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hey guys, this is the second chapter, the first one didnt have a title remeber??? i hope u do lol.....



The darkness, it is something i have allways been afraid of, somthing that would always catch me in the end. But sometimes the darkness, is safer than the real world.

I was coming to, but i stayed still, and hoped it was all a dream, i prayed for some sort of dream, a nightmare. Anything. I breathed in the air, i whimpered. No pancakes. just grease, and dust. i opened my eyes, and quickly glanced around the cafe, i notticed some of the tables and chairs were upturned, and i could hear harsh whispers, coming from behind the counter.i pushed my self from the ground as silently as i could, i usesd one of the upturned chairs to steady myself. my head was spinning, my legs shaking but i pushed myself forward, forcing my legs to escape to the door. i hobbled, and shuffled, and glanced at the counter frequently, i still couldnt see any one, but i could hear them. i touched the door handle, and was bombarded with my last memory.The boy. i turned on my heels, and glanced over the room again.Nothing. I shook my head, thinking i had just imagined him.I turned the door handle, but it was locked, and for the first time i moaned,loud, the noise from behind the counter stoped, and so did i. I didnt know what to do, but my legs did. I jogged and crouched behind one of the turned tables, and closed by eyes, my breathing slowed. Im not even sure i took another breath, i was to woried, too everything.i didnt dare peek around the corner, i just waited for the *knell. i could hear the shuffling of feet, and the panting of my hunter.my legs were aching from the way that i sat, my ribs sore from the pressure Dorris had applied to them, my whole body was screaming in pain. i had to move. i slighlty slid my leg forward, an inch or so, but they heard, and whoever was coming ran towards my table, and pushed it fully over. I flinched and covered my head.
"Please!" i begged the stranger. "I dont know what is going on, please," I pleaded, i spoke the truth, i had no idea what i was getting into.I opened my eyes and looked into my persuaderes face. I half smiled, and let my arms drop from my head. It was the boy. I looked up at him, he was a bit taller than what i was, i think. His eyey's were so dark they could have passed for black.
"i wont hurt you," He whispered, holding out his hand, an offer. i stared at the hand, did i really want to? yes. i forced my unwilling hand to move forward, and clasp his hand, he pulled me onto my feet. When he dropped my hand, my legs began to wobble again, i fell back, but he grabbed a chair and slid it under me just in time.
"Thanks," I mumbled, figeting with my hands, i didnt look up at him to see his nodd. He slouched off behind the counter again, and this time came backhuffing and dragging somthing large across the ground with him, my breathe got caught, and i couldnt breath.Dorris. it hadnt hit me yet what she had done to me, my hand touched my ribs, and i winced at the pain.
"Tell her everything!" the boy growled, my head snapped up to look at his face, it was full of anger, but there was somthing else. Sadness? My attention was dragged back towards Dorris, who was laughing evily.
"Do you think that will help?" She snarled, the loook on her face, made all the anger i had been storing come up to the surface, i jumped off the chair and fell on my knees at her head. i couldnt controll what i was doing, the anger did.
"Tell me!" i screamed into her face, my whole body shaking with rage.Dorris wasnt shocked by my outburst, infact she acted as if it never happened.
"Why dont you tell her Jaden, i dont have enough time befor they come for her," i looked at the boy "Jaden", my face confused, and my temper draining, his face fell to the ground, in shame. Dorris was laughing, but i ignored her. instead i looked for my rucksack, if what she said was true, i needed to leave now, i looked about the floor, trying not to return the stare coming from jaden. When i did find my rucksack i threw it over my shoulder and ran for the door, and remebered it was locked.
"The keys?"i asked looking at Jaden, he nodded towards the counter, i jogged towards them. once i had them, i turned back for the door and noticed two big black cars with blacked out windows pulling up outside the cafe.



OKAY SO I GUESS U NOTICED THE STAR? WELL IF I USE A WORD I THINK NO ONE HA HEARD OF ILL PUT A STAR AND EXPLAIN WHAT IT MEANS.

*KNELL- THIS MEANS FUNERAL BELL.
"Drip,drop,drip drop."I couldn't tell if it was the rain or the tears running down from my face that had was drip dropping.I still couldn't believe Joel actually left me here all by myself.Alone in this pouring thunderstorm.Joel was suppose to my best friend,my soul mate,my lover but instead he became the opposite,the total jerk of my life.But the hardest part is that even now,now that tears flood my face and my heart is completely torn I still love Joel as if he hasn't done anything wrong.I knew I wouldn't be able to just let him go like that;I don't think I will be able to get over him ever!...
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Academic life has challenging demands. Students are expected to manage their time wisely between their academic requirements and extra-curricular activities. Living in a time when the world requires highly sophisticated demands, this challenge is no easy feat. No one understands this dilemma better than professional writers, students, retirees, and freelancers specializing in academic writing seeking to offer their excellent services to students who intends to maintain a good academic standing but needs some assistance in completing academic requirements due to time constraints and limited...
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posted by ashesandwine
It's been a while since I write anything here! I just didn't feel like posting this on my spot, so I thought I would post it here!


I looked into his eyes, not knowing what to think... It's been so long, so much has happened and yet I feel just like I did that first time!
I hate thinking of it... Every word that comes out of my mouth seems to fade away as soon as it reaches the air. Every thought that comes to my mind is full of pain and hate, and yet I never seem to be sad!
I face life with a smile in my face, with a mask in my heart! I keep my thoughts close, not letting anyone reach them!
I...
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After the film they all walk to Antiworld to hang out for awhile. They all laid on the grass, peacefully thinking about random things in their lives. Grito was watching over them, thinking that Cassie, Nathan, Slone and Lindsay may be in trouble if they keep their bonds with the others. Parvulo was sleeping on Grito’s shoulder, making no sound what so ever. Grito himself was getting drowsy, he quickly fell asleep, and he hadn’t slept in a few days, watching over them. What could stop something from attacking them now, Grito is asleep, and a sneak attack and Grito may not be able to save...
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Marley was bleeding from his wound, he was fighting the same sort of creature as the others, it was small but it was fast plus its forearms are used like clubs. The creature had marks all over its body, due to Marley’s elbows and knees. It swung its arm again, hitting Marley straight in the shin, Marley was quick to react and slash up the creatures face. It left four claw like marks on its face; Marley looked at his hand and notice that his nails had pointed, as the creature wiped it’s eye he looked at Marley and saw that his eyes had become yellow. Marley quickly struck the creature in...
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Please read the other chapters and tell me whether this is any good or not. And if you don't like it, please give constructive critisicm.



The last of the dinner guests poured out of Joseph Warren's house. He didn't have dinner parties often because they usually resulted in fight's between two different people or parties with extremely different political views. Fortunately, their was only one, small conflict on whether America should be fighting communism in other coutries or not. Joeseph of course took the side of fighting communism, and so did a couple of others. But most of the other people...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 12
6 month later
School was boring as always everyone in the school looked at us like they did with the Cullen's and as for me and matt we got closer! I really liked him ,almost loved him but not the kind of love my heart held for edward it was different like he can complete me we went to are medow every day after school and talked and other stuff as you know but I never slept with him not know I wasn’t ready I just have this stupid stupid idea like I'm cheating on him but that isnt true he leaft me and got over me and started dating another vamp that I'm sure was Tanya.i hate him I...
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“Train us? For what?” Opal Asked. Grito didn’t say anything; he started pointing, first at himself then to Marley, Alec, Mia then Opal. “Train us to fight of creatures” Said Mia. Grito nodded, and then he looked at the fairy on his shoulder. The fairy nodded and flew up into the air and created a square in the air, like a movie screen. On it pictures of demons and humans being attack appeared, much to the four friends’ disgust. “What the hell is going on here?” Alec Asked. “This is why I was sent to train you, so this stops happening to innocent humans” Said Grito. “When...
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Okay I should very careful. If I mess up I could get very hurt I think.
I sigh and I raise my hands. A sand storm starts forming. So far so good My hands control the speed of the sand. When I wiggle my fingers it controls where it will go. It starts going to my right.
It sounds like a horrible hurricane. I wiggle my left fingers and it moves towards my house.
Oh crap! That's not good. Move your fingers Sam! MOVE!
My sandstorm picks up my house and it starts spinning around.
I hear screaming coming from my house. It's probably my mother.
I raise my hand. To stop it which is impossible because I'm...
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posted by dragonrider
Alex froze up as his hunter came near him with his bag. Alex started crying again but silently. His thoughts were raging out of control Should I tell him? Nah then he'll just kill me and my family Alex looked up in time to get slapped again.
"Tell me where your family is Alex! or else," Alex's hunter roared raising his hand again
Alex started to shake bad.
"N..No I will not Dude just kill me now so at least I can be in a happy place," he said looking down his tears dripping onto the hard wooden floor
The hunter laughed a big belly laugh. Alex looked up in time to get slapped again. Alex glared...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
We both stood there in awe. I closed my eyes and then opened them again to check if he was real. He looked just as shocked as I was. He moved closer but I moved back. “Sadie, please” he begged, I shook my head. “You’re not dead” I stated, he nodded. I know it was a stupid thing to say, but at this moment it was the first thing that went through my mind. “Please, let me explain” he pleaded. I didn’t answer, I just stood there. “But, Dawn” I said, he nodded. “Dawn saw what I wanted her to” he simply said. I looked up at him with disgust. “What do you mean?” I asked...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
Dawn’s p.o.v

“What?’ I asked, closing my mouth. He smiled, sending a shiver down my spine. “I need to speak to my new slayer to be” he told us. Rebecca eyed him. “Why, we have taught her the basic and the rules” she said, he now looked annoyed. Why was he doing this? I thought to myself. “Now, young ladies I would like to talk to her in private” he said, but before we could go Billy had walked in. “Derek” he simply said. My father turned to him. “Billy, how have you been?” he asked. Billy snickered. “Just great, now what do you want with Lilly?” he asked, my father...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
I Wake up. I see nothing but my pale white ceiling, I want to stay here, but then I hear my name. I rush up and go to the door but then I look down and see what I am wearing nothing but my under wear and a white singlet. I get my dressing gown and put my arms through the sleeves. I walk down the stairs and see my sister, her face is filled with anger I suddenly regret coming down. I stop walking once I reach the bottom of the stairs she walks up to me and smiled. I am confused until I realise that Georgia is here. Georgia is the goddess of music, hundreds of years ago she was the outcast, her...
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posted by funnyshawna
Life is an iPod. The different melodies, the ups and the downs, the changes in tempo, every song, and every experience differs a little from the next. Start with the tinkling bells, meaningless lyrics, and soothing sounds of early childhood. Everything is simple; repetition, a song meant for young ears, nothing to think about, nothing to ponder, just to breathe and to live. One song flows into the next, changing subtly, barely noticed. Then the words begin to gather more depth; the beat becomes a little faster, a little louder. The music plays, slow and monotonous during the school day, dragging...
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Everyone knows no one is normal. Everyone knows everyone is the same too. But do you know what it's like to have nothing normal about you? From the way you dress from the way you talk? I do. My name is Elizabeth Mills. This is the story of my life. It all started when I was five. Thats the day I became the opposite of normal.

I was just a little girl. I was in my own world. Thats a lie. Every little girl is in a world of her own. I acted as if I was five years older than I should be. I'm not normal, remember? Well I was at my Grandmothers house to spend the weekend. My cousin always prefered...
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