did anyone read part three? cause I got no comments on it. if you did read it tell me.
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I turned around to see Duncan and buddy Geff looking at us. "what are you doing her?" he asked again. "we kind of got stranded here," I said making a silent promess with briget not to tell anyone about this "problem" we had gatten ourselfs into. "stranded hu?" asked duncan who looked at Jeff. I could tell that look ment somthing but I did not know what. "wait," I said ",How did YOU get here." They exchanged a glance the I knew ment eather "what do we say", "we're caught", or "Think of somthing!". "uhhh...." said jeff speaking for the first time. "We swam. The bay is not far from here." Duncan gave him a look that I took to mean "great dude you ended us!" but I desided to give them a break "then you must be good swimmers," I said. Duncan looked surprised then said "Oh yea! really fast too!" Then I desided not to. "Let me see how fast you go!" "What?!" said duncan jumping back a bit. "I mean...... I can't. Hurt my leg. OW! OW! hurts now." "Then how did you swim here?" I asked knowing I had won. "I'll race ya," I said. Brigett leand over and wispered to me "What are you doing!" "Don't worry," I wispered back "I got both of them figured out." Duncan and I steped to the shore line and jumped in. WE both came up. Duncan ,who now was missing a shirt, had a long deep blue tail. "You too!" he said. We both got on shore and dried off. "Me too." said brigett. "Jeff is too," said Duncan "We thought you two might be but it is embaresing to say we are part shiney, glittery, magical fish." Brigget and I giggled. "You guys got to prmis with us you'll never tell" said brigget and Jeff at the same time. Brigget blushed and Jeff winked and we all shook on it. We then all dove in and swam back to the bay.
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