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ok i cant sleep ( and yes this has something to do with writing if it didnt it would be with random )i made a story and i am not done plz tell me wat u think

Iwoke up to the sound of a baby crying and rain drops .I moved my hand over and said ," babes will you plz get sam?" But then i relized he wasnt there .i got out of bed and fead the baby. THen i look out the wendow and saw his car missing and his stuff. I tried calling him many times but he wouldnt pick up .



I named it THE BABY and i know i spelled stuff wrong i am sleepy but cant plz tell me what you think .
 Gracelyn87 posted over a year ago
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chickencheese said:
Cool. I like it.
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thx you
Gracelyn87 posted over a year ago
jessig said:
tht's kewl. it's dark and mysterious

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thx its wat i am going fro but i changed the name to sam hawk why is one
Gracelyn87 posted over a year ago
FIALMOIVLEY said:
Its too much like, 'and then I, then I, then I.' Make it more detailed and take your time with it.
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thx i was just teying to see what ppl think .
Gracelyn87 posted over a year ago
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