Poetry 2 Poems Of Mine

fangs286 posted on Aug 11, 2011 at 03:34PM
Alive?

My heart only beats while standing still.

My soul only pulses when i am going no where.

My life and soul stand still at the furthest edge of reality while I join souls in their quest to radiate life.

Forgiveness.

Forgiveness is to forget.

We can sit here all day and make lists of what we've done wrong but where would that get us besides feeling the burden of my fall?

now u post 2 poems and then the person below will post more, and tell u what they thought of your poem. so whoever responds 1st to this forum, you tell me what you thought of mine.

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over a year ago XxXLolaXxX said…
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hope and peace are smiling at you today <3