Writing Article: The struggle

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posted by Free_Spirit

Me: Wow i feel in a poetic mood today. anyway um yes here is my poem. RATE and COMMENT. lol, yes if people wouldn't mind i would love to have feedback critisism is always welcome and praise is aswell. Anyway......

The Struggle

My eyes search the darkness before me,
And perceive the two roads.
One of which I know I must take.
Each holds a different path,
With the two people I love.
Both holding me with an overwhelming power,
That was crushing me as it grew.
To please my family,
Or fulfil my own desires.
They were so different,
They are fire and water as
Light is to dark,
Yet still, they both complete me.

Why is God punishing me?
Why choose between these important people.
How do I live in this dream of a world?
Life was openly full of pain,
Make it stop.
I took a deep breath and pulled out my end.
I closed my eyes and with hands of unacquainted certainty,
I plunged the knife into my heart.
I cried out in pain and fell to the ground.
Embodied within the pain, I was happy,
Struggle over.

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prettystar nice!ver pretty!Job well-done!

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Hope Still Blazes

posted by hgfan5602

Hope still blazes
Inside me.
I know I can do this.
It's possible,
And hope is entirely on
My side.

I believe I can do this.
I shall soar like an eagle
And touch the sky.
Reaching my dreams,
Achieving my goals.

While the war still blazes away
Outside,
I have a dream
That one day,
Somewhere,
There will be peace.

Everyone will live in harmony
That day,
Peacefully,
Never before to be engaged
In the horrible shackles of war.

Though difficult,
I believe in myself.
I believe in my country.
I believe in the world.
I believe that we can do this.
Hope still blazes.

Best of the Thrills: Chapter Three: Chase

posted by hgfan5602

Yo, everyone. Chase here. You know, Jake's been acting all strange lately like he's hiding something from me. And I don't like it. I don't see how anyone would. I thought we were a team. And I thought he said that I was just as great as he was. Now, this proves that he was totally lying. What a fraud. Okay, I found out something today that might be useful to the two of us. Well, that is, if Jake even wants to work with me. I saw his light on yesterday night. Face it, he's probably researching something about the mutant serpent. Am I right? Well, yes, I thought so. You know, I am telepathic....

Prolougue of My Fantasy Story

posted by morganaforever

This is only the prologue of my fantasy story. All about revenge, betrayal, love, hate and choices that change the course of the future. Three men competiting for the throne of Asaia and a vengeful and ambitious lady out to avenge a death. Who will win?

Ashmore shifted in her sleep. She dreamt of a time when she soared through the skies, worshipped by the weak two- legged species called humans. Every summer, tributes would be given to her and her kin; for they were the firstborn on the earth; born from the volcanoes created and destroyed by the seven gods themselves. Humans were merely an accident;...

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Dragon Soul (Short Story Idea, Would Like Opinion On It)

posted by dragonwriter

Night arrives once more. I notice that my hands and feet are tied up. As i look up there is a dark figure holding a gun to my head. I ask him what he wants and why he has me tied up, he replies "I want the powers that you posses inside of you. The abilities that your soul has. i would like to suggest that you agree with me and hand over the powers." Confused about all of this i ask him about what he is talking about. he answers "You have powers kid. The less you know the better. Hand them over wilingly or i will have no choice but to force you to hand them over." With me replying no to cooperating...

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Limbo [short story]

posted by r-pattz

A/N: Okay, well this is more of an idea than an actual story, but I just couldn't sleep one night, and having the strange mind I possess, this came out of my insomnia. If it's not too much trouble, some feedback would be sweet, mostly 'cause I'm curious to see what you guys think of it. And as a disclaimer, no I don't actually believe in limbo, but it does interest me. ;)

Limbo

She had no idea what exactly was happening, or why it was happening to her, of all people.

Her head was spinning and her eyes couldn’t focus on any of the blurs of color than raced in and out of her line of sight. They...

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Killer Instincts Chapter 1

posted by ace1317

This is the first story i have ever let anybody read before. Some of my friends have told me it was good and i need to posted it. so here it is i hope you like it........

I was running through a pitch black tunnel, the cold wind whipping through my jacket. Then an evil voice said. “Run u pathetic, worthless, creature run!!!” then the voice would break out in evil laughter. Something grabbed my legs I fell face first on to the cold hard tile. The creature starting snaking up my body forcing the air from my lungs. I woke up screaming. I ran into the bathroom and splashed water on my face....

A Fangirl's Confession. ( One more in-tuned with reality anyway.)

posted by madening_mahem

(WARINING: The views expressed in this article are of one person and on person alone's opinion, unless more readers agree, and I highly doubt that, please do not comment to harshly as this is JUST an Opinion.)

I'm a SHINee fan.

I'm aware that it's near close to impossible to be with one of them.

But I still love them like any fangirl would.

And, I will admit, I'm selfish when it comes to the subject.

I Love them with all my heart, not that I'm quiet sure there was any to give or to begin with for that matter. At first, I didn't like them, but as I got more and more into asian influenced things,...

Hells Outlaw -- Chapter 19

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 19

Sitting on the porch in the late evening for BJ was her only time to get fresh air and some decent time away from Cayden. In the mid-summer it was warm and pleasant outside at night but tonight it was unusually chilly. BJ wrapped her arms around herself feeling a chill run through her body. The air felt thick but it wasn’t humid it was…tense. The sky was preparing for a storm. A rumble of thunder rattled around her making her jump. She couldn’t understand why she was so jumpy, storms never bothered her but there was just something she was sensing that wasn’t right. Another...

Psychoanalysis: Chapter 1

posted by Insight357

    I was lying in my bed. Waiting for my being discharged. I was finally going home today, after four long years.
    The room I had been staying in was white. The walls, bed sheets, equipment; everything. Except the big, brown door that lead into the hallway. I had mostly stayed in my room the past years. I’m a bit antisocial. I never was really interested in interacting with the other patients.
    I stood from the bed, and walked around the room. Looking at all the things I’d come to know here. I wouldn’t miss it.
    I...

The Little Town With A Dark Secret

posted by woofbark

Of course, unlucky as she was, Lara Binks, reporter for the "Sunnydale News, got caught in a rainstorm.
And, since getting stuck in a rainstorm wasn't bad enough, it also happened when she was stuck on a rather revolting public bus, which had lint and dead bugs littering the stained carpet and torn chairs.
If that wasn't bad enough, she and the odd-looking passengers were travelling across a dirt road in the middle of nowhere.
Worse yet, Lara had to get a story into the office in three days, and there was no longer any way this was possible, since the bus driver had announced they were stopping...

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The angel (a love story)

posted by Rennerocks

There once was a girl, an angel, name Star, she was loved by everyone see met she loved them to.One day see met a boy,also an angel named Luke, she fell in love when she looked into his deep brown eyes.He also fell in love with her. They both were afraid to tell echother how they felt.

Luke wasn't going to give up untell he would finally tell her that he loved her.Star felt the same way.But they still said nothing to echother.

The days were going by fast,they only felt like years.Star and Luke's feelings became stronger.Luke finally got the nerve to tell Star how he felt.Star was ready to so...

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50 LESSONS LIFE TAUGHT ME

posted by juicyjossy9

1. Practice kindness and gratitude with everyone, including yourself, everywhere and every day, it's great for the soul!
2. The most important sex organ is the brain.
3. Life is too short to waste time hating anyone.
4. Don't take yourself so seriously. No one else does.
5. We all have been born. We all have to die. What's in between is up to us to create.
6. You don't have to win every argument. Agree to disagree.
7. Cry with someone. It's more healing than crying alone.
8. Stop listening to the words you've heard, no one but yourself will agree with you more.
9. Save for retirement starting...

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Life is Short. - Poem

posted by 1-2vampire

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Tick, tick, tick
That sound, constant in my head,
A sound that haunts every mind,
A sound that brings fear,
A clock,
Ticking the seconds of your life away,
Making life shorter and shorter with every tick,
Drawing death nearer and nearer,
But you should not live in fear,
For life is too short for such a thing,
Some people waste these precious seconds,
Others treasure them, making sure that no tick is wasted,
The clock ticks on,
But as this sound is registered,
What do you do?
Tick, tick, tick
Three more seconds, gone, like that,
Did you use them well?
Live life,
For life is too short to spend these seconds in hell.

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Dear Diary... My name is Cassandra Thorp

posted by 1-2vampire

January 1st 2010
Dear Diary, my name is Cassandra (Cassie) Thorp and...
My new years resolutions are...
1. GET A BOYFRIEND!
2. Tell Gwen how much she owes me from last year.
3. Try not to spend hours staring at pictures of Henrie Green (my future husband).
4. Use more Clean and Clear.
5. Try to gain some weight.(I look anorexic)
6. Feed Pepsi.
7. Stop killing all the goldfish.
8. Shrink.
9. Don't smoke.
10. Earn more money.

Well, a new year, and I want this one to be better than the last, which is probably a pipe dream but... you never know. I just wish Cerys and Tareesa and Amelia would except me into...

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Silent Moments

posted by FIALMOIVLEY

The sound of the breaking glass stopped me from taking another step. I starred into the darkness ahead of me, this wasn’t where I wanted to be. I wanted to be with my mother. Mother. Why did I have to think of my mother? I tried not to think of the day…
But the memories of the dread filled night filled her head. I remember it as if it was yesterday.

There was banging on the front door. A manly voice yelling to let him in.
“KIDS! Go hide! Eric, take care of your sister, Clare! Hide and don’t come out!” my mother yelled to us.
“But where are you going to go?” Eric asked my mom.
“Don’t...

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she don't love you like i do

posted by Kimi4312

Heres a song about my boyfriend and his last ex enjoy

Hey, I heard your girlfriend had a fight with you,

She is a very crazy cheerleader,

She thinks she can fool everyone but she is wrong,

She can't fool me because I seen her bad soul,

She already fooled you but she haven't fool me,

I seen you smile everytime you walked up to me,

I never seen you smile in days since she showed,

I know what she is been doing behind your back,

I got your back since we were so small,

You walked me home and always stay by my side,

She don't love you like I do,

She don't love you like I do,

She don't love you like I do,

Her...

The Chiettes and Chipmunks Meet Again(Part 4/Story 1)

posted by angelbrat

Ms.Christina:Ok!Everybody ready?

Everyone:Yes.

Ms. Christina:Now,we all know that the school's music mania concert is held this Friday.And I will choose the perfect groups for the music mania concert.Ok?First up,Sora!

Sora(singing):Remember the feelings,
Remember the day,
My stone heart was breaking,
My love ran away,
This moment,I knew I would need
someone else,My love turned around
and I fell,

Be my bad boy,be my man,
Be my weekend lover but don't be my
friend,
You can be my bad boy,but
understand that I don't need you in
my life again,
Won't you be my bad boy,be my man,
be my weekend lover...

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The Chipettes And Chipmunks Meet Again(Part 2/Story 1)

posted by angelbrat

(The Chipettes went out of class to the bus stop)

Brittany:You know what?I think we'll go to school by car tomorrow.

Jeanette:Sure.We can take the black car.

(At their house)

Eleanor:Home Sweet Home.

Jeanette:It's already 6:00.We should make dinner with mac and cheese.

Brittany:Cool.And I'll make milkshakes.I'll make vanilla,choclate and strawberry.

Jeanette:Dinner is served.

Eleanor:Wow,Jeanette!Your mac and cheese is awesome!!!And you Brittany,you make the best milkshakes!

Brittany and Jeanette:Thanks.And you make the best pastries ,cakes and cookies.

Eleanor:Thanks.I'll always help my girls.

(At 9:00)...

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Painful Memories Chapter 1 (Twilight fanfiction)

posted by IsabellaMCullen

This was my first fanfic, I've been posting this story on my spot, but I want to see what some different fans think of it.I only have 3 or 4 who actually read it so I'm not sure....please please comment.I need your opinion and If I'm bad just tell me, kay?

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Painful Memories
Chapter One

I was sitting at my vanity. I started brushing my long golden waves. I was preparing myself. I knew Edward would be home soon. Charlie had Edward leave every night at a certain time. Of course Edward would just go back once Charlie was asleep. He chose to go to...

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Fire Eyes (a poem)

posted by shomill

He has fire in his eyes.

Burning, flaming, blazing with his fury,
But not at me,
Never at me,
For I am his love,
The one he holds above
All others. His fury
Is for those who would harm me,
Who would dare to bring bitter tears to my eyes.
They alone see the full fury of his fire.

He has fire in his eyes.

They sparkle when he smiles,
Crackling fire behind dark irises.
They are beautiful because of the firelight behind them.
What is he thinking of as he smiles at me,
The flames in his eyes gleaming brightly?
He's thinking of the thing we both hold dear,
The treasured, precious love we share.

He has fire in his...