Vampires Question

can you guys tell me what you think of this story ?asap

here is the link:

www.fanpop.com/spots/random/articles/27262/title/etern...ove

lilred96 posted over a year ago

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nightworld88 said:

its ok but its needs tweaking and try and change the start a bit its boring.

posted over a year ago

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