It is a year after Tdwt and Duncan and Gwen are still together. In Courtneys’ side she still want her payback .
-FLASHBACK-
One day Gwen was in Leshawnas’ house and was going to spend the night there. Duncan was watching the TV when he had a message from his lawyers that he had to pay them then he went mad because he hadn’t expect that and he gave all his money for buying his new car so he decided to loosen up in a bar.
When he’s arrived he noticed a familiar shadow sitting by the bar. Her onyx eyes were deep in pain, her hair was curly and she was drinking some jus and in her hand was her PDA.
Duncan POV
When I saw her my jaw dropped to the floor and my eyes doubled their size because she was wearing knee high leather boots, fishnets, a schoolgirl's red skirt, a studded belt, and a black tank top that showed off some midriff and a decent amount of cleavage. She had left the makeup very simple except for her smoldering eyes .
‘that girl was Gwen or I was simply dreaming? Is that my girlfriend?’ those questions passed by my mind but I was sure that girl wasn’t Gwen because she was supposed to be at her friends’ house she don’t have any PDA and finally she wasn’t tanned like that hot girl . I mean that girl. (He corrected his self).
I decide to sit by her side then I drank some vodka(a lot of vodka till he got drunk.) I had totally forgotten the girl who was sitting by my side till she dropped the alcohol juice all over my jacket.
“I am sorry” she told me lazily.
“No matter” I replied her as lazily as her .
When I turned my face I saw Courtney, that girl was from the beginning Courtney my ex.
“What are you doing here?” I asked her.
“Duncan? It is you? “She replied.
“Who you want else princess? Wait a minute you’re drunk?”
“Yeah maybe but you’re drunk too . I knew it when I looked at your blue eyes ….and please don’t call me princess” then she giggled loudly .
“Why are you laughing? Are you laughing at me? “
“Kind of …..But for real I am laughing because it was necessary for me and you to be drunk after all those years to have a similar point.”
“And what is that similar point?”
“Both of us are drunk.” Then she giggled again.
I didn’t make out what she was saying but her laugh was so warm that I laughed too.
She was drunk , and sad ( it was clear in her eyes)there was something wrong.
“What’s wrong with you ? Are you OK? ” I asked her.
“Hmm yeah I have some problems….and my heart couldn’t handle it because he is already broken.”
‘Why is it already broken?’ I thought loudly.
“It is broken by you Duncan, remember?”
When I’ve heard those words I had been in shock then I said: “ Can I feel if it still beaten or not?” (Ok it was a rhetoric question I know)
I putted my hand on her chest and felt her heart beating faster than ever .
“Why is it beating so fast?” I asked.
Maybe…. Maybe because of your presence by my side.” She stuttered shyly then blushed.
‘Am I dreaming or she’s just told me that she loves me after all that time?’ I thought surprised.
Courtney POV
‘Oh my god! Why I’ve said that?’ I thought.’ I am over him now, I think, I mean I am sure’
“Court…”
“What?” I wasn’t expecting what he is going to continue his sentence with.
“Court…I am sorry a-about what happened in-in TDWT …. I had never meant to-to hurt you “ he stuttered. “I think…I mean I am sure that I am in love with…….”
-END OF THE FLASHBACK –
Courtney POV
In the next morning I was sleeping on something so comfortable, something so warm, something … ‘Wait a minute why am I sleeping on “something” and not in my bed?
Comment please and be gentle cause this is my first fiction, and don't forget to wait for the part 2 !
see u!
-FLASHBACK-
One day Gwen was in Leshawnas’ house and was going to spend the night there. Duncan was watching the TV when he had a message from his lawyers that he had to pay them then he went mad because he hadn’t expect that and he gave all his money for buying his new car so he decided to loosen up in a bar.
When he’s arrived he noticed a familiar shadow sitting by the bar. Her onyx eyes were deep in pain, her hair was curly and she was drinking some jus and in her hand was her PDA.
Duncan POV
When I saw her my jaw dropped to the floor and my eyes doubled their size because she was wearing knee high leather boots, fishnets, a schoolgirl's red skirt, a studded belt, and a black tank top that showed off some midriff and a decent amount of cleavage. She had left the makeup very simple except for her smoldering eyes .
‘that girl was Gwen or I was simply dreaming? Is that my girlfriend?’ those questions passed by my mind but I was sure that girl wasn’t Gwen because she was supposed to be at her friends’ house she don’t have any PDA and finally she wasn’t tanned like that hot girl . I mean that girl. (He corrected his self).
I decide to sit by her side then I drank some vodka(a lot of vodka till he got drunk.) I had totally forgotten the girl who was sitting by my side till she dropped the alcohol juice all over my jacket.
“I am sorry” she told me lazily.
“No matter” I replied her as lazily as her .
When I turned my face I saw Courtney, that girl was from the beginning Courtney my ex.
“What are you doing here?” I asked her.
“Duncan? It is you? “She replied.
“Who you want else princess? Wait a minute you’re drunk?”
“Yeah maybe but you’re drunk too . I knew it when I looked at your blue eyes ….and please don’t call me princess” then she giggled loudly .
“Why are you laughing? Are you laughing at me? “
“Kind of …..But for real I am laughing because it was necessary for me and you to be drunk after all those years to have a similar point.”
“And what is that similar point?”
“Both of us are drunk.” Then she giggled again.
I didn’t make out what she was saying but her laugh was so warm that I laughed too.
She was drunk , and sad ( it was clear in her eyes)there was something wrong.
“What’s wrong with you ? Are you OK? ” I asked her.
“Hmm yeah I have some problems….and my heart couldn’t handle it because he is already broken.”
‘Why is it already broken?’ I thought loudly.
“It is broken by you Duncan, remember?”
When I’ve heard those words I had been in shock then I said: “ Can I feel if it still beaten or not?” (Ok it was a rhetoric question I know)
I putted my hand on her chest and felt her heart beating faster than ever .
“Why is it beating so fast?” I asked.
Maybe…. Maybe because of your presence by my side.” She stuttered shyly then blushed.
‘Am I dreaming or she’s just told me that she loves me after all that time?’ I thought surprised.
Courtney POV
‘Oh my god! Why I’ve said that?’ I thought.’ I am over him now, I think, I mean I am sure’
“Court…”
“What?” I wasn’t expecting what he is going to continue his sentence with.
“Court…I am sorry a-about what happened in-in TDWT …. I had never meant to-to hurt you “ he stuttered. “I think…I mean I am sure that I am in love with…….”
-END OF THE FLASHBACK –
Courtney POV
In the next morning I was sleeping on something so comfortable, something so warm, something … ‘Wait a minute why am I sleeping on “something” and not in my bed?
Comment please and be gentle cause this is my first fiction, and don't forget to wait for the part 2 !
see u!
~in hallways with Calvin and Courtney~
Calvin: HOW COULD YOU THINK THAT IT WAS OK FOR YOU TO DANCE WITH DUNCAN TO THAT SAME SONG!?!?!?
Courtney: well excuse me but i didn't think that i needed your permission.
Calvin: *pins her to lockers*
Courtney: OMG Calvin!!?!
Calvin: *slams her to wall*
Courtney: *falls to ground*
Calvin: oh crap....what did i just do?!
Courtney: *still on ground*
Calvin: get up....please.
Duncan: *walks to hallway and sees Courtney on floor* WTF IS GOING ON HERE!?
Calvin: oh she just fainted.
Duncan: your'e lying.
Calvin: no.....it's the truth.
Duncan: i saw it.
Calvin:.............how did you see it?
Duncan: i didn't. i heard the slam.
Calvin: so?
Duncan: do you have a cell phone on you?
Calvin: wtf? why do you need that?
Duncan: To call an ambulance. my dad is a cop. he taught me all the 911 signals.
Calvin: *sighs* fine. BUT i expect to have my cell phone back.
Duncan: *calls 911*
~at hospital~
Calvin: HOW COULD YOU THINK THAT IT WAS OK FOR YOU TO DANCE WITH DUNCAN TO THAT SAME SONG!?!?!?
Courtney: well excuse me but i didn't think that i needed your permission.
Calvin: *pins her to lockers*
Courtney: OMG Calvin!!?!
Calvin: *slams her to wall*
Courtney: *falls to ground*
Calvin: oh crap....what did i just do?!
Courtney: *still on ground*
Calvin: get up....please.
Duncan: *walks to hallway and sees Courtney on floor* WTF IS GOING ON HERE!?
Calvin: oh she just fainted.
Duncan: your'e lying.
Calvin: no.....it's the truth.
Duncan: i saw it.
Calvin:.............how did you see it?
Duncan: i didn't. i heard the slam.
Calvin: so?
Duncan: do you have a cell phone on you?
Calvin: wtf? why do you need that?
Duncan: To call an ambulance. my dad is a cop. he taught me all the 911 signals.
Calvin: *sighs* fine. BUT i expect to have my cell phone back.
Duncan: *calls 911*
~at hospital~
Okay I'm curious as to what you readers want.I only have 1 comment for my new chapter and its been 2 days.I don't know if i'M just impatient or if my story really sucks.I know most of you rpobably like it and don't comment but,I have a low self esteem and when i don't see comments i don't feel too confident to continue because i think no one will read them.My WHY DO YOU LIKE HER story is the most popular now.And that was one of the first ones I did.Now I think I peeked too early.
Anyway,it helps me to see more comments about my stories to continue.SO please comment!PLEASE!NO one make fun of me please!
Anyway,it helps me to see more comments about my stories to continue.SO please comment!PLEASE!NO one make fun of me please!