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posted by QueenVictoria73
I woke up one day from a dream and remembered every second of it. In the ten minuets I stayed in bed awake but didn;t get up yet, I thought up a story. I went downstairs and typed this up, not caring about grammar, spelling, or sounding good at all. I stopped halfway through because my burst of creative energy had run out. Please excuse the choppiness and poor style of it, and just pay attention to the plot. Maybe it will inspire you or give you ideas for something else.

There is an evil witch that has a gray, mushy body that is very bony and bat-like, she can fly and screech and materialize and shove herself down people’s throats to take over her body. She lives in a tall tower of a castle made out of dark blue stone in the middle of a dark forest that moves around in the world by magic. She is immortal.
In the 600’s, she lived near a peaceful fairytale village. In the center there was a castle, and the people who are important to the story who live there are; a king, queen, many princesses, and a jester. Visiting is a prince from another kingdom in hopes to marry the eldest princess. Outside the village lives a poor, beautiful maiden who is in an arranged engagement to a rich merchant who is neither mean nor ugly, but rather bland and unexciting.
But wait, the entire village is falling into a trap made by the evil witch. Years ago, when the king and queen had their first daughter, she was the most beautiful girl anyone had ever seen, even as a baby. The witch wanted to take over the girl’s body for two reasons. One, she was always tortured and incredibly jealous of youth and beauty since the beginning of her existence and wanted it for herself. Second, if she was in control of such a beautiful body, she could seduce the whole village to do her bidding, and then maybe control the entire world. Unfortunately for her, she would never be able to enter a body so pure and good. So, the night after the young girl was born, she flew into the castle stealthily and stole the infant, and replaced her with another baby girl that had just been born in the village. Her hopes were to have the princes live hard childhoods while watching the fake princess have all the care, attention, and frivolities anyone could ever ask for. When the real princess’s body was in the prime of its beauty, she would reveal to her that she was the one who really deserved all those nice things. Being evil, the witch was sure that this would make the girl angry and hateful, maybe even enough to kill the fake princess. That would dirty her soul just enough to let the witch take over her body.
This is how they grew up. The fake princess turned out to be almost as beautiful as the real one, but a lot of it had to do with the make-up, jewels, dresses, diets, and hairdo’s rather than natural beauty. She was very nice, but a little bit airheaded, but never did anything mean or wrong. The king and queen had seven other daughters after the first, who got along very well with each other and the fake princess. When they were young, they by chance met with the maiden who lived in the village, and played with her in the courtyard and became very good friends, until the king and queen came to say it was improper to meddle with commoners. The maiden’s family was very poor, and she had to do a fair amount of chores, but her parents weren’t unfair or controlling. They cared for her and wanted her to live a comfortable life when they sent her off into the world. When she was 16, they wanted her to marry the merchant because he would be able to support her. He was most happy to agree to marry her because she was, of course, incredibly beautiful and benevolent.
At age 16 was also the traditional time for the king and queen to bring in suitors for their daughter. The prince who first visited was known across the world as being dashing, charming, unimaginably handsome, confident, and talented. He and the fake princess, of course, was a perfect match and fell in love immediately. This was good news in the witch’s eyes, for she was sure the maiden would be passionately jealous of the fake princess. This didn’t bother the maiden, though, because she was secretly madly in love with the court jester. He grew up the same time as the maiden did, and was apprenticed as a jester to his father, and at age 12 he was old enough to start work. The maiden had always seen him practicing, she sometimes climbed up the wall of the courtyard to watch him; he was a different kind of funny. Instead of poking fun at different people’s jobs, political figures, people in the audience, ect., he made a fool of himself and graciously accepted applause and laughter. He also sang songs for the court, not just funny songs, but all kinds of songs. The maiden’s heart leapt every time she heard his voice. Not that the maiden really disliked the prince, but she was almost insulted when people talked about how amazing the prince’s loud bravado voice was, ignoring the talents of the jester. The prince sang songs about his own adventures and achievements, and sometimes he would sing a trite song about how pretty the fake princess was to woo her.
One day, the royal family was hosting a ball for the entire kingdom and beyond to attend to celebrate midsummer. The witch planned to reveal to the maiden the truth at exactly midnight. The maiden attended the ball with her fiancé, the whole time stealing longing glances at the jester, who was part of the band for the evening. Every time he smiled or hit an exquisitely lovely note, her heart would break a little more, knowing she was bound to the merchant instead of him.
Right before midnight, the witch’s plans were ruined. Just by chance, no magic or divine intervention involved, lighting struck the castle, catching it on fire and killing everyone inside. Very frustrated, the witch cast a spell on everybody there. She didn’t know when or where it would happen, but sometimes in the future, all those people who died that night would be reincarnated, body and soul, in a way so they would all be the same age in relation to each other and have the same kind of relationships that they did back then. That way, the witch could try her plan again. Until that happened, the souls would be stuck in nothingness, not able to pass on to the afterlife, whatever that may be.

It just so happened that everyone reincarnated around 2000, in and around Maryland. The witch’s castle and woods had moved to Cape Cod.
This time around, the witch wasn’t looking for power, only beauty. During all the time that had past, she thought of a better way to gain power. As you know, in today’s society, people are much easier to persuade to do something bad to get what they want. People are all about ambition and dreams, and jealousy can be mistaken for just wanting something you rightfully should have. This is especially true in the acting industry. The witch knew that with all these people’s preoccupation with singing and the arts, they would no doubt be part of the theatre in one way or another when reincarnated in the modern world.
There was a woman living in Cape Cod, whose soul was dry and withered, and the witch was able o take over her body. She was Maryl Streep looking, but with really grey hair, not white, but grey. She set up a kind of reward system that was all high and mighty in the world of theatre when she learned of the rebirth of the maiden. She would invite high schools from all around the country to bring ten people to her castle and perform in a play on a beautiful stage she built. She asked talent agents and casting directors from movies and Broadway plays (with a little magical persuasion) to come, too. The students would arrive a week before the scouts would be there, to decide who should get to try out for the play from their group of students, and auditioning to get the best part in the play. At night they all sleep on random parts of the floor of the castle in sleeping bags they bring. Since the witch runs the whole thing, people are already under her control. What they want is so much in her power, they half worship her. Everyone wanted to be close to her and get on her good side. The people who tried most to flatter her over the years became her minions. She turned them all into fish and threw them in sheep pond, and turns them back into humans only so they can do her bidding. These poor souls have been so brainwashed by their ambition to become an actor that even though she does all this bad stuff to them, they still revere her and gladly do whatever she asks without question, in hopes that she may one day put them center stage. The spell would be broken if they somehow came to their senses and admitted there are more important things to life than being the star.
posted by dragonwriter
I awoke a couple of hours later. I looked around for the old man but he was nowhere ti be found. I got out of the bed and starting walking to the front door to see if he went outside. When I opened the door there was nothing but black. When I turned back around he was standing there.
"Where were you going? You need your rest so go back and lay down." He went to grab my arm to lead me back to the bed but I pulled away. "My name is Shaun so stop calling me boy old man. I don't need to lay down, I need to go." As I turned back to the door he grabbed my arm. "Go where? You have nowhere to go....
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posted by teamphantom
I’ll never forget the day I had encountered a ghosts with my best friends. And I will be happy to share that story with you.
It was August 20th exactly one week before the start of middle school. My best friend Alex and I sat outside on the curb and ate our half melted strawberry ice cream on a cone. It must’ve been 95 degrees outside because we could feel our sweet dripping off our faces. We didn’t say much because the calefaction made us not want to be social. We sat there in silence and licked our ice cream.
“What do you think middle school will be like, Collin?” Alex broke the...
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Source: Brigham Young University
posted by RainSoul
What do you do when the gray waves roll over your head, and your body is too weak to swim ashore. Do you panic and scream and try anyway to break the surface of the water? Do you silently cry and pray and tell your loved ones you love them one more time. Or because you know it's futile to fight submit to the lulling cold darkness kissing at your eyelids? Do you let the salty seawater drain into your lungs and choke to death's waiting arms?

Or do you float to the surface and wait for the storm to pass and sunlight to pierce your shivering mass of a body?.. You choose wisely.. You wake up in a...
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posted by xoxpoisonxox
This is a Monolouge I wrote a little while ago for drama class. We had to write a dramatic one. So this monologue is about a girl who is talking to her therapist about a recent event with her friend.

Tell me what you think!

My mother says you can help me - Help me make sense of it. I don't beilive in therapists - But I guess ill .....0give it a try..

You know, Some say suicide is the most selfish act one person can make.. I used to think this too. But now it doesn't make sense to me how the most selfless, kind , person I know - knew- could be labled as selfish..

How long have I known her? Well...
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Here are the definitions of the words.Read and guess what they are before reading the right answers I write below.

1.It's a person who works in a restaurant,takes the food from the kitchen to the tables.
2.It's a place where you go when you want to buy something.It's a very big shop where you can buy anything.
3.It's a thing which you use to talk.It's a kind of machine,it's very small and nearly everybody has one nowadays.
4.It's an adjective.It's the opposite of fat,but means thin and acttractive.
5.It's an adjective again.It's how you feel when you have a lot of things to do but you don't have...
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posted by breebree446
To think, most of my character names come from a thrift store baby book!
To think, most of my character names come from a thrift store baby book!
Baby Name Books!

My #1 resource is the baby name book I bought from a thrift store. It's a lifesaver! Not only does it have over 5,000 names but origins, boy and girl names, and alternate spelling. But, if you can't get a hold of a baby name book there's always...

Name Websites!

Just as good and pretty much the same thing. They have access to millions of names online! One website I find really useful;

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link - Thanks ellie_bellie135^^

Symbolic Names!

Often, writers give thier characters a name that has a certain meaning. For instance, one of my characters is named Roni. Which is short for Veronica....
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posted by Spotty_Vision21
I shouldn’t have shot the dog. I definitely shouldn’t have shot the dog. Even if he did chew upon my prized drumsticks, and feast upon my freshly-baked brownies. The little white-and-brown terror, Mickey, belonged to my neighbor. My neighbor, an 87-year-old chain-smoker named Mary, rarely left the confines of her living room. She sat, day in and day out, as her precious mutts wreaked havoc about the neighborhood.
You can see it! My house, the little beasts have chewed upon everything their gnashing, tiny, sharp little teeth could find. I did my best to keep them out, but the little bastards...
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posted by fanfangirlfan
As I try to think of something, anything to say to him now, I recall the first time I saw Sam outside of school.
It was about a year ago. Tyler was at my house playing with Jen. It was late and they both needed to be put to bed. Their tiredness only resulted in them fighting. I eventually put them on time-outs until Tyler’s uncle showed up. Or I thought it would be his uncle. It turned out to be Sam. I opened the door when he knocked and was a little thrown to see him. I recognized him from school, but only as the quiet boy I’d never talked to. His hair was wet as if he’d just showered...
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posted by Hades332
SURGE

Surge, a moderately tall teenager wearing an open red shirt, stood in the middle of what was once New York’s Time Square. At first, second, and possibly even third glance Surge did not look like the kind you would want to have a conversation with. He had a strange looking tattoo that adorned his chest like a necklace. His muscles were toned, and his hair was an unkempt blonde. None of this was what would have frightened someone though. What frightened people were the claws strapped to his wrists. They came to sharp, slightly curved, points that dripped with blood.
Surge stood now amongst...
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posted by StarsGoBlue
Coach 
 
Chapter 1: From a Table Away

Kids, you know your Uncle Barney; Scotch, money and women. Those three words pretty much summed up his life. He couldn't ask for a better life. Little did he know, he was about to get a rude awakening. You see, he had grown accustomed to this cycle, a carousel, if you will. It spun round and round until his life was completely changed by..."The Coach".



An unforgiving canopy of  charcoal  clouds hung above New York. They seemed detrimental; yearning to release their stockhold of transparent liquid. Rain. That's all it had done for the past week, rain. It...
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posted by Kachetes
Rain pour hard outside the sound made me want to stay in bed hmmm I turn to my side and moan
“mom,daaaaaad”my eye start to water my body gave a little shake as if I was cold when I was pretty sweaty with my four blankets on me
“what ?”dad yelled mom turned on the light she rushed to put her hand on my cheek
“whats wrong?"her tone was tired I almost felt bad for waking her up but
“mom I feel sick”my voice sounded just right weak and paimed
“hmmm”after an hour of nonstop questions and acting on my part mom let me in peace
“we`ll be at work while jr. is going to be at school and...
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Unexpectedly Jada Larkson found herself on the floor sprawled out like someone who just got shot. She tiredly looked around and sighed. She moved to the side and got up.
she then walked over to her dresser and took out her messy pigtails, then her hair was worse, It stuck out in all directions. She grabbed a brush and moved it through her
silky black curls. She tiredly grabbed her classes and stuck them on her pale freckled face. Then she opened her draw and grabed something random. once she was dressed she
noticed the time 7:55 AM...She slept through the first hour-AGIAN
She quickly put toghter...
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I remember the day of September “Mommy Daddy” when my mom and dad and I were walking in a pitch-black dark hallway. I heard screams, crying, shouts my Mom told me there are things in this world we wont understand. She was right I had no clue what was going on here only god did.

My Dad took off his locket that my Mom gave to him he placed it around my neck and let go I felt the cold golden chain around my neck I looked down. At the golden and silver locket I gently held the locket in my hand I pressed a button and it opened up. There I saw a picture of my Mom on the left side and a picture...
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posted by Buddy8fnj
I looked at my watch, two hours left. The whispers in my head gradually getting louder...I had to get there, I had to try. I walked forward into the shack and was immediatly terrified, written in blood all over the walls was "Time's almost up" over and over again, the whispers in my head starting to get louder, and there was a soft humming sound behind it all. I screamed out in confusion, overwhelmed. Then one whisper in my head was finally distinctable, it whispered "don't even try, fool" I tried to ignore it, and looked around the shack for some way, any way to get to get rid of my burden....
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posted by I_DONT-KNOW
So this is part 2 i hope you enjoy!


Alexis sat on the grass chewing happily on her sandwich, listening to the chatter that was going on around her. Elyon was kneeling not far from her laughing at one of Astrids crude jokes (again), Lily was talking to Rose about some boy in the class above them.Alexis's mind wandered to the time when she was able to talk to the girls and have fun. Like a normall teenager. She closed her eyes, breifly, letting the memories of her past overflow.

A group od girls sat on a large bed, in a large room. Laughing and gossiping. Alexis was there laughing too.The image...
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posted by mona_me
what a stupid! love! love! love! "i love love" "everybody needs to be a lover" "true love" all those stupid words! "bla bla bla"
love is a legend, there's nothing u can call it "love" , you can't even define it. you know why? because it isn't there! that's why you can't say i am in love and say the same word after two years or two days.
you see, if it worked with your lover, you 'll say you loved each other, and if it didn't work, you'll say it wasn't love!!!
you are all stupid, lovers!
you aren't even "lovers"
because "lovers" is a word from "love" and love's a legend.
when i heard this once when i was young, i didn't believe it.
but know i believe it's the truth, and there's nothing else truth.
you may not believe me now, but you will, in few years in your life.
love is a legend.
posted by rAsberrStrarS
Taylors strong and muscular tonned shape made him an ultimate star in his football career.So it was'nt a suprise that i was craddled to that chest know,as he examined me.
'Taylor,seriously i really don't know how i fell, i must have caught my foot on a loose root or something.you know what i'm like'I spoke as softly as i could with my injuries.
Taylor did know what i was like,most definetly, thats how we met-with me being accident prone.It had been a close call,the first day of school. When Taylor caught me before i tumbled my way down the first hundred steps of our school, outside reception....
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