Writing Article: The struggle

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posted by Free_Spirit

Me: Wow i feel in a poetic mood today. anyway um yes here is my poem. RATE and COMMENT. lol, yes if people wouldn't mind i would love to have feedback critisism is always welcome and praise is aswell. Anyway......

The Struggle

My eyes search the darkness before me,
And perceive the two roads.
One of which I know I must take.
Each holds a different path,
With the two people I love.
Both holding me with an overwhelming power,
That was crushing me as it grew.
To please my family,
Or fulfil my own desires.
They were so different,
They are fire and water as
Light is to dark,
Yet still, they both complete me.

Why is God punishing me?
Why choose between these important people.
How do I live in this dream of a world?
Life was openly full of pain,
Make it stop.
I took a deep breath and pulled out my end.
I closed my eyes and with hands of unacquainted certainty,
I plunged the knife into my heart.
I cried out in pain and fell to the ground.
Embodied within the pain, I was happy,
Struggle over.

aliceesme, LabraLege and 2 others like this

prettystar nice!ver pretty!Job well-done!

gain7_gun nice!

Free_Spirit YAY

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Paper Kisses

posted by fire_ice

What is the greatest kiss in the world to you? Is it the ol "let's just be friends" peck on the cheak, or maybe it's the "let's just finish this, I have places to see and people to do" kiss, it could be Mom's favorite kiss the "we'll finish this later" kiss or the one that my brother, Tyler gives his khloe eyed tamagotchi girlfriend, Misha.
I'm not exactly sure how to discibe this kiss to you and I can't guarenttee that what ever you have previously eaten wont decide to show itself again but I can tell you that I'm sick of sitting in the living room during one of their sucking face sessions....

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My First College Essay- Narrative

posted by daitheflu4u

A Valentine’s Gift: A Story of Determination

Every once in a while we face certain challenges in life; whether it would be at work, school, home, or an illness. At times we don’t know if we have the courage and inner strength to get passed our obstacle. And sometimes during our worst obstacles, we can accomplish the unexpected. Depending on the challenges we face in life, we still must keep our dignity, even if we lose the battle.
The two were unprepared for the day at the hospital, where Lisa would undergo a biopsy. They thought of the procedure...

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Why i need you

posted by mars15

I need you
from the first moment i saw you
I need you
because you're the air i breathe
I need you
because you're the water i drink
I need you
because just the thought of seeing you makes me want to get out of bed
I need you
because you can with just one smile make my whole world starts to turning again
I need you
because you make me wake up from my the most horrible nightmare without fear
I need you
because you can give me hope when i don't have one
I need you
because even if I'm at the bottom,you're always there to help me stand up
I need you
because in this cruel world you keep me alive
I need you
because i know that you'll never give up from me
I need you
because when no one believed in me you were there to stand up for me
I need you
because you're everything for me
But the most important thing why i need you is
because I'll always love you!

This was in my head so i just thought to write it

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If I become a famous author.

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Also very funny, don't you just wish you could do these things yourself?

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Spirit Of Stone

posted by TDIlover226

Eddie Krinshaw walked down the side walk of the Ulysses S. Grant comunity park. It was almost dark and the sun was starting to set. He needed to get home before his curfew, or his parents would get mad. He walked through the park gates, then across the street to his house. Just as he was getting ready to do his homework, there was a pounding on his window. He waited until the pounding stopped, then he opened the window to see his friend Vincent Samson standing there with a dart gun in his hands. "What are you doing!" said Eddie. "I found this cool construction site down town" said Vincent.
"And...

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Poems-PLEAE READ

posted by Free_Spirit

Me: Okay these are two poems of mine. The first one is a translation of sonnet 18, by shakkespear the other is an original, so thats probably really bad lol. you could say my translation helps people understand what its about

Sonnet 18-translated by me written bt shakespear

Are you as lovely as the days of summer
But you can not be, for your beauty and fairness range far beyond
summer can be rough, shaking the flowers in bloom
And summer is to short for my liking
The sun bears down harshly upon us,
and is often eclipsed by the clouds.
And all beauty erodes away,
by the the mother of nature or...

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Author Jennifer Finney Boylan Book Tour

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TO THE FOURTH chp 4

posted by babina

Hey! everyone! thanx for reading and commenting on my articles! HOPE YOU ENJOY THIS ONE!

Recap:
When i turned around to look in the direction where she was coming from, i saw that nearly all the people who had been standing there were gone.I looked around and saw some of the kids running into the bathrooms, others entering classrooms which they were not supposed to be in.I thought about hiding in one room that was on the left side near the locker i had hit my head on but before i could even move, i had Mrs.copcon say, "Everyone stop where they are standing".

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Beautiful

posted by Dearheart

For Kay, my dear sister in Jesus. May this small tale help to remind you how beautifully and wonderfully made you are in the eyes of the Great Artist.

~~ Beautiful ~~

Once upon a time, not long ago and not far away, there lived a wise and skillful artist who loved to paint. He delighted in making magic with color and bringing all the images he saw in his head to life in his pictures.

One day, he was painting something extra special. His brush dipped in and out of the swirling colors and flew across the canvas in expert strokes; dabbing here, blending there, moving swiftly in a joyful, marvelous...

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What's in a writer's bag?

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Stephen King's Advice

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Advice to young, beginning writers to Stephen King....

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stephen king

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Abiola Abrams Book Release Party for novel Dare

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Gods: Chapter 4: Dead

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

That night I locked my windows it seems it only really brings me trouble. But again I couldn’t sleep. “Knock, knock” Dawn said coming in her voice was gentle. “Hey, you’re up late” I said getting out of bed. “Yeah, what did Ethan do?” she said, Dawn could read your anger. “Nothing, there was just a misunderstanding, that’s all” I said. “Really?” she said. “Well we kissed” I said now sitting on my bed. She followed and sat down next to me. “Wow, Why?” she asked, “Why would you ask me why?” I asked. “Because you have always said that you would never go...

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To write

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A poem

posted by DietCokeGirl

I wrote this about my (now ex) boyfriend, but still felt something about the poem, if not him. I'd love some criticism on it (hopefully constructive) :).

Treacle dripping from our scars
Pooling on a jagged floor
You are gone, still I know
From clustered trees and homemade vows

That we are one. And as you lead
Your life of promise, graft and need
Know that we are one the same
Intertwined are heart at name.

You may notice that only the second verse rhymes, this is an attempt to show the idea of a one-sided relationship in its form in it's one-sided rhyme scheme. This is probably quite stupid- let me know.

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The Imaginary Writing Process

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Very funny... because we all used to think that's how things worked.

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The struggle

posted by Free_Spirit

Me: Wow i feel in a poetic mood today. anyway um yes here is my poem. RATE and COMMENT. lol, yes if people wouldn't mind i would love to have feedback critisism is always welcome and praise is aswell. Anyway......

The Struggle

My eyes search the darkness before me,
And perceive the two roads.
One of which I know I must take.
Each holds a different path,
With the two people I love.
Both holding me with an overwhelming power,
That was crushing me as it grew.
To please my family,
Or fulfil my own desires.
They were so different,
They are fire and water as
Light is to dark,
Yet still, they both complete me....

aliceesme, LabraLege and 2 others like this

prettystar nice!ver pretty!Job well-done!

gain7_gun nice!

Free_Spirit YAY

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Lies and Love,

posted by teamalice_0

Hope you like it If you do we will continue it. Please read rate and comment.
Big, big help to genyva.

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Finding somewhere to park in Eleanor High School is like looking for a nail in a haystack. I saw one I would have to hurry to get there, my 2000 Nissan Altima was squeaking the whole way, it liked to go fast, not the speed limit and who am I to disagree with hat the car want. I was there, but naturally the Chevy covet beat me there. Is sighed slamming my head into the steering wheel, stupid Sarah Colons.

Sarah was one of those people you saw at...

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Wanting Someone - Chapter Eleven

posted by Lindy52

A/N: Now switching over to Sean’s POV but more of Jamie are coming soon. I want to get into Sean Connors’s mind and plus, I like doing POVs of men. They are so much fun to do!

Chapter Eleven

When their meals had arrived a couple of minutes after Erin walked away from them with their orders and came back with the burgers, side dishes, drinks, and a bowl of apple slices, Sean watched Jamie’s hands reaching over to her double cheeseburger with the whole mix of the iceberg lettuce, slices of ripe red tomatoes, and the special sauce and once she put it to her mouth, she took a huge ate out of...