Happy Halloween!!!

"M-M-Marie,what are doing here,Vampire Council has strict rules over Stirgoi returning to unfinish business."Her smile widen,exposing her teeth:some white,thanks to our amazing hygiene,and some stained red;apparently Marie was waking up for MidNights snacks."Since when do I abide the rules?"Her voice made the sound of a bully mocking a terrified nerd."When you were- YOU!"I couldn't look at her eyes,they were so red,full of hate and the desire for blood."Stirgoi go by their own drift,my Ms.Perfect look can wear away now."Her eyes scanned my face,my features,by her thick look,I would've thought...

I don’t take no for an answer P.s this is a story im working on so plzzzzz tell me what you think
Chapter 1
It was Friday, a sunny day for all of Los Angeles except for Winter, Los Angeles’ only Goth. Winter hated sunny days with the loud honking of horns of people trying to get to work or the laughing screams of kids as they play outside of her house. But she hated to day the most because as her alarm went off it marked the first day of school. As Winter looked for her clock in her dark room the only light other than the light of her lava lamp and a streak of light that managed to seep...