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posted by twilight_james
hehe! edits! tell me if I forget to put ina chapter!
Chapter 5
(Carlisle’s POV)
My son came down to see me. Oh how joyful I was, at first thinking that he was going to try me way of life again. But he came with girl, a vampire from whom I knew from many years ago. Edward introduced her
“Hello, this is-“
“Jane,” I cut him off. “Nice to see you again” Edward looked mildly amazed. I guessed that Jane had either not told him about the Volturi, or that I used to be a part of it. Probably the former.
“Come in,” I said, breaking the awkward silence. Jane and Edward came and sat down.
“So Carlisle, I see that you are still a “vegetarian” How do you do it?” Jane asked
“Well, it’s quite easy really; all you need is to learn some self-control. Unlike this one here-“I nodded at Edward “he went on a killing spree in the city”
We laughed uncomfortably. The rest of the conversation continued like much like that, but before long, they had to hunt. I advised them to hunt outside of town, as we did not want to attract attention to ourselves. They started to take of, but I knew Jane would not look back, and as they started to leave, I held Edward back. He struggled against my arm, and I was tempted to let him go, but I resisted. I knew, even though my first instinct was to let him go, I had to make sure that he knew.
I flipped Edward onto my back and ran the opposite way. I knew that there was an abandoned castle now far away from here, but it was far enough that no one could hear him. He was calling for Jane now, with all the strength he could muster, while trying to get off my back.
“Jane, JANE!” he yelled. My heart wrenched. I was usually the kind one. Usually I wouldn’t even take him away from his mate. But I had to make sure he knew the truth. He cried out again, and I would of cried myself if that was possible, with the amount of pain I was causing my son.

We arrived at the castle, and I put him in a stone room, in the middle of the castle that wouldn’t fall down. When I put him down he rammed into me, his eyes focused on the door, in essence, focused on the way to Jane. “Jane!” he cried out again, as he tried to get to get past me. His expression was sorrowful: the equivalent of the pain I was causing him was like the Spanish inquisition to a human: twice. I slipped out the room and shut the door just as he rammed into it, causing the whole building to shake. He cried out again: a tortured, pained cry, and this time a string of snarls and growls came as well. I sank down to the ground, ready to kill myself for what I had done to my son.

The growling and snarling finally stopped, and I let myself into the room. I would have been crying, but that wasn’t possible. I pulled up a stool and sat in the middle of the room, unable to look at Edward, both ashamed at what I had done, and my disgust for what he had become. After a few minutes, he came and put his hand on my shoulder in a comforting gesture. I spoke
“Edward, what have you done to yourself. Your eyes are a bright red, you are with a girl from the Volturi, you've killed, what, how many people now? Edward, I would not have changed you if I thought that you were going to turn out like this. You've become a monster. I've lost you. And I don't think..." my voice broke off, hardly able to say the words coming, “I don't think that I'll ever find you again. I brought you here to tell you this. Jane would never let me say this”
I stopped looking at him then.
"Edward", I continued, "this girl." My voice broke off then, not sure whether I should tell him the words.
I plowed on. "Remember how I told you when I changed you that humans could not know that you are a vampire. Well this girl is part of the reason. Have you", my voice broke off again. "Have you ever heard of the Volturi, Edward?"
He shook his head. I was shocked. "Well they are the reason, why humans can't know about us. They have taken on the duty of making sure everyone follows the rules. That translates to punishing transgressors. Edward..." my voice broke of yet again. "Edward, they are the worst of our kind. They are the monsters, not only ending humans lives, but vampires as well. I believe that they would make up rules just to torture people. This Jane..."I couldn’t think of a word to describe her. “her gift...Well the Volturi keep people for their gifts. Aro, who can see your thoughts, much like you, Edward, Marcus, who sees relationships, and Jane, who.." I wasn’t sure whether I could tell him this. I just gave him a warning. "Well, just don't let her smile at you, okay?" He stood rooted to the ground. I left, and left the door open. He could go back now. He knew.

He went back to Italy the following night.
Chapter 6
(Edwards POV)

I wondered if Jane was really as evil as Carlisle had implied. She seemed to be the only good thing in, oh what did Carlisle call it, the Volturi. I couldn’t deny that what he said was true; it explained the whole thing with Aro perfectly. As I was pondering this, she came down the hall, a fresh meal in hand. We fed, but I could sense that she was disturbed about something. She guarded her thoughts, so eventually I had to take a break from hunting and ask her.
“Jane, what’s wrong”
“Nothing!” she replied a little too quickly.
I pressed on. “Jane, I know something’s up. Tell me what it is. Please.”
“Well,” she hesitated.
“Yes?”
“It’s kind of about…Well what did Carlisle tell you when he took you away?”
“When?” I asked, stalling for time as I tried to come up with a good story.
She let out an exasperated sigh. “Edward, you know exactly what I’m talking about. Just tell me”
“Okay well...” I was still trying to come up with a story. Suddenly it hit me “He just wanted to know whether we were planning to stay near him for a while or if we were going”
Jane laughed, a silvery, tinkering sound like bells, but immediately cut it off. In that second though, she left her thoughts unguarded, and I knew my worst fears had been confirmed.

She thought that he told me about the Volturi

What was so bad and secret about the Volturi? I resolved to find out, though I didn’t need to. No, shortly after this, they came for me.
posted by surfergal
It seemed forever sinse we had left the house and I was scared to death. It got cold really faast and it was beginning to thunder storm. We were walking now, well I wasn't Emmet was told apperently that I needed to be carried. I so didn't want to be carried, Emmet was kinda of cold to tell you the truth.
Emmet, can I walk. I ask.
No, you will leave your scent on where you are walking. Emmet had told me.
Oh, can I have jacket? I'm sorta freezing. I said.
Yeah,Emmet said while Rose handed him another sweartshirt for me.
Nathen came out of the woods from infront of us and ask:
Do you want me to carry...
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posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
This is not a Twilight Fan fiction Sorry I didn't know where else to post this, Please read and comment!

My name is Mulletfingers or well that's what my step-sister calls me. My mom sent me off to some boot camp in Mobile Alabama, I lasted 2 days and than ran all the way back to Coconut Cove. I live all by myself because my mom doesn't know I'm back, Bea (short for Beatrice) gives me food like apples, oranges and her famous banana bread. There is always police sireign going around here. The other day I saw a girl or maybe a boy with long hair, came through here ( the empty boatyard
filled with...
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One day later

It was me,vickie and alice at the hotel ,jasper left to go help find james,the girl Victoria was following Esme and Rosalie but,she stopped so esme is watching my dad and rosalie is helping Edward,Emmet,Carlisle and Jasper find james. The phone rang alice said "hello"
she listened"nothing i have seen nothing"
"here"she said to me and handed the phone

"hello"i said
"bella its so good to here your voice"he said
"have you found anything yet?"i asked my edward
"nothing at all,he vanished but we are following the girl now"he said
"edward i miss you"i said really low cuz i didnt want to...
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posted by RATHBONE07
**Victorias Life(she wasnt always a mean bitch)**
Water dripped off my blazing red hair and onto the floor.
“Mom? Can I leave now?” Mom had made me go outside, in the freezing rain, and gather all of the wet clothes on the line. I was shaking now in the corner, covered from head to toe with water, I coughed.
“Vic your not dry enough. Just a couple more minutes.” Mary was standing by the edge of the wall, looking at me, a smile on her face. She loved my torture.
“Okay, you can go up now.” Yes, I quickly fled up the stairs and into my room.
    It was warm in here....
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one week later and a day
It's march 31st and Vickie's birthday is April 4th and she's going to be 2 year's old!im exsited see loves sweets.i got her a bracelet that say's
"you are my world"on the heart thats silver and on a silver chain that as she gets older she can change the size of it!and i also got her a new toy.

it was sunny today so edward and alice would not be there as i drove over to the day care i seen edward's car there alice and him where there
"hey bella"alice said as i got out of the jeep
"hey waz up?"i asked her
"since its sunny out side and we cant go to school can we watch Vickie?"alice...
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posted by surfergal
The jet that they flew on to Cali.
The jet that they flew on to Cali.
I stayed at Max's house for a couple of weeks, I went home every so often. Max could pick stuff up now sinse his shoulders were heald now.. I was finally able to sleep in my own bed, instead of being on an air mattress. School was starting within three days and I had nothing to take. When I did get into the door of my house Alice came straight to me and ask:
Hey, Addi Do you want to go school shopping? Alice ask me.
Yeah totally. Let me go up stairs and take a shower though frist. I said
Okay, great. Alice said.
I loved going shopping Alice, she pick out clothes that was me and that I looked hot...
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posted by xXjakeloverXx
Chapter Fourteen

    I didn’t know how to feel. How was someone expected to feel after they had almost been killed? Someone was gasping. What was wrong with them? As I tried to concentrate, I realized it was myself gasping. I think I was starting to hyperventilate.
“ Grandpa! She needs help!” Renesmee cried beside me. They were trying to get me back to the house. I couldn’t see anything. My vision had black dots clouding it and I felt woozy.
“ She’s going into shock. We need to get her somewhere she can lie down as soon as possible.” I distantly heard Carlisle’s...
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posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
Ugh I couldn't stand it any more! Edward came out side with Emmet and Jasper. Zoey, what can you not stand any more? - Edward asked. Just some people, first Collin and now Sawyer!! I said. Slow down, Zoe, What happen with Collin - Jasper asked. I dont want to talk about it, I told them. Jasper would quiet trying to make me spill, I don't want to! I yelled at him. You need to talk to someone, why not us? Emmett said. Yall are guys, yall wouldn't understand. I told them. Zoe, you know we will understand, you can tell us. Edward said. I don't want to and them I lunged for Edward. I had him pinned...
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posted by EdwardCullen604
"Leahs coming" Alice and Edward said in unison. Alice must have been searching the future too. I guess i should have realised that Leah would come after me when her brother was upset considering she had serious anger issuess.

"Why? her patrols not till this evening" Jacob assked in a onfused tone he was still staring at me like he couldn't deide what he thought of me though none of his thoughts were good.

"shes not coming to see you shes comin to see Cora" they continued to speak at the same time it was kind of freaky. Charro looked anxious as he understood why she was coming. I had to admit...
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posted by patrisha727
Opps.. sorry you guys, I forgot to post Amore here. LOL. But I posted it on my spot! ^_^

I closed my eyes, involuntarily. Damn, why did I have to get caught!?!?
I turned around to see Edward's hard face slowly.
"Hi..." I said, a little nervous.
Angela just stared at Edward with a shocked expression.
"You need to leave." Edward simply said.
"What's going on in there? That girl should go to the hospital for her arm!" I argued.
"We will take care of that." Edward said.
"What was Jasper doing?" I asked.
Edward sighed.
"You need to go, and not tell anyone, not even your parents, not even your your friends...
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PART 2

"wow, well thats weird"said Tj his arm across his chest
"tell us your story alex the ill tell you ours"jaz said he had his hands around my waist
and i was leaning on him dazzed but lissten to her story
"well i remember most of my human life but it fads"she said"you and my dad split up when i was 11 and i stayed with him but you came and seen me often untill you started dating mark and then you seen me once a month with him i thought it was wierd how when i seen him he allways whore sun glass and it was raining out and you stopped seeing me when i was 16 years old i never seen you again."she...
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posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
Zoe's POV
The last thing I remember is that I got shot in the calf and Collin was carrying me home. I sat up on a table and looked behind my shoulder. I jumped up, my family scarred me. Emmet, Bella, Jasper, and Edwad were standing in the front crouch like they were protecting the rest of the family. So this means I am a Cullen now? I asked everyone. They sorta of laughed. I looked at Alice and than everyone elses, there hazel eyes all stared at me wide and in shock. I looked down and notice i wasn't standing I was floating in mid air! I could fly, I guess you could put it that way. How do I...
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posted by surfergal
I had nothing else to say to him. I didn't speak unless he ask something and when he did I pretended like I didn't hear it. I ended up falling asleep again and when I woke up I heard a pow and felt my shoulder that had been shot tiwce now. Then I looked up at him. I saw him have the gun to his head.
No don't do it I said.
Why? I hurt you I should hurt myslef. He saaid.
No you shouldn't please don't I told him.
I was breathing really heavy and I was trying to get words out and I couldn't.
Please dont do this. I said.
You will regret it I told him.
No, I'm gonna do it. He said.
Then I watched as he...
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posted by surfergal
The next morning when I woke up I had a note on my pillow next to me. It read:

Dear Addi,
I didn't want to wake you, but I will meet you at school. love you.
Cody

I got up after reading the note and went to take a shower did the whole getting ready for school thing, a.k.a the usual teen girl morning routine. I got on my motorcycle and drove to school. The weather was finally getting warmer as in th 65 degree range. Once I got to school I saw Cody leaning againsted his car, his car. He looked so hot. He walked over to my bike and helped me off of it, which was so sweet of him.
"Thanks". I said....
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Argentina –—-–——- November 19, 2009
Austria –———––——- January 8, 2010
Australia –—––——- November 19, 2009
Belgium –——–——- November 18, 2009
Bolivia –———––——– January 1, 2010
Brazil –—-–—–——- November 20, 2009
Bulgaria –—––——– November 20, 2009
Canada –——–—— November 20, 2009
Chile –———–——- November 26, 2009
China –—-–—-–—— TBD
Colombia ––—-––——- January 1, 2010
CIS ––—-–—-–—-–– December 3, 2009
Costa Rica ––—-–—-–- November 2009...
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posted by twilightfantic1
Chapter 2
    
    That night in Edwards arms I was sobbing. We heard a knock at the door. “Go away” Edward said. “Its me Jacob can I please come in Bella?”. Edward looked at me I just nodded. “Come in” Edward said. He just looked horrible I immediately said “sorry”. He said it was okay he was fine. He just wanted to see if I was okay and that Nessie wanted to talk to me. I said okay. “Momma I'm sorry........I'm sorry you don't want me” “Now Nessie stop being ridiculous, thats not what I meant I was just......having fun if I knew I would have the most prettiest daughter in the whole inter world I wold have tried with all my might....... Edward go check on Jacob”.Then he left.
posted by surfergal
Standing next to Cody in the school was good. I was happy to be off of cruches and I didn't look so short next to him either which was great. We were pretty quiet that day. We usually talk nonstop even through class. Once school was over we went home and did some homework. It was sun shiny outside so we went outside and soaked up some rays. Soon the sun was setting and we were getting hungry so I went to the kitchen and started looking for something to cook. Soon enough I found some maccaroni and some spaggeti sause so I made home-made spaggeti. It was supprisingly good! That night I took another...
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this one was fun for us to wright. hope you enjoy it.




Charlie's pov


Bella's here.....I said to Sue.

" Thats great " Sue said.

I went to the door to open it up for her. It looks like she brought Nessie,Jake and Alice as well.
"Hey guys come on in."

"Hay dad."

"Hi Grandpa"

"Hi Charile" Jake and Alice said together.

"Sue is here I see'' Jake said.

Ya she and I have somthing to tell you. But frist would you like anything to eat. Sue made breakfest.

"Sure" Jake and Nessie said.

"We just ate" Bella and Alice said.

So Sue made up a plate for Jake and Nessie.

" This is really good even better than Edwards'' Jake...
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1) The wedding is something that Bella doesn't want to do and so she should be making a huge deal about it and Alice should be going crazy and overboard with stuff for it but nope it just comes right on out in a couple of pages at the beginning.

2) Wait...what bachelor party? bachelorette party? Denali who??? where's the whole jealous stare off with Tanya and Bella?

3) Immortal children....wow that's convenient...wonder why it wasn't mentioned earlier in the series...

4) makeout session at the wedding in front of everyone...oh yeah bella is sooo self conscious

5) another waste of pages with the...
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posted by callejahLUVSed
well i knew it had to happen sooner or later... WRITERS BLOCK! i have no idea where the story should go form here.. so if anyone has any suggestions, let me know! pretty slow chapter.. but if i get good suggests it'll get better!!! love you all! COMMENT!

CHAPTER NINE- We're Perfect

It seems like the perfect relationship, doesn’t it? Two vampires, trying to be good, who have never needed anyone until they met each other. It sounds perfect even to me. But I knew that nothing could happen, mainly because eight vampires have never lived together in such a small town. Maybe, just maybe seven would...
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