(This is my first attempt at writing a book from a 1st person POV, so I'm writing from Cyber's.)
It was a normal day. Really. It was. I was outside training, and I could tell Alpha was working hard inside, because I could hear Topaz crying and I could smell dinner cooking. However, this day was going to turn out...different. I could just feel it...
I walked into the house after training for about 2 hours.
"Train hard enough out there, dear?" Alpha had asked me with a smile.
"I guess so, but something just feels...off. Like, something's gonna be different about today..." I replied. "What do you mean?" Alpha asked worriedly, setting my dinner in front of me. "I just...don't think today's gonna go like we planned..." I replied with a sigh. As I said that, Topaz's crying instantly stopped, as if something had, I dunno, hurt her or something. I looked up at Alpha, and she ran over to Topaz's crib. Shortly after, I heard a loud scream. I rushed up to see what was wrong, and I saw a black fog enveloping them both. "Alpha!!" I exclaimed worriedly, reaching out my hand to help her.
But......
But what?
But I was too late...she was gone...
"A-Alpha!!!!" I shouted in terror, unable to believe I had just lost her AND my daughter. Looking around for a way to find them, the black fog stumbled upon me and began to speak...
"So, those girlsssssssss we took from here mean ssssssssomething to you, Echidna of Wind?" the fog had asked me. "Where did you take them?!" I asked angrily. "If you calm down, we will take you to them..." the fog had replied, beginning to make me feel dizzy...
Then...blacked out. I can't remember much of anything until later than that.
Oh. What's the next thing you remember?
Well...
I had awoken in a strange world, near a city. Rather than being a cold Mobian winter, this was a pleasant Alien spring...a light breeze blew a paper towards me...I think it said "ELEMENTANIAN WEEKLY: EF Gang Charity Concert Big Hit!!!!!!"...I had no idea where I was, or how I'd gotten there, or for what purpose...I just knew I had to find Alpha and Topaz, and I had to do it fast...
It was a normal day. Really. It was. I was outside training, and I could tell Alpha was working hard inside, because I could hear Topaz crying and I could smell dinner cooking. However, this day was going to turn out...different. I could just feel it...
I walked into the house after training for about 2 hours.
"Train hard enough out there, dear?" Alpha had asked me with a smile.
"I guess so, but something just feels...off. Like, something's gonna be different about today..." I replied. "What do you mean?" Alpha asked worriedly, setting my dinner in front of me. "I just...don't think today's gonna go like we planned..." I replied with a sigh. As I said that, Topaz's crying instantly stopped, as if something had, I dunno, hurt her or something. I looked up at Alpha, and she ran over to Topaz's crib. Shortly after, I heard a loud scream. I rushed up to see what was wrong, and I saw a black fog enveloping them both. "Alpha!!" I exclaimed worriedly, reaching out my hand to help her.
But......
But what?
But I was too late...she was gone...
"A-Alpha!!!!" I shouted in terror, unable to believe I had just lost her AND my daughter. Looking around for a way to find them, the black fog stumbled upon me and began to speak...
"So, those girlsssssssss we took from here mean ssssssssomething to you, Echidna of Wind?" the fog had asked me. "Where did you take them?!" I asked angrily. "If you calm down, we will take you to them..." the fog had replied, beginning to make me feel dizzy...
Then...blacked out. I can't remember much of anything until later than that.
Oh. What's the next thing you remember?
Well...
I had awoken in a strange world, near a city. Rather than being a cold Mobian winter, this was a pleasant Alien spring...a light breeze blew a paper towards me...I think it said "ELEMENTANIAN WEEKLY: EF Gang Charity Concert Big Hit!!!!!!"...I had no idea where I was, or how I'd gotten there, or for what purpose...I just knew I had to find Alpha and Topaz, and I had to do it fast...
Age: 16
Worst Enemy: Shadow the Hedgehog (her ex)
Powers: Super speed, martial arts
Looks: Like picture
Story: Azealia gets kidnapped by an unnamed creature (to be revealed) and has tests done to enhance her skills. The tests were done to turn her into a super weapon that could help the creatures win in the war. She escapes there clutches but was left with a burning scar on her left shoulder. When she escapes she meets Shadow the Hedgehog. They soon date but break up soon after when Shadow betrays her and gives her away to the enemies.
Age:18
Gender:Female
Animal:Hedghog
Favs
Song:Get On The Floor
Color:Hot pink
Flavor:Strawberries
Adictions
Drugs?:Always.
Smokeing?:Yup.
Other:Yup.
Hates:
People who tell her what to do.
Books.
The smell of failure on herself
Fav sayings:
Treat others the way you DON'T want to be treated.
Talents
Picking locks.
Escapeing from jail without anyone knowing for months.
Singing.
What to do for free time:
-.- Get drunk.
Sleep.
Insult books.
Insult people.
Hangout with friends...Or random people she dosn't know.
Other:She is just about always drunk.Also you can never really stop getting in trouble.
It's short but it should give some ideas:
After all of the fighting, struggles, sadness and misery; they're all but torn apart...They tried to make everything right and make everyone happy...But it ended so badly...They never thought it would end like this...The dream's all but a faint, non-existant memory...~
I hope it gives you a thought on how it'll be. I'm going to try my best to make it worth your time to read it. Oh and may I ask if the title sounded good? Once again; any questions, comments or concerns?
After all of the fighting, struggles, sadness and misery; they're all but torn apart...They tried to make everything right and make everyone happy...But it ended so badly...They never thought it would end like this...The dream's all but a faint, non-existant memory...~
I hope it gives you a thought on how it'll be. I'm going to try my best to make it worth your time to read it. Oh and may I ask if the title sounded good? Once again; any questions, comments or concerns?