dream character. The rest of my dreams hadn'y done him justice, he was breath-takingly beautiful.I felt something cold and wet slide down my face, I wiped it away in a hurry and looked at the...
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hey guys. just letting you know that i felt really ill last night so its kind of a mericle (see i cant even spell right) that i managed to come in to school today, espesally to post this article and to get my £30 for EMA. but i managed it. because i felt and still feel ill/weird, i havent managed to put as much detail into the story as i wanted to so ill change a few things around on monday probably. but anyway heres the next part.

part 6

“Hello?” I asked.

“Mom? Where’s Alice? I knew I dialled the wrong number.” Reneesmee said when I froze.

“Reneesmee, oh god where are you?” I asked...
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Kellan Lutz opened up about the upcoming Twilight movies! He talks about his favorite scene in New Moon, one of his first memories getting recognized by fans and more!

On filming New Moon:
"I'm done with New Moon. It was really easy to work on with [Director] Chris Weitz. It all starts with the director, and he really moves the tempo with shooting. And he's just so mellow and relaxed that it trickled down to the crew. And they were really prepared and it trickled down to the actors, who were really comfortable. And since Twilight was really accepted by the fans, it really allowed us to feel comfortable...
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I wanna stay mysterious and unpredictable just like Edward!

1. Was it difficult to get the role of Edward in Twilight?
‘More then 5000 actors did auditions for the role as Edward, so it wasn’t easy that’s for sure. But once I did the screentest with Kristen everything went so fast. Because I admire her for years I was really nervious when I was standing in front of her.
Later I heard that she, just because I was showing my vulnerable side, concidered me allot to play the role.’

2. You 2 have a fantastic chemistry together, is there something more between you and Kristen?Kristen is very...
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posted by edwardcullen865
"Edward..Jacob asked Nessie to marry him and she said yes she unsure how you would take it. she is going to tell him what we said now ..."
" WHAT? HIS HE MAD SHE IS ONLY SIXTEEN!!!"
"now Edward I'm not thrilled she is getting married either but she is and it is her choice not ours and you promised not to be mad."
"that was before i found out my daughter my only daughter was getting taken away from me."
"Edward she isn't going anywhere. she is still going to live near us just not with us anymore."
"I'm fine." he kept saying it. then i think i heard him say i'll kill you,but i wasn't sure till i looked...
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posted by edwardcullen865
" my love, Nessie is with Jacob as normal and Mason is with Esme . we are going to pick Mason up right now " Edward answered .
" well , okay i just don't like being away from him for so long ."
"it only been a day Bella ."
" i know but it seems longer than that."
We arrived at the Cullen's house a few seconds later.I Walked through the back door while Edward followed . I walked straight to Esme to get Mason.Esme turned to face me . I looked down at her arms for Mason , but he was not there . i started to get worried.
" Where is Mason? " i asked Esme with a little worry in my tone.i knew she...
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posted by Bella_Swan3
CRITICALLY IMPORTANT STUFF YOU SHOULD KNOW:

1) I have created my own spot for Sunrise, and updates will now be posted there.

2) See my profile "spots Bella_Swan3 has joined" for more information. Sunrise is the spot with the red rose.

3) All previous Sunrise chapters have been reposted there as well.

4) Thank you to Swhit2, who encouraged me to create my own spot.

5) If you see it and you liked Sunrise, please join it.

6) Please do not post articles on my spot unless it is a review, but you are free to add questions, picks, pictures, forum topics, videos(if you find anything that's relevant), links or quiz questions.

Thank you once again to everyone who ever commented and rated Sunrise. I love you people!
posted by Bella_Swan3
-Renesmee-

I terminate the call, and scream at the top of my lungs. It takes Carlisle and Rosalie thirty two seconds to reach me. The other Cullens are out hunting.

I find I can only speak in short bursts, so I focus only on Carlisle's voice, asking me what happened. I try to answer, but then, oh joy, more pain.

* * *

I've been in labour for the past eight hours now. Imagine, just for a moment, that Rosalie is capable of PMS. And that simultaneously, someone's hidden her hair products, her iPod, her BMW, and her laptop. I was currently in a mood that would make that look like a kitten having a tantrum.

I broke Jacob's wrist by accident.
posted by CoolMandyz43
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posted by MiaCullen_x
Sorry it's a bit short :S

Chapter 3 - A Meeting - Edward's POV
"Hey Bloodsucker," Jacob started, as soon as I answered my cell phone. "You guys need to get down here. Now."
"This doesn't sound like a social visit,"
"It isn't." He said, seriously. I closed the phone.
"Everyone. Could you come down here please?" I asked quietly, wondering what was wrong with Jacob.
When they entered the room, they were all thinking the same thing.
What's going on?
Sound's serious,
One person's thoughts stood out from the rest.
Why can't I see? It's those stupid dogs again...
I laughed and Alice looked at me and stuck her...
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posted by Twilight597
eek! i havent written this in 2 months! because i had MAJOR writers block. i asked my friend on this other website and she gave me some ideas. i finally got it done. i might take a break from this story because its hard, and i want ot post this story i've had for a while, like it was my first one i wrote, i stopped at like chapter 9 becasue i had writers block, its called Zodiac Pendant, and im going to post it today also. Dreamnapped is almost done too. im not writing Friends Dont Let Friends Scoop Poop anymore, well i will but not now, i will wait until im done with another one and The Supernatural...
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posted by TwilightHearts
I have made a religion for all dedicated twilight fans, i am the first to join, i have followed these simple rules for three weeks and hope you will join. Iff you want to, repeat the words at the bottom of the page.
Here are the simple rules:

1) Do not say Volturi in a bad way (They are royalty)

2) Do not assosciate 'Fangs' with 'Vampires'

3) Name a child or pet after a Twilight character (or middle name)

4) Do not celebrate Halloween

5) Wear something to represent your love for twilight, E.G: Bracelet, Earrings, Necklace, Pin, Bag.... And wear it EVERYDAY. (not at sleep)

Words To join yourself:



"...
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