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Hi I'm Sierra-bell Clive and I live in a muggle orphanage because my parents died when I was five. My mums was a natural death by cancer but my dad was murdered my the one and only lord voldermort who used to be known as Tom riddle. I have really curly blond hair with some red throughout it and I had violet eyes and i also have a twin brother named Suanden who's hair was the opposite of mine and he had golden eyes. Enough about me let's get onto the story here.
Chapter 1 the day i got adopted
It was just an ordinary at the orphanage for me and my twin Suanden but that all changed when the owner of the orphanage mrs bins told me there was a visitor for me.
I wondered who this person was because after the last person who tried adopt me ended up getting punched in the face and not since that has anybody come back.
When I entered the room where everybody who gets adopted goes there was a rather chubby man a nice sized women and two boys.
One of the boys was a little chubby and the other one had black hair and emerald green eyes and unlike the other boy this boy was almost as skinny as me.
From that one look at the boy I instantly fell in love with him.
You are Sierra I believe. Yes sir. Well sierra I'm going to adopt you and I'm not saying I will love you but I'm just doing this because my little dodders wanted a sister.
All right Sierra this is duddley dursley and the one there is Harry potter.
Mr dursley said Harrys name as though he despised him.
When we got to their house mr dursley told me id be staying with Harry until he could get me a different room. I dragged my few possessions which were my photo album of my parents and my twin Suanden and my very few clothes.
The room was fairly small and was covered in posters of some random person flying a broomstick, one of Harry with what looked like his friends, there were also lots of photos of like stuff that had griffindor written on it and the last one was the on his bedside table witch was of a young boy and his parents smiling.
That's me and my parents.
They looked happy what happened to them. They were both murdered by a guy named Tom riddle.
That's funny because I got told my dad was murdered by the same person.
Know that's kreepy.
Very.
What happened to your mum?
Oh my mum died of cancer when I was five then my dad was murdered when I was seven.
At least you knew yours a bit.
What do you mean?
Mine died when I was one and know I'm stuck with my aunt and uncle.
Try living at an orphanage with your annoying twin.
You have a twin.
Yes my brother saunden who lives with someone that I don't know he has been living there since just
before I got here so not very long.
Am I going to go to school.
How old are you?
I'm eleven.
Well I'm not sure because I've got the feeling your what I am
Hi I'm Sierra-bell Clive and I live in a muggle orphanage because my parents died when I was five. My mums was a natural death by cancer but my dad was murdered my the one and only lord voldermort who used to be known as Tom riddle. I have really curly blond hair with some red throughout it and I had violet eyes and i also have a twin brother named Suanden who's hair was the opposite of mine and he had golden eyes. Enough about me let's get onto the story here.
Chapter 1 the day i got adopted
It was just an ordinary at the orphanage for me and my twin Suanden but that all changed when the owner of the orphanage mrs bins told me there was a visitor for me.
I wondered who this person was because after the last person who tried adopt me ended up getting punched in the face and not since that has anybody come back.
When I entered the room where everybody who gets adopted goes there was a rather chubby man a nice sized women and two boys.
One of the boys was a little chubby and the other one had black hair and emerald green eyes and unlike the other boy this boy was almost as skinny as me.
From that one look at the boy I instantly fell in love with him.
You are Sierra I believe. Yes sir. Well sierra I'm going to adopt you and I'm not saying I will love you but I'm just doing this because my little dodders wanted a sister.
All right Sierra this is duddley dursley and the one there is Harry potter.
Mr dursley said Harrys name as though he despised him.
When we got to their house mr dursley told me id be staying with Harry until he could get me a different room. I dragged my few possessions which were my photo album of my parents and my twin Suanden and my very few clothes.
The room was fairly small and was covered in posters of some random person flying a broomstick, one of Harry with what looked like his friends, there were also lots of photos of like stuff that had griffindor written on it and the last one was the on his bedside table witch was of a young boy and his parents smiling.
That's me and my parents.
They looked happy what happened to them. They were both murdered by a guy named Tom riddle.
That's funny because I got told my dad was murdered by the same person.
Know that's kreepy.
Very.
What happened to your mum?
Oh my mum died of cancer when I was five then my dad was murdered when I was seven.
At least you knew yours a bit.
What do you mean?
Mine died when I was one and know I'm stuck with my aunt and uncle.
Try living at an orphanage with your annoying twin.
You have a twin.
Yes my brother saunden who lives with someone that I don't know he has been living there since just
before I got here so not very long.
Am I going to go to school.
How old are you?
I'm eleven.
Well I'm not sure because I've got the feeling your what I am