Since I think this is more of an opinion article, that's what it will be. I don't even know why I picked fan fiction in the first place.
Anyways, I know my first part was kinda suckish, so hopefully this one is better. Plus, I'll write this in past tense since present tense is too hard. Infact, however many parts there will be will be in past tense. I probably worded that incorrectly. Well, you know what I mean..right? Enjoy! :)
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Courtney said, "Where should we go?" m
Duncan said, "I'm suprised your first words weren't an insult." d
Courtney said, "I'm over whatever happened in TDWT."
Duncan said, "So you don't hate me or Gwen?" b
Courtney said, "Well, not anymore." Duncan smiled. They arrived at the submarines and got inside one.
After they closed the hatch, the submarine immeadiately started to fill with water. Courtney screamed, "Hey! What gives?" She looked at the water rising up to her ankles.
Duncan said, "What the?" The water was up to his knees.
Courtney said, "We've got to get out of here!" She rushes to open the hatch. "It won't budge!"
Duncan said, "Let me try." Courtney moves out the way so Duncan can open the hatch. The hatch barely moves. "Oh c'mon! This is just like 'Masters of Disasters' all over again."
Courtney said, "Well there must be a way out of here!"
"Right you are, Courtney." It was Star's voice.
"Are you doing this, Star", Courtney asked in a panicky voice. The water was already up to her waist.
"Maybe I am. Maybe I'm not."
"You better stop this right now, Star", Duncan said in a threatening voice.
"I'm not afraid of you anymore, Duncan. Plus, what can you do to me? Your locked in a submarine about to drown in the uprising water. Besides, there nothing I can do to make it stop."
Courtney said, "Well, you can't leave us in here to drown!"
"Unfornately, you're right again Courtney. I can't leave you both in there. But, I can get one of you out of there."
The water was up to his chest. Duncan said, "What do you mean?"
"Well, you have to choose one person to stay and die. While the other person escapes with their life."
Courtney said, "Are you serious?"
"As a heart attack. Now choose, and I'd hurry. The water is getting higher and higher by the minute."
Duncan said, "I'll stay, you go Courtney."
Courtney said, "What? You choose me? I thought for sure-"
Duncan cut her off. "Look, I have no time to explain why I choose you. Just go before the water goes above your head." He realized that the water was up to Courtney's chin. "Star, I choose Courtney." Just then, they heard the hatch loosen.
Courtney grabbed it an opened the hatch. Before she got out completely, she said, "Thanks Duncan."
"No problem, Princess." Courtney closed the hatch and swam for the surface.
Once on shore, Courtney heard Star's voice say, "Return to the mess hall, Courtney." Courtney ran to it.
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I hope you liked this one. Sorry if it's a little short. I'm writing this at 2:15 in the morning and my brain isn't really functioning.
So, this is how everthing is going to go. Two people about to die and only one person is chosen to stay alive. Yeah, I'm pretty messed up in the head.
Anyways, please leave you questions and comments below.
Also, you might be wondering why I put those letters at the beginning of the story. Well, I wrote that first part on my cell phone and when I typed it on the computer, the words went on another line. So I put those letters there to keep it all on the same line. There. One question answered.
So, like I said before, leave your other questions and comments below.
Anyways, I know my first part was kinda suckish, so hopefully this one is better. Plus, I'll write this in past tense since present tense is too hard. Infact, however many parts there will be will be in past tense. I probably worded that incorrectly. Well, you know what I mean..right? Enjoy! :)
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Courtney said, "Where should we go?" m
Duncan said, "I'm suprised your first words weren't an insult." d
Courtney said, "I'm over whatever happened in TDWT."
Duncan said, "So you don't hate me or Gwen?" b
Courtney said, "Well, not anymore." Duncan smiled. They arrived at the submarines and got inside one.
After they closed the hatch, the submarine immeadiately started to fill with water. Courtney screamed, "Hey! What gives?" She looked at the water rising up to her ankles.
Duncan said, "What the?" The water was up to his knees.
Courtney said, "We've got to get out of here!" She rushes to open the hatch. "It won't budge!"
Duncan said, "Let me try." Courtney moves out the way so Duncan can open the hatch. The hatch barely moves. "Oh c'mon! This is just like 'Masters of Disasters' all over again."
Courtney said, "Well there must be a way out of here!"
"Right you are, Courtney." It was Star's voice.
"Are you doing this, Star", Courtney asked in a panicky voice. The water was already up to her waist.
"Maybe I am. Maybe I'm not."
"You better stop this right now, Star", Duncan said in a threatening voice.
"I'm not afraid of you anymore, Duncan. Plus, what can you do to me? Your locked in a submarine about to drown in the uprising water. Besides, there nothing I can do to make it stop."
Courtney said, "Well, you can't leave us in here to drown!"
"Unfornately, you're right again Courtney. I can't leave you both in there. But, I can get one of you out of there."
The water was up to his chest. Duncan said, "What do you mean?"
"Well, you have to choose one person to stay and die. While the other person escapes with their life."
Courtney said, "Are you serious?"
"As a heart attack. Now choose, and I'd hurry. The water is getting higher and higher by the minute."
Duncan said, "I'll stay, you go Courtney."
Courtney said, "What? You choose me? I thought for sure-"
Duncan cut her off. "Look, I have no time to explain why I choose you. Just go before the water goes above your head." He realized that the water was up to Courtney's chin. "Star, I choose Courtney." Just then, they heard the hatch loosen.
Courtney grabbed it an opened the hatch. Before she got out completely, she said, "Thanks Duncan."
"No problem, Princess." Courtney closed the hatch and swam for the surface.
Once on shore, Courtney heard Star's voice say, "Return to the mess hall, Courtney." Courtney ran to it.
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I hope you liked this one. Sorry if it's a little short. I'm writing this at 2:15 in the morning and my brain isn't really functioning.
So, this is how everthing is going to go. Two people about to die and only one person is chosen to stay alive. Yeah, I'm pretty messed up in the head.
Anyways, please leave you questions and comments below.
Also, you might be wondering why I put those letters at the beginning of the story. Well, I wrote that first part on my cell phone and when I typed it on the computer, the words went on another line. So I put those letters there to keep it all on the same line. There. One question answered.
So, like I said before, leave your other questions and comments below.
