Writing Article: disaster, fixed, and pronounced (Movie's on! part 2)

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disaster, fixed, and pronounced (Movie's on! part 2)

posted by lovepop

"No,no,no! Ponny, you're supposed to sound scared. like this, 'AAAA! The Coopestells! They're back!'" Hilisia said. She said the line terrifiying. Ponya rolled her eyes. "If I say it any more frighted, my eyes will pop out! And anyway, you're NOT the director. I'm doing it wrong when Mr.Figgsten says so." Ponya snapped back. "Ok girls, from the top!" The girls got ready. Then suddenly, Ponya stretched her arm out to Hilisia(Luci) And said, "Luci! LOOK OUT!" "What? What Brenda?" "AAAA! The Coopestells! They're back!" "EEEEEEK!" "RUN!!!" They both said. Then the scene ended as they ran off stage. "Perfect!" Mr.Figgsten yelled. Huffing and puffing, the girls came offstage. "Hey you guys I know it's short notice, but we will have to shoot the rest of the film in New Hampshire!"

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A CURSED STORY:chapter 2

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 2: the Cullen’s
When I entered, the club my fave song was on so I went and joined the crowed and started dancing with a really cute guy he had blond hair and dark blue eyes that u could swim in them like, forever! We started talking about our past and figured out his name is tom and has two sisters. then I made one up as I did for my school and then he bought me a few dinks after an hour I found myself making out with him I really didn’t like him I just like to spend my time with someone until I break the damn curse and find the one for me, the one that will be my moon and light...

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Fight to Freedom Chapter 2: Sterns and Banks

posted by ganondorfslayer

Morgan Sterns was sipping up the last drips of her coffee. She was going to need every last drop if she was going to work late enough to finish all of her reports. She had reports on all kinds of things. Serial killers, counterfeiters, asassination attempts, the list went on and on.
Why do the FBI get handed everything, she wondered. But what she really wanted to know was why she was the one always stuck with work when most of the other agents and anaylists were just standing around telling jokes and drinking coffee. Morgan got back to her seat and pushed her almond hair out of her eyes and...

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Lasting Happiness: Joy and Pain...Even the Mundane

posted by SquirtCriminal

Lasting Happiness

She stared anxiously at the pot of water on the stove, compelling it to boil. Though the old axiom warned of its counter effect, she had long since given up on trying to look away from the pot, unable to tear her eyes away. Tapping her foot impatiently, she began to sing quietly to herself to pass the time. It was a merry song, the one she always used to entice travelers from the road to come to her window. As she sang she only wished her tune could charm heat into the water of her pot the way it charmed most of the passerby. The thought only seemed to bring her further impatience. The impurity...

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Forbidden Love - Chapter 5

posted by ashesandwine

Thanks to Patrisha727 for helping me decide which POV to write...
Thanks as always to Emmett4ever for that first push in the right direction...
And thanks to everyone for reading my story:D

"Catherine's POV"

Even in the darkest night I'll find you. Life wanted our destiny to be a wave breaking in the sea, only that,nothing more... But I will not resign to that, I will not give up, we WILL meet again!

I woke early in the morning, my heart broken into a milion little pieces. I stood there looking at the roof, not wanting to face this new day. I heard my mother call for me:
"Catherine it's time to...

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Wanting Someone - Chapter Fourteen

posted by Lindy52

Chapter Fourteen

It wasn’t the dinner that they didn’t had before. It was very different. It was a dinner of confusion especially for the two little girls.

During the dinner of steak, mashed potatoes, and peas, Mac and Izzie watched their Mama and Mr. Sean eat their dinner in silent even through Mac saw Sean giving her mother some glimpses of his grins to Jamie to tell her that this was a great dinner she served. Hoping that Mama saw those grins that Sean saw her, the only thing she saw that her mother was just eating her dinner, drinking her Iced Tea, and wiping the messes that was on Jake’s...

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Future chapter of Trapped in my own time first kiss version 2

posted by dragonrider

This is the other version I thought of. Honestly I like the other one better but it's good to think of two versions for a chapter. I think this version is shorter because I didn't want them to have the same dialogue.

I drag Elliot outside with such great force that he almost ran into me outside. I stop and let go with his arm
"What the hell was that all about? What is wrong with you?" I demand glaring at him
"Wrong with me? What is wrong with you?" he damands
"What do you mean?"
"I saw you in there drooling over serge like he was a plate of nachos,"
"Yeah so? I like him and he likes me....

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Underworld High: Chapter 3: From Dawn to Dust

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

Max’s p.o.v

We saw James come in. He looked at us and rolled his eyes. “Fighting again” he asked, Billy smiled. I snickered. “Billy has a bit of a temper” I joked. I heard Billy snicker. “Both of you need to shut up. We all need to talk” He said, Billy and I looked at one another. “What is it?’ Billy asked. James let out a deep sigh. “Living room, now” he ordered. We both nodded and went downstairs. Once we got there, all the hunters were there, but no slayers. “What’s going on?” Caleb asked. James took a seat next to him, we followed. “Billy and Lilly’s family...

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black moon chapter 1,2,3,4,5,6

posted by joe-edwardfan

Black moon
Edward left me. edward left me. I couldn’t cope with it how could he leave me? he loved me didn’t he? I was subbing so hard that I couldn’t breath I was picturing his hard emotionless face when he told me he never loved me or wanted me every time I thought about him I subbed harder, my hole body was shaking, it was raining and my hole body was wet I was freezing but I didn’t care I rather die than live without him.im crazy the guy left me and I don’t want to live without him!
My body was freezing and my head was about to explode when I heard someone calling my name
-Bella,Bella,Bella….....

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Why spelling is important.

posted by cassie-1-2-3

Spelling is important.
Grammar is important.
Especially when involving words…

In today’s world, written word is growing more and more common. With the fairly recent introduction of text messaging, email, IM services, social networks, and online self publishing (which is what we’re all doing here on Fanpop when we post articles, and what I am mainly addressing), it is not only important how your words sound, it’s just as important, if not more so, how they look.

link* to me, some people seem to believe that spelling and grammar is not at all important in these self publications.
Just to list...

HP fanfiction: Healing. Lily/James. Chapter One.

posted by lucius_malloy

Chapter One

Lily knew that her seventh and final year at Hogwarts was going to be the hardest yet. Not only was she just getting over the death of her parents in early March, but she had the N.E.W.T's coming up – and to add to all the stress of it, she had been chosen as Head Girl. She had tried to decline the position, politely of course, but Professor Dumbledore would hear nothing of it. The phrase he used in his last letter still made her smile when she thought of it: ”There is no other girl in the seventh year that I would entrust this position to, due to certain special circumstances...

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Camp De Luca

posted by lindizzle215

hi so im a new writer so please tell me if i should contine writing this story. Please comment!!!!!
Rated: M

Today my brother Joey and I were going to drive down to the family camp that we help with every year and went here when we were kid’s but know were all teenagers so were counselors now. My brother Joey and I drive together every year and all of our other brothers drive up in there own cars or the young ones with the others. There was a new guy this year his name is Eddie. I think that I will like this kid as I get to know him. I don’t have to share a room because I am the only girl...

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League of Extraordinary Robots

posted by Authorfiction

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Chapter 1
THE SPOILED PRINCE

In the land of Mayfair, lived a king by the name of Alfred and his wife, Queen Jasline. King Alfred and Queen Jasline had two children, the oldest Prince Harry and his younger sister, Princess Cilla.
Prince Harry was a very happy little prince because you see Harry was very spoiled and rotten. Nobody, absolutely nobody was allowed to say ‘no’ to Prince Harry when he wanted something, or to punish him when he did something wrong or even to criticize him. Whatever Harry wanted to have, Harry had and whatever Harry wanted...

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"Sometimes Goodbye is a Second Chance"[Ch.8]

posted by HarryPLover

"Leonardo"aka Leo the Emo :]"

Ugh,I knew today was going to be terrible but seriously,does she have to completely suck his whole face like that.I wasn't talking about Lulu and Joel,luckily music was the only class I didn't have those two lovers.No,I was talking about my friend Abby totally lipping her boyfriend Gabe's face off.It was completely sickening.Our retarded teacher never looked back so they spent the whole forty-five minutes in class sucking faces.Juan had the same look I did,the look that make the whole school know that I drank rotten milk or something.A look that would make the janitors get a raise for their...

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The Sisters: Chapter 7: The Bitch.

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

Belinda’s p.o.v

I heard unsettling laughter, I turned my head to what I expected to be Justin, but no instead I saw Millie sitting beside me with vodka in her hand. She smiled once she noticed I was awake. “Hey there sleepy head” She said, I looked around and saw that we were in Justin’s shed but the buckles that were once around my wrist and ankles had been undone. “I thought I might just go ahead and undo those considering they were pretty tight” She said before taking a sip of her vodka. I closed my eyes and look down, the whole where Justin has stabbed me was gone. “How did...

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Hated By The One You Love Chapter 3

posted by lollipopszx3

PG13. I don't like this chapter... Kind of rushed.

Chapter 3

It has been a week since my detention, and the arrival of Megan. Jake hasn't been more happy, now that he had a girlfriend. Brianna and Lilia have been on me more than ever now. They don't know when or how to stop. I was getting really annoyed.

I walked into the school, looking quite pissed. As usual all the girls came and told me how great I looked, although I knew that I look like crap.

"Yo Joshua... Why the crappy mad face?" asked Ken. He was never subtle.

"Nothing. Fuck you and leave me alone." I told him.

"Eww.... I don't want it...

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Who Are The Real Monsters: Chapter 4 An Honest Tale Speeds Best Being Plainly Told Part 1

posted by H-A-T-R-M

Alec’s eyes opened as the day has started, he sitting up on his bed, remembering yesterday, how Grito basically gave them permission, no, forced them to create his group. Alec picked up the phone and gave Marley a call. He discussed what happened yesterday and if they should agree with Grito, Marley agreed, he hated the fact that innocent people were getting killed so he was glad to help. Marley informed Opal and she had the same idea. After he hanged up Alec got the phone book out and looked for the name ‘Norris’. After a few phone calls he reached her and explained the same thing. They...

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The diaries of a wounded man- chapter1 "only half of it"

posted by sahour95

She stepped into the flat sorely, gazing at his stuff. He’s left so soon, without saying he would do so, without mentioning any goodbyes with his deep, sad voice. Everything was the same, nothing has been moved, and nothing has been replaced. He took nothing with him but his endless tears. He took nothing with him but his sadness and misery. He took nothing … but the shattering hearts with its deep wounds.
She did fool him with her sweet words and enchanting look, but she’s never thought that such a smart person like him can’t be fooled with her stupid words. Her words did nothing but...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 7

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

Finally Saturday came. Friday had dragged on forever, in opinion.

I'd been half there on Thursday after he'd asked me out, and as soon as I got home, I called Tia, and it might have been me, but I was sure she sounded smug. We started planning what I was going to wear, and we even made plans to go shopping on Friday after school.

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My dad had left my mom and I when I was barely two years old. My mom had had me when she was nineteen, she still had that faded prettiness. I was told I looked like her, but I'm not sure that's true. My mom was...

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Green Eye Blind chapter 2

posted by TheHiddenCane

Selfless acts were uncommon in her universe... all human contact she'd gotten the last few months were Japanese tourists that wanted to capture the bad side of the city on their nice little holiday, by means of escaping the shopping malls, crowded museums and crammed amusement parks that were drowning in bliss and manic happiness.
Yeah, she was the bad side of the city... she was the part that was better left unseen and little people actually saw it. Some of them actually asked for her permission! Why? What would she do? Sue them? She was a stain on the face of society, something like a pimple...

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Vialo: chapter one

posted by khfan12

Chapter One
A discovery
Two years later
"Come on, you three, hurry up! We have to get this project done fast!" said Lori. "Lori! Slow down! We aren't as fast as you!" said Jesse. Lori Lopez, Jesse Martin, Nina Boyce, and Ray Martinez are four best freinds who are all 14, and have superpowers. "Finally! We're here!" Said Nina. For their summer project, they were going to explore the old factory on the top of Higgins hill. Once they were inside, they found a room labled 'freeze room' they looked inside the window. "There are people in here!" said Ray. Lori pushed the 'defrost' button. They could...