ok I am not really good at writing poems but I figured i let others see.. i figured this would be better cuz no one would know me...

Outside the air is freezing
but inside the lights are out
The wind is whippiong by
As the clouds fill the open sky
The moon is covered
as are the stars
And fog begins the fill
the empty boulevard
Mist is everywhere
Let me out of here
The crows circle around
and squak out into the silence
Filling the air with a
high schreeching sound
An apple falls from the tree
and splattersa all over the ground
The is no one else around
I scream, I kick
I awaken, with my mother by my side


So what do you think?