DUNCAN'S POV:
I was setting at a table in a dark room. I looked over at a mirror that i knew was a two way. I knew they were watching me.
Two cops walked in.... one looked around 40 and the other no older than 35. they set down at the table and started asking me questions.
COP ONE: what is you relationship with Courtney Blackwell?
ME: she is my girlfriend......
COP TWO: How long have you been going out with her?
ME: since right after total drama action..... around 2 years.
COP ONE: Have you ever touched Courtney?
I looked at him. Hatred burning my eyes.
ME: NO! NEVER I love Courtney.
COP ONE: So you didnt kill her?
ME: NO!
COP TWO: Are you sure..... we have been looking at your files and we see you have quite a past the most resent was a club fight in wich you punched out the owner's son. You want to tell us about that????
ME: the son of a bitch was hurassing Courtney. She told him to back off but he wouldnt and when he fallowed her around inside the club and grabbed her I had to protect her..... Do you KNOW who that man was???? what he has done to girls like Courtney???? Stars????
COP TWO: Stars????
ME: Reality tv stars.... he reconized Courtney from the show and he had this crazy idea that they were together and she was cheating on him with me. So if you want to cetch her murderer Id look at that crazy jack ass! (I was shouting and tears are rolling down my cheeks)
COP ONE: Courtney was moving out of town.. heading off to college..... how did that make you feel?
ME: proud of her..... she was working so hard and she deservse the best.
COP ONE: you werent made she was leaving you???
ME: she wasnt leaving me...... i was moving with her.
COP TWO: Really???
ME: Well not at first.... I told her i love her and that i was happy for her but I wasnt going to hold her back... that I wanted her to go and never look back. I loved her so I was cutting her free, that is when she told me she was pregnant. I was so happy..... we made plans and got an apartment 2 blocks from her school and I got a job. We had a life planned out for us.
They looked shocked. I guess they didnt know Courtney was 2 months pregnant.
(yelling with tears in my eyes) so why would i kill the only woman i have ever loved and our beautiful unborn child????
They left me in that room for around 3 hours and then htey set me free. I was being escorted out when I came across the man they arrested for her murder..... the reall murderer. It was the scum form the club. The stalker who had gone crazy and killed her when he found out she was pregnant with my child.
I was setting at a table in a dark room. I looked over at a mirror that i knew was a two way. I knew they were watching me.
Two cops walked in.... one looked around 40 and the other no older than 35. they set down at the table and started asking me questions.
COP ONE: what is you relationship with Courtney Blackwell?
ME: she is my girlfriend......
COP TWO: How long have you been going out with her?
ME: since right after total drama action..... around 2 years.
COP ONE: Have you ever touched Courtney?
I looked at him. Hatred burning my eyes.
ME: NO! NEVER I love Courtney.
COP ONE: So you didnt kill her?
ME: NO!
COP TWO: Are you sure..... we have been looking at your files and we see you have quite a past the most resent was a club fight in wich you punched out the owner's son. You want to tell us about that????
ME: the son of a bitch was hurassing Courtney. She told him to back off but he wouldnt and when he fallowed her around inside the club and grabbed her I had to protect her..... Do you KNOW who that man was???? what he has done to girls like Courtney???? Stars????
COP TWO: Stars????
ME: Reality tv stars.... he reconized Courtney from the show and he had this crazy idea that they were together and she was cheating on him with me. So if you want to cetch her murderer Id look at that crazy jack ass! (I was shouting and tears are rolling down my cheeks)
COP ONE: Courtney was moving out of town.. heading off to college..... how did that make you feel?
ME: proud of her..... she was working so hard and she deservse the best.
COP ONE: you werent made she was leaving you???
ME: she wasnt leaving me...... i was moving with her.
COP TWO: Really???
ME: Well not at first.... I told her i love her and that i was happy for her but I wasnt going to hold her back... that I wanted her to go and never look back. I loved her so I was cutting her free, that is when she told me she was pregnant. I was so happy..... we made plans and got an apartment 2 blocks from her school and I got a job. We had a life planned out for us.
They looked shocked. I guess they didnt know Courtney was 2 months pregnant.
(yelling with tears in my eyes) so why would i kill the only woman i have ever loved and our beautiful unborn child????
They left me in that room for around 3 hours and then htey set me free. I was being escorted out when I came across the man they arrested for her murder..... the reall murderer. It was the scum form the club. The stalker who had gone crazy and killed her when he found out she was pregnant with my child.
Okay I'm curious as to what you readers want.I only have 1 comment for my new chapter and its been 2 days.I don't know if i'M just impatient or if my story really sucks.I know most of you rpobably like it and don't comment but,I have a low self esteem and when i don't see comments i don't feel too confident to continue because i think no one will read them.My WHY DO YOU LIKE HER story is the most popular now.And that was one of the first ones I did.Now I think I peeked too early.
Anyway,it helps me to see more comments about my stories to continue.SO please comment!PLEASE!NO one make fun of me please!
Anyway,it helps me to see more comments about my stories to continue.SO please comment!PLEASE!NO one make fun of me please!
Courtney-um hey so how u doing Duncan-fine fine very nice Duncan-hey can i talk to u in private Courtney-sure sure they walk to a a hallway Trent -im gonna go listen to them be right back dudes .... Duncan-so Courtney um I broke up with Gwen Courtney-why u guys were perfect for each other Duncan-we were cause u were really mean and mad Courtney-i was but then i gusse i got over u Duncan-u did Courtney-i dont know how but i guess i did Duncan-look im sorry if i hert u so would u like to be um Courtney-to still be friends thatll be nice Duncan-sure we can but i ment more than friends Courtney-oh u mean boyfriend and girlfriend Duncan-yeah Courtney-but What will be diffrent this time Duncan-look will be honest and not crazy I just want to be with u Courtney-really? Duncan-really then they kiss
Narrators POV:
Duncan found Courtney and left Steve unconces and went back to the wedding (this only took like 5 min.)Do you Duncan Paine Take Courtney Flower to be your ofley wedded wife...I do and do you Courtney Flower Take Duncan Paine to be your ofley wedded husbind.....I do....not
just kidding I do. Then with the power invested in me I now pronunce you man and wife you may now kiss the bride.
Duncans POV:
With plesher.This is the best day of my life.
Courtneys POV: This is the best day ever.
Narrators POV:
When they got home they poped open a bottle of shapane and watched movies on cable.
Duncan found Courtney and left Steve unconces and went back to the wedding (this only took like 5 min.)Do you Duncan Paine Take Courtney Flower to be your ofley wedded wife...I do and do you Courtney Flower Take Duncan Paine to be your ofley wedded husbind.....I do....not
just kidding I do. Then with the power invested in me I now pronunce you man and wife you may now kiss the bride.
Duncans POV:
With plesher.This is the best day of my life.
Courtneys POV: This is the best day ever.
Narrators POV:
When they got home they poped open a bottle of shapane and watched movies on cable.
Okay; This.. May possibly sound wierd. But! It's kinda related. So.. I was reading Twilight. Then; All of the sudden... The love triangle popped into my mind. Do you know how Edward is protective, somewhat strict about Bella, and who she hangs out with? Well... Edward is like a male version of Courtney. then; Theres... Gwen. -_-. Gwen is layed back; Protective when she wants to be; and knows how to have fun. See? Jacob's a male version if Gwen—Not goth though. Then, Bella is a female version of Duncan. You see how in NewMoon; she got into tons of trouble? And; Thats how Duncan is.
Now.. What do ya think?
Now.. What do ya think?
Duncan`s POV:There was nothing to say.Courtney pulled her fangs back in and started to fastly walk away.I followed her."See.I am a monster."Courtney said."No you are not.So don`t say that."I said grabbing her by the shoulders.She was cold,but I didn`t care cause I loved her.I`ve never loved a girl like Courtney.There was just something about her that made it alright.It felt good though."Thanks.But you don`t understand.I`m a killer."she said."I don`t care."I said.I bent my neck over."You don`t want this."Courtney said."I want you."I said."You are sure?"she asked."Yes."I said.Courtney`s fangs quickly came back out again and sank into my neck.
Today something happend that made me think of duncan and courtney. I was sitting outside of a random class room and I saw my friend Nolan. He stoped and we started to talk. He pulled out a small poke ball and darkri was in it. "Wow." I said "I used to have one of this kind of thing. only it had torchik." Nolan gave it to me and guss what I said without even thinking. " Wow. this is realy dum and chiledish ... but... I love it!" And to make things REALLY strang Nolan was moving only a block away. SSSSOOOOOOO ya. If you think that is strang plz tell me caz I think I am going CRAZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!