hi okay i only thought of this today, do you think this story is worth developing? here is the dead basic idea i came up with when i was bored in class.

Theres a boy he is eight, he drowns in a river, but is possesed by a spirit called peter, this saves him. he recovers unusually fast.

bad things keep happening because when peter died he was in fear. so whenever peter feels fear (he shares the body with joshua) he causes people too die.

also joshua loves a ghost that dances in a forest that only he cuts through to get home fast. she dances under blossom as it falls. the love story is actually more complex than that. anyway they can never betogether because shes a gohst and he is a living human.

a girl called sasha in his class really likes him and falls for him, but joshua is only intrested in being friends. a boy is jelous of joshua. he attacks him and consiquently his older brother who was also in on the attack is killed by peter.

fustrated by peters dark power joshua finds out that he can only seperate the two souls by destroying the body that jions the two souls.

so he does saying goodbye two his family and sasha. he writes a letter one morning explaining his life and leaves it to be discovered. after he is free from his body he runs and finds the trapped gohst in the forest, she was sad he killed his living self but the two are taken away by angels and are no longer earthbound.

okay thats the basic outline. theres loads of sub plots and substories i want too include, such as peter having more to do in the story, the whole love thing between joshua and the gohst girl, relationships at school, joshua family life his own childhood and flashbacks, the fact he can see gohst all the time, and well just loads a stuff i could write a whole book on! but that the main plot anyway so what do you think? worth writing? let me know thanks! oh and by the way join the club too if you like there is an article about what the club is about!

your opinions will be so helpfull so thanks in advance!