FanFiction.net Article: Oban World 2/4

posted by ObanKing

Eva and The Rest Of The Team Head For Alwas To
Investingate The Trail Of The Source that is
inside Eva's Watch But.........Ruuu...Ruuu.Ruuuuuu
Warning!!!! a Giant Diamond of Ice fell out
of the sky Then Eva Became CyberGirl Again
With Her Sword Ready Then The Battle Began A
Hurricane of Many Numbers Came Around Her And They
Started An Server Cyberbattle(The Battle Between
a Cyberperson And A Cybersoul) The Unknown Stranger Used A Poison Bag And it Hurt Eva with
200 Cyberpoints Left She is a Goner Eva Used Her
Sword To Cut Him But he Lost 200 cyberpoints with
200 left Eva Has The Chance To Beat Him But
The Unknown Stranger Used Hypnosis Then Eva Fell
Asleep The He Used A Poison Bag Then She Fell
But She Woke Up And Hit Him 1 More Time With
Her Sword Then Defeated Him But The Black Aura
Became a Monster Then Eva Used Both Swords To Hit Him But Then The Black Aura Was Around Eva
Then Eva Dodged It But He Got A Cyberfoot
and Eva Lost 150 Cyberpoints So She Used Cyberdata
then His Body Had Red Numbers Then Boom
She Got The Cybersoul Then Used Youkou Mancan(Cyberdefence Blocks The Bad Guy From Using Cyberdata On You) Then Eva Told The Team Let's Go
Keep Investingating!

Kipje Ok... not all words need to start with a capital you know. Generally speaking just names and the words at the beginning of a sentence.

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The Host Chapter 9 Not What It Seems (9/10)

posted by HaleyDewit

“You do want Elena back, right?” Jeremy asked. He was sitting at the living table with Stefan. They were in the boarding house. Katherine was upstairs, refusing to be part of any of this.
“Jeremy, she is still my girlfriend” Stefan said. “I haven’t lost her”
Jeremy nodded. “Yeah, I guess that’s why she’s with Damon now” he said.
Stefan closes his eyes, trying not to lose his temper. “She’s a free girl, Jeremy, she’s not my possession” he said with a trembling voice that made it sound like he thought otherwise. “Damon is her friend and I promised I wouldn’t keep...

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The Host Chapter 7 The Hunt (5/10)

posted by HaleyDewit

When Elena finally arrived at the kitchen, all showered and dressed, Stefan was sitting on the sink having a blood bag in his hand, which appeared to be his breakfast. Blood streamed from the corners of his mouth, but he didn’t bother to wipe them away, not even when Elena shot him a yuck glance. She went to sit with her back to him. If she was still going to have breakfast she could not stand the view of a blood drinking boyfriend. She shoved the cereals to her and filled her bowl. Then she poured milk in it. She recalled the morning before when Damon had been baking those delicious pancakes....

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The Host Chapter 1 The First (9/10)

posted by HaleyDewit

Katherine was lying lazy on the bed, looking bored at the ceiling. She would kill Klaus for taking her bracelet. Correction, she would let Damon kill him. She was really strong, but yet no match for the Originals. Not that Damon was, but if she had to choose, she believed her afterlife to be more worthy than Damon’s. “Geez, hurry up” she mumbled frustrated. Being locked up in this room was getting on her nerves. There was nothing interesting in here and you could only examine Damon’s rubbish so many times. After a while it was not fun anymore. The door went open and Katherine got up....