Since I think this is more of an opinion article, that's what it will be. I don't even know why I picked fan fiction in the first place.
Anyways, I know my first part was kinda suckish, so hopefully this one is better. Plus, I'll write this in past tense since present tense is too hard. Infact, however many parts there will be will be in past tense. I probably worded that incorrectly. Well, you know what I mean..right? Enjoy! :)
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Courtney said, "Where should we go?" m
Duncan said, "I'm suprised your first words weren't an insult." d
Courtney said, "I'm over whatever happened in TDWT."
Duncan said, "So you don't hate me or Gwen?" b
Courtney said, "Well, not anymore." Duncan smiled. They arrived at the submarines and got inside one.
After they closed the hatch, the submarine immeadiately started to fill with water. Courtney screamed, "Hey! What gives?" She looked at the water rising up to her ankles.
Duncan said, "What the?" The water was up to his knees.
Courtney said, "We've got to get out of here!" She rushes to open the hatch. "It won't budge!"
Duncan said, "Let me try." Courtney moves out the way so Duncan can open the hatch. The hatch barely moves. "Oh c'mon! This is just like 'Masters of Disasters' all over again."
Courtney said, "Well there must be a way out of here!"
"Right you are, Courtney." It was Star's voice.
"Are you doing this, Star", Courtney asked in a panicky voice. The water was already up to her waist.
"Maybe I am. Maybe I'm not."
"You better stop this right now, Star", Duncan said in a threatening voice.
"I'm not afraid of you anymore, Duncan. Plus, what can you do to me? Your locked in a submarine about to drown in the uprising water. Besides, there nothing I can do to make it stop."
Courtney said, "Well, you can't leave us in here to drown!"
"Unfornately, you're right again Courtney. I can't leave you both in there. But, I can get one of you out of there."
The water was up to his chest. Duncan said, "What do you mean?"
"Well, you have to choose one person to stay and die. While the other person escapes with their life."
Courtney said, "Are you serious?"
"As a heart attack. Now choose, and I'd hurry. The water is getting higher and higher by the minute."
Duncan said, "I'll stay, you go Courtney."
Courtney said, "What? You choose me? I thought for sure-"
Duncan cut her off. "Look, I have no time to explain why I choose you. Just go before the water goes above your head." He realized that the water was up to Courtney's chin. "Star, I choose Courtney." Just then, they heard the hatch loosen.
Courtney grabbed it an opened the hatch. Before she got out completely, she said, "Thanks Duncan."
"No problem, Princess." Courtney closed the hatch and swam for the surface.
Once on shore, Courtney heard Star's voice say, "Return to the mess hall, Courtney." Courtney ran to it.
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I hope you liked this one. Sorry if it's a little short. I'm writing this at 2:15 in the morning and my brain isn't really functioning.
So, this is how everthing is going to go. Two people about to die and only one person is chosen to stay alive. Yeah, I'm pretty messed up in the head.
Anyways, please leave you questions and comments below.
Also, you might be wondering why I put those letters at the beginning of the story. Well, I wrote that first part on my cell phone and when I typed it on the computer, the words went on another line. So I put those letters there to keep it all on the same line. There. One question answered.
So, like I said before, leave your other questions and comments below.
Anyways, I know my first part was kinda suckish, so hopefully this one is better. Plus, I'll write this in past tense since present tense is too hard. Infact, however many parts there will be will be in past tense. I probably worded that incorrectly. Well, you know what I mean..right? Enjoy! :)
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Courtney said, "Where should we go?" m
Duncan said, "I'm suprised your first words weren't an insult." d
Courtney said, "I'm over whatever happened in TDWT."
Duncan said, "So you don't hate me or Gwen?" b
Courtney said, "Well, not anymore." Duncan smiled. They arrived at the submarines and got inside one.
After they closed the hatch, the submarine immeadiately started to fill with water. Courtney screamed, "Hey! What gives?" She looked at the water rising up to her ankles.
Duncan said, "What the?" The water was up to his knees.
Courtney said, "We've got to get out of here!" She rushes to open the hatch. "It won't budge!"
Duncan said, "Let me try." Courtney moves out the way so Duncan can open the hatch. The hatch barely moves. "Oh c'mon! This is just like 'Masters of Disasters' all over again."
Courtney said, "Well there must be a way out of here!"
"Right you are, Courtney." It was Star's voice.
"Are you doing this, Star", Courtney asked in a panicky voice. The water was already up to her waist.
"Maybe I am. Maybe I'm not."
"You better stop this right now, Star", Duncan said in a threatening voice.
"I'm not afraid of you anymore, Duncan. Plus, what can you do to me? Your locked in a submarine about to drown in the uprising water. Besides, there nothing I can do to make it stop."
Courtney said, "Well, you can't leave us in here to drown!"
"Unfornately, you're right again Courtney. I can't leave you both in there. But, I can get one of you out of there."
The water was up to his chest. Duncan said, "What do you mean?"
"Well, you have to choose one person to stay and die. While the other person escapes with their life."
Courtney said, "Are you serious?"
"As a heart attack. Now choose, and I'd hurry. The water is getting higher and higher by the minute."
Duncan said, "I'll stay, you go Courtney."
Courtney said, "What? You choose me? I thought for sure-"
Duncan cut her off. "Look, I have no time to explain why I choose you. Just go before the water goes above your head." He realized that the water was up to Courtney's chin. "Star, I choose Courtney." Just then, they heard the hatch loosen.
Courtney grabbed it an opened the hatch. Before she got out completely, she said, "Thanks Duncan."
"No problem, Princess." Courtney closed the hatch and swam for the surface.
Once on shore, Courtney heard Star's voice say, "Return to the mess hall, Courtney." Courtney ran to it.
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I hope you liked this one. Sorry if it's a little short. I'm writing this at 2:15 in the morning and my brain isn't really functioning.
So, this is how everthing is going to go. Two people about to die and only one person is chosen to stay alive. Yeah, I'm pretty messed up in the head.
Anyways, please leave you questions and comments below.
Also, you might be wondering why I put those letters at the beginning of the story. Well, I wrote that first part on my cell phone and when I typed it on the computer, the words went on another line. So I put those letters there to keep it all on the same line. There. One question answered.
So, like I said before, leave your other questions and comments below.
Chris:last time on TOTAL DRAMA HOUSE!The teams had redecorate a room.and well,they both had the same idea.me!but,it was the killer house keepers who won this time.so,the screaming guests had to send somebody home.and that person was heather!what will happened next?will duncan hook up with ashley or gwen and leave courtney?will Alejandro actually hook up with somebody and not just use them?find out on TOTAL DRAMA HOUSE!
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chris:morning,everyone!todays going ot be special.
brooke:im not liking the sound of this....
chris:ok,but first,a couple of fan-faves are coming.i give,lindsay and tyler!
lindsay:hi,everyone!ohmygosh!look!alejandro's here!isn't that great,taylor?
tyler:yeah,great..
chris:ok,so,lidsay,your on the screaming guests.
lindsay:is that same team alejandro's on?
chris:yes.
lindsay:yeah!!!!
chris:yler,you are on the other team.
tyler:ok...
chris:ok,now the challenge!
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chris:morning,everyone!todays going ot be special.
brooke:im not liking the sound of this....
chris:ok,but first,a couple of fan-faves are coming.i give,lindsay and tyler!
lindsay:hi,everyone!ohmygosh!look!alejandro's here!isn't that great,taylor?
tyler:yeah,great..
chris:ok,so,lidsay,your on the screaming guests.
lindsay:is that same team alejandro's on?
chris:yes.
lindsay:yeah!!!!
chris:yler,you are on the other team.
tyler:ok...
chris:ok,now the challenge!
Chris: Ok now its time for the Elimation! First up is the newbies remeber u cant vote for Lisa,Hollow,Karen and Addrey
*they vote*
Chris:ok the first marshmello goes to Jared,Gabby,Jade,Alice,Rayven, and ava!!
Chris:Aydan,Annie,and Ally theres only 1 marshmellow on the plate and it goes to
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All:SAY IT ALREADY!!
Chris:JEEZ!! the last marshmellow goes to Annie. Ally Aydan you 2 have been voted off
Catie:Now its the tdi cast!!!
Chris: The marshmellows goes to Lindsay,Courtney,Duncan,Katie,Trent,Sierra,Alejendrow,Heather,Izzy,Dj,and Noah
Chris:ok only 1 marshmellows left and it goes too............HAROLD!!
Hope u guys liked it!! on EP 2 We'll be picking teams and have our REAL first challenges!!
*they vote*
Chris:ok the first marshmello goes to Jared,Gabby,Jade,Alice,Rayven, and ava!!
Chris:Aydan,Annie,and Ally theres only 1 marshmellow on the plate and it goes to
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All:SAY IT ALREADY!!
Chris:JEEZ!! the last marshmellow goes to Annie. Ally Aydan you 2 have been voted off
Catie:Now its the tdi cast!!!
Chris: The marshmellows goes to Lindsay,Courtney,Duncan,Katie,Trent,Sierra,Alejendrow,Heather,Izzy,Dj,and Noah
Chris:ok only 1 marshmellows left and it goes too............HAROLD!!
Hope u guys liked it!! on EP 2 We'll be picking teams and have our REAL first challenges!!
Ezikiel - Sexist, Brave, Embarresed
Eva - Feminist, Strong, Confident
Noah - Narracistic, Original, Cool
Justin - Overdid, Selfish, Jerk
Katie and Sadie - Lesbians, Ditzy, Stupid
Cody - Confident, Cool, Ambicious
Tyler - Stupid, Uncoordinated, Kind
Beth - Willing, Wannabee, Born Leader
Izzy - Phsycotic, Juvenille, Mentaly Unstable
Courtney - Selfish, Snobby, Mean
Harold - Warm-hearted, Clever, Weak
Bridgette - Kind, Thoughtful, All-Knowing
Trent - Weird, Crazy, Unstable in Apperance (large forehead)
Geoff - Drunkard, Calm, Soulfull
DJ - Kind, Stereotypical, Skilled
Lindsay - Kind, Ditzy, Smart
Leshawna - Mean, Selfish, Helpful
Duncan - Womanizer, Mean, Cold-Hearted
Heather - Confident, Self-Asure, Clever
Gwen - Lonley, Friendly, Talented
Owen - Carefree, Sensitive, Worrying
Chris - Clever, Torturous, Quick
Chef - Mean, Juvenille, Unskilled
Eva - Feminist, Strong, Confident
Noah - Narracistic, Original, Cool
Justin - Overdid, Selfish, Jerk
Katie and Sadie - Lesbians, Ditzy, Stupid
Cody - Confident, Cool, Ambicious
Tyler - Stupid, Uncoordinated, Kind
Beth - Willing, Wannabee, Born Leader
Izzy - Phsycotic, Juvenille, Mentaly Unstable
Courtney - Selfish, Snobby, Mean
Harold - Warm-hearted, Clever, Weak
Bridgette - Kind, Thoughtful, All-Knowing
Trent - Weird, Crazy, Unstable in Apperance (large forehead)
Geoff - Drunkard, Calm, Soulfull
DJ - Kind, Stereotypical, Skilled
Lindsay - Kind, Ditzy, Smart
Leshawna - Mean, Selfish, Helpful
Duncan - Womanizer, Mean, Cold-Hearted
Heather - Confident, Self-Asure, Clever
Gwen - Lonley, Friendly, Talented
Owen - Carefree, Sensitive, Worrying
Chris - Clever, Torturous, Quick
Chef - Mean, Juvenille, Unskilled
duncan rapping eminems songs:
Im slim shady.yes Im the real slim shady.all you other slim shadys stop imitating.Im slim shady yes I'm the real slim shady.
duncan disses courtney:(instead of mariah carey)
bagpipes from bagdad:
music to my ears! oh man how can I describe the way I fear?how can I begin?locked in mariahs wine cellar all I had for lunch bread wine,bread wine, courtney what happened to us?all I asked for was a glass of punch?(part of song)
duncan is a dequilant and raps like a deqilant wow.
eminem I think was in jail,and so was duncan they have alot in common.and this just randomly came to mind.because duncan reminds me of emeinem/slim shady.ALOT!and this is supposed to be funny.(I did this out of pure boredom)
Im slim shady.yes Im the real slim shady.all you other slim shadys stop imitating.Im slim shady yes I'm the real slim shady.
duncan disses courtney:(instead of mariah carey)
bagpipes from bagdad:
music to my ears! oh man how can I describe the way I fear?how can I begin?locked in mariahs wine cellar all I had for lunch bread wine,bread wine, courtney what happened to us?all I asked for was a glass of punch?(part of song)
duncan is a dequilant and raps like a deqilant wow.
eminem I think was in jail,and so was duncan they have alot in common.and this just randomly came to mind.because duncan reminds me of emeinem/slim shady.ALOT!and this is supposed to be funny.(I did this out of pure boredom)
L: *turns to Chris*
Your the only who hurts everyone in this Camp. so there's 76% chance that YOU are Kira.
Chris: The *BEEP*
L: Now 79% Chance.
*chris walks away werided out*
Misa: OH! Misa loves your Outfit!
Lindsay: OH! I love your hair!
Beth: Lindsay! D:
Light: ok where the hell I am I?
Gwen: your in The TDI camp it sucks *gwen looks away bored*
Light: Well I can see that
Gwen: Just Shut Up and try to cope.
*Light brings out Death Note.*
Light: What's your last and middle name Gwen?
Gwen: 0_o okay....*Gwen Runs away scared*
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Part 2 coming out soon.
Want any of the the death note people to say something to the TDI peeps?
Just comment!
No Caments saying THAT SUCKED! YOU SUCK! DEATH NOTE SUCKS!Cause this was my first FanFic!
ok Random Dancing!
Me: Kiss, Kiss Fall in Love!!! Maybe your my Love
Your the only who hurts everyone in this Camp. so there's 76% chance that YOU are Kira.
Chris: The *BEEP*
L: Now 79% Chance.
*chris walks away werided out*
Misa: OH! Misa loves your Outfit!
Lindsay: OH! I love your hair!
Beth: Lindsay! D:
Light: ok where the hell I am I?
Gwen: your in The TDI camp it sucks *gwen looks away bored*
Light: Well I can see that
Gwen: Just Shut Up and try to cope.
*Light brings out Death Note.*
Light: What's your last and middle name Gwen?
Gwen: 0_o okay....*Gwen Runs away scared*
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Part 2 coming out soon.
Want any of the the death note people to say something to the TDI peeps?
Just comment!
No Caments saying THAT SUCKED! YOU SUCK! DEATH NOTE SUCKS!Cause this was my first FanFic!
ok Random Dancing!
Me: Kiss, Kiss Fall in Love!!! Maybe your my Love
chris looked at his wristwatch:they should be here ANY time now...ah here they are!
first to arrive:andre!
andrea:hey
next to arrive:dawn
dawn:hi.
next to arrive:noah.
noah stepped off his nose in a book.
chris:talk much?
noah rolled his eyes.
dawn:hey noah wanna go out sometime?
noah:sure.
next to arrive:
justin.
everyone looked at his body but andrea.
andrea:eh I have seen better.
next to arrive:courtney!
courtney:if I lose I am calling my lawyers!
next to arrive leshawna!
lehshawna:whats up yall leshawna is in the house!
first to arrive:andre!
andrea:hey
next to arrive:dawn
dawn:hi.
next to arrive:noah.
noah stepped off his nose in a book.
chris:talk much?
noah rolled his eyes.
dawn:hey noah wanna go out sometime?
noah:sure.
next to arrive:
justin.
everyone looked at his body but andrea.
andrea:eh I have seen better.
next to arrive:courtney!
courtney:if I lose I am calling my lawyers!
next to arrive leshawna!
lehshawna:whats up yall leshawna is in the house!
Is The Camera On? Said Trixie As She Fix The Camera's Crookedness. Yea. Were Ready. Said Her Cameraman She Hired On Her Web Show On YouTube. Okay. Welcome To Total Drama Craziness! Here We Are Having 18 Campers Staying Here In A Boring Camp In Canada. Where They Will Be Forced To Do A Challenges For Day. If They Loses The Will Be Forced To Ride The Boat Of Shame By The Docks and Will Be Sent To A Nice Spa. Where They Can Be Treated For Anything They Caught In Total Drama Craziness Or If They Win They Will Get $5,00000 Big Ones. Now Here Is Total Drama Craziness. *Does Theme Song* The Theme Song Is The Fame By Lady Gaga. How Was That For The First Part. Tell Me Was It Good.