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posted by liviabutterfly
Chapter [#2]

Narrators POV

An old man in a cloak walked into the neighborhood in which Olivia lived. Everyone stared at him as he walked around.

Olivia's POV

I smiled brightly as I dived into the ocean, "wait up!!!" Oliver laughed as my five brothers ran after me with surfboards, buggy boards, buckets for picking up sea shells, and dad brought out our special maid sandcastle buckets. They were big and made the best structures ever!!! Plus our family is known for our sand castles/structures. I smiled and dived down, feeling the salty cold water against my skin, it's the best feeling ever. When I got up to the surface my family wasn't there, I got out of the ocean and looked around. Then a man in a cloak came up to me, "Can I help you?" I asked slightly shaking a bit. Not because of the cold feeling you feel when the air blows on you after getting out of any body of water, but because of the fear I was feeling. He walked up closer to me, I dived into the water, and swam out to sea. Then I saw a fin, a shark fin, I screamed and swam back to shore. I was lucky I lived, I ran to my house but let out a loud scream when the man grabbed me. My family came outside and went pale, mom got the phone and called 911 but the last thing I saw and heard before the man knocked me out was, "Olivia!!!!!!!" And my parents and brothers running after me.

Narrators POV

The man came to the rough and tough city, where biker gangs, criminal activity, and the houses looked like total shit (pardon my language... but it's true) the sound of motorcycles rumbled around. But the old man soon came to a school, he walked into the school.

Jason's POV

I walked into class, "mr Johnson?" The teacher asked me, "Yeah?" I asked. "It's 4th period" she said angrily. "Yeah so what?" I asked and sat down, "you're loosing your education!" The teacher said glaring at me. "Yeah so what?" I asked again, "why were you in so late?" The teacher asked me. "My Alarm clock didn't go off, I had to take my motorcycle to the shop, I had to get my hair done, and I had to get more clothes so I can look cool" I chuckled. "That's all more important than school?" The teacher asks, I nodded yes. "Who's he?" Cole asked, I turned around to see an old man in a cloak. "How did you get in?" The teacher asked, the man walked up to me, "what do you want?" I asked him glaring at me. "Even when he glares he's hot" Justine sighed dreamily, I flashed a smile before turning to the guy again who then knocked me out.

Narrators POV

The old man walked to a huge huge mansion where you could hear screaming, the old man snuck through the back door.

Tatiana's POV

"I said I wanted a pony!!!!!!" I screamed angrily, "honey we looked for a pony" dad said to me. "Then why don't I have one?" I asked angrily, "the places where they sell ponies are going through a rough winter and they can't be brought to us" mom said, I let out a scream. Then a guy in a black cloak walked into the room. "Who are you?" I asked him angrily, "security!!!" Dad screamed, but he knocked me out and vanished before the security guards came.

Narrators POV

The man in the cloak came to the neighborhood where Cathy lived, the sound of loud screaming echoed through the neighborhood.

Cathy's POV

I ran after my cousin who was visiting, he had taken my bag of candy!!!! I screamed and screamed at him running and running. "Cathy stop being so loud!" Dad called, "then make Donny give me back my candy!" I called angrily. Dad came down, Donny gulped and gave me my candy back. "Thank you" I said but glared at Donny. "Now be quiet" dad said, but literally 3 seconds Donny took my hair brush and I was screaming and running. But then Donny and I stopped, there stood a man in a black cloak. "dad?!!!" I screamed, "no figure it out yourself!" He called. Then mom came back from work, she saw what was happening, she let out a scream. Then the man grabbed me "mom! Dad!" I cried. The last thing I heard before being knocked out was "Cathy!!!!!"

Narrators POV

The man in the cloak came to the town where Xander lived.

Xander's POV

I groaned in annoyance when My sisters let out a loud squeal from the room next to mine. It's hard being the only guy in the family, I looked at a picture of my dad and I. He and I went hiking in the woods, that was the day before he headed into the army. Then 4 months later he was killed in while in battle, I felt some tears fall down my cheeks. He died when I was 6 and it was on my 6th birthday too, but ever since dad died it was just my mom, my sisters and me. Then there was a knock on my door, I opened it to see a man in a cloak. "Uhhh hello" I said, mom came running up quickly. Mom knows when we're in trouble. She let out a scream, the second I look at the guy I was knocked out.

Narrators POV

Now the man came to the village Lexi lives in, people looked at him suspiciously.

Lexis POV

my friends, Jane, Nevaeh, and Anna were over at the house for a sleep over. "I brought snacks" mom said coming in with chips and humus, fruit, pretzels, cotton candy, cookies, and crackers. "Thanks mom" I said smiling at her. "No problem honey" mim said and walked out. "So do you still have a crush on Felix?" Jane asked me, I nodded yes, "then why don't you talk to him?" Nevaeh asked me. "You know I'm nervous and can get shy when I even go close to him " I sighed. "We'll help you out with that nervousness and shyness" Anna said smiling, "thanks" I said smiling. Then there was a knock on the door, thinking it was mom, I called "Come in!" But it wasn't mom It was a man in a cloak. He walked towards me, I was afraid. I scooted back, but then i was knocked out.

Narrators POV

The man in the cloak came to the Big beautiful house in the country where Cameron's dad and mom bought so they could go and preform in the country performance.

Cameron's POV

I smiled brightly as I took dance lessons from my teacher. I had finished singing lessons so I'm doing my dance lessons. "excellent Cameron" mr Francisco said smiling, I smiled back. Mom and dad then came in, "now lets practice on the stage" mom said smiling. I gulped a big, I'm very afraid to go on stage you know and I can't do anything about it. Mom and dad took me on a stage with no one there, they put music on but I was too scared to do anything. Mom and dad came on stage with me. I hugged them crying, "I can't do it!!" I sobbed. "It'll be Okay" mom said smiling at me, then a man in a cloak came on stage. He threw my parents away from me and knocked me out

Narrators POV

"Last house" the man in the cloak said as he came to a school, Asher's school.

Asher's POV

I smiled as I solved the hard math problem on the board, "you never fail to impress me Asher" mr Franchise said smiling. I nodded happily, but couldn't help but think about that girl at the pool. She always visits the pool, even in the winter with an indoor pool. Then the fire alarm went off and I smelt smoke. Everyone walked out, but before I got to the door I was knocked out by some guy in a cloak
posted by r260897
“well I got the notice we will have no class today.. everyone is busy in preparation of the function. They should declare it as a holiday.. oh yeah…. Hello are you listening… hey wake up… its irritating” my friend was saying this to me or it should be said that this was speech of substitute class leader to leader. “ yp.. I got that no class today and everyone is…” I said this to her to show that I was attentive to what she was saying but what I got was harsh dialog “ shut up… I am not asking to repeat my words… I am the best leader… I am the best there is none like me…....
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posted by Insight357
    Wyatt watched as the faerie girl smacked Xavier across the face. He chuckled inwardly, wondering what the poor bastard had said to her. He became at unease when he saw Elizabeth try to turn around to run. Wyatt was ready to follow her when Lucifer pulled her over.
    Wyatt stopped in his tracks when Elizabeth followed Lucifer to the Privacy Room. It was actually a storage room, but it wasn’t used for storage. He watched as they went in. Lucifer shut the door behind them.
    Wyatt watched as the fight between the faerie, and...
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posted by Insight357
    Elizabeth woke-up, and looked around the room. She sat up, and pushed her hair back groggily. She looked over beside her-Wyatt was missing. She looked all around the room, and still couldn’t find him. Then, she heard voices on the other side of the door.
    The door opened, and Wyatt walked in, with Xavier behind him.
    “Oh, did I wake you?” asked Wyatt. Xavier stood behind him, staring at her.
    “No, I just got up a minute ago,” said Elizabeth.
    “Okay, good. Well, we need...
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posted by sawfan13
Howl helped me navigate to my campsite. We didn't see a single soul there. I was relieved that they were gone, since I didn't want to swoop down there with Howl, and start gawking at him all the time. I got out a first aid kit, and untied the cloth from my shirt from his body. Good thing the wild animal didn't slash him that deeply. All I really need to put on Howl for him to heal is Poroxcide, Neosporin, and a gauze bandage to wrap around his upper waist around the upper ab area. I doctored him and ordered him to rest on my sleeping bag/bed. I'm pretty sure he heals pretty quickly for a man...
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posted by magicgirl123
Alex paced her room, bored. It was just another summer Thursday in the city of Verona, Italy. Her mom was in her home office, reviewing a book for publishing, and Alex's little brother Sam was at the park with his friends. Alex would do the same, but she didn't have many friends, and her best friend was in Paris for the summer. Alex stopped pacing, stomped her foot and quietly cursed her bordom in Italian. Then she slipped on her ballet flats and bonded out into the hall.

"Mom! I'm going to check the mail! Be right back!" She shouted in American English into the apartment and grabbed the keys....
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posted by Harrypotter148
This is a short story a wrote a few months back :)



He woke up thinking it was just a dream, then reality hit him, it was not a dream at all, it was the truth. He fell to his knees and cried out to God, “Why did you do this to me!” he then fell to the ground sobbing, his whole body was shaking, he wanted to numb the pain. After a while he got up slowly and walked to the refrigerator and pulled out a beer. He then moved to his couch and turned on the TV, he did not watch it; he just needed something to drown out the silence. He took a sip of his beer, he had large bags under his eyes, his...
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posted by I_DONT-KNOW
So I started writing this a long time ago, and didnt have a title.Remember? Anyway to refresh your memories I have put the last part I wrote up.



Chapter 2:Part 1

"What?" Alexis asked in barely a whisper. Astrid fidgeted with her hands.
"I read your file, I do it every time there is a new kid.Bonus for having the headmaster as a mom." She said trying to make it into a joke. "Sorry, I wont tell." She said waiting for Alexis to look at her. "Promise, when you bumped into me I actually wanted to try and help you out." She said smiling. Alexis couldnt talk, her brain was to buisy dealing with it. Someone...
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posted by irena83
When your minds are
upset
and so many thoughts
circling around
your head,
you try to make
this right,
to find the best way
so you could feel better,
so you could be free.

Pain will never
go away,
it always stays
to remember you
that life is not a dream,
life is unpredictable.

Endless questions,
so many "Why",
but the answer
we will
never find!
The strength within
will not let us crack,
life is unpredictable,
who's to say?

Today you're happy,
and yet
despair waits
stealthily
to engulf you.
But,
you need to be prepared.

Not only bad things
happen to bad people.
Unfortunately,
so many pure,
honored hearts
have been broken for
so many times,
in so many pieces,
and yet
they live,
they live with
their agony,
they live with
their groan,
but they live,
tho their eyes are
always sad,
their hearts are
still softly.

Therefore
they know...
Therefore
they are...

The brightest star
that shines
in the dark,
that spark of hope
for all of us
who deserve better.
posted by rosethorn
Hi my name is Rose and this is a story about an unknown power that took me from my sleep December 29 2999 to a noise out side my window. As I looked out I saw 3 children running around outside yelling at each other. As I stuck my head out my window to call down to them they looked up at me strait into my eyes so me being 16 started to bark crule words at them. The boys didn't respond until a called down to the little girl the only girl there and as I did the boys seemed to be more alert. But the girl just looked up at me. I ran down the steps so i could look at them eye to eye and as I stepped...
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posted by AvaMarch
When you look at the night sky, what do you see?
In my eyes,
I see the moon as a peaceful spirit,
watching over me.
When you stop and listen to the wind, what do you hear?
In my eyes,
The wind sings to me and tells tales.
When you feel the sun on your back, what do you think?
In my eyes,
The sun reaches out and gives me a warm smile.
When you hear a flowing stream, how does it sound?
In my eyes,
The stream is floating in my heart and soul, drifting on and on.
When you look at me, what do you see?
In my eyes,
I see an average girl who is silently struggling inside.
But that's all in my eyes.
posted by viju
Pain!!
Pain!!
[Verse-I]
Something I feel inside
Something I breathe inside
The lightening and fire
Right now I’m bearing inside
My heart is broken now
And it have fall to pieces
I’m finding a way through out
To reassemble and fix it
Oooh (fix it) Oooh (fix it)

[Chorus]
The pain and sorrow
Is freaking me out
The fire and heat
Is melting my heart out
The man who supposed to be
Isn’t there right now with me
The devils look in your eyes
Makes me scream…..
Makes me scream…..

[Verse-II]
The scars and wounds
They won’t seem to heal
Suicidal
That is how I feel
Aggression and pain
I’m hiding in my eyes
I’m finding a way to
Control...
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posted by mitchie19
5.S L E E P O V E R M O D E

The doorbell rang. “Mariah! The pizza’s here,” Nikki shouted from downstairs.
Nikki Lim is my friend. She’d helped me pass my Chemistry test by teaching me how to solve the frikin’ formulas our adviser gave us and that was a relief. I went downstairs. “Here the money,” I handed it to him. “Thank you!” Nikki waved before I locked the door. Why’d we order pizza? It was my idea to have pizza with Nikki while Aeyla and Norah went to town to celebrate some event down in Houston Street. This is a sleepover. I want to do something fun before I go to...
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posted by hannah_vampire
I didn't know weither i should go back yet Or if I should just stay here for awhile like I said i would even though it feels weird but I dont have to go back I mean Damon or Melissa could go.

I was sitting on Damons when he had walked in, 'hey Belle umm I thought you might be hungry so Here have this'. I know that the look on my face said are you kidding I am straving but I couldn't take it even though i decide to grabb it to be polite.

Four Days later

I hadn't been to school for four days and the only reason was because i know they would be their but I had to go back to Blairs because sooner...
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posted by Cullens4eva
Hi people. well im starting up an advice column for those people who need advice through situations and questions. If you yourself find your stuck in a problem email my account at dearannie_advice@hotmail.co.uk. this is my special account i use for people needing help. Dont worry anything you say will never be told to anyone else, thats my promise. If you dont think you trust me then send it to my fanpop account. im here to help those stuck.

please if you need advice, just try it.

the new Dear Annie
xxxxx
posted by PrinceLover1999
While She watched her mother had a heart attack she was crying. While latter that night. She dreamed that her Father died...He was burned with fire.
"Why, does this happen to me?!?" She ask Then she starts crying. Then her mom as a ghost comes and hug her. Then she says....What...the.
She went to her bed and lay down...and she wakes up and she smelles fire. She runs down stairs, her father laying un consions. She's screaming for help, and luckly Help did come.
The Next day her Father died. She goes to a Foster home. Nobody wants her soo she goes home to home to home. Then she found this little...
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posted by EmoKidSteven
she's that dangerous kind
she only wears black with her long dark hair and her light brown eyes
she loves the sight of blood
her ultimate pleasure is seeing people suffer from pain
hearing them scream and beg makes her moan
she killes with one look of her eye
she makes men drop at her feet
heartless,thoughless
she's a demon witch
she looks like a human,but she's nothing like a human
you can tell she's different
you can tell that she's got something special about her
the way she plays with her tongue,touch her skin
the way she chooses one,there's must be something about him she can't figure out
and she has...
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
22: Way of the World

The hours took forever, the second longest night Jack had lived through. Well, more or less lived through. At long last, the sun started a steady climb in the Ohio sky, soon to be replaced with West Virginia. It didn’t take long for Tristan to wake, he needed less sleep than an average human to get by. Jack and Rosalie were changed from what they had been in before-he in simple black slacks and a white shirt, she in light blue jeans and a black tank top. Tristan was back to looking like a Greek god again-his hair golden, his eyes rich blue. “Can you do that at will?...
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posted by coolie
. ‘’What happened to Sucky Sam?’’ Who knows,’’ replied Ted. They started walking through the catacombes.
We should get going ,”Bill. This place gives me the hibie Jeebeis,”said Death. You’re right,” replied Ted. They walked towards the front of the catacombes. For some strange reason, there was no hole to get out! They looked in the other direction. There was Sucky Sam standing about five yards away from them! Who, what, where, when…. Why,” said Bill. Looking for me,” said Sucky Sam in a cocky voice. All of the three were shocked in horror. Sucky Sam’s eyes turned...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
end of chap3
The bell rang then I saw Edward waiting for me in front of the office
-there u are I thought you were going to ditch me
-whenever I make a promise I will always keep it!
Specially the one that includes: killing Damien and his mother
-so who was he?
He asked a little angry
-no one
I sighed
-I won’t push it if u don’t want to talk about it
-that's a good idea
We reached the biology class I sat beside the window again and edward sat beside me like jasper
The teacher came in the class and told everyone to welcome edward and blah blah blah
In the biology class I wasn’t as tired as before so...
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posted by marissa
"After a while, the insanity of the situation wore off and it seemed completely normal."
"After a while, the insanity of the situation wore off and it seemed completely normal."
Chapter Three:

Alan:

When Alan got onto the bus, he spotted Benny immediately and sat down next to him.
    
Alan took the bus every Tuesday and Thursday to visit his mother. He’d met Benny two weeks ago and the two talked every time Alan was on the bus, and Alan ate up every word that Benny said.
    
He had been skeptical at first, but it didn’t take long for Alan to honestly believe he was talking to God when he rode the bus. After a while, the insanity of the situation wore off and it seemed completely normal.
    
“Hello Alan,”...
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