hi okay i only thought of this today, do you think this story is worth developing? here is the dead basic idea i came up with when i was bored in class.
Theres a boy he is eight, he drowns in a river, but is possesed by a spirit called peter, this saves him. he recovers unusually fast.
bad things keep happening because when peter died he was in fear. so whenever peter feels fear (he shares the body with joshua) he causes people too die.
also joshua loves a ghost that dances in a forest that only he cuts through to get home fast. she dances under blossom as it falls. the love story is actually more complex than that. anyway they can never betogether because shes a gohst and he is a living human.
a girl called sasha in his class really likes him and falls for him, but joshua is only intrested in being friends. a boy is jelous of joshua. he attacks him and consiquently his older brother who was also in on the attack is killed by peter.
fustrated by peters dark power joshua finds out that he can only seperate the two souls by destroying the body that jions the two souls.
so he does saying goodbye two his family and sasha. he writes a letter one morning explaining his life and leaves it to be discovered. after he is free from his body he runs and finds the trapped gohst in the forest, she was sad he killed his living self but the two are taken away by angels and are no longer earthbound.
okay thats the basic outline. theres loads of sub plots and substories i want too include, such as peter having more to do in the story, the whole love thing between joshua and the gohst girl, relationships at school, joshua family life his own childhood and flashbacks, the fact he can see gohst all the time, and well just loads a stuff i could write a whole book on! but that the main plot anyway so what do you think? worth writing? let me know thanks! oh and by the way join the club too if you like there is an article about what the club is about!
your opinions will be so helpfull so thanks in advance!
Theres a boy he is eight, he drowns in a river, but is possesed by a spirit called peter, this saves him. he recovers unusually fast.
bad things keep happening because when peter died he was in fear. so whenever peter feels fear (he shares the body with joshua) he causes people too die.
also joshua loves a ghost that dances in a forest that only he cuts through to get home fast. she dances under blossom as it falls. the love story is actually more complex than that. anyway they can never betogether because shes a gohst and he is a living human.
a girl called sasha in his class really likes him and falls for him, but joshua is only intrested in being friends. a boy is jelous of joshua. he attacks him and consiquently his older brother who was also in on the attack is killed by peter.
fustrated by peters dark power joshua finds out that he can only seperate the two souls by destroying the body that jions the two souls.
so he does saying goodbye two his family and sasha. he writes a letter one morning explaining his life and leaves it to be discovered. after he is free from his body he runs and finds the trapped gohst in the forest, she was sad he killed his living self but the two are taken away by angels and are no longer earthbound.
okay thats the basic outline. theres loads of sub plots and substories i want too include, such as peter having more to do in the story, the whole love thing between joshua and the gohst girl, relationships at school, joshua family life his own childhood and flashbacks, the fact he can see gohst all the time, and well just loads a stuff i could write a whole book on! but that the main plot anyway so what do you think? worth writing? let me know thanks! oh and by the way join the club too if you like there is an article about what the club is about!
your opinions will be so helpfull so thanks in advance!
Your hair is indescribably soft and smooth.
Your lips are gentle and plump.
Your skin is white as snow and as smooth and hard as a rock.
Your smell is indescribably sweet and
you dress to fit in with the world and its surroundings.
You are very kind and considerate of how you affect the ones you love.
I hear about you a lot, and what people have to say.
I see you in my head and in reality.
I love to think about you and me.
But when I’m alone, and thinking of that, I then start to think other things. Like, ‘you aren’t real’, ‘this isn’t real’, vampires do exist.
I won’t and wish that they do.
If the stories were real, then you’d be with her, and not me.
I wish that you were there for me in this world.
And, I guess, that all that’s left to do, is wait for you.
Take me away, far, far away, where we can live together for all eternity.
By Alex (HOU0007)
Your lips are gentle and plump.
Your skin is white as snow and as smooth and hard as a rock.
Your smell is indescribably sweet and
you dress to fit in with the world and its surroundings.
You are very kind and considerate of how you affect the ones you love.
I hear about you a lot, and what people have to say.
I see you in my head and in reality.
I love to think about you and me.
But when I’m alone, and thinking of that, I then start to think other things. Like, ‘you aren’t real’, ‘this isn’t real’, vampires do exist.
I won’t and wish that they do.
If the stories were real, then you’d be with her, and not me.
I wish that you were there for me in this world.
And, I guess, that all that’s left to do, is wait for you.
Take me away, far, far away, where we can live together for all eternity.
By Alex (HOU0007)
I want someone to be there for me,
Someone who only i can see,
Someone to love and to hold,
Someone to who won't leave me for gold,
I want this someone,
I want him a lot,
For i want something that i havn't got,
He doesn't have to be perfect,
He doesn't have to be nice,
He just has to be someone who i like,
I want him,
i need him,
I hope he feels the same,
The way i need is like nothing that i have felt before,
Lonely, despret, awful, horrible,
I need this more than you know,
even if it doesnt show,
So come to me,
I miss you,
Please don't make me wait any longer
Someone who only i can see,
Someone to love and to hold,
Someone to who won't leave me for gold,
I want this someone,
I want him a lot,
For i want something that i havn't got,
He doesn't have to be perfect,
He doesn't have to be nice,
He just has to be someone who i like,
I want him,
i need him,
I hope he feels the same,
The way i need is like nothing that i have felt before,
Lonely, despret, awful, horrible,
I need this more than you know,
even if it doesnt show,
So come to me,
I miss you,
Please don't make me wait any longer
I see you in the dark as you come to me at night. You watch me with adoring eyes, afraid that I might flight.
As I look upon your face, the glow from your eyes.
I know that I'm in a place that no one else would ever find.
And as you kneel down to me, I feel safe and sound and calm.
But If I only knew your name?
It wouldn't matter if my body was found.
The fact that you even ackologe my presence, leaves me stuned.
And as you touch me on the face, I feel your hands run down.
My neck is at your mercy.
My feet lay on the ground.
And as your teeth linger on my skin, I feel happy.
And as I colaps in your arms,and you feel your neally done.
I remember. I'm the one,I'm the one who feel's fufilled to night, even though I lay dead on the ground.
My dead is done.
As I look upon your face, the glow from your eyes.
I know that I'm in a place that no one else would ever find.
And as you kneel down to me, I feel safe and sound and calm.
But If I only knew your name?
It wouldn't matter if my body was found.
The fact that you even ackologe my presence, leaves me stuned.
And as you touch me on the face, I feel your hands run down.
My neck is at your mercy.
My feet lay on the ground.
And as your teeth linger on my skin, I feel happy.
And as I colaps in your arms,and you feel your neally done.
I remember. I'm the one,I'm the one who feel's fufilled to night, even though I lay dead on the ground.
My dead is done.
