But I got the first episode (chapter) down. Dunno if I can post the writing part of it down today, but I'll try. It's only a few paragraphs long, but I'm considering making it longer, with your help if you'd like. I'm usually a self-hater so I won't really like it when I post it cause that's just me, I guess lol
I'll post it and ask what I should change with it. I'll add commentary throughout the chapter so it's easier to understand. :D
And yeah, it'll still be animated, just not yet. I'm planning on writing the whole story out for you to read and visualize so it'll be easier to make.
I'll post it and ask what I should change with it. I'll add commentary throughout the chapter so it's easier to understand. :D
And yeah, it'll still be animated, just not yet. I'm planning on writing the whole story out for you to read and visualize so it'll be easier to make.
Fathers and Sons
PROLOUGE: EXPERIMENTS
"Thank you for like saving my life Finn and Jake."LSP said. LSP ran off. "Bye LSP."Finn said. "Phew! What a day man."Jake said as they walked along. But they didn't notice that Ice King was lonely. Despair. Loneliness. All he wanted was something more than a princess. He just can't put his finger on it. Maybe if he steals some hair from Finn, he would know the answer to his problem.
Later that evening when Finn and Jake were asleep, the Ice King flew carefully inside. All he brought was a pair of scissors. He gently removed Finn's hat, cut a piece of Finn's hair, put the hat back from Finn and flew away. Ice King has an installed DNA scanner that was kept in for years. He opened it, cut his beard, put Finn's hair and his beard in the scanner and waited for two hours.
2 hours later...
Ice King heard a beep signal. He woke up. He checked and discoverd the truth.
PROLOUGE: EXPERIMENTS
"Thank you for like saving my life Finn and Jake."LSP said. LSP ran off. "Bye LSP."Finn said. "Phew! What a day man."Jake said as they walked along. But they didn't notice that Ice King was lonely. Despair. Loneliness. All he wanted was something more than a princess. He just can't put his finger on it. Maybe if he steals some hair from Finn, he would know the answer to his problem.
Later that evening when Finn and Jake were asleep, the Ice King flew carefully inside. All he brought was a pair of scissors. He gently removed Finn's hat, cut a piece of Finn's hair, put the hat back from Finn and flew away. Ice King has an installed DNA scanner that was kept in for years. He opened it, cut his beard, put Finn's hair and his beard in the scanner and waited for two hours.
2 hours later...
Ice King heard a beep signal. He woke up. He checked and discoverd the truth.
This is me happy.
Reminder: Please be informed that this is just a review and is just how I feel about Vault Of Bones.
Vault of Bones was very enjoyable since we got to see more of Flame Princess' character. She has now shown her adventurous side and her protective side for Finn.
This episode may have also brought more FP fans amusement and happiness. She has also strengthen her and Finn's bond, and much to the enjoyment of many people.
I would like to say Thank You to the creators, producers, animators and writers who have put their blood, sweat and tears into making this episode for our enjoyment.
And that encloses my review. :)
Me: Sorry if I made it to hard to understand or anything, and please do feel free to criticize my review (dadadas, please don't say it in such a hurtful way). THANK YOU.
Vault of Bones was very enjoyable since we got to see more of Flame Princess' character. She has now shown her adventurous side and her protective side for Finn.
This episode may have also brought more FP fans amusement and happiness. She has also strengthen her and Finn's bond, and much to the enjoyment of many people.
I would like to say Thank You to the creators, producers, animators and writers who have put their blood, sweat and tears into making this episode for our enjoyment.
And that encloses my review. :)
Me: Sorry if I made it to hard to understand or anything, and please do feel free to criticize my review (dadadas, please don't say it in such a hurtful way). THANK YOU.
