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{this story has been copied off of almost every GOOD movie and book ever}
plz read chapt 1-23 before reading this

she was so beautiful. her beauty made me question my sexuality...not really..but u know what i mean. now i see where Rane get her beautifulness from. the duchess looked at us for a while then asked "Rane?"
Rane with tears in her eyes ran to her mother. misery whispered to me "what a touching mother-daughter moment" it was indeed touching. the duchess lead us into the dining hall and gave us fruits and stuff that i have never seen before. then the duchess asked "So children while have u came?" then i said "u see by on earth Valice has locked us up and wont believe Rane is his daughter so we were wondering if u could help us" then she said "ah yes indeed i can help u i sorta already knew the problem since i have been watching u children" then she took off her really super duper pretty amulet and gave it too Rane then she said "this will help your father remember its the locker he gave to me and i understand u r having a hard time controlling your "dark side" well this amulet with keep it at bay" then rane uttered a "yes mother" then Tomorrow's ear started twitching and then he said "um girls my mother is calling she wanted to see u" i was surprised the queen of heaven the goddess of every single freakin thing, Forever, wanted to meet us so then after Rane giving the duchess one last hug, Tomorrow snapped his fingers and we were magically transported to a castle made entirely out of silver and diamonds more pretty than the duchess house and her beauty mixed together we were in the throne room it seemed full of mist or smoke that smelled of lavender and mint
Tomorrow lead us down the hall them kneed in front on the figure that sat in the throne a hedgehog looking woman/animal with large glassy like wings and white hair/fur with a white long dress with diamonds and other gems sew into it she wore a mask so u could not see her face it was either white or blue u couldnt tell for it kept swirling and changing color and it had one diamond shaped eye hole for her left eye and a royal blue sapphire in the middle of the forehead in the shape of a rose. we bowed before like tomorrow. then Yesterday came out from behind the throne "see mother these r the girls i told u bout they r special arent they" she said then Forever rose and came to us she seem to walk but glide us barely above the sparkly marble floor "u girls have traveled from one half of te country to the other and when to the other side u r indeed beyond the normal mortal i see in your futures a great battle of dark and light and the goodness and terribleness within for your bravery of going beyond the beyond i shall aid u. sooner or later i am going to die my days r numbered so i shall do wat i can to aid u" she stop in front of Rane "since i have no mortal form on earth i shall come with in u in a mortal object form" and she lifted Ranes amulet "rane the Cat i have chosen u to b the next Goddess of all and Queen of heaven" and with that she became a bit tranparent and was sucked into ranes amulet then the clouds under us disappeared and we fell but just before we were out out site we saw Yesterday and Tomorrow wave to us..... then we woke up in the prison
Evolia Headshot
Evolia Headshot
((The following is a new Bio for Evolia, my 'sona, I'm working on. I feel like I repeat information here, and I also feel I used the comma too much.
If you're up to being a critique: DO NOT HOLD BACK. I need some order to my chaos here. Evolia's personality is going to be rewired (and posted here too) and her design as well. I'm trying to be more realistic now and make her original as possible. At least to my standards.))

Evolia only remembers from early childhood to start of her pre-teen years through an outsider's perspective. As if her, or someone else's, life between those two points have...
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Gang Days

Introduction

The group was called “Heavy Metal”; a gang that was mainly in the state Supircor , in the country Supreta, the planet being Mobocan. Supreta was not a very nice country. The only good thing about it was the lack of laws. However the laws they did have were brutally enforced. Especially in cities like Elnoc, Rimro, and Semretches.

There were the main laws, don’t steal, pay taxes, no murdering, etc. Then there were laws against trading with foreign countries, especially the country’s rival, Gei Si Heir. The most well-known law however was the prejudice-based outlawing...
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posted by TakTheFox
Chapter Five

“Ah, victory is sweet.” Grace announced triumphantly from a game of air-hockey. She had just once again beaten Dave. Rynk was watching and refused to play due to fearing either losing too much, or getting too aggressive.

“Are you sure you don’t want to play, Rynk?” Dave pleaded. “My ego can’t take much more of this.”

Rynk shot a glance to Dave, then to Grace, then back to Dave again. “Okay” she sighed while shrugging, “but I don’t blame me if I end up making the puck hit the window or something. Who am I playing against?”

“Gr-“

“Him!” Grace interrupted,...
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posted by RawrMonster123
"Oh, Asher? I know him," Dave said.

"Me, too," Echo added.

"Where do you think he is right now?" Casey asked.

"Probably his job. He works in a skyscraper over there," Dave replied while pointing at a group of skyscrapers that were in the city a couple of miles away from them.

Casey nodded and then started driving towards the city.

When they got there, Casey got out of the car and walked into the building.

As soon as she got in, she went up to the secretary. "Hello," the secretary greeted. "How may I help you?"

"Um.. Yes... I'm looking for Asher Burns?" Casey requested.

"Oh, you mean Asentzio. He's...
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posted by Lancelot8
Okay, the characters Henry, Snow, Vlad, and D'Ablo originally belong to Heather Brewer. I take no credit for them.


"I could use a little help here, Ultimate!" I yelled.
___"Kind of busy right now!!" he yelled back.
___If you're wondering, we're kind of in a fight for our lives.
___"Vladimir, Ultimate, give up now! There's no point in resisting!"
___And now I was pissed. I believe my friends were too.
___"You can't win! You'll never win!"
___The creature he sent to kill us was huge. It had about a million spikes on its head. The stench that came off it was almost unbearable. Its claws were about the...
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posted by FrizTHedgehog
Ahem, Hello people.
I am Darkness and what you've heard of me is all wrong,all a lie. So what is the lie you may ask, Well my good "friend" Friz says that I am a defective clone made in his image by........*sigh*..Dr.Eggman (sad excuse Friz, very very sad)

So, why don't I tell you the real story, the clone part is right though. A long long time ago in a Lab in a Mansion, Friz was trying to clone himself, so he could put his mind into a clone when he died, but something was wrong, the clone wouldn't come alive, he tried everything from Electricity to poking it with a stick, nothing worked. However,...
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"So you change and I'll do my hair," Casey said to Jenny after she ended the call with Kyle.

Jenny nodded in agreement, then walked into the closet as Casey ran out and got her toothbrush, toothpaste, and brush. She then ran to go into the bathroom across the college girl dorm's hall.

As soon as Casey got into the bathroom she went in front of the mirror and the sink. She put some toothpaste on her toothbrush without even wetting it. She started brushing her teeth after that.

After brushing her teeth she began to brush her hair to make it laid down rather than the bed-head look.

Jenny ran into...
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posted by Mapware3640
"The geno war was a pretty gruesome war for mobius,thousands of soldiers attempted to take over mobius,however the hero of legend put a stop to them and defeated the evil king...but this story does not focus on the hero...After the resulting end o the war thousands of scraps from geno's ship basically flew all over the place...including certain mechs,robots,and other machinery,Now usually most are either destroyed beyond believe or utterly damaged...but one survived."

-Time:Morning
-Date:???
-Location:Impact site outside the borders of clockwork city

A robot that landed in the border of clockwork...
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three more to go...but there will be many perils on the road ahead of you.Ⓧ

MTL walked deeper into the pit until he reached a sewer,progressing in MTL saw many corpse mutilated and being eaten by sewer rats(non-mobian),some of the corpses have strange symbols carved into there flesh,the symbols are circles with "X"s in them(Ⓧ),but suddenly,the slenderfox reappeared,it came flying at MTL,having little to no reaction time,MTL reached in his pocket for note...but the slenderfox grabbed MTL by the hear,he reverted to watch form and whited out...MTL then woke up shortly later,back in the same...
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"TERESA, WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING?" Oh hey, it's Natsumi! I always liked Natsumi, she was always happy, well except for right now. "Forgive my language, but what do you think you're doing?" "I'm motivating people!" She looked confused, then she just sighed. "Going into the middle of a street with a stop sign that says the word 'don't' on it isn't exactly the best way to motivate people." What? I didn't see the problem. It was my trusty sign. Just like a stop sign, except it said 'Don't stop!' on it. Hey, there goes another car! "HEY YOU! DON'T STOP!" I shouted. Natsumi pulled me aside, "Are...
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My RP rules and suggestions

Allo,

So I’ve noticed some, not too much but some, things that people seem to not do in an rp that kinda make things hard. So Imma list em.

The suggestions,
These are just suggestions (no duh X{D) as if to say you don’t HAVE to do this, but could you please?

1.    READ THE DESCRIPTION!
I’ve noticed that in a lot of roleplays I’ve made, people just read the title. I recently made one that makes it VERY important that you read the description because it had two types of approaches depending on certain characters you had, but certain people just...
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Gary and Sue make too much Stew

Note: I will be naming both Mary-Sues and Gary-stues as Gay-stues for the purpose of saving time, unless I am specifically naming one or the other.

What is a Gary-Stu?
A character who
A.    has too much power or skill
B.    All the answers
C.    Always gets their way
D.    Never loses
E.    And usually bases on a Cannon-Character with added powers and looks.
F.    Is TOO attractive
G.    No weakness
Problems?

Each of these has something...
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posted by RawrMonster123
Pick the theme of the RP

What not to do
Answer: Roleplay?
Details: [None]

What to do
Answer: High School RP
[/u]Details:[/u] Your FC is walking in school when they see.....

Why do this
It actually gives the RPer something to actually reply to. Speaking of that...

Do NOT do the following...
Answer:Your FC sees Mary and Sue playing hopscotch.

Why not do this
WHAT THE HULU IS THE RPER GOING TO DO?!? -.-" Instead, as they play hopscotch, make something dramatic happen.

Add some action/drama

What not to do
Answer: Mary Sue explode your FC. What do they do?

What to do
Perfect examples are the popular RPs.

Why do this...
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posted by Giz_4ever
Fly on the wings of love
Fly baby fly
Reaching the stars above
Touching the sky

In the summer night
When the moon shines bright
Feeling love forever
And the heat is on
When the daylight is gone
Still - happy together

There is just one more thing I would like to add
She is the greatest love I've ever had

Fly on the wings of love
Fly baby fly
Reaching the stars above
Touching the sky

And as time goes by
There is a lot to try
And I'm feeling lucky ooo yea
In the softest sand
Smiling hand in hand
Love is all around me

There's just one more thing I would like to add
She is the greatest love I've ever had

Fly on the wings of love
Fly baby fly
Reaching the stars above
Touching the sky.
posted by ShadowWolf337
Blood's Past
Chapter Five
West Returns home
A Week Later...
Miles and Zoey are asleep when there is a knock at the door. Erica walks to the door and opens it "West your home! "Where are the kids?"
"Asleep why"
"I need to tell you something about Miles"
Miles wakes up and went to get a cup of water then he heard the conversation so he started eavesdroping.
"One of the Doctors told me about Miles blood work, he has a trace of chaos power"
"As in chaos emerald power?"
"Yes... he has powers others can only dream of"
"Miles, our son, is a living chaos emerald"
"basically, yes i know this is a lot to take in so lets go get some sleep"
Miles hurried into his room and acted like he was sleeping. West walks to Miles room"I know your not sleeping Miles" Miles sits up in his bed "Is it true dad?"
"Yes, you do have special powers son but the question is what will you do with them?"
posted by TakTheFox
An Encounter with Slender
By Trisell Chronos

Not one, but two identities, one a male offspring-identity, and the other a female offspring –identity, sat together in what was meant to become a romantic evening, at 6:34 P.M. They were on Mobius-Zone-221, driving to the Mercian Lake.

The boy, Jep, was sixteen, and spending his birthday week with his girlfriend. This was always a special day for Identities, because on their sixteenth birthday they enter their evolutionary-state of which they can unlock all of their natural abilities such as morphing and chaos energy.

Jep was a normal teenager, aside...
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posted by BurningBlazie
ɪᴛ ᴡᴀs ʟᴀᴛᴇ. ᴠᴇʀʏ ʟᴀᴛᴇ. ʙeʀɴᴀᴅᴇᴛᴛᴇ ᴛʜᴇ ᴄᴀᴛ ᴡᴀs ᴀʟʀᴇᴀᴅʏ ᴀᴡᴀᴋᴇ. ʜᴇʀ ᴇᴀʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴇʏᴇs ᴏɴ ᴀʟᴇʀᴛ. sʜᴇ ʀᴏsᴇ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇʀ ғᴇᴇᴛ. ᴛʜᴀᴛ's ᴡʜᴇɴ sʜᴇ ʜᴇᴀʀᴅ ɪᴛ...

It swooped down and grabbed someone. A girl. A squirrel girl. This girl was hollering like mad! It seemed so hard to believe that such a small girl could make such a large noise in the night. It didn't care, though. It threw the poor little soul into its mouth, and she was gone. It looked at the tree...
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Tonight, the lamp lights fade away,
He thinks about how all of you could be a different way.
Old scars slash knife,
red blood in the moonlight glisten beautifully ...

He wanders deeper into the past,
running to escape the emptiness.
Journey deeper into the space of mourning,
opens the gates of darkness.

Dancing whit the death, he cries with great joy:
"Now at last be free from all this I can get!
I do not return to the suffering of the world would never again be,
I want to sleep in peace, I am not afraid of God! "


He believed, hoped and loved, so
deeply engraved the names of his soul to the walls.

The days...
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posted by TakTheFox
Part three

It had been a week since the lynx-girl known as “Rynk” met the strange hooded-female known as “Rin”. Nothing in particular had happened… until…

Rynk was strolling through the streets of Semretechs once again, in search of something to do, or more importantly, something to eat. Her last meal was ruined when she had decided to get some food from a homeless shelter, but a conflict interrupted.

It began with a man simply asking if she could hand her one of her biscuits. Without looking at him, she pointed at the food-stand, which still had plenty.

“Can’t you just hand me...
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posted by numnumyellow67
I Stood there panting with my Blaster Blade in my hand, barely standing up.
I stared at him with the look of pure revenge on my face covered with blood.
I looked around, at all my fallen friends, everyone who tried to help me destroy this monster. Zypher, Matt, Mugen everybody... No, no! I won't lose anybody else to this, there's got to be a way to bring them back, and with that as my motivation, I charged at him yelling at the top of my lungs.
"You monster, Jenso, I won't let you get away with this!" I cried as I ran at him.
I swung my Blaster Blade at him, a futile attempt to bring him down.
He...
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