E.POV
week ago
Carlise asked me to oversee the vampires in NY. They were coming closer Forks. They pose a threat to all, especially to us. We were afraid of volturi.
It was difficult to stand out with the family, even a week. Bella.. I imagined her sitting next to me. I imagined her smiling and laughing. It may sound crazy, but I missed her so much, though only an hour has passed when I saw her. Her brown hair. I missed her brown eyes when she was human. I missed her blush and heart beat. But all these things have nothing against my presence with her. I increased speed. Finally I saw NY. It was already dark. I get out of the car and walked in the street where the last time Alis saw vampire's. I saw five vampire's. Two of them were women. One woman saw me and whispered to other. All of them looked at me.
"Who are you?" Shouted one man, he was new born.
"Vampire, like all of you" One girl smiled seductively. Her thoughts caused me nausea.
"What you want of us?" asked other man.
"Don't go near Forks." I said, they all laughed. I felt fear in their mind's.
"Or What?" the same woman said. Her thoughts have already started to unnerve me.
"Or I will kill all of you, shred in pieces and burn. You will scream of pain, and beg for mercy." They all steadied down "Do you understand?"
"As if you could overcome us, alone." I laughed, and growled loudly.
"Wanna try?" I challenged. I heard another growl. "So you wanna fight?" I teased.
"Stop it" I saw a girl, about twenty years, light hair and red eye's. "I will handle with him" I growled, when she went closer to me. I wanted to attack her, but suddenly everything went dark.
I know this chapter is boring, but I don't have time to rewrite it so.. btw thanks for nice comments :)
Katie
week ago
Carlise asked me to oversee the vampires in NY. They were coming closer Forks. They pose a threat to all, especially to us. We were afraid of volturi.
It was difficult to stand out with the family, even a week. Bella.. I imagined her sitting next to me. I imagined her smiling and laughing. It may sound crazy, but I missed her so much, though only an hour has passed when I saw her. Her brown hair. I missed her brown eyes when she was human. I missed her blush and heart beat. But all these things have nothing against my presence with her. I increased speed. Finally I saw NY. It was already dark. I get out of the car and walked in the street where the last time Alis saw vampire's. I saw five vampire's. Two of them were women. One woman saw me and whispered to other. All of them looked at me.
"Who are you?" Shouted one man, he was new born.
"Vampire, like all of you" One girl smiled seductively. Her thoughts caused me nausea.
"What you want of us?" asked other man.
"Don't go near Forks." I said, they all laughed. I felt fear in their mind's.
"Or What?" the same woman said. Her thoughts have already started to unnerve me.
"Or I will kill all of you, shred in pieces and burn. You will scream of pain, and beg for mercy." They all steadied down "Do you understand?"
"As if you could overcome us, alone." I laughed, and growled loudly.
"Wanna try?" I challenged. I heard another growl. "So you wanna fight?" I teased.
"Stop it" I saw a girl, about twenty years, light hair and red eye's. "I will handle with him" I growled, when she went closer to me. I wanted to attack her, but suddenly everything went dark.
I know this chapter is boring, but I don't have time to rewrite it so.. btw thanks for nice comments :)
Katie
I personal would like to just speak my mind. To all of you don't want her to be Jane, I guess I understand. But, I like Dakota Fanning. She's a great actress and I think she'd be great. Here are some reasons why I want he to be Jane.
1. She's been in TONS of movies, so she has experience.
2. She looks the role (In my opinion.)
3. She in "Push" so I would think she has some experience with things like New Moon (and the rest).
4. She's always the good-girl. For once she should be bad.
Those are only some that I can think of at the moment.
If you don't want her to be, I respect that. Also, if you think that, leave a comment saying why or why not please!
Also, if you actually read this:
Thanks!
1. She's been in TONS of movies, so she has experience.
2. She looks the role (In my opinion.)
3. She in "Push" so I would think she has some experience with things like New Moon (and the rest).
4. She's always the good-girl. For once she should be bad.
Those are only some that I can think of at the moment.
If you don't want her to be, I respect that. Also, if you think that, leave a comment saying why or why not please!
Also, if you actually read this:
Thanks!
1. He tells her to stay away from him.
2. She says shes not afraid of him.
3. He lets her cry on his shirt and ruin it.
4. He just wants her to be happy.
5. She trusts him.
6. He didn't kill her
7. When the car threatened to crush her all he could think was "Not her"
8. The lion fell in love with the lamb.
9. He left her only for her protection.
10. He won't end her life for her.
11. He took her to the prom because he did't want her to miss anything.
12. He feels very protective of her.
13. He risked blowing the family secret to save her.
14. He is her "Prisoner".
15. He dazzles her.
16. She doesn't care that he is a "Killer".
17. He sayed with her in the Hospital
18. He watches her sleep.
19. She always forgives him.
20. He dove her home when she felt sick.
2. She says shes not afraid of him.
3. He lets her cry on his shirt and ruin it.
4. He just wants her to be happy.
5. She trusts him.
6. He didn't kill her
7. When the car threatened to crush her all he could think was "Not her"
8. The lion fell in love with the lamb.
9. He left her only for her protection.
10. He won't end her life for her.
11. He took her to the prom because he did't want her to miss anything.
12. He feels very protective of her.
13. He risked blowing the family secret to save her.
14. He is her "Prisoner".
15. He dazzles her.
16. She doesn't care that he is a "Killer".
17. He sayed with her in the Hospital
18. He watches her sleep.
19. She always forgives him.
20. He dove her home when she felt sick.