Penguins of Madagascar Article: tortured....chapter 3

posted by spmana123

i was standing there, next to ricos corpse, tears coming down my cheeks, knowing that ill never see him again, never see hm smile, or do anything with me anymore, and i couldnt get here in time to save him, kowalksi and private were sitting next to his body, crying out loud. i snapped, and started running towards blowhole.

skipper:ILL KILL YOU!!!!

he dodged my attack and ran straight to the door, along with his minion, and locked us in so we couldnt get out.

skipper:OPEN THE DAMN DOOR YOU COWARD!! WHEN I GET OUT IM GONNA KILL YOU!!!!

i was banging on that door as hard as i could, hoping to get it open, but no luck.

my arms were begiining to become sore, but i did not care, rico was dead, and i wanted revenge for him.

blowhole: you three fell in to my trap! ill see you when you wake up!

then, suddenly, the room was filled with sleeping gas.

private:skipper....(falls to floor)

kowalski:ughh....(falls to the floor)

skipper:ugh....im....gonna...kill...you....(falls to the floor)

when we had awoken from our sleep, we were all in that room still, expect we were tied up to chairs, and kowalski sat in front os us, next to some...weapens....no, they were gonna hurt him next!

kowalski:skipper, what do i do?!?! im scared, i dont want to die!

skipper:calm down, nothings gonna happen to you.

then, blowohle and is minion came in, and blowhole told his minion to stand near kowalski.

kowalski:what are you doing!?!? stay away from me!!!

kowalski was struggling the best he could to get free, but had no luck, just like me and private.

skipper:DON'T YOU LAY A HAND ON HIM BLOWOHLE!!!

private couldnt stop crying, after seeing all this, im sure he was wanting it all to end.

blowhole:minion! grab kowalksi arm!

skipper:BLOWHOLE!!! STOP!!!

kowalski began to plead, begging for nothing to happen to him, crying to let him go, but blowholes minion had a strong grip on his arm and wouldnt let go.

blowhole:now....snap his arm as many times as you can!

and then it happened, the minion began to snap kowalski's arm in all ways possible, i could hear his crying and screaming, begging him to stop, hearing his arm snap and crackle made me cringe, and i couldnt do anything to stop him, i was powerless, just like rico...

blowhole:alright, thats enough.

the minion had stopped, and kowalski's arm was completly destroyed, all i could see was his arm, all bent up, like a knot, kowalski threw up from all the pain, and continued to cry while doing it.

kowalski:ugh...ugh...AHHHHH... IT HURTS!HELP ME SKIPPER PLEASE.....(cough,cough)

blowhole: alright penguins, we'll see you in a few hours to continue what we started.

and with that blowhole and his minion left again shutting the door and locking it behind them, all we could do was sit there and hope we all wake up from this horrible nightmare...only to realize....that this was real,and there was nothing we could do about it.

end of chapter 3.........

BOLTravolta This is getting good!

spmana123 Thanks, chapter 4 should be up by today for u to read

peacebaby7 I don't think I have any further advice following this chapter beyond what I already suggested. And, now that I've read all of the chapters that are posted, I'd like to say that the plot of the story is getting very intriguing. I can't believe Rico died! D: So sad. I do think you could add more detail so you could really get a tear in your reader's eye, though. Otherwise, please, never give up on writing. Just keep going and improving and you'll be writing to-die-for fanfics in no-time. :) And just so you know, it wasn't that I didn't want to read your story before, like I said I was busy. Ironically, I've been busy editing old fanfics on Word because I absolutely HATE how my firsts sound now that I've grown in writing. So NEVER feel bad if you ever think your fanfics are bad. They're really not, for one, and for two, no one gets it right the first time. Always remember that even the most famous authors had to learn beforehand. ;)

spmana123 Thanks for the feedback, it really helps, but I'm gonna leave chapter 4 as it is because I wrote it all, but I'll write chapter 5 like a novel format, thx again

peacebaby7 ^You're welcome. Remember, they're only suggestions. :) I can't wait to see how you do. :D But you [i]really[/i] didn't mind it? I do tend to ramble too much, and if you want me to shut up, just say it. XD

spmana123 It's ok, I like it when somebody gives opinions about my stuff, so that way I can make it even better, so what do you think of the story so far, what do u think will happen?

peacebaby7 ^Well, like I said, I think you have a very intriguing plot. Especially since not many people actually kill off any of the penguins (as far as what I've read, that is). It's kind of cliche, which makes your story unique. As to what I think will happen, I really can't begin to guess, which is a very good quality in fanfictions, in my opinion. I do hope Blowhole pays for what he's done, though. >:( So, really good job coming up with a storyline. Just work on your grammar, spelling, and format and you're golden. :D

spmana123 Thanks:) chapter 4 should be up really soon I'm typing it right now, make sure to stay on so you'll be the first reader

peacebaby7 ^No worries. I'll be on for the next couple hours before I gotta go to bed. :)

starthepenguin this is really good usually i try to avoid sad stories but this one is really good keep writing :)

Rainshadow999 Far out! I want to swear! Why the Hell am I a Vivid Reader?!?!?!? God, they don't even do this in Hell!!! Damn you beautiful angel, God really has cursed us, with images! Sorry but God am I a Vivid Reader…

Rainshadow999 Lol, reading what I said a day ago. I blame that all on Rainshadow, lol. starthepenguin@ Are you smirking???

News Flash! : The Origins of the Madagascar Franchise

posted by TheRatKing1

October 31st, 2004, DreamWorks Studios, Redwood City, California, a conference room
The main producers of DreamWorks Studious, and several directors, authors and animators, respectively, were seated around a large, rectangular table. Today it is empty, save for Tom McGrath; a creative consultant, director, producer, and sometimes voice actor for some of DreamWorks’ films, who is an older man in his forties, with brownish, thinning hair, Jeff Katzenberg, a.k.a THE Head Honcho at DreamWorks, Eric Darnell, like Tom McGrath, a writer, and Mirelle Soria, a film editor.
The men and women seated here...

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Operation: Family, part 7

posted by queenpalm

When the family hug finally stopped, it was getting late (it already was).
"I'm so happy, this will be your first night home!" Urka said.
Rico shook his head. "I already have a home."
"Oh then. Are you still staying?"
"No."
Urka nodded. "Wherever you're going, my boy, we'll go."
"Rico lives with his friends in America," Ru said.
"All the way in America? How are we suppose to get there before night?!"
"One of his friends build a machine to take us here, and back," Rica said.
"Plus, one of his friends came with him!" Ru explained.
Urka looked around. "Are you sure you're not in a crazy stage?"
"Kowalski!"...

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Truth Of The Unforgotten Past: Chapter 6 Time For Sacrifice

posted by MadagascarGirl

"Dad, we must do something!" Private said when Katherine went out of the HQ.
'He called me dad' Skipper thought "I'll go to save her"
"I want to go with you" Private said when Skipper climbed up on the ladder.
"No, it's too dangerous, son"
"So we'll go with you" Kowalski said.
"Ok, only you and Rico, Private, stay in here"
"Drink it, that will heal you" Kowalski said and gave Private his invention juice. They went out of the HQ.
Meanwhile Katherine entered to Blowhole's lab.
"Blowhole?" There was dark. Suddenly she felt a hit on her head and she fainted.
"What happened?" Katherine said to herself when...

2

FanFiction for CuteCuddly

posted by Saori14

I'll think of a title later...

Chapter One: The Transfer
“Skipper, maybe you should take a look at this.” Kowalski swivelled the monitor round to Skipper. “Transferred? Aquarium? California? OTTER?!?” Skipper scanned the document, but it seemed foolproof enough. “How are we going to tell Marlene?” Private asked meekly. “We is a generalization, Private. I’m going alone.” Skipper wasn’t sure he was making the right decision, but if not then he’d just wing it as usual. “Are you sure, Skipper?” Kowalski asked, poking up from behind him. “Positive, soldier. If I’m not...

Freedom Book 1: Destiny Awaits

posted by werockz

FREEDOM

One world to be destroyed...one enemy to be defeated...one hope to last...and one penguin to save the world...and to rise above the others.

Introduction (Private's POV)

"This is the first book so I'm telling the details. Anyway, I know that I've faced trials just to save everyone's life. So, let me share it with you. This all started with changing my fate to start a new life. Of course Phoebe, Nutty, Matthew and Yin were there but here I am twelve years later still eleven. Possibly, you'll find out why I remained eleven forever. Since the guys twelve years ago were dead after a battle...

1

Penguin Bloopers: Eclipsed

posted by peacebaby7

Congaga: Take 1

Julien: "I am the conga king! Doing the conga thing! Tail up then tail down! Hold my bottom & sing!"

Julien/Maurice/Mort: "Escongo! Congaga!--"

Julien: "Stay on key, Mort!"

Director: "Julien, that was you..."

Congaga: Take 2

Julien: "I am the conga king! Doing the conga thing! Tail up then tail down! Hold my bottom & sing!"

Julien/Maurice/Mort: "Escongo! Congaga! Walk on in! Congaga! You can't stop! Congaga! Jump in line & sing! Congaga!"

Julien: "Please don't be tardy! Be on time to this dance party! Please come to this con--Con--CON! Congagaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!...

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Penguins of Madagascar Comedy

posted by queenpalm

(I made this all up myself)

What is Rico's favorite song?
Dynamite.
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Private: Mmm! This is good hering!
Kowalski: That isn't hering, that's wild goldfish!
Private: Blah! I didn't even know those existed!
Kowalski: They don't.
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Kowalski: Trick question, Skipper. Why is the Sun red?
Skipper: Is this about Rico?
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What is black, white, and orange, black, white, and orange, black, white, and orange, black, white, and orange?
The Penguins of Madagascar.
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Why did the bomb cross the road?
It was in Rico's stomach....

The return of the return of the revenge of Dr. Blowhole

posted by ricoiswsome

Blowhole: I now remember who I am, time to visit the penguins *evil laugh*

Another arrival at the zoo for the penguins arrives

Skipper: Hello friend what's your name?
Red: Hi my name's Red me and my sister are pleased to meet you.
Skipper: Sister?
Arlene: Hi I'm Arlene.
Kowalski: hi I'm Kowalski
Private: I. . . I'm Private
Rico: hi I'm Rico
Skipper: Do you have combate training Red?
Red: yes, my Capitan trained me, till blowhole killed him

Later. . .
Red one: It's nice to see ya doc, we just got word that the penguins got two new arrivals.
Blowhole: Yes, I am aware of that. Soon I'll have my revenge on...

Call of The Fanguins [Chapter 1]

posted by RockOnPoM

Chapter 1: Who Calls At Midnight

Marlene's Habitat, 11:57PM

Marlene was sitting down, waiting for a specific Dragon Fly to appear. Finally, he arrived.

"Hey Marlene. Ready to plan all o' this?" asked Scouter.

"Of course I am. Look, I kept a map of the penguin lair. Ya know, in case of emergencies. There are 4 main enterances. First one is the hole hidden by the penguin's food bowl. The next are the two windows underwater from the penguin habitat. The last one is the air vent. But I doubt I would be able to fit in those pipes." Marlene explained.

"I got an idea. How about I go through the pipes,...

2

Julien's Ball ( Part 3)

posted by juhpink

-Boys, I don't want you to feel sad for me, so we are going back to the hq and you are going to dress up for the night of your Lifes.
-Skipper, it will be a special night, but why are you taking it so serious?
-Because if I were with Marlene, it would be the night of my Life.
It was Amazing- thought Private. Skipper was so different.
We walked and walked and walked and when we got there I just chose my suit and put it on.I didn't said any word. Just don't want to.Kowalski still working in his machine.He was so tired, but he still there working and working...I was so pride of him.
-Kowalski.
-Hey,...

2

Easter

posted by DorisTheDolphin

---Okay, first of all, this is my first fan fic (at least on here), so...expect it to suck. Each chapter might be a bit long so might take a while to write, so be patient!! It's rated T. (13)---
_________________________________________

"PRIVATE!!" The angry leader shouted. He crossed his flippers as he waited for the smallest penguin to arrive.

Rico peered into Skipper's 'quarters', a place for him to relax after missions or just if he has some free time. The heavy penguin's eyes widened as he examined every detail in the room. Full of bunnies and choc eggs.

Damn it, He thought to himself. The...

2

Unexpected Love 2 (Maulene) Story

posted by Jhoman12

*At Marlene's Place* Hey Marlene.Maurice Said "Hi Boyfriend". She Said "Heh" Maurice Laughs Nervously "So What Should We Do Today?Marlene Said "I Have A Surprise For You.Maurice Said "What Is It?"Marlene Said"I'll Tell You Later" *For 2hrs Maurice Learned A Song And He Remembered So His Surprise Was TO Sing For Marlene.*At Marlene's Place* So Whats My Surprise? Marlene Said I'm Going To Sing A Song For You. Oh Maurice That's So Nice Of You Marlene Said *He Is Singing Lauren Hill:Cant Take My Eyes Off You*He Begin To Sing
You're just too good to be true.
Can't take my eyes off of you.
You'd be...

Battle of the boroughs chapter six

posted by beastialmoon

The penguins ran after Marcus. He was really good at digging. He literally tore through the dirt with his flippers at breakneck speed, leaving the others behind in the dust. The others were running just to keep up with him. Marlene and Brook stayed in the very back, doing their best not to get dirt on their coats.

“Can’t we just go home?” Marlene whined

“Negative, Marlene. Without putting an end to Smith’s tyrannical reign, we will be forced on the lam from our own people.” Skipper replied to her, smiling to himself

“Oh… you know, you’re getting as bad as Kowalski.” she retorted...

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Chapter 2: I'm stuck at my uncles house while dolphins invade.

posted by Rini_Kowalski

"Hello Uncle Skipper!" We said.
Skipper calasped his flippers together "Ah, finally, you kids finally made it. The Misses is out to visit her family. But-"
Athena moaned "Oh great, now it'll be a living he-"
"Athena!" I scolded "Watch your language in front of Amelia!"
"Oh she's heard worse!" Athena shoved me.
"Ah, ah, ah, no fighting zone thank you." Skipper ruffled my feather bangs. I had to go back and fix it. Agh!

"So what are we gonna do here Uncle?" Albert asked. mostly giving eye language pointing to the TV.
"How about you kids watch the TV? I'v had an exhausted day. Your Aunt left me in charge...

I Work Alone (10. X in a Tree)

posted by Aquade

Marlene hopped over beside me. “Hey!” she said. “What’s up?”

“Sky, a few clouds,” I replied weakly.

She punched my flipper softly. “Ha ha. Very funny. I’m serious here.”

I opened my beak to reply when we both heard a loud noise. We both glanced at each other. “We should probably check that out,” I said.

“Yeah,” agreed Marlene.

We slid/ran toward the noise. I flipped on the wall while Marlene jumped up beside me. “What is it?” she panted.

I looked through the binoculars. “Not sure yet- Oh!”

“What is it?”

“Just some guy in a tree animal napping a squirrel.”...