Writing Article: Broken Dreams Chapter 16

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posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

I couldn't tell my mom. I tried, and I just couldn't. What's worse, she didn't try to make me.

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Later, I had cried out every tear I had, but it wasn't enough.

Just as I'd parked my car outside the complex where I now lived, a spark of hope flared inside me.

No one ever would know.

I sprinted up the stairs, I just couldn't handle the idleness of taking the elevator. I needed to run.

I burst through the door and immediately headed for the hall closet.

I pulled out a large suitcase and stuffed as many of my clothes as I could in it.

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Finally, I was packed. But I still wasn't done. There was one last thing I needed to do.

I ran into the kitchen, grabbed a pencil and pulled a pad of lilac paper out from under the phone.

I knew who would come looking for me first.

Shaun, I wrote.

I'm leaving. Please, please, don't tell anyone why. Pretend you don't know. Act like I never existed.

Don't come looking for me. I want you to finish college, and move on. You deserve happiness, which I can't ever give you, no matter how much I wish I could. And don't blame yourself. It's my fault. It's entirely my fault.

I still love you, and I always will.

Serena.

A small tear fell onto the page. I turned my head, and ripped the page from the pad.

I pinned it to the door of my bedroom.

I glanced back over my shoulder one last time, as I closed the door of my apartment, and closed the door on everyone I'd ever known and loved.

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To Live, A Nightmare Indeed: Entry One

posted by AliceKinsley

                                     January 15, 1815

Journal,
    Its cold. My food is almost gone, I can’t feel my hands. I lost my hat; my ears are frozen. My sisters are dying. Sasha has pneumonia, and Nastea’s lost her coat and shoes. My hair is falling out. I look at the broken down train behind us. Tree’s sleep soundlessly on top of it. I sit at a tree trunk, with you on my lap, and a scrawny pencil in my hand. Nastea sits beside Sasha, feeding her berries and herbs. I hope things get better, Journal. I hope things get better.
    Bye Journal,
        Nadia

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Ode To Distance

posted by Vixie79

In a world of his
she unloads his gun

She and he waits for this
he releases his love

In blue and green orbs
she gives him more and more

A million miles away
A million years girl

In a black woven chest
he digs his nails deep

She trusts in him for what he does
live in a house in the suburbs

He kisses the pain with blood and light
sleeping it off in the morning

A million miles away
A million years girl

In her world of his
she unloads his gun

In a world of his
she covers the sun

A million miles away
A million years
A million years girl

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Are we right for eachother? Chapter 1

posted by jacob_lover5253

My story is about a girl named Karleigh. It's summer time and she is down the shore. Her mom bought a place at a campground outside of sea isle. The campground is called Driftwood. She has been going there since she was 8 1/2. Now she is 13.
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I woke up to a knock at the front door. Why is kelsey's friend here so early?! "Hello, Leigha. I'll go get kelsey." Leigha came in and sat down while I went to get kelsey. "Kels, wake up!" I said. "Go away, Karleigh." She murmered. "Leigha's here." I yelled walking away. Kelsey jerked up right and flew into the bathroom. Am I allowed to go back to...

DREAMER AND FAITH

posted by juicyjossy9

DREAMER AND FAITH
OR THE CREATION
OF A NEW DAWN

In the beginning, the heavens and the earth were one. The sky was a mass of angry black clouds and the sea was nothing more than a seething, murky swamp. Life as we know it did not exist.

Then one day the clouds began to swirl and grow, thunder crashed and a terrible rain began to fall. It rained night and day for weeks and months, as if it had done so forever.

At last the rain stopped, and the heavens and the earth had separated. From the waters and the mud, the gods began to appear, like young shoots of grass spinging forth from the earth.

This...

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MY OWN BOOK I HAVE WRITTEN ! chapter 1

posted by house_of_nightx

THE LEGEND OF THE VAMPIRE PRINCESS:
THE LEGEND COMES TO LIFE

CHARPTER1:STARSTRUCK

STAR
16 YEARS LATER

I woke to a brisk summers morning in a small town just outside of New York City in my parents best friend Kachiri and her daughter Quinns apartment.Kachiri has been looking after me since i was a baby since my parents had died in a car accident when i was very younge and i had no other family,Kachiri said my parents wanted her to look after me anyway.

As i got out of bed to go downstairs i made my way into my bathroom brushed my hair,cleaned my teeth and examined the sapphire dragon that streached...

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Try My Life (Chapter 3)

posted by mitchie19

3. P H O N E C A L L

The phone rang about 9am I was the one who answered. Norah went to the store to buy groceries and my sister is upstairs still asleep. I picked up the phone, “Hello?” I spoke the word softly. “Mariah? This is your aunt Lourdes How are you?” She said happily. I didn’t expect her to call at this moment but I was surprised. “Hi Aunt Lourdes um, I’m fine. Why’d you call?” is the
why’d-you-call-thing the right thing to say to someone ten times older than me?
She didn’t mind me saying that.
“I told your mom that you are welcome to stay here for the summer....

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just a twist in twilight chapter 4

posted by mia1emmett

Chapter 4
When I woke up I was in an un-familiar place I Jumped from where I was laying down and walked down a flight of stairs
To a room full of people who were pale, I saw Edward and Bella so I
Thought this must be something that Bella knows about. I walked down the
Stairs and demanded I know what was going on, this pale man with blonde
Hair who looked so young came up to me and told me that Bella had come
To save me from losing my life and that Edward brought you here. I
Started asking questions:
"Why are you guys so pale?"
"Well we are vampires like you"
"But I am not as pale as you, and YOU...

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Love Kills chapter 16

posted by hannah_vampire

I started to wake up and open my eyes to see Tilly, 'Hey sorry bout that, Tyler should have been more aware but he is stupid oh damm his going to kill me'. I sat there puzzled 'Umm what do you mean' she laughed and sat down beside me 'WE can hear each others thoughts except yours only your soul mate can do that but hey it seems like you have to of them'.

She walked out and I rubbed my eye's and looked at my phone it said One new message, I opened it and it was from Oni: Hey your dads coming out today so maybe you should go back home with him if you know what I mean but you can stay if you want...

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How to make it through a ghetto life

posted by sexiitreysongz

CHAPTER 1
10 years ago I lost both my parents in a car crash. I've been living on my own for about 8 years, I lived with my grandmother for a while untill I got a job and found an apartment for real cheep. I never realized what it was like to lose your parents and feel this bad. I never knew my self would be in this postion. Alone, no true family, a baby on the way. How do these girls deal with kind of stuff. They act like everything is so easy,and they have nothing to worry about. Maybe becasue they have moms and grandmothers to help them out. I have no body. My grandmother kicked me out after...

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Love kills Chapter 15

posted by hannah_vampire

Its pretty Long thxs for the comments :)

I woke up to the sound of my phone ringing, I looked at the screen and I saw melissa.baker :) and no this was not Damons sister it was the melissa I got drunk with.

'Hey mel whats up?' I hearded her laugh, 'Finally were have you been it's like you had dropped off the face of earth'. I laughed and started to walk to the mirror, 'Melissa you have no idea and It's good to hear you other then the same people all the time and if your gonna ask if I can come out no I cant visting my dad and I have shit to work out, so i better go love ya mwaa', She laughed...

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Angie's life

posted by PrinceLover1999

Angie hears her mom and stepdad fights. She sits there and cries..and hope it's over. Then she hears a loud gun pow!! She hurrys to the living room and see's her mom laying on the floor..with blood all over. She cries over her mom's bloody body...her mom looked at her and whisperd "help". She called the police and after she hung up. Her stepdad beat her..then rapped her. Then the police busted in. Her mom fighting for breath. Angie to weak to get up yelled "Help, please help" They came to resuce her, too. After her and her mom recoverd. The mom found a new guy. He only beated the daughter...everytime...

The bridge in the park

posted by inexplicable

I ran against the wind which came contrary to me.
I ran against the wind which approached me till I adhered to the parapet panting. Hardly anybody was more in the park although it was rather warmly and still not at all so dark. The sun just set and the water under me turned orange-red now. I needed a while, before I came to the quiet, then I did not bear it any more and the tears forced her way. I knew that she lied. I knew that this not corresponded to the truth what she had said to me. I did not have any proof for it but I could feel that there was something wrong. I did not want any more....

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Endless Pain: Chapter Three

posted by MileySelena982

*Note; This is a variation of RachelGal97’s Endless Pain. Same names; just a different plot. Please comment and tell me if you like and what’s your favorite part*

Endless Pain: Chapter Three

“Are you sure it was David?” Mom asked as she comforted Selena on the couch.

“I’m positive.” Selena replied. “I’d know that face from anywhere. And… if I was never his girlfriend, he never would have gone to that jewelry store, and he never would have died!”

Mom didn’t reply. She knew her daughter was feeling guilty, and nothing could help it. Instead she said, “But, sweetie, he loved...

Try My Life (Chapter 2)

posted by mitchie19

2. B I G D A Y

One, two, three, go! I breathed. My right leg went first up the stairs and then my left leg.
This is it, this is really it. I squealed nervously. “Marhion Angeles Pearson, daughter of Mr. and Mrs. Pearson” the school directress announced. I went up the stage. The audience clapped.
I felt like a star on a rise.
I saw Riley on the crowd, my eyes glued to him. Ah! I tripped. The audience gasp some stood up to see if I’m okay some of them laughed and snickered. Drake Cell, the school news anchor video taped my clumsiness, he smiled. I quickly stood up. My cheeks were red, I...

Yeah, Me; The Nerd: Chapter one.

posted by cute20k

Dizzy:

As I weaved through the crowded hallways, I focussed on the rhythm of my footsteps. I was lost. It was as if I was a new student or something. Now that Annabella was gone, the hallways made me dizzy with fear. When you're with your best friend, nothing matters. When you know you'll never see her again, not even a faint light of happiness appears at the end of the freight tunnel.
I'm still me, I reminded myself. But who was I? Before knew it, a bib of tears flooded down my chest. I hear red-headed Abigail whisper to Elisa. Faint words saying, 'They're actually crying?' I wished those...

Darkened Bliss: 5th and 6th page - Chapter One

posted by Heya

“What?!” I half cried. I grabbed his shirt and gasped from the air in my throat wanting to get out.
    “Get ready, we are going to be late. You okay?” he asked calmly. You, go, away, my inner self told me.
    “I’m fine. Bye. I’ll be down in a minute.” I said, softly releasing my tight grip on Looi’s white t-shirt. After about 20 minutes of getting knots out of my hair, getting my coat to button, and getting my tote bag ready for school, Looi yelled, “Let’s go!” and I heard him shuffle down the stairs.
    As...

Darkened Bliss: Second Page - Chapter one

posted by Heya

If I took three showers, and washed with 15 shampoos, my hair would still be tangled after an hour. Looi, my brother, always said my hair looked like I dyed it, when I didn’t. I looked down, my shoes were already on with the black shoe laces. I felt like I needed to barf. At least that’s what it felt like. Greeting hopped on the counter and stared at me. The brown cat fur was splotched with black dots and white lines. She is a different cat, that’s why I like her. I looked back at the mirror. Well, you look terrible today, I thought.
“Greeting, you can’t look...

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Welcome to Birchmoss preview & Chapter 1

posted by cassie-1-2-3

This is something I'm working on.. It's the first long piece I've attempted. People often told me I'm too good at imagery and description to write anything short. Perhaps I use too much imagery? I'm curious about what you guys think.

I already know it's a bit shakey at some parts. I still need to do some revising. I revise every time I finish reading a book. I feel each book teaches me more and more about writing.

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Welcome to Birchmoss
preview
(This was just a part of my planning and organization. It is subject to change)

Violet kept her skeletons right where they belonged. Hidden away...

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love kills chapter 12 part 1

posted by hannah_vampire

thxs for the comments plz keep commenting thxs so much :)

I had not been to school which I kinda liked but I had to get out I hated it here and when i know that he likes me it makes it more hard just to even look at sefo it kills me.

I stayed away from him for aleast a week, I had to talk to him but alone and the only time i could talk to him was now, He was standing near the water and it was sunset how perfect is this!
He turned and saw we walk down towards him 'Hey Belle look before you say anything your wrong i know that' I stayed at him excuse me did he just say I was wrong 'Look here sefo...

Kingdom Hearts: Ansem's Return 2. New and Mysterious

posted by DestinyGirl

Thanks to all those who read the last chapter, oh, and please be apart of the War of Hearts Rp!!! It's really fun to do!:D

~2. New and Mysterious

Suddenly, a great light shone before me in the dark. And the Key responded to it, so - as if on instinct - I lifted the magic Key and pointed it right at the light. I heard a sound, like a door opening, and suddenly I was engulfed in the pleasant warmth of light.

Very slowly, I opened my eyes and blinked a few times until my vision cleared. I immediately saw tall town-like buildings, a white stoned ground (the ground I was sitting on), and clear, open...