Leyton <3

Hey guys!
I am writing a Leyton fic called Too Far Gone for the past 3 months. It has been published on fanfiction.net, and it has done pretty amazing over there! I know there are a couple of you here who are into fanfiction, and if you are one of those people, scroll down and read the first chapter that I have posted below. I am actually pretty far along with this fic (currently on chapter 22) so if you are interested, updates should be extremely fast since almost 3/4 of the story is already done.
So this is what I am asking of those of you who take the time to read this story...I am going...

Well I want Leyton to have their own vows so I decided to write down what they should tell each other..... I hope u like it :)


[Lucas puts the ring on Peytons finger]

LUCAS: I could stand here and say all kinds of things about my love for you but I rather just say one word, "Lonely" that's what you were before. I met you and you were alone, kind of like me, just some high school kid looking for something in the world and I found you, I found you Peyton. I fought for you, lost you, saved you from death and I kept saving you until one day you saved me. The day my world became clear, the day I...

It opens with Hilarie coming out on stage at the concert. She introduces Haley. Haley comes out and freezes on stage. You see her wake up from a nightmare in her room.
Brooke goes to her fridge and gets out some water. She sees Sam at the table. She has made breakfast and is waiting with a smile.
Millie comes in with a bag to Mouth’s room and Gigi is sleeping in his bed. Mouth is on the couch sleeping. Millie still seems upset and leaves.
Nathan comes in in a wheelchair and teases Haley. He said the doctor said he’s fine. She tells him about her nightmare of forgetting her words. Nathan says...

We all know Leyton are meant to be, but for some totally obsurd and ridiculously crazy reason, some people have doubts that its peyton that lucas calls.

I am here to prove otherwise.

So first things first, Mark has said that Leyton is happening next season. We don't know if its just for a short while or if its finally for good, but this DEFINATELY gives Peyton a bigger chance of being the one Lucas calls, no? And earlier in the season, when she kissed him, he full on kissed her back! you don't just effing kiss someone who you don't like. and people- he wrote to whole freaking novels about the...