Okay, so for some reason this got deleted... I don't quite understand why considering everything that's in this is stuff constantly used on fanpop... anywho...
This is the preview for my new story "Toxic Valentine," staring Duncan, and my oc Stephanie.
This is NOT a story for those who are against swears, sex, drinking and all of the sort, all those will be referenced in here.
I appreciate if criticism and comments were left, but nothing too rude... this is my first OCxTotal Drama Cast Member story. And please remember this is only a preview, so it's really short and kinda crappy...
I really hope you like it :D
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Duncan’s POV
I hear the screeching of my alarm clock, I immediately move my hand over to the snooze button. “Ugh...” I moan.
I remove a leg from the cover of my blankets, and then eventually remove the other; I look up, a lot had happened in the past few months... from moving out, to my issues with Gwen, to learning how to deal with my family, who still hate my guts.
Between Gwen and the cops, I had way too much to deal with... they weren’t really cool with Gwen and my stunt last summer, apparently almost having sex in the mayor’s pool is against the law. It’s been around a year now and the cops are still on our trail.
As for parents, I haven’t been on the approved list yet. Gwen’s mom hates me and constantly reminds Gwen that Trent was a lot nicer and cleaner and all that shit, and then my own parents have been reconsidering sending me to prison... I guess I kind of deserve it after I made our neighbour’s kitchen explode after mixing something into their food...
And Gwen, she has been a pain in my ass lately, not Courtney or Heather pain in the ass, but still a pain in the ass. She’s been less fun and has been avoiding me; maybe I fucked things up for us.
As for this summer, the only good thing that has come out of it is getting my own place, my parents pay for it, and they just don’t want me around them. They even got rid of all my stuff just because they don’t want any prove that I’m their son.
Dammit, this sucks...
I hear my phone buzz, I reach out and grab it, and I read the text;
Hey man! Bridge and I are heading to the pool, you wanna come? Invite Gwen if you want.
“Geoff,” I say. I text back, “I’ll come,”
I only want to go to get a little piece of eye-candy, Geoff and Bridge will spend all the time making-out in the pool anyway. Who knows... maybe the solution to my problems is waiting for me there...?
So there's my crappy story preview ;P leave any comments!
This is the preview for my new story "Toxic Valentine," staring Duncan, and my oc Stephanie.
This is NOT a story for those who are against swears, sex, drinking and all of the sort, all those will be referenced in here.
I appreciate if criticism and comments were left, but nothing too rude... this is my first OCxTotal Drama Cast Member story. And please remember this is only a preview, so it's really short and kinda crappy...
I really hope you like it :D
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Duncan’s POV
I hear the screeching of my alarm clock, I immediately move my hand over to the snooze button. “Ugh...” I moan.
I remove a leg from the cover of my blankets, and then eventually remove the other; I look up, a lot had happened in the past few months... from moving out, to my issues with Gwen, to learning how to deal with my family, who still hate my guts.
Between Gwen and the cops, I had way too much to deal with... they weren’t really cool with Gwen and my stunt last summer, apparently almost having sex in the mayor’s pool is against the law. It’s been around a year now and the cops are still on our trail.
As for parents, I haven’t been on the approved list yet. Gwen’s mom hates me and constantly reminds Gwen that Trent was a lot nicer and cleaner and all that shit, and then my own parents have been reconsidering sending me to prison... I guess I kind of deserve it after I made our neighbour’s kitchen explode after mixing something into their food...
And Gwen, she has been a pain in my ass lately, not Courtney or Heather pain in the ass, but still a pain in the ass. She’s been less fun and has been avoiding me; maybe I fucked things up for us.
As for this summer, the only good thing that has come out of it is getting my own place, my parents pay for it, and they just don’t want me around them. They even got rid of all my stuff just because they don’t want any prove that I’m their son.
Dammit, this sucks...
I hear my phone buzz, I reach out and grab it, and I read the text;
Hey man! Bridge and I are heading to the pool, you wanna come? Invite Gwen if you want.
“Geoff,” I say. I text back, “I’ll come,”
I only want to go to get a little piece of eye-candy, Geoff and Bridge will spend all the time making-out in the pool anyway. Who knows... maybe the solution to my problems is waiting for me there...?
So there's my crappy story preview ;P leave any comments!
im sorry guys for the article i put up yesterday! its just i was having a meltdown and i didnt know what to do! as soon as i calmed down i realized wat i did was a bad thing! i am still mad at roman but not NEARLY as much as before! we figured out the problem and where ok now. but i feel so terrible for wat i did and i shouldn't hav posted it! I know i insulted some people so if i did and u r reading this please comment telling me what i said and i will give u props for putting up with me! im sorry guys!
ok. i know this is not a story, but i have somethings to say. IM SORRY!!!!! i've been a real bitch. i post hate comments and put retarted comments on peoples art-things. i thought i was the most funnyist thing ever. But i have been looking at the comments i had made. I always woundered why people juge me. Now i know. SO, from now on i promies not to be creepy and annoying. But the person i really have to say sorry to is Sumerjoy11, im sorry for being anoying and for my brother dunkney. i lied to you people saying he was'nt my brother. but he is. i didn't want people hating me becaues of him. sigh............im depressed now... -_-
Zanna:welcome back there are four remaining campers and lets see what there up to
Gabby:MY JACK!!!!!!!
Isabella:MY ZACK!!!!!!!!!
Hadar:Girls i know im sorry i dont know about you guys but imma find out why zack was acting so strange
Hadar thought hard "Who hates isabella bad enough to get her boyfriend to act this way aha!"
runs off
Hadar:camielle!!!!!!
Camielle:U called
hadar:Cut the crap i know u did it
Camielle:Did what?
Hadar:So u didn't tell Zack that dating Isabella that messed up his mojo
Camielle:How did u find out
Hadar:I am one smart cookie and u will be voted off!
Camielle;AWWWW Hadar mad cuz she has no one i don't know if u forgot but my boyfriend is a UFC world champion
Hadar:Well im a black belt in Karate Ti kwon doh and Kong-fu
Camielle:Does a weird karate pose
Hadar:punches her in the face
camielle is knocked out cold
Zanna:Well i guess we all know who is goin home Camielle
They carry her to the boat
Gabby:MY JACK!!!!!!!
Isabella:MY ZACK!!!!!!!!!
Hadar:Girls i know im sorry i dont know about you guys but imma find out why zack was acting so strange
Hadar thought hard "Who hates isabella bad enough to get her boyfriend to act this way aha!"
runs off
Hadar:camielle!!!!!!
Camielle:U called
hadar:Cut the crap i know u did it
Camielle:Did what?
Hadar:So u didn't tell Zack that dating Isabella that messed up his mojo
Camielle:How did u find out
Hadar:I am one smart cookie and u will be voted off!
Camielle;AWWWW Hadar mad cuz she has no one i don't know if u forgot but my boyfriend is a UFC world champion
Hadar:Well im a black belt in Karate Ti kwon doh and Kong-fu
Camielle:Does a weird karate pose
Hadar:punches her in the face
camielle is knocked out cold
Zanna:Well i guess we all know who is goin home Camielle
They carry her to the boat
H: Bye Gwen!
G: Bye, i see you soon *laugs*
H: *confused* Ok *Leaves* *enters cafe*
H: *sees Alejandro**lovely:*Hiiiiiiii
*Alejandro sees heather*
A: Hiiiiii
A: You look pretty!
H: You to!
*Same moment by gwen and duncan*
G: *Calls duncan* Hiii
D: Hi
G: Come here No questions please!
D: Ok!
*duncan comes in*
D: Where is the fire! *looks around*
G: There is no fire, silly!, Al and heather are on a date right NOW!
D: and?
G: I want to see it!
D: so!
G: do you want to go on a dinner with me? *laugs*
D: Sure!! *looks extremely happy*
G: Ok *walks with duncan to the cafe*
H: Do you know alejandro i love you!
A: Because i love you to You can call me Al!
H: Alright, Al, I luv we can be alone for a minute!
A: were not alone *looks to the right sees duncan and gwen*
G&d: * waves to al and heather*
*later on the night*
G&H: Where going home bye!
D: *kiss gwen*
A: *Kiss heather*
*G&H leaves*
D: Aah Gwen
A: Aah Heather
G: Bye, i see you soon *laugs*
H: *confused* Ok *Leaves* *enters cafe*
H: *sees Alejandro**lovely:*Hiiiiiiii
*Alejandro sees heather*
A: Hiiiiii
A: You look pretty!
H: You to!
*Same moment by gwen and duncan*
G: *Calls duncan* Hiii
D: Hi
G: Come here No questions please!
D: Ok!
*duncan comes in*
D: Where is the fire! *looks around*
G: There is no fire, silly!, Al and heather are on a date right NOW!
D: and?
G: I want to see it!
D: so!
G: do you want to go on a dinner with me? *laugs*
D: Sure!! *looks extremely happy*
G: Ok *walks with duncan to the cafe*
H: Do you know alejandro i love you!
A: Because i love you to You can call me Al!
H: Alright, Al, I luv we can be alone for a minute!
A: were not alone *looks to the right sees duncan and gwen*
G&d: * waves to al and heather*
*later on the night*
G&H: Where going home bye!
D: *kiss gwen*
A: *Kiss heather*
*G&H leaves*
D: Aah Gwen
A: Aah Heather