Need help with writing

Hi
I really want to be a real writer one day, so any help would be appreciated.

I have posted some of my stories on other writing clubs and received little or no comments.
Now I post most of my stories on a club I made called ITF's stories.

I write mostly about animals like mice and squirrels that live in a medieval setting (kind of like the Redwall books) but also wild cats (like Warriors) and wolves.

Now I post most of my stories on a club I made called ITF's stories.

I would be grateful for any help or comments (good or bad).