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poem i wrote:)

it sucks but oh well..ill take constructive criticism. plzz rate it between 1-10

here it goes:

shooting star( the title)

i look up at the sky at night
even when its dark its bright
and if i where to crinqe in fright
i know you would hold me, tonight
your kinda like my shooting star
your not near but your not far
i wait for you day and night
i want you to say its allright
you are there
you arent far
you are my
shooting star

mm. i hope thats how it went. well..im not really into poetry and thts my first poem ever!

 heavenly13 posted over a year ago
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peterslover said:
Well done! Very artistic, clever, poetic.


One thing though, this does NOT belong in the question. This is an article. Fans will see that you posted an article, that shows up in the updates just like questions, picks, etc!
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Well done! Very artistic, clever, poetic. One thing though, this does NOT belong in the question. This is an article. Fans will see that you posted an article, that shows up in the updates just like questions, picks, etc!
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oh..okay. i didnt know if anyone really answered artivles. lol. ill remember that
heavenly13 posted over a year ago
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And you can post images there too!
peterslover posted over a year ago
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Keep up with your poetry! Well done!
peterslover posted over a year ago
volleyblue13 said:
I love it! so cute :)
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mikeguy said:
i think is awesome and better than mine
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nah! i like yours better! we should write one together one day. jk..im not really into poetry
heavenly13 posted over a year ago
demon_wolf said:
I think its really good. Its sweet. I like it. =D. I would give it 5 stars if it was posted in an article. ^^
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oh...ooops. i didnt know we could post those at the time.lol
heavenly13 posted over a year ago
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Its alright. =). All thats matters is that people like the poem. ^^
demon_wolf posted over a year ago
clevercaoimhe said:
it sweet you should do more poetry=)
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i may
heavenly13 posted over a year ago
archiejake1991 said:
I love it.....awesome.i'll give 10/10.:)
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thanks!
heavenly13 posted over a year ago
amethyst44 said:
so cute!! I love it!! Keep writing---it seems like you have a career ahead of you!!! :D
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lol..i wanna be a wrter but notwh poetry!
heavenly13 posted over a year ago
rkrahu said:
I like that Your first attempt then it's very well
U just attaching someone who is special like special shooting star.
Shooting star gives u expectation or wishes
and in poet someone like shooting star.
1-2 word I can't recognized but whole is superb
keep it up
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