*Non-First class*
*Bridgette crys*
Rayven: You got to gte over Jordan! I mean your as bad as Ray when Noah left!
Ray: Never menchen that again! *starts to cry*
Rayven: aaaaaaaaaaaaa.......... I'm going over to the storeage room with Jamie.
*Storage room*
Jamie: what are you doing in here???
Rayven: Ray and Bridgette are crying over there loves.
Jamie: my love is Duncan.
Rayven: wo wo wo!!!!! Duncan????? He's like was on the other team.
Jamie: So he's still hot. I bet you have a crush on someone!
Rayven: Nope no one.
Jamie: I can hardly belive that!
*First class*
*Crying*
Jax: Dang! Those girls can cry!
Natalie: One of them is crying over your best firend.
Jax: what jordan broke up with Bridgette??? I haven't seen him for awhile.
Rochelle: Jordan got votted off.
jAX: wait what???
Trent: yeah man! They came in here and told us.
Jax: wow! Why wasn't I here?
Ezekiel: I think he went to the restroom eh.
Jax: Maby.
Chris: hellow finle 10 conpesters. Befor i say where we are going next please go in the cnfessional room and say something about you being in the finle 10. Team Win then team USA!
*confessional*
Ray: *crying* I miss noah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bridgette: *crying* Jordan was so nice!! Why!!!! Jordan i hope your watching this cause I love you!I wiil win for you. ok?
Rayven: I have to be on the same team as those girls. and only 7/10 girls there are only 3 guys. i bet a girl will win again for sure!
Jamie: I was so close to not have making it...... but i got in the finle 10 by cheeting!
*flash back*
Jamie: chris can you make the person with the 2nd most votes get votted off please??
Chris: Jamie i know you don't wanna be votted off, but i c...........
*Jamie holds out 100 dollors*
Chris: where did you get that????
Jamie: I still have it from las vagus. so do you want it???
Chris: fINE YOU WIN!
*flash back over*
*back to confessionals*
Jamie: Like i was saying i would do anything to win.
Ezekiel: Finle 10 eh! This is the farest i ever gone in my life eh! this season rocks!
Natalie: Finle 10???? I didn't think i would make it this far. and i'm even with the guy of my dreams......... TRENT! he's so hot. I'm glad he's in here with me.
Jax: The finle 10 mean that peaple come back. i hope one of them is ether Jordan or Zoey...... Mostly Zoey! sorry Jordan!
Annie: OMG! The finle 10! Team WHO-NEST-EGGS will so win!
Rochelle: *through door* It's USA!
aNNIE: OH!
Rochelle: That annie girl is so dunb. i rather have Lindsay here than her. But i'm not mean. I just want to win. *sigh* hope cody comes back. I miss him. Hi cody! *blows kiss*
*TDA aftermathshow*
Lulu: *gags* cures you Rochelle!!!!!!!!
Cody: hey she's a good friend!
Lulu: she stoll you from me!
CodY: were just firends.
Lulu: then why did you kiss her?
Cody: cause i was missing you and i need someone to kiss me so i wont miss you so much.i love you Lulu!
Lulu: *blushes* hehe! I love you too!
*Plane*
*Back to confessionals*
Trent: Me and Natalie are so tight! But i can't beleave she hates my best bud Justin beiber! I will never forget that! But other than that.............. She's on fire!
*Jordan craws trough confessional window*
Jordan: ok i finshed step 2 get in side plane! Step 3....... hid for 2 epsodes! *looks down in the trash and sees he's bridgette doll* Don't worry Bridgette I will make it.
*over*
Rochelle: Ok we talked in the confessonal happy????
chris: yes yes i am.
Jax: so where are we going today?
Chris: hawii!
Bridgette: *startsing to stop crying* didn't we already go there?
Chris: Yes! but it was a great spot for today's epsode!
Ray: I wonder what today.
Rayven: If you ask that....... your so dead!
*confessional*
Ray: Yeah Rayven is mean, but not all the time.
Rayven: Ray just makes me mad when she ask chris about the challange. I mean she knows chris is going to tell us.
*over*
Annie: This place is so cool!
Natalie: we been here befor. you should recanize it. *looks around* dosent look the same.
Chris: That's because we are on the other side of Hawii! witch brings us to your challang......
Bridgette: are you going to tell us??
Chris: Not yet!
Bridgette: why?
Chris: caus i'm bringing back some people.
Jax: *crosses fingers* please let it be zoey please let it be zoey.
Chris: hellow to............ Aljeandro!
All: WAHT??????
Aljeandro: hellow everyone.
*confessional*
Natalie: He votted off Zoey and changed the votes! he should not be back!
Jax: That guy! I hate him! He should not come back!
*over*
Trent: Please not him!
Ezekiel: Yeah eh.
Alejandro: Hey Annie.
Annie: I might be domb sometimes........ but i'm smart anough not to trust you.
Chris: and welcome................ Jar3d!
Jar3d: hey everyone!
Annie: OMG OMG!!!!!!!! It's Jar3d!!!!!!!1 OMG!!!!! I love you!
Jar3d: Oh my!
*confessional*
Jar3d: When chris asked who wants to come back to all the losers me and alejandro were the first to wase there hands. I tottly forgot about Annie! Goush! I'm so domb!
*over*
Chris: Aljeandro and Jar3d have inevnceabilty til the finle 10!
All but Aljeandro: really??? for alejadnro???
Alejandro: really!
Jar3d: at least i get to stay for awhile!
Annie: yay!!!!!!
Chris: and i have some new people. Meet Draven!
*Drvaen looks hot*
Rayven: wow........
Jamie: he's he's he's.......... HOT!
Annie: wowy! He's hotter than you jar3d.
*confessional*
Jar3d: I don't know if that's a good or bad comment. Is it good???
*over*
Draven: Hey rochelle.
Rochelle: sorry but i have a boyfriend!
Draven: Oh one hotter than me???
Rochelle: yeah...... maby............. NO OK!
*confessional*
Rochelle: sorry cODY! he's just so dreamy! I just want to hug hin and kiss him.......... argggggg!
*over*
DraveN: hey natalie:
Natalie: *blushes* hi.
Trent: Ok back off my girl!
*confessional*
Natalie: I'm he's girl!
*over*
Draven: Hey bridgette!
Bridgette: keep walking.
Draven: you know that Jordan hates you. he was just useing you.
Bridgette: Oh and how do you know that???
Drvaen: watch this.
*tape rolls*
*confessional*
Jordan: Bridgette???? ugly! she's just like...... Ugly! I......... will.......... just......... use her ..... for awhile to win.
*over*
*clip stops*
Bridgette: what????
*confessional*
Bridgette: Oh i should have known! sorry geoff!
*over*
chris: and................ Buddy!
Buddy: Hey! hey hey hey!
all: aaaaaaaaaaaaa...... hey.
Buddy: hey!
Chris: Ok your challange is....................
*Bridgette crys*
Rayven: You got to gte over Jordan! I mean your as bad as Ray when Noah left!
Ray: Never menchen that again! *starts to cry*
Rayven: aaaaaaaaaaaaa.......... I'm going over to the storeage room with Jamie.
*Storage room*
Jamie: what are you doing in here???
Rayven: Ray and Bridgette are crying over there loves.
Jamie: my love is Duncan.
Rayven: wo wo wo!!!!! Duncan????? He's like was on the other team.
Jamie: So he's still hot. I bet you have a crush on someone!
Rayven: Nope no one.
Jamie: I can hardly belive that!
*First class*
*Crying*
Jax: Dang! Those girls can cry!
Natalie: One of them is crying over your best firend.
Jax: what jordan broke up with Bridgette??? I haven't seen him for awhile.
Rochelle: Jordan got votted off.
jAX: wait what???
Trent: yeah man! They came in here and told us.
Jax: wow! Why wasn't I here?
Ezekiel: I think he went to the restroom eh.
Jax: Maby.
Chris: hellow finle 10 conpesters. Befor i say where we are going next please go in the cnfessional room and say something about you being in the finle 10. Team Win then team USA!
*confessional*
Ray: *crying* I miss noah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bridgette: *crying* Jordan was so nice!! Why!!!! Jordan i hope your watching this cause I love you!I wiil win for you. ok?
Rayven: I have to be on the same team as those girls. and only 7/10 girls there are only 3 guys. i bet a girl will win again for sure!
Jamie: I was so close to not have making it...... but i got in the finle 10 by cheeting!
*flash back*
Jamie: chris can you make the person with the 2nd most votes get votted off please??
Chris: Jamie i know you don't wanna be votted off, but i c...........
*Jamie holds out 100 dollors*
Chris: where did you get that????
Jamie: I still have it from las vagus. so do you want it???
Chris: fINE YOU WIN!
*flash back over*
*back to confessionals*
Jamie: Like i was saying i would do anything to win.
Ezekiel: Finle 10 eh! This is the farest i ever gone in my life eh! this season rocks!
Natalie: Finle 10???? I didn't think i would make it this far. and i'm even with the guy of my dreams......... TRENT! he's so hot. I'm glad he's in here with me.
Jax: The finle 10 mean that peaple come back. i hope one of them is ether Jordan or Zoey...... Mostly Zoey! sorry Jordan!
Annie: OMG! The finle 10! Team WHO-NEST-EGGS will so win!
Rochelle: *through door* It's USA!
aNNIE: OH!
Rochelle: That annie girl is so dunb. i rather have Lindsay here than her. But i'm not mean. I just want to win. *sigh* hope cody comes back. I miss him. Hi cody! *blows kiss*
*TDA aftermathshow*
Lulu: *gags* cures you Rochelle!!!!!!!!
Cody: hey she's a good friend!
Lulu: she stoll you from me!
CodY: were just firends.
Lulu: then why did you kiss her?
Cody: cause i was missing you and i need someone to kiss me so i wont miss you so much.i love you Lulu!
Lulu: *blushes* hehe! I love you too!
*Plane*
*Back to confessionals*
Trent: Me and Natalie are so tight! But i can't beleave she hates my best bud Justin beiber! I will never forget that! But other than that.............. She's on fire!
*Jordan craws trough confessional window*
Jordan: ok i finshed step 2 get in side plane! Step 3....... hid for 2 epsodes! *looks down in the trash and sees he's bridgette doll* Don't worry Bridgette I will make it.
*over*
Rochelle: Ok we talked in the confessonal happy????
chris: yes yes i am.
Jax: so where are we going today?
Chris: hawii!
Bridgette: *startsing to stop crying* didn't we already go there?
Chris: Yes! but it was a great spot for today's epsode!
Ray: I wonder what today.
Rayven: If you ask that....... your so dead!
*confessional*
Ray: Yeah Rayven is mean, but not all the time.
Rayven: Ray just makes me mad when she ask chris about the challange. I mean she knows chris is going to tell us.
*over*
Annie: This place is so cool!
Natalie: we been here befor. you should recanize it. *looks around* dosent look the same.
Chris: That's because we are on the other side of Hawii! witch brings us to your challang......
Bridgette: are you going to tell us??
Chris: Not yet!
Bridgette: why?
Chris: caus i'm bringing back some people.
Jax: *crosses fingers* please let it be zoey please let it be zoey.
Chris: hellow to............ Aljeandro!
All: WAHT??????
Aljeandro: hellow everyone.
*confessional*
Natalie: He votted off Zoey and changed the votes! he should not be back!
Jax: That guy! I hate him! He should not come back!
*over*
Trent: Please not him!
Ezekiel: Yeah eh.
Alejandro: Hey Annie.
Annie: I might be domb sometimes........ but i'm smart anough not to trust you.
Chris: and welcome................ Jar3d!
Jar3d: hey everyone!
Annie: OMG OMG!!!!!!!! It's Jar3d!!!!!!!1 OMG!!!!! I love you!
Jar3d: Oh my!
*confessional*
Jar3d: When chris asked who wants to come back to all the losers me and alejandro were the first to wase there hands. I tottly forgot about Annie! Goush! I'm so domb!
*over*
Chris: Aljeandro and Jar3d have inevnceabilty til the finle 10!
All but Aljeandro: really??? for alejadnro???
Alejandro: really!
Jar3d: at least i get to stay for awhile!
Annie: yay!!!!!!
Chris: and i have some new people. Meet Draven!
*Drvaen looks hot*
Rayven: wow........
Jamie: he's he's he's.......... HOT!
Annie: wowy! He's hotter than you jar3d.
*confessional*
Jar3d: I don't know if that's a good or bad comment. Is it good???
*over*
Draven: Hey rochelle.
Rochelle: sorry but i have a boyfriend!
Draven: Oh one hotter than me???
Rochelle: yeah...... maby............. NO OK!
*confessional*
Rochelle: sorry cODY! he's just so dreamy! I just want to hug hin and kiss him.......... argggggg!
*over*
DraveN: hey natalie:
Natalie: *blushes* hi.
Trent: Ok back off my girl!
*confessional*
Natalie: I'm he's girl!
*over*
Draven: Hey bridgette!
Bridgette: keep walking.
Draven: you know that Jordan hates you. he was just useing you.
Bridgette: Oh and how do you know that???
Drvaen: watch this.
*tape rolls*
*confessional*
Jordan: Bridgette???? ugly! she's just like...... Ugly! I......... will.......... just......... use her ..... for awhile to win.
*over*
*clip stops*
Bridgette: what????
*confessional*
Bridgette: Oh i should have known! sorry geoff!
*over*
chris: and................ Buddy!
Buddy: Hey! hey hey hey!
all: aaaaaaaaaaaaa...... hey.
Buddy: hey!
Chris: Ok your challange is....................
need christmas ideas and co-writer!!!
Left-Suzie, Right-BRITNEY
Hello everyone. I'm going to rewrite TDR because i don't like how they are adding so many new characters. well anyways since we don't know where TDR will take place i decided to have it take place at a Roller coaster/fair/circus type thing called Mclain Land. The returning cast will be
Heather
Alejandro
Cody
Zeke
Dj
Izzy
Gwen
Tyler
Owen
Trent
Duncan
Bridgette
Geoff
Lindsay
Noah
Sierra
Beth
Courtney
LeShawna
and 2 new "Campers"
also i will need a very good artist to draw pics for this story. so if you can draw (and i mean VERY VERY well then please comment with some of your work) also i might need a few people to come up with some dialgue, so if you like to write comment me about that. And this is not a post your OC thing, and i dont need challenge ideas i already came up with them. Thank you and i would like an artist as soon as possible and i would love it if one of you could get a hold of Escorte on deviantart! THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!
Heather
Alejandro
Cody
Zeke
Dj
Izzy
Gwen
Tyler
Owen
Trent
Duncan
Bridgette
Geoff
Lindsay
Noah
Sierra
Beth
Courtney
LeShawna
and 2 new "Campers"
also i will need a very good artist to draw pics for this story. so if you can draw (and i mean VERY VERY well then please comment with some of your work) also i might need a few people to come up with some dialgue, so if you like to write comment me about that. And this is not a post your OC thing, and i dont need challenge ideas i already came up with them. Thank you and i would like an artist as soon as possible and i would love it if one of you could get a hold of Escorte on deviantart! THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!
I loved Total Drama Island when it first came on "Cartoon Network", I loved how everyone had a unique personality, how Chris was cruel to the campers, and I thought the show had good character and relationship development.
But then, Total Drama Action premered, and I was not that Impressed. Any character development that had occured, was erased from the show all together, The contestants became annoying as hell(especially Geoff and Trent), And all the good couples were destroyed(but I don't like the GwenXTrent couple at all). The Geoff and Bridget couple was just awful, she needs to ditch him and go with DJ, and I thought that "Teletoon" and "Fresh Tv" had decided to get rid of any words like crap and screwed so there wouldn't be so many edits.
I wont even mention the abomonation that is Total Drama World Tour. They shouldn't sing at all. But I will say one thing about the two new contestants, they were created to annoy the hell out of everyone.
But then, Total Drama Action premered, and I was not that Impressed. Any character development that had occured, was erased from the show all together, The contestants became annoying as hell(especially Geoff and Trent), And all the good couples were destroyed(but I don't like the GwenXTrent couple at all). The Geoff and Bridget couple was just awful, she needs to ditch him and go with DJ, and I thought that "Teletoon" and "Fresh Tv" had decided to get rid of any words like crap and screwed so there wouldn't be so many edits.
I wont even mention the abomonation that is Total Drama World Tour. They shouldn't sing at all. But I will say one thing about the two new contestants, they were created to annoy the hell out of everyone.
