Before you start reading, I'd like to say this is my personal opinion. Maybe I'm wrong. If I am, I'd appreciate you don't get mad because I don't like fighting. It wasn't meant to be rude, mean or hurtfull to anybody.
For me Twilight was too easy to read. I could predict what would happen and the plot was too easy. The thing is, the plot isn't bad. Vampires exist, that's cool. You know one, yes, very cool. But the way Stephenie Meyer introduces it, how she developed her characters, how she modeled the vampire species, that is where Twilight gets people annoyed. It represent the iceburg that sunk the titanic, the heal that killed Achilles...
Us Harry Potter fans wouldn't be as hateful if the Twilight characters were as real and developed as J Rowling's, if the characters weren't *poof* beautiful, attractive, smart, strong and if the plot was something truly well thought off.
Okay Harry Potter fans, imagine Twilight didn't exist. Rowling released a series about vampires. The heroine is a girl who falls in love, after years of friendship with a vampire. They get married, the end.
You find in this 'Rowling's twilight' an elaborate plot. There is a logical porblem, climax as climatic as it gets, a twist that nobody could have expected.
The girl isn't a Bella. It's a Hermione, or a Ginny. She refuses to play weak and defenceless she stands by herself and doesn't depend. This sceries could be alright, no?
That's because the idea behind Twilight isn't bad. I just wish somebody other then Meyer would have gotten the idea and how it would've been developed more. If Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ginny and Ron Weasley's personalitites and characters would've been the Twilight vampires, we'd ALL be gaga for this new series.
What's wrong with Twilight, it isn't the diea of vampires.
It's how theese vampires are, and how Bella is portrayed.
ps. I,m not saying Meyer is a bad writter. Everybody needs constructive critisism for her first time writting. If she writes agian I'll surely try it. This is also one of my first articles and I,m not very old, so please keep that in mind.
For me Twilight was too easy to read. I could predict what would happen and the plot was too easy. The thing is, the plot isn't bad. Vampires exist, that's cool. You know one, yes, very cool. But the way Stephenie Meyer introduces it, how she developed her characters, how she modeled the vampire species, that is where Twilight gets people annoyed. It represent the iceburg that sunk the titanic, the heal that killed Achilles...
Us Harry Potter fans wouldn't be as hateful if the Twilight characters were as real and developed as J Rowling's, if the characters weren't *poof* beautiful, attractive, smart, strong and if the plot was something truly well thought off.
Okay Harry Potter fans, imagine Twilight didn't exist. Rowling released a series about vampires. The heroine is a girl who falls in love, after years of friendship with a vampire. They get married, the end.
You find in this 'Rowling's twilight' an elaborate plot. There is a logical porblem, climax as climatic as it gets, a twist that nobody could have expected.
The girl isn't a Bella. It's a Hermione, or a Ginny. She refuses to play weak and defenceless she stands by herself and doesn't depend. This sceries could be alright, no?
That's because the idea behind Twilight isn't bad. I just wish somebody other then Meyer would have gotten the idea and how it would've been developed more. If Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ginny and Ron Weasley's personalitites and characters would've been the Twilight vampires, we'd ALL be gaga for this new series.
What's wrong with Twilight, it isn't the diea of vampires.
It's how theese vampires are, and how Bella is portrayed.
ps. I,m not saying Meyer is a bad writter. Everybody needs constructive critisism for her first time writting. If she writes agian I'll surely try it. This is also one of my first articles and I,m not very old, so please keep that in mind.
i persenally dont like ether series and heres why!!!
books
twilight
1) i am a reel vampire and i do not sparkl!!! stephanie shud have dun her reasearch before she wrote a book about vampires!!!
2) bella is a bad roll model!!!
4) edwerd is abusiv!!!
5) its unrealistic!!!
6) its badly writen!!!
7) edwerd is describd to much!!! it gets boring!!!
8) its boring overall!!!
harry potter
1) its not relatble!!!
2) its made for kids!!!
3)harry always beets te bad guy!!! he never looses!!!
4) harry gets away wit everything in skool!!!
5) they hav bad frends!!! ron leaves nd dosnt stay wit harry when peeps make fun of him!!!
6) its boring!!!
7) snape keeps his job even tho he bullys students nd is a deth eater!!!
8) dumbledoor doesnt reely care about harry!!! he leaves him at da durslys even tho they are abusiv!!!
movies
both movies hav bad actors nd the filmers didnt follows the boks the way they were suposed to!!!
books
twilight
1) i am a reel vampire and i do not sparkl!!! stephanie shud have dun her reasearch before she wrote a book about vampires!!!
2) bella is a bad roll model!!!
4) edwerd is abusiv!!!
5) its unrealistic!!!
6) its badly writen!!!
7) edwerd is describd to much!!! it gets boring!!!
8) its boring overall!!!
harry potter
1) its not relatble!!!
2) its made for kids!!!
3)harry always beets te bad guy!!! he never looses!!!
4) harry gets away wit everything in skool!!!
5) they hav bad frends!!! ron leaves nd dosnt stay wit harry when peeps make fun of him!!!
6) its boring!!!
7) snape keeps his job even tho he bullys students nd is a deth eater!!!
8) dumbledoor doesnt reely care about harry!!! he leaves him at da durslys even tho they are abusiv!!!
movies
both movies hav bad actors nd the filmers didnt follows the boks the way they were suposed to!!!