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2....1 ready or not here i come" i say. i hear my friend Annabel giggle. i go behind a tree "found you" i said. "lunette!! Annabel!!" the owner of the orphanage called us. she was the most bitter woman ever all because her husban died in the war. we sraitened out or dresses. "coming miss belle." we said in harmony. we rushed from the yard. "yes miss belle?" i said. "it's time for us to see if anybody wants you brats now change into the nice dress we gave." she said. "ok miss" annabel said. miss belle didn't know but every one made fun of her cat like face and tight bun. "if i don't get adopted today i'm running away." annabel said. "what you can't she'll find out some how." i told her. "hold on will you come with me?" she said. "of corse" that should've been an clear answer. we didn't get a new home that night. we opened the window. we were on the first floor so it was esey to get out. "do we have food? annabel asked. "yup enough for a month" i said. "then lets go" she said. we found a stone brige that the cars went on. we heard drunk men laugh,girls scream probly becuse the men hit them. it was really hard to sleep. then we got up to look at what was happening but we stayed hidden. there was a man in a tux he had hair as dark as the night sky his eyes the same color. he looked rich but not drunk like the other men. as the men stumbled away he stayed there with a girl about 17 i'm guessing. she wore a nice dress it was pale pink. she had a crown of roses on her head it looked lovely with her blond hair. the girl walked to him but fell her cought her but she still hit her head. she started bleeding. he looked at the girl he moved her hair and bit her neak we had no idea what was going on till he stood up he had bood driping from his teeth. we hid under the bridge after that. we were scared to death. Annabel started crying. that morning we looked for the girl that was killed. the body was gone. we kept walking. you think they would noticed two kids in dirty dresses and take us in but they didn't they just gave us money. an old lady that saw us cleaned our dresses and bought us new dresses. that night we hid in a old house. we saw the man again. annabel went outside tell him it's wronge to that kinda stuff. "listen mr. it's mot nice to eat people" she said. i thoght he was human but why would a human drink blood or listen to a 15 year old when he was like 25.
2....1 ready or not here i come" i say. i hear my friend Annabel giggle. i go behind a tree "found you" i said. "lunette!! Annabel!!" the owner of the orphanage called us. she was the most bitter woman ever all because her husban died in the war. we sraitened out or dresses. "coming miss belle." we said in harmony. we rushed from the yard. "yes miss belle?" i said. "it's time for us to see if anybody wants you brats now change into the nice dress we gave." she said. "ok miss" annabel said. miss belle didn't know but every one made fun of her cat like face and tight bun. "if i don't get adopted today i'm running away." annabel said. "what you can't she'll find out some how." i told her. "hold on will you come with me?" she said. "of corse" that should've been an clear answer. we didn't get a new home that night. we opened the window. we were on the first floor so it was esey to get out. "do we have food? annabel asked. "yup enough for a month" i said. "then lets go" she said. we found a stone brige that the cars went on. we heard drunk men laugh,girls scream probly becuse the men hit them. it was really hard to sleep. then we got up to look at what was happening but we stayed hidden. there was a man in a tux he had hair as dark as the night sky his eyes the same color. he looked rich but not drunk like the other men. as the men stumbled away he stayed there with a girl about 17 i'm guessing. she wore a nice dress it was pale pink. she had a crown of roses on her head it looked lovely with her blond hair. the girl walked to him but fell her cought her but she still hit her head. she started bleeding. he looked at the girl he moved her hair and bit her neak we had no idea what was going on till he stood up he had bood driping from his teeth. we hid under the bridge after that. we were scared to death. Annabel started crying. that morning we looked for the girl that was killed. the body was gone. we kept walking. you think they would noticed two kids in dirty dresses and take us in but they didn't they just gave us money. an old lady that saw us cleaned our dresses and bought us new dresses. that night we hid in a old house. we saw the man again. annabel went outside tell him it's wronge to that kinda stuff. "listen mr. it's mot nice to eat people" she said. i thoght he was human but why would a human drink blood or listen to a 15 year old when he was like 25.
I have this image in my head of a girl who spent the first 17 years of her life being loved. Loved by her parents, her brother and sister, and everyone in school. She doesn't know the meaning of hate. Then this mysterious guy come to her school. He doesn't say much and the only person he notices is her. But he is different then the other guys at her school he is too sexy to be real. They fall madly in love but what she doesn't know is that he has been alive for the last 268 years. He is no vampire but something that can scare the helll out of you. And he has a immortal enemy, and that enemy is the boy who is filled with so much hate all the immortals call him...The deffinition of hate(his real name being Marcus) And the girl so finds out that Marcus will stop at nothing to take her away from him and show her what it's like to be hated
“You can’t!” I screeched, griping the thick grass beneath my paws.
“The whole forest will belong to the Pack of Shadows!” the dark wolf exclaimed enthusiastically, his fur flickering like shadows, “No wolf will stop us!”
I have to do something! I couldn’t let it end like this! Not with the alpha in this state! Not with the pack split in four!
“Out of my way pup!” he tossed me aside like a tiny mouse.
“No!” I leaped at him, biting and clawing with all my strength.
“This is pointless! You cannot defeat me she-wolf!” I felt him bite me and fling me away again. I was too tired to move now, after traveling this far without resting, I can no longer breathe enough to live.
I’m over; this is the end of the Pack of Ice! I lay winded and defeated, awaiting death’s arrival patiently.
~Let You Go~
1: On and on ~ the days go by
Without a sight of you or my sanity
I'm lost not found ~ I wanted to show you , I wanted to tell you...
Chorus: If I say I'm sorry will you believe me?
If I love you again will you never leave me?
I made a mistake when I said no
I never should have let you go...
2: I ring your phone but no one answers, I'm alone
Days are spent reading your old letters, but with a groan,
I'd put them away, In the draw they'd lay until tomorrow...
Tomorrow...
Chorus-
3: This moping, not coping is killing me
My soul is not at rest when I long for it to be
I wish you'd come back or my fears may come true
When I left you, I still loved you and I think you knew
Chorus-
Darlin' don't forget me
I'm locked and you're the only key...
1: On and on ~ the days go by
Without a sight of you or my sanity
I'm lost not found ~ I wanted to show you , I wanted to tell you...
Chorus: If I say I'm sorry will you believe me?
If I love you again will you never leave me?
I made a mistake when I said no
I never should have let you go...
2: I ring your phone but no one answers, I'm alone
Days are spent reading your old letters, but with a groan,
I'd put them away, In the draw they'd lay until tomorrow...
Tomorrow...
Chorus-
3: This moping, not coping is killing me
My soul is not at rest when I long for it to be
I wish you'd come back or my fears may come true
When I left you, I still loved you and I think you knew
Chorus-
Darlin' don't forget me
I'm locked and you're the only key...
Only in my dreams
You're missing, but you're always
a heartbeat from me
I'm lost now without you
I don't know where you are
I keep watching
I keep hoping
but time keeps us apart
Is there a way I can find you?
Is there a sign I should know?
Is there a road I could follow
to bring you back home?
Winter lies before me
Now you're so far away
In the darkness of my dreaming
The light of you will stay
If I could be close beside you
If I could be where you are
If I could reach out and touch you
And bring you back home
Is there a way I can find you?
Is there a sign I should know?
Is there a road I could follow
to bring you back home?
To me...
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LivHILuvAlwaiz♥jj9
this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good or not before I submit it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear love you once were a shining ray.
In my eyes you meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about you is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your love is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our love is coming to its new close.
Colors were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would love to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our love has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our love left it took you along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying love was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me love would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
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My dear love you once were a shining ray.
In my eyes you meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about you is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your love is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our love is coming to its new close.
Colors were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would love to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our love has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our love left it took you along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying love was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me love would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy