E.POV
week ago
Carlise asked me to oversee the vampires in NY. They were coming closer Forks. They pose a threat to all, especially to us. We were afraid of volturi.
It was difficult to stand out with the family, even a week. Bella.. I imagined her sitting next to me. I imagined her smiling and laughing. It may sound crazy, but I missed her so much, though only an hour has passed when I saw her. Her brown hair. I missed her brown eyes when she was human. I missed her blush and heart beat. But all these things have nothing against my presence with her. I increased speed. Finally I saw NY. It was already dark. I get out of the car and walked in the street where the last time Alis saw vampire's. I saw five vampire's. Two of them were women. One woman saw me and whispered to other. All of them looked at me.
"Who are you?" Shouted one man, he was new born.
"Vampire, like all of you" One girl smiled seductively. Her thoughts caused me nausea.
"What you want of us?" asked other man.
"Don't go near Forks." I said, they all laughed. I felt fear in their mind's.
"Or What?" the same woman said. Her thoughts have already started to unnerve me.
"Or I will kill all of you, shred in pieces and burn. You will scream of pain, and beg for mercy." They all steadied down "Do you understand?"
"As if you could overcome us, alone." I laughed, and growled loudly.
"Wanna try?" I challenged. I heard another growl. "So you wanna fight?" I teased.
"Stop it" I saw a girl, about twenty years, light hair and red eye's. "I will handle with him" I growled, when she went closer to me. I wanted to attack her, but suddenly everything went dark.
I know this chapter is boring, but I don't have time to rewrite it so.. btw thanks for nice comments :)
Katie
week ago
Carlise asked me to oversee the vampires in NY. They were coming closer Forks. They pose a threat to all, especially to us. We were afraid of volturi.
It was difficult to stand out with the family, even a week. Bella.. I imagined her sitting next to me. I imagined her smiling and laughing. It may sound crazy, but I missed her so much, though only an hour has passed when I saw her. Her brown hair. I missed her brown eyes when she was human. I missed her blush and heart beat. But all these things have nothing against my presence with her. I increased speed. Finally I saw NY. It was already dark. I get out of the car and walked in the street where the last time Alis saw vampire's. I saw five vampire's. Two of them were women. One woman saw me and whispered to other. All of them looked at me.
"Who are you?" Shouted one man, he was new born.
"Vampire, like all of you" One girl smiled seductively. Her thoughts caused me nausea.
"What you want of us?" asked other man.
"Don't go near Forks." I said, they all laughed. I felt fear in their mind's.
"Or What?" the same woman said. Her thoughts have already started to unnerve me.
"Or I will kill all of you, shred in pieces and burn. You will scream of pain, and beg for mercy." They all steadied down "Do you understand?"
"As if you could overcome us, alone." I laughed, and growled loudly.
"Wanna try?" I challenged. I heard another growl. "So you wanna fight?" I teased.
"Stop it" I saw a girl, about twenty years, light hair and red eye's. "I will handle with him" I growled, when she went closer to me. I wanted to attack her, but suddenly everything went dark.
I know this chapter is boring, but I don't have time to rewrite it so.. btw thanks for nice comments :)
Katie
Max's POV
When we rushed in Sergeant Ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant Ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant Ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
desk and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant Ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
When we rushed in Sergeant Ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant Ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant Ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
desk and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant Ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
Personally I read Twilight because kids kept bugging me because I haven't read it yet.
But after reading all four books I feel in love with them. I wasn't a fan of the writing style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in love with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I love the ending to Breaking Dawn. And love New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favorite author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to love HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before reading Twilight...and just suddenly realized my writing was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm writing a vampire novel that I hope to publish in the near future.
But after reading all four books I feel in love with them. I wasn't a fan of the writing style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in love with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I love the ending to Breaking Dawn. And love New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favorite author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to love HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before reading Twilight...and just suddenly realized my writing was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm writing a vampire novel that I hope to publish in the near future.