Okay, so for some reason this got deleted... I don't quite understand why considering everything that's in this is stuff constantly used on fanpop... anywho...
This is the preview for my new story "Toxic Valentine," staring Duncan, and my oc Stephanie.
This is NOT a story for those who are against swears, sex, drinking and all of the sort, all those will be referenced in here.
I appreciate if criticism and comments were left, but nothing too rude... this is my first OCxTotal Drama Cast Member story. And please remember this is only a preview, so it's really short and kinda crappy...
I really hope you like it :D
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Duncan’s POV
I hear the screeching of my alarm clock, I immediately move my hand over to the snooze button. “Ugh...” I moan.
I remove a leg from the cover of my blankets, and then eventually remove the other; I look up, a lot had happened in the past few months... from moving out, to my issues with Gwen, to learning how to deal with my family, who still hate my guts.
Between Gwen and the cops, I had way too much to deal with... they weren’t really cool with Gwen and my stunt last summer, apparently almost having sex in the mayor’s pool is against the law. It’s been around a year now and the cops are still on our trail.
As for parents, I haven’t been on the approved list yet. Gwen’s mom hates me and constantly reminds Gwen that Trent was a lot nicer and cleaner and all that shit, and then my own parents have been reconsidering sending me to prison... I guess I kind of deserve it after I made our neighbour’s kitchen explode after mixing something into their food...
And Gwen, she has been a pain in my ass lately, not Courtney or Heather pain in the ass, but still a pain in the ass. She’s been less fun and has been avoiding me; maybe I fucked things up for us.
As for this summer, the only good thing that has come out of it is getting my own place, my parents pay for it, and they just don’t want me around them. They even got rid of all my stuff just because they don’t want any prove that I’m their son.
Dammit, this sucks...
I hear my phone buzz, I reach out and grab it, and I read the text;
Hey man! Bridge and I are heading to the pool, you wanna come? Invite Gwen if you want.
“Geoff,” I say. I text back, “I’ll come,”
I only want to go to get a little piece of eye-candy, Geoff and Bridge will spend all the time making-out in the pool anyway. Who knows... maybe the solution to my problems is waiting for me there...?
So there's my crappy story preview ;P leave any comments!
This is the preview for my new story "Toxic Valentine," staring Duncan, and my oc Stephanie.
This is NOT a story for those who are against swears, sex, drinking and all of the sort, all those will be referenced in here.
I appreciate if criticism and comments were left, but nothing too rude... this is my first OCxTotal Drama Cast Member story. And please remember this is only a preview, so it's really short and kinda crappy...
I really hope you like it :D
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Duncan’s POV
I hear the screeching of my alarm clock, I immediately move my hand over to the snooze button. “Ugh...” I moan.
I remove a leg from the cover of my blankets, and then eventually remove the other; I look up, a lot had happened in the past few months... from moving out, to my issues with Gwen, to learning how to deal with my family, who still hate my guts.
Between Gwen and the cops, I had way too much to deal with... they weren’t really cool with Gwen and my stunt last summer, apparently almost having sex in the mayor’s pool is against the law. It’s been around a year now and the cops are still on our trail.
As for parents, I haven’t been on the approved list yet. Gwen’s mom hates me and constantly reminds Gwen that Trent was a lot nicer and cleaner and all that shit, and then my own parents have been reconsidering sending me to prison... I guess I kind of deserve it after I made our neighbour’s kitchen explode after mixing something into their food...
And Gwen, she has been a pain in my ass lately, not Courtney or Heather pain in the ass, but still a pain in the ass. She’s been less fun and has been avoiding me; maybe I fucked things up for us.
As for this summer, the only good thing that has come out of it is getting my own place, my parents pay for it, and they just don’t want me around them. They even got rid of all my stuff just because they don’t want any prove that I’m their son.
Dammit, this sucks...
I hear my phone buzz, I reach out and grab it, and I read the text;
Hey man! Bridge and I are heading to the pool, you wanna come? Invite Gwen if you want.
“Geoff,” I say. I text back, “I’ll come,”
I only want to go to get a little piece of eye-candy, Geoff and Bridge will spend all the time making-out in the pool anyway. Who knows... maybe the solution to my problems is waiting for me there...?
So there's my crappy story preview ;P leave any comments!
sierra and mike tried to go different ways but they could not make up there minds and who is going were.
Mike: No you go first
Sierra: No you
and they want on and on. Well up at the flags were Dakota and heather.
heather: Im going to win this
Dakota: good luck
And then heather jumped on Dakota and they were fighting and sam ran up and took a flag and was the first do finish. Now thats go back to Sierra and Mike.
Sierra:*falls onto Mike* oh sorry for tha..she stop
Mike: *Stop her with a kiss* i dont mind :)
Then chef came and hit Sierra in the back with a paint ball and Mike in the forehead.
Mike: owwww!!! that hurt
Chef: your out, go and sit over there with the other luv people
Sierra: CODY!!!!! is my CODY OVER THERE!!!
Chef: yes,yes he is
Sierra:* walk to the place were they were sitting* that red head stole my CODY-KINS she is so dead!!
more ideas plz i need more :)
Mike: No you go first
Sierra: No you
and they want on and on. Well up at the flags were Dakota and heather.
heather: Im going to win this
Dakota: good luck
And then heather jumped on Dakota and they were fighting and sam ran up and took a flag and was the first do finish. Now thats go back to Sierra and Mike.
Sierra:*falls onto Mike* oh sorry for tha..she stop
Mike: *Stop her with a kiss* i dont mind :)
Then chef came and hit Sierra in the back with a paint ball and Mike in the forehead.
Mike: owwww!!! that hurt
Chef: your out, go and sit over there with the other luv people
Sierra: CODY!!!!! is my CODY OVER THERE!!!
Chef: yes,yes he is
Sierra:* walk to the place were they were sitting* that red head stole my CODY-KINS she is so dead!!
more ideas plz i need more :)
ok so lets start :)
Sierra: CODY!! CODY!! were did you go! she yelled
Sierra ran over to cody and zoey.
Sierra: come on cody-kins lets go win this.
Zoey: wait!
Sierra: what now red!
Zoey: me and Cody are out we got hit with a paint ball
Sierra: oh.......ok and cody do not talk to that girl
Zoey: i have a name you know.
Sierra: who cares.
and then they walked off Zoey and Cody were not the only ones out Dawn and Noah were there to.
Zoey: how did you guys get paint balled
Noah: we were making out behind a tree
Dawn: what about you
Zoey: we were going to kiss and then we get paint balled
Cody: umm Zoey do you still....
Zoey stop cody with a kiss. "happy" she said.
Sierra ran into mike on the way to get a flag and i mean ran into each other.
Mike: oh sorry i didn't see you there *said rubbing his head*
Sierra: *stared into Mikes eyes* you have pretty eyes, i i i mean ok its ok.
What will happen to Sierra and mike in part 5 plz need more ideas :)
Sierra: CODY!! CODY!! were did you go! she yelled
Sierra ran over to cody and zoey.
Sierra: come on cody-kins lets go win this.
Zoey: wait!
Sierra: what now red!
Zoey: me and Cody are out we got hit with a paint ball
Sierra: oh.......ok and cody do not talk to that girl
Zoey: i have a name you know.
Sierra: who cares.
and then they walked off Zoey and Cody were not the only ones out Dawn and Noah were there to.
Zoey: how did you guys get paint balled
Noah: we were making out behind a tree
Dawn: what about you
Zoey: we were going to kiss and then we get paint balled
Cody: umm Zoey do you still....
Zoey stop cody with a kiss. "happy" she said.
Sierra ran into mike on the way to get a flag and i mean ran into each other.
Mike: oh sorry i didn't see you there *said rubbing his head*
Sierra: *stared into Mikes eyes* you have pretty eyes, i i i mean ok its ok.
What will happen to Sierra and mike in part 5 plz need more ideas :)
so were we left off Sierra was yell at Cody for winking at Zoey so thats see what happens.
Sierra: * rans over to zoey and smaks her face*
Zoey: what was that for!
Sierra: well you are flirting with my Cody-kins!!
Zoey: I was not Cody was!
So lets just leave them a lone for right now. Well the campers see its not really a race, there were people making out (Bridgett and jeff) and holding hands and talking so really its just a get to you people.
When Sierra and zoey were done fighting Sierra forgot Cody (thats a first) and mike well i think hes lost.
Cody:*walks up to Zoey* Sorry about Sierra she thinks she is going to marry me.
Zoey: I can see that she said holding her arm
they leaned in to kiss but then chef came and got Cody in the head with a paint ball and Zoey in the are.
Chef: YOUR OUT
Cody and Zoey said at the same time "WHAT"!
what will happen next :)
Sierra: * rans over to zoey and smaks her face*
Zoey: what was that for!
Sierra: well you are flirting with my Cody-kins!!
Zoey: I was not Cody was!
So lets just leave them a lone for right now. Well the campers see its not really a race, there were people making out (Bridgett and jeff) and holding hands and talking so really its just a get to you people.
When Sierra and zoey were done fighting Sierra forgot Cody (thats a first) and mike well i think hes lost.
Cody:*walks up to Zoey* Sorry about Sierra she thinks she is going to marry me.
Zoey: I can see that she said holding her arm
they leaned in to kiss but then chef came and got Cody in the head with a paint ball and Zoey in the are.
Chef: YOUR OUT
Cody and Zoey said at the same time "WHAT"!
what will happen next :)
ok so this one has 2 parts 2 it and ya so hope you like.
Chris:Noah there are no team in this ok
Noah: fine
Chris: ok so your challenge is to go to the other side of the island and get a flag,if you come back with a flag you can not get voted off,and just so you know there are only 15 flags oh and watch out for chef he has a paint ball gun and you dont want to get hit by that, and GO!!
All the players were off and Noah and Dawn stop to talk.
Dawn: you really wanted to be on my team.
Noah: umm ya a bit
Dawn:*she kissed him on the cheek* Good luck you will need it.
Noah:*he blushed* you too
Now lets go up to zoey and mike well lets just say mike 'fall' into a puddle. Sierra was looking at Cody the hole time and seen him wink at zoey.
Sierra:*she stopped Cody* DID you JUST WINK AT THE RED HEAD!!!
Cody: no......ummmm yes
Find out what will happen tomorrow dadadaaaa :)
Chris:Noah there are no team in this ok
Noah: fine
Chris: ok so your challenge is to go to the other side of the island and get a flag,if you come back with a flag you can not get voted off,and just so you know there are only 15 flags oh and watch out for chef he has a paint ball gun and you dont want to get hit by that, and GO!!
All the players were off and Noah and Dawn stop to talk.
Dawn: you really wanted to be on my team.
Noah: umm ya a bit
Dawn:*she kissed him on the cheek* Good luck you will need it.
Noah:*he blushed* you too
Now lets go up to zoey and mike well lets just say mike 'fall' into a puddle. Sierra was looking at Cody the hole time and seen him wink at zoey.
Sierra:*she stopped Cody* DID you JUST WINK AT THE RED HEAD!!!
Cody: no......ummmm yes
Find out what will happen tomorrow dadadaaaa :)
so we last seen the cast meeting each other so lets continue.
Dawn:*walks up to Noah* Hi im Dawn
Noah:*mouth open wide* h h hi i im N nnnNoah he said luv struck
Dakota:*walks up to Heather* hi im Dakota
Heather: what ever.......im heather
Dakota: Sam were did you go this time*ran of to find Sam
Heather turned around and said to everyone "ok the people here are really weird"
Sierra: I hope the red head does not take my cody-kins*she said hugging Cody vary hard his face turned red
Cody:why would you say that...and can you let me go i cant breath
Sierra: oh sorry bunny face
Chris walks up to the campers and announced " time for the first challenge"
Noah yells " I want to be on Dawns team" everyone look at him he just blushed and so did dawn.
Need more ideas so plz plz plzzzz comment :)
Dawn:*walks up to Noah* Hi im Dawn
Noah:*mouth open wide* h h hi i im N nnnNoah he said luv struck
Dakota:*walks up to Heather* hi im Dakota
Heather: what ever.......im heather
Dakota: Sam were did you go this time*ran of to find Sam
Heather turned around and said to everyone "ok the people here are really weird"
Sierra: I hope the red head does not take my cody-kins*she said hugging Cody vary hard his face turned red
Cody:why would you say that...and can you let me go i cant breath
Sierra: oh sorry bunny face
Chris walks up to the campers and announced " time for the first challenge"
Noah yells " I want to be on Dawns team" everyone look at him he just blushed and so did dawn.
Need more ideas so plz plz plzzzz comment :)