After Sarah's party, she had layed down on the couch beside Dad and fell asleep with her head on his lap. Mom was sitting on the other side of her and Jake and I gathered up all her presents and put them in the back of the Audi.
Jasper and Alice had gotten her more clothes and shoes, and a couple of dresses. She said they were for her to dress up in, but they looked like they were at least three hundred dollars a peice.
Emmet and Rosalie got her a pimped out power wheels. It was pink and went fifteen miles an hour. Good thing they got her a helmet to go with it.
Mom and Dad gave her a photo albam full of pictures of her. The very first picture was a copy of the one that sat on my side table. They also gave her a neckless with her name on it. She wanted it on as soon as she opened it.
Carlsile and Esme gave her a card and she read it aloud to us. "Sarah, our gift to you is in your new home. When you open your door we hope your face lights up with joy. Love Nana Esme and Grandpa Carlsile."
Jake's face fell as he found out not only could she write but she could read.
"She's smart." I whispered to him.
"Takes after you on that one." He kissed my head.
We could fit it all in the trunk and it shut with ease.
We walked back into the house to tell everyone our goodbyes.
"Thank you everyone." I told them after I was done hugging everyone.
"It was no trouble." Esme kissed my head. "We enjoyed it just as much as she did."
"We should get going." I was fixen to walk over and pick up Sarah when Edward stopped me.
"Let her stay here. She's asleep. She's had a full day."
"When she wakes up we will call you." Alice smiled.
"Okay." I sighed. "But as soon as she wakes up."
"Of course." She clapped.
"Come one you two." Esme touched my arm. "Don't you want to see your new home?"
We smiled and followed her out into the woods. We stopped about five miles past Mom and Dad's cottage into the woods.
She handed us the keys and smiled. "Go another mile North and you should come right up to it."
I took the key and smiled back. "Thank you Esme."
"Your welcome." And with that, she was gone.
We walked hand and hand to where Esme directed us, and met face to face to our new house.
It was a large two story log cabbin. The flower boxes were stoned and full of yellow roses.
The two front doors were dark and glass was decorated with twisting iron. I put the key in the lock and twisted pushed down on the twisting knob.
As soon as we opened the door a giant stair case.
The door opened into a huge living room. It was a olive green with a black leather couch that wrapped around a glass coffee table. Under it all was a oversized shagg rug. There was a jumbo fireplace with a giant plasma television hanging above.
To the left was the kitchen. It too was painted olive green with black granite counter tops. The appliences were stainless steal and the cabnits were the dark wood that matched the floors.
The black rod iron dining table was in the large kitchen. The chair's cushon's were cream colored.
We walked up the stairs and walked down the left hall first. We opened the first door but it was bare. It was large and spacious, with a closet to match.
The second room was as same as the first.
We reached the last door and on it hug a sign that said "Sarah Marie Black". It hung from a pink see though ribbon. We opened the door and both of us gasped.
Her walls were pink and sparkled. How they got the walls to sparkle was beyond me. It was very big and open. The window had a window seat, and nooks for her things on both sides of the seat. The curtins were white and laced all the way down.
Her dresser was tall and white like her bed at the old house. The nobbes were spirals and were silver. She now had a walk in closet to fit all her clothes. She now needed it more than ever. Selves were built in for her shoes and on the bottom for her toys.
There was a small book case, about two feet tall, to put her books in.
On the wall oppisite to where I would be going to put her bed, in large with letters was "Sarah Marie". I smiled in aw and looked over to Jacob. "This is perfect."
He smiled and took my hand. We walked into the bathroom on this end of the hall. It was fairly large for a normal bathroom. It had a tiled bathtub and floor. It was white with a pink shower curtin. "Sarah's." I laughed.
"Well, I know it's not mine." He laughed.
We walked to the right hall. The first door was a small closet for coats and the cleaning supplies.
We opened the door and both of us quit breathing for a moment. It was beautiful. The walls were light blue with white crown molding around the top. The bed was even bigger than a king and was dark oak. It was a white bed spread with blue and brown accent pillows. There were two oak dressers that matchd the bed. The nobbs were glass and long. One was mine and one was Jake's. Two bedside tables with white lamps that were supported by glass stands. Also on either said of the bed, were large windows, also with white laced curtins. The closet was almost as big as the room. It was lined wall to wall with selves and a couple drawers in the middle.
The bathroom was as big as the closet. It had the biggest shower I had ever seen, with shower spouts all the way down to the floor. It was fully tiled.
He had an extra large jet tub and two bowl sinks.
"Wow." Jake wrapped his arms around me.
"It's amaging." I told him.
Just then, the house phone rang and I searched the room for it. "Hello?" I answered when I fianlly found it on the desk in between the dressers.
"Sarah's awake. She's playing X-box with Emmett."
Rosalie's voice chimed on the other line. I could hear Sarah's giggles.
"Okay. We'll be there in a bit."
"See you soon."
"Bye." I hung up and hit my head on the flat screen that hung above the desk.
"Ow." I rubbed hy head and Jake laughed.
"Watch the T.V." He chuckled.
"Yea, thanks. Sarah'a awake."
"You ready?" He asked.
"Yup."
Once we picked up Sarah we went back to the old house to pack up everything. Sarah even grabbed her own box that was full of stuffed animals.
We made her sit on the couch and watch televison as we finished her room.
We placed the bed on the oppisite wall of her name. Her vanity went under name, beside her dresser. We put all her animals in the nooks by her window seat. We put her bed on the right side of the window and Jake hooked a net above her headboard.
I stepped back and admired the finished room. I smiled and turned around to look at Jake. "It looks really good. I think she is going to really like it."
"Me to." He smiled back. "Now let's go get her."
I walked out and leaned over the railing. "Sarah."
She turned around and looked up at me. "What?"
"Come on. Come see your new room." She smiled before jummping up and running up the stairs. Jake was standing beside her closed door. She walked over to him and smiled. "Miss Sarah. Your new room." He smiled to her and opened her door.
She ran in and gasped loudly "Wow!" She ran over and jumped up on her window seat to look out her window and down to the creek.
She giggled and opened her closet before running inside. "It's as big as Aunt Alice's!" She yelled from inside.
Jake and I laughed as she ran and jummped on her bed.
"Do you like it?" I asked as I walked over to Jacob and put my hands around his waist.
"Yes!" She squealed.
"Well make sure you say thank you to Nana Esme and Grandpa Carlisle." Jacob told her.
"I will." She nodded and plopped down on her butt.
Her eyes boggled as she turned to her dresser "Is that T.V. pink?"
"Sure is." Jake smiled. "Wanna' watch it?"
"Yes!" She laughed.
Jacob turned the televison to the channel she wanted and we let her watch t.v. in peace.
"I told you it was perfect." I laughed to Jacob and we sat down on the couch to relax and watch a little televison of our own.
He suddenly went stiff and cocked his head to the right.
"What?" I asked raising up from his chest.
"Shh." He told me putting a finger to his lips.
He sniffed the air and listened one more time before looking at me with dead eyes.
"We have a vistor." He groweled. "And it's not a fimilar one."
Jasper and Alice had gotten her more clothes and shoes, and a couple of dresses. She said they were for her to dress up in, but they looked like they were at least three hundred dollars a peice.
Emmet and Rosalie got her a pimped out power wheels. It was pink and went fifteen miles an hour. Good thing they got her a helmet to go with it.
Mom and Dad gave her a photo albam full of pictures of her. The very first picture was a copy of the one that sat on my side table. They also gave her a neckless with her name on it. She wanted it on as soon as she opened it.
Carlsile and Esme gave her a card and she read it aloud to us. "Sarah, our gift to you is in your new home. When you open your door we hope your face lights up with joy. Love Nana Esme and Grandpa Carlsile."
Jake's face fell as he found out not only could she write but she could read.
"She's smart." I whispered to him.
"Takes after you on that one." He kissed my head.
We could fit it all in the trunk and it shut with ease.
We walked back into the house to tell everyone our goodbyes.
"Thank you everyone." I told them after I was done hugging everyone.
"It was no trouble." Esme kissed my head. "We enjoyed it just as much as she did."
"We should get going." I was fixen to walk over and pick up Sarah when Edward stopped me.
"Let her stay here. She's asleep. She's had a full day."
"When she wakes up we will call you." Alice smiled.
"Okay." I sighed. "But as soon as she wakes up."
"Of course." She clapped.
"Come one you two." Esme touched my arm. "Don't you want to see your new home?"
We smiled and followed her out into the woods. We stopped about five miles past Mom and Dad's cottage into the woods.
She handed us the keys and smiled. "Go another mile North and you should come right up to it."
I took the key and smiled back. "Thank you Esme."
"Your welcome." And with that, she was gone.
We walked hand and hand to where Esme directed us, and met face to face to our new house.
It was a large two story log cabbin. The flower boxes were stoned and full of yellow roses.
The two front doors were dark and glass was decorated with twisting iron. I put the key in the lock and twisted pushed down on the twisting knob.
As soon as we opened the door a giant stair case.
The door opened into a huge living room. It was a olive green with a black leather couch that wrapped around a glass coffee table. Under it all was a oversized shagg rug. There was a jumbo fireplace with a giant plasma television hanging above.
To the left was the kitchen. It too was painted olive green with black granite counter tops. The appliences were stainless steal and the cabnits were the dark wood that matched the floors.
The black rod iron dining table was in the large kitchen. The chair's cushon's were cream colored.
We walked up the stairs and walked down the left hall first. We opened the first door but it was bare. It was large and spacious, with a closet to match.
The second room was as same as the first.
We reached the last door and on it hug a sign that said "Sarah Marie Black". It hung from a pink see though ribbon. We opened the door and both of us gasped.
Her walls were pink and sparkled. How they got the walls to sparkle was beyond me. It was very big and open. The window had a window seat, and nooks for her things on both sides of the seat. The curtins were white and laced all the way down.
Her dresser was tall and white like her bed at the old house. The nobbes were spirals and were silver. She now had a walk in closet to fit all her clothes. She now needed it more than ever. Selves were built in for her shoes and on the bottom for her toys.
There was a small book case, about two feet tall, to put her books in.
On the wall oppisite to where I would be going to put her bed, in large with letters was "Sarah Marie". I smiled in aw and looked over to Jacob. "This is perfect."
He smiled and took my hand. We walked into the bathroom on this end of the hall. It was fairly large for a normal bathroom. It had a tiled bathtub and floor. It was white with a pink shower curtin. "Sarah's." I laughed.
"Well, I know it's not mine." He laughed.
We walked to the right hall. The first door was a small closet for coats and the cleaning supplies.
We opened the door and both of us quit breathing for a moment. It was beautiful. The walls were light blue with white crown molding around the top. The bed was even bigger than a king and was dark oak. It was a white bed spread with blue and brown accent pillows. There were two oak dressers that matchd the bed. The nobbs were glass and long. One was mine and one was Jake's. Two bedside tables with white lamps that were supported by glass stands. Also on either said of the bed, were large windows, also with white laced curtins. The closet was almost as big as the room. It was lined wall to wall with selves and a couple drawers in the middle.
The bathroom was as big as the closet. It had the biggest shower I had ever seen, with shower spouts all the way down to the floor. It was fully tiled.
He had an extra large jet tub and two bowl sinks.
"Wow." Jake wrapped his arms around me.
"It's amaging." I told him.
Just then, the house phone rang and I searched the room for it. "Hello?" I answered when I fianlly found it on the desk in between the dressers.
"Sarah's awake. She's playing X-box with Emmett."
Rosalie's voice chimed on the other line. I could hear Sarah's giggles.
"Okay. We'll be there in a bit."
"See you soon."
"Bye." I hung up and hit my head on the flat screen that hung above the desk.
"Ow." I rubbed hy head and Jake laughed.
"Watch the T.V." He chuckled.
"Yea, thanks. Sarah'a awake."
"You ready?" He asked.
"Yup."
Once we picked up Sarah we went back to the old house to pack up everything. Sarah even grabbed her own box that was full of stuffed animals.
We made her sit on the couch and watch televison as we finished her room.
We placed the bed on the oppisite wall of her name. Her vanity went under name, beside her dresser. We put all her animals in the nooks by her window seat. We put her bed on the right side of the window and Jake hooked a net above her headboard.
I stepped back and admired the finished room. I smiled and turned around to look at Jake. "It looks really good. I think she is going to really like it."
"Me to." He smiled back. "Now let's go get her."
I walked out and leaned over the railing. "Sarah."
She turned around and looked up at me. "What?"
"Come on. Come see your new room." She smiled before jummping up and running up the stairs. Jake was standing beside her closed door. She walked over to him and smiled. "Miss Sarah. Your new room." He smiled to her and opened her door.
She ran in and gasped loudly "Wow!" She ran over and jumped up on her window seat to look out her window and down to the creek.
She giggled and opened her closet before running inside. "It's as big as Aunt Alice's!" She yelled from inside.
Jake and I laughed as she ran and jummped on her bed.
"Do you like it?" I asked as I walked over to Jacob and put my hands around his waist.
"Yes!" She squealed.
"Well make sure you say thank you to Nana Esme and Grandpa Carlisle." Jacob told her.
"I will." She nodded and plopped down on her butt.
Her eyes boggled as she turned to her dresser "Is that T.V. pink?"
"Sure is." Jake smiled. "Wanna' watch it?"
"Yes!" She laughed.
Jacob turned the televison to the channel she wanted and we let her watch t.v. in peace.
"I told you it was perfect." I laughed to Jacob and we sat down on the couch to relax and watch a little televison of our own.
He suddenly went stiff and cocked his head to the right.
"What?" I asked raising up from his chest.
"Shh." He told me putting a finger to his lips.
He sniffed the air and listened one more time before looking at me with dead eyes.
"We have a vistor." He groweled. "And it's not a fimilar one."
Should never think
What’s in your heart
What’s in our home
And so I won’t
And you’ll learn to hate me
Still call me baby
Oh, love
So call me by my name
And save your soul
Save your soul
Before you’re too far gone
Before nothing can be done
Try to decide when
She’ll lie in the end
Ain’t got no fight in me
In this whole damn world
Tell you to hold off
Choose to hold on
It’s one thing that I’ve known
Once I put my coat on
Coming out in this all wrong, ooh
She’s standing outside holding me
Saying oh please
I’m in love
I’m in love
Girl save your soul, ooh
Save your soul
Before you’re too far gone
And before nothing can be done
‘Cause without me
You got it all
So hold on
Without me you got it all
Hold on
Without me you got it all
Without me you got it all
So hold on
Without me you got it all
So hold on
Without me you got it all
So hold on
What’s in your heart
What’s in our home
And so I won’t
And you’ll learn to hate me
Still call me baby
Oh, love
So call me by my name
And save your soul
Save your soul
Before you’re too far gone
Before nothing can be done
Try to decide when
She’ll lie in the end
Ain’t got no fight in me
In this whole damn world
Tell you to hold off
Choose to hold on
It’s one thing that I’ve known
Once I put my coat on
Coming out in this all wrong, ooh
She’s standing outside holding me
Saying oh please
I’m in love
I’m in love
Girl save your soul, ooh
Save your soul
Before you’re too far gone
And before nothing can be done
‘Cause without me
You got it all
So hold on
Without me you got it all
Hold on
Without me you got it all
Without me you got it all
So hold on
Without me you got it all
So hold on
Without me you got it all
So hold on
Ah, ah, ah ,ah, ah
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
I seek you out
Flay you alive
One more word and you won’t survive
And I’m not scared of your stolen power
See right through you any hour
I won’t soothe your pain
I won’t ease your strain
You’ll be waiting in vain
I got nothing for you to gain
I’m taking it slow
Feeding my flame
Shuffling the cards of your game
And just in time
In the right place
Suddenly I will play my ace
I won’t soothe your pain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
I won’t ease your strain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
You’ll be waiting in vain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
I got nothing for you to gain
Eyes on fire
Your spine is ablaze
Felling any foe with my gaze
And just in time
In the right place
Steadily emerging with grace
Aaaaahhhhh
Felling any foe with my gaze
Aaaaahhhhh
Steadily emerging with grace
Aaaaahhhhh
Felling any foe with my gaze
Aaaaahhhhh
Steadily emerging with grace
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
I seek you out
Flay you alive
One more word and you won’t survive
And I’m not scared of your stolen power
See right through you any hour
I won’t soothe your pain
I won’t ease your strain
You’ll be waiting in vain
I got nothing for you to gain
I’m taking it slow
Feeding my flame
Shuffling the cards of your game
And just in time
In the right place
Suddenly I will play my ace
I won’t soothe your pain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
I won’t ease your strain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
You’ll be waiting in vain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
I got nothing for you to gain
Eyes on fire
Your spine is ablaze
Felling any foe with my gaze
And just in time
In the right place
Steadily emerging with grace
Aaaaahhhhh
Felling any foe with my gaze
Aaaaahhhhh
Steadily emerging with grace
Aaaaahhhhh
Felling any foe with my gaze
Aaaaahhhhh
Steadily emerging with grace
They've nominated the flick for 8 of their Razzie awards, which are like the Oscars but for the "worsts" of the year, so they're a little more fun.
Breaking Dawn was nominated for:
•Worst Picture
•Worst Screenplay
•Worst Prequel, Remake, Rip-Off, or Sequel
•Worst Director
•Worst Screen Ensemble
•Worst Actor: Taylor Lautner
•Worst Actress: Kristen Stewart
•Worst Screen Couple
Do you think Breaking Dawn deserves the nominations?
Bella swan was a shy girl,
she came to live with her dad who is shy as well,
She joined forks high school with no friends
But look how she turned out in the end,
A boyfriend whom she loves very much,
And her friend Mike who has a crush
She has entered the supernatural world
and now has to join the Cullen family as well.
Victoria is back and in a hunting mood,
Edward, Bella and Jacob camping in the woods,
Bella has agreed to marry Edward
and Jacob didn't realize he isn't very clever
Honeymoon in isle Esme is oh so great
until Bella falls pregnant
She has a little girl called Renesmee
And Jacob Black imprints on her and Bella isn't happy.
she came to live with her dad who is shy as well,
She joined forks high school with no friends
But look how she turned out in the end,
A boyfriend whom she loves very much,
And her friend Mike who has a crush
She has entered the supernatural world
and now has to join the Cullen family as well.
Victoria is back and in a hunting mood,
Edward, Bella and Jacob camping in the woods,
Bella has agreed to marry Edward
and Jacob didn't realize he isn't very clever
Honeymoon in isle Esme is oh so great
until Bella falls pregnant
She has a little girl called Renesmee
And Jacob Black imprints on her and Bella isn't happy.
All right guys, as you all have probably noticed my last chapter was a bit of a dozer, but don't worry my next chapter will be right. And just incase that you have not figured it out yet. Most was the chapter is correct except for the bit about going into the car. That bit will be coming up in the next chapter. Also don't be afraid to give me any advice on how I can make my writing Better any critasim is welcome.
On another note this whole story will only be bell as ok and I will be doing other stories that will be like this one but indifferent povs
SOS
Love flynnismine
On another note this whole story will only be bell as ok and I will be doing other stories that will be like this one but indifferent povs
SOS
Love flynnismine