Writing Article: black moon chap 20

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posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 20
While Alice was dragging me to see her family I was worried what will happen when I see edward I mean after all this years ,we moved on and stuff……..ooh I'm such an idiot what can happen??? Nothing can happed if he remmembers he left ME! I didn’t leave him! So what does he wants now?.....
I was thinking hard not realizing were she was dragging me when someone hugged me
-oh Bella I'm so happy to see you look at you!!! You havent changed at all!
Then he laughed his booming laugh,awww I truley miss Emmett he always made me laugh and made fun of me
-Bella honey,how are you?
Esme came closer and hugged me and started subing
-we missed you
Then Carlisle came and looked at me with concern in his eyes and hugged me lightly
-its great to see you
He said and patted my shoulder
Rosali just smiled at me and she seemed a little guilty about something that I didn’t know about.
Then jasper stepped closer and shook my hand this was the first time he touched me and then smiled
o.h m.y g.o.d
edaward!! What should I do?! What should I say too him………………then someone interupted my thoughts THANK GOD!!
-dear Bella! And Cullen's lets go to the hall!
Aro said and patted my shoulder and then took my hand probably reading my thoughts and then smiled and said
-your welcom!
Under his breath and left the room and I followed him to the hall
We sat there talking for a few mins and I was avoiding edward not even looking at him
I was mostly talking to Alice,Emmett,jasper,jane and alec and Carlisle and esme and avoiding edward as much as possible
-so Bella are you staying with us?!?
Jane asked me with hope in her eyes
-I think I am.
I said cause I don’t have any other place to stay
-Bella you can stay with us if you like or visit sometimes??
Esme said hope in her eyes too
-esme I don’t know …..um…maybe.
I smile at her and she touched my shoulder thanking me
Then Alice spoke
-oh Bella! Lets go and change your dress you’ve been sleeping in that thing for a 100 years!
Oh great Bella barbie again I sighed but she was right I should change as soon as possible
Alice clapped her hands and went to bring her bag
she came back in 1 sec and dragged me again back to my room when we got there she brought out a beautiful black dress
-wow its beautiful Alice!
-you like it?!
-yup!
-oh this is wounderful so try it on and come down ok??? I'm waiting!
She said and went outside I took off my old dress and took a hot shower and put my new dress on and thinked about a paire of black high heels and then wore them. I was brushing my haire when someone knocked on the door.
-come in.
I said thinking its Alice but someone else came in that I didn’t expected
-you look beautiful
Edward said and closed the door behind him
-what are you doing here?
I was shocked he is such an bas…..
-Bella I came to apologize..
I cut him off
-there's no need to
-Bella I'm sorry I thought if I leave you ,you will have a normal life…
-and I had a great life untill…….
Pain filled my eyes I really wanted to cry,….i really missed matt
-Bella don’t be sad
-I am sad! Edward!you always thinked about yourself you never cared about what I wanted!have you ever thought about talking to me and ask me if I wanted you to leave?huh? or you didn’t care what I wanted and just left me bleeding!maybe I wanted to be with you no matter what!i didn’t even care if I died the day jasper lost it!because I would have died happy knowing you loved me……….
I covered my eyes with my hands and started subbing edward came to comfort me but I flinched at his touch and he took a step back pain washing through his eyes.
-Bella I knew you didn’t want me to leave so I made this choice myself I wanted you to have a big family…
-and die!
I said anger in my voice
-no Bella at first that I met you I wanted to ask Carlisle to change but that wasn’t faire to you that would have been selfish of me
-havnt you thought maybe I wanted what you didn’t want?!
-Bella I'm sorry I made a mistake! I tried to track you down but you kept disappearing from place to place………
-Bella I LOVE YOU I cant leave without you and these years that we were separate I thought I was dead1everyone tried to cheer me up but…….failed.
I snorted
-I guess Tanya didn’t
I said bitterly
-Bella I needed a distraction and rose was telling me stuff like I needed to forget you live my life…….and all thease crap.im sorry Bella really I cant leavr if you don’t take me back!
He cried and held my hand

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joe-edwardfan hey hope you like it! and can you give me ideas i dont know what to do next and im sorry i didnt write more i have got a cold and its killing me! i cant even talk! only my hands work!

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twilight_james awesome! i think that they shoulod get back togeather!

arianaggs THAT WAS SO AWESOME I WANTED TO CRY WHEN EDWARD WAS SAYING SORRY TO BELLA AND BELLA WAS TELLING HIM HOW HARD WAS IT FOR HER !!!!

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posted by wolfclan121

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posted by Insight357

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posted by woofbark

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posted by TomboyWriter

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posted by moolah

Date Night
By: moolah
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posted by mia1emmett

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posted by Summer_Leanne

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posted by tayandkris4evr

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posted by iluvPrinceMJ213

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posted by summer448

I opened my bedroom window to let in an evening brezee. All of the trees have been bare for a while, exposing the cloudless sky. Letting out a sight i rested my head on my hand and leaned out letting the wind whip across my face. Today is the very last day of winter break,then its back to school till spring. May as well enjoy it. "ARTIE JONES, GET DOWN HERE RIGHT THIS SECOND I WOULD LIKE TO HAVE A WORD WITH YOU!" My mom yelled vioentley from down stairs. Sluggishly I stood up and walked out of my room. "Mom my name is amy." I said walking down the steps. She just glared at me. " You can change...

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posted by DestinyGirl

A little bit on what Sayuri looks like:)

Okay, so here's the third chapter of this! Hope you all like and PLEASE COMMENT!! ^.^

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love kills chapter 9

posted by hannah_vampire

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posted by HarryPLover

"Drip,drop,drip drop."I couldn't tell if it was the rain or the tears running down from my face that had was drip dropping.I still couldn't believe Joel actually left me here all by myself.Alone in this pouring thunderstorm.Joel was suppose to my best friend,my soul mate,my lover but instead he became the opposite,the total jerk of my life.But the hardest part is that even now,now that tears flood my face and my heart is completely torn I still love Joel as if he hasn't done anything wrong.I knew I wouldn't be able to just let him go like that;I don't think I will be able to get over him ever!...

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posted by GagneLaverne

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posted by H-A-T-R-M

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