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posted by twilight_james
hehe! edits! tell me if I forget to put ina chapter!
Chapter 5
(Carlisle’s POV)
My son came down to see me. Oh how joyful I was, at first thinking that he was going to try me way of life again. But he came with girl, a vampire from whom I knew from many years ago. Edward introduced her
“Hello, this is-“
“Jane,” I cut him off. “Nice to see you again” Edward looked mildly amazed. I guessed that Jane had either not told him about the Volturi, or that I used to be a part of it. Probably the former.
“Come in,” I said, breaking the awkward silence. Jane and Edward came and sat down.
“So Carlisle, I see that you are still a “vegetarian” How do you do it?” Jane asked
“Well, it’s quite easy really; all you need is to learn some self-control. Unlike this one here-“I nodded at Edward “he went on a killing spree in the city”
We laughed uncomfortably. The rest of the conversation continued like much like that, but before long, they had to hunt. I advised them to hunt outside of town, as we did not want to attract attention to ourselves. They started to take of, but I knew Jane would not look back, and as they started to leave, I held Edward back. He struggled against my arm, and I was tempted to let him go, but I resisted. I knew, even though my first instinct was to let him go, I had to make sure that he knew.
I flipped Edward onto my back and ran the opposite way. I knew that there was an abandoned castle now far away from here, but it was far enough that no one could hear him. He was calling for Jane now, with all the strength he could muster, while trying to get off my back.
“Jane, JANE!” he yelled. My heart wrenched. I was usually the kind one. Usually I wouldn’t even take him away from his mate. But I had to make sure he knew the truth. He cried out again, and I would of cried myself if that was possible, with the amount of pain I was causing my son.

We arrived at the castle, and I put him in a stone room, in the middle of the castle that wouldn’t fall down. When I put him down he rammed into me, his eyes focused on the door, in essence, focused on the way to Jane. “Jane!” he cried out again, as he tried to get to get past me. His expression was sorrowful: the equivalent of the pain I was causing him was like the Spanish inquisition to a human: twice. I slipped out the room and shut the door just as he rammed into it, causing the whole building to shake. He cried out again: a tortured, pained cry, and this time a string of snarls and growls came as well. I sank down to the ground, ready to kill myself for what I had done to my son.

The growling and snarling finally stopped, and I let myself into the room. I would have been crying, but that wasn’t possible. I pulled up a stool and sat in the middle of the room, unable to look at Edward, both ashamed at what I had done, and my disgust for what he had become. After a few minutes, he came and put his hand on my shoulder in a comforting gesture. I spoke
“Edward, what have you done to yourself. Your eyes are a bright red, you are with a girl from the Volturi, you've killed, what, how many people now? Edward, I would not have changed you if I thought that you were going to turn out like this. You've become a monster. I've lost you. And I don't think..." my voice broke off, hardly able to say the words coming, “I don't think that I'll ever find you again. I brought you here to tell you this. Jane would never let me say this”
I stopped looking at him then.
"Edward", I continued, "this girl." My voice broke off then, not sure whether I should tell him the words.
I plowed on. "Remember how I told you when I changed you that humans could not know that you are a vampire. Well this girl is part of the reason. Have you", my voice broke off again. "Have you ever heard of the Volturi, Edward?"
He shook his head. I was shocked. "Well they are the reason, why humans can't know about us. They have taken on the duty of making sure everyone follows the rules. That translates to punishing transgressors. Edward..." my voice broke of yet again. "Edward, they are the worst of our kind. They are the monsters, not only ending humans lives, but vampires as well. I believe that they would make up rules just to torture people. This Jane..."I couldn’t think of a word to describe her. “her gift...Well the Volturi keep people for their gifts. Aro, who can see your thoughts, much like you, Edward, Marcus, who sees relationships, and Jane, who.." I wasn’t sure whether I could tell him this. I just gave him a warning. "Well, just don't let her smile at you, okay?" He stood rooted to the ground. I left, and left the door open. He could go back now. He knew.

He went back to Italy the following night.
Chapter 6
(Edwards POV)

I wondered if Jane was really as evil as Carlisle had implied. She seemed to be the only good thing in, oh what did Carlisle call it, the Volturi. I couldn’t deny that what he said was true; it explained the whole thing with Aro perfectly. As I was pondering this, she came down the hall, a fresh meal in hand. We fed, but I could sense that she was disturbed about something. She guarded her thoughts, so eventually I had to take a break from hunting and ask her.
“Jane, what’s wrong”
“Nothing!” she replied a little too quickly.
I pressed on. “Jane, I know something’s up. Tell me what it is. Please.”
“Well,” she hesitated.
“Yes?”
“It’s kind of about…Well what did Carlisle tell you when he took you away?”
“When?” I asked, stalling for time as I tried to come up with a good story.
She let out an exasperated sigh. “Edward, you know exactly what I’m talking about. Just tell me”
“Okay well...” I was still trying to come up with a story. Suddenly it hit me “He just wanted to know whether we were planning to stay near him for a while or if we were going”
Jane laughed, a silvery, tinkering sound like bells, but immediately cut it off. In that second though, she left her thoughts unguarded, and I knew my worst fears had been confirmed.

She thought that he told me about the Volturi

What was so bad and secret about the Volturi? I resolved to find out, though I didn’t need to. No, shortly after this, they came for me.
posted by AdaLove
The transition from human to vampire is said to be very painful, in fact it’s so bad that "The pain of transformation is the sharpest memory they have of their human life."(TW20). When James bites Bella in TW23, we witness this clearly. She compares the sensation in her hand to "fire", and words such as "screamed", "writhed" and "torture" enhance the agony that Bella endures even at the very beginning of the transformation process. As Stephenie Meyer points out, this is at the beginning of the conversion, "Painful enough, but not as bad as if she had several bites." (PC8)

Edward speaks in...
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posted by Doopey
Hey ... This is my first fanfiction :D so if its not good just give me some constructive critism to make it better. Thanks (:


Preface.



The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.
posted by sh0rtiinedward
As we run into the woods, a very strong part of me hold me back and yelled at me to comeback home, but i just can't do it, i knew that something was wrong but i had to be with Julius and if my parents didn't like the idea they have to deal with me leaving home

"Rennesme what's wrong love are you ok" Julius said to me as he wrap me from my waist and kiss my forehead. i can't understand this pain in his face like if something were wrong, i don't think is me or that he is worried about me.I think is something more important and i have to find out what it is.

"yes i just worried, about what's going...
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posted by demilovatirocks
Family and Friends



Bella's real parents died in a huge car accident that all of her friends parents and most of their families were in.

She saved as many people as she could.

She saved Ashley .That is how they met.Bella could not save her mom but she got her dad out.Her dad had diabetes,high blood sugar,and high cholesterol.Even though she got him out he still ended up dying.

Selena,Sonny,and Lily all knew Bella since Pre-K.

Bella,Selena,Sonny,and Lily are all originally from New York.

Ashley is originally from New Jersey.

Bella's family,Jason D.,Jason E., And Mitchell are all also from New York.

Bella's...
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Won't Stop This Nightmare!?!?!?
PART ONE: A FINE MESS
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Here is how the story goes...
Wake up, eat, brush teeth, get ready and dressed for school, go to school, survive the worthless day, come back home, have fun, sleep, wake up and start the boring life all over again. But I forgot to tell you the let downs in between a life, that is mine, that looks completly normal. There are a few things that I need to let you know about me and my life.
1-My name, is Samantha Harris and I have a problem: I can...
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posted by jamiesue00
Nessie POV
I’m not sure what day it is. I know I’ve been here for almost three days now. My capture has been doing some experiments on me. I have marks all over my body. Some days the experiments are not too painful, other days I scream in pain and beg him to stop or kill me. Yesterday was not a good day. He had decided to try and see what insect poison would do to me; scorpion bites, snake bites and others. Some days it would take a lot out of me others I would be up at a normal time. After all the bites I endured yesterday I was in no hurry to get out and see what he had in store for me...
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posted by UchihaYuki
Hey Guys, Yuki here.

As some of you know,
I've been writing a Twilight FanFiction,
I've so far Written Six Chapters..
And I'm so Happy that Everyone seems to Love
it, I got a message, well a couple asking
when my Next Chapter's coming out,

I am in the thinking process,
right now.. I'm not sure what to write in
this chapter, So I wanna know what you guys
think my next Chapter should be about..
and so on, So just comment this with what you think.
I'll be glad to hear all of your opinions,
Or you could message me if you'd like, either way,
It doesn't matter.

For those of you who haven't Read my FanFictions...
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posted by angiehomas
consider me warned i have been scorn to breach a life i envisioned for us
i will not mourn anymore. my heart conflicting a war a rage inside i cant deny what you have taken from me im in a blissful state of insanity i will not wake on my own i have lost all my rights to humanity i am so torn.walking away as you did i wasnt your equal i felt like a kid i wanted to die right there lay down my tears no longer did i care how could you leave did you not feel the pull.another of my delusions i am such a fool.why couldnt i be enough.i will always love you
posted by CharmedVamp101
I awoke, chilled to the bone. Part of the reason being that the love of my life was right here beside me. He was a vampire, so of course I would be cold. But the other part was the dream I just awoke from.
Edward and I were at the wedding ceremony, we were reciting our vows. I was wearing a beautiful white gown, of my own design, that Alice created for me. Edward was wearing a black, traditional tux. My bridesmaids were wearing lilac colored floor length dresses, that I also designed. I was holding a bouquet of white roses, freesia, peach blossoms, and little white flowers. Those flowers also...
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posted by Edward_lover101
We had a lot to do before the wedding. Alice said that she was going to make my dress. Today was monday. Uge! I don't want to go to school, but I have to drop Reneseme off at her class or that jusr Andy will tease her. Or worse, James might find her. Edward told me that James had ran away when he got there. Oh well better get Reneseme to school. I drove Edwards volvo. I walked Reneseme to her first class then I was off to mine. Edward was staying at home today to help Carlisle and Emmet with something. I walked into my first class. The only open seat was next to Andy. The teacher told me to...
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posted by UchihaYuki
“Bella!!” Alice chimed from the front door, “Come on!, Charlie’s waiting for us!,”
“Yeah, yeah..I’m coming Alice..” I yelled from Nessie’s room. Alice had planed a visit with Charlie, she wanted him to be able to see Nessie every once in a wile, and I now had enough
self control so I could be around Charlie a lot more, Jacob too.. I missed him, I hadn’t seen him
in almost two months... He didn’t smell the same as he did when I was human, his smell kind of burned my nose when I was with him, I guess that’s another reason why Edward doesn’t like him... I hoped I’d get...
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posted by sh0rtiinedward
i didn't know what to do when i saw Jacob in front of my house, so as soon the car stop i got out but as soon he saw me he took off running to the woods, i follow him for 2 minutes until he stop.

"I came to fix everything, Bella call me to come and talk to you, but now you have things more important" he said very angry and with tears in his eyes, i never saw him like this.
"Jacob I'm sorry, mom never told me anything, and nothing is more important than get all thing straight up with you" i said to him as i try to hug him but he move right away.
"You know what Rennesme, i have to go, go and have...
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posted by TotallyMe105
Ok this is my first article ever on here so go easy on me.
For my first article I dacided to review Breaking Dawn since I have strong opinions on the book andso do most of you guys.sooo without further or do....


"Breaking Dawn Review"

Good Things:
1.)Personally I thought the wedding was beautifully portrayed and the way I imagined it and Bella finally stopped whining about Jacob long enough tosay "I Do" to Edward.
2.)I like how Stephenie Meyer gave a surprise withthe whole Renesmee thing.I also like how she made it lead up to think that Ness was going to be a boy.
3.)The book was well written and...
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posted by Hellohoudini
Woman finds 'Twilight' sequel script in trash (AP)Source: AP Tue May 12, 2009, 6:06 am EDT


ST. LOUIS - A St. Louis beauty salon owner accidentally happened upon one of the hottest Hollywood scripts — the pages from an upcoming "Twilight" sequel — in a trash bin.

Casey Ray found two scripts, one for the vampire sequel "New Moon" and one for a different movie titled "Memoirs." She decided to return them to the studio making the films. In return, she was invited to attend the movies' premieres, her lawyer said.

Ray recently was waiting for her fiance to finish work when she spotted two scripts...
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Bella's pov

I woke up again and I was still on the bed. I started to look around and I didn’t see him anywhere.
I slowly got out of bed and walked around. Where is he? Is he gone. I couldn’t hear anything. I gently walked thru the living room and noticed I’ve past out for 2 days again. I looked around the room again when I heard the front door, I grabbed a vase and walked gently toward the door, it opened and I jumped.
“Alice” I whispered “I could have hit you with the vase”
“Lucky you stopped in time” she said amused. I looked over her shoulder and the rest of the Cullen’s...
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posted by Edward_lover101
I was dreaming that I was in the medow with Edward. Then the dream turned into a nightmare. Jacob was walking towards us. In wolf form. He growled at me, at first it was at Edward. But it wasn't, it was me.
"Run ,Bella." said Edward.
"What?"
"Run! Bella you have to go now. Go get the others!" I ran as fast as I could. Jake was in front of me now. I looked behind my shoulder. There was my worst nightmare, Edward on the ground. No movement, no breathing, no nothing. I ran back to him, Jacob following. I fell to where Edwards body layed. I was crying. How could he, this should have been me. I truned...
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posted by lilyZ
Another night is falling,
Deep midnight is to come,
A distant voice is calling
And stealing your own soul.
You feel the danger's coming,
Its magic's in your heart.
The fear will hold your reason,
Sweet death will tear apart.
His love was born at darkness,
From lightless loss of hope,
A lonely nightime stranger,
An angel made of hate!
His heart was full of sorrow
When he's to blame the light.
His dream's to see a rainbow,
Try to survive at day.
Lifetime's for him a prison
He found there's no escape.
You, have to save him later,
Your blood will take his pain.
At night he needs you badly
His frozen...
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This story is for you Babina, my litlle sis!!
love you so much!!



A clock was ticking. That was the only thing I could hear.
I felt the smell of blood, gasoline and smoke. I couldn´t breathe and every time I tried to my chest hurts so much that I (almost) gave up.
I was upside down, I couldn´t confirm it because I couldn´t open my eyes, they were so heavy that I didn´t had the strength to open them… anyway I don´t wanted to open my eyes, I was afraid of what I might see.
Tic tac tic tac. It was so loud that it seemed a clock was inside my head and that might be the reason why my head was...
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posted by CharmedVamp101
Why? Had she come back to finish destroying what was left of my peace? I could see she was crying, yet I felt no urge to comfort her.
"I just came by to drop off your stuff, I'll leave. But I want to talk to you first."
I walked backwards onto the porch. I looked over to see Liz's expression. It wasn't happy. She was really mad at something. Or about something.
Bella, followed me onto the porch. I shut the door behind her.
"What,"I asked, placing a mask of no emotion over my face. I didn't want her to see how bad this was.
"I want you back, I still love you. I see how much I need you now. How can...
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posted by CharmedVamp101
After she was safely asleep, I went back to talk with my family.
"Can you guys just all go on a hunting trip for now. I need to talk to Liz and I don't want interuptions. I'm sure we can talk through this, but it would be most helpful if we were alone. I'm not trying to exclude you. Please let us alone until Monday, if we're don't get through this, she can stay, I will go."
"No, Edward, we don't want you to go,"Esme complained.
"I will, I already made her leave her apartment. She has no where else to go."
"Where will you go?"
"I will head up to Denali."
"Then we will go with you, we will let her...
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