Author of JOHN AND POCAHONTAS: FOUND AGAIN
link
I was in the mood for writing a fanfiction but I couldn't think of any ideas so the user qzmaster591 suggested this idea for me.
"Instead of Ariel, some of the other princesses will have to win their princes over with no voice"
I considered Belle, Jasmine, and Rapunzel for this as I felt I could really run with that idea with those princesses in particular. I finally decided on Jasmine and I'm glad I did. I like the way it turned out so far. Anyways, if you enjoyed my first fanfiction I think you'll enjoy this one as well. If you haven't read my first fanfiction, I always enjoy reading comments on it. I posted a link to it above. Anyways. let me actually get to the story now. Here it is and let me know if you want me to keep this going.
JASMINE: UNSPOKEN LOVE
PART ONE
It wasn’t a horrible life. I lived in a palace, after all. I had servants to tend to my every need and desire. I had an amazing best friend who wasn’t even human. The best part of the palace was my room. It had a spacious balcony that overlooked the town below, but it was the view above that I gazed at each night. I looked up at the stars and as a falling star flew through the dark night, I wish I could fly away through that same sky. It wasn’t a horrible life. It wasn’t what I had that troubled me. It was who I was expected to be. A stranger’s bride. To give my life to a man I didn’t know. To sleep next to someone and bear my body to him for the sake of children. To give myself completely to someone I didn’t love. I’d sacrifice life in the palace just to give away everything that came with it. I’d sacrifice everything just to speak, just to tell my father that maybe I don’t want to be a princess anymore. He doesn’t hear me, no one does. No one can. I was born mute and so I was born without a voice. I’ve never spoken a word and I never can.
The night sky was clear. A perfect starless night, but I longed to be that falling star so to fall away from all sadness and pressure. My mother had been my greatest voice, but that was a long time ago. Now it’s my father who tries his best and God bless his effort but even his greatest effort is not my voice. His voice speaks of wedding dresses and wedding bells and walking me down that horrid aisle to that horrid stranger. That’s not my voice. I gazed at the sky, hoping to catch a glimpse of my mother. She told me falling stars were loved ones sending us love from Heaven. It’s been so long since I’ve seen that star. I had to go after it somehow. I had to leave. To disappear. To maybe find a voice somewhere. I gazed at the sky one more time just thinking that if I looked hard enough, I’d be gifted with a voice.
As I climbed the palace wall, I felt a tug on my robe pull me back, and heard a growl.
“Oh Rajah,” I thought. I held my precious tiger close to me and almost regretted my decision to leave, but I couldn’t stay here and have my life lived for me. He whimpered in my arms. My heart broke. I nuzzle my face into his fur leaving him with my tears. I let go, knowing I’d never see him again but it was a choice I had to make. I climbed over the palace wall, giving him one last look. For once I was thankful I could not speak, for speaking a goodbye would break my heart forever.
I left the palace on that starless night, not once looking behind me.
link
I was in the mood for writing a fanfiction but I couldn't think of any ideas so the user qzmaster591 suggested this idea for me.
"Instead of Ariel, some of the other princesses will have to win their princes over with no voice"
I considered Belle, Jasmine, and Rapunzel for this as I felt I could really run with that idea with those princesses in particular. I finally decided on Jasmine and I'm glad I did. I like the way it turned out so far. Anyways, if you enjoyed my first fanfiction I think you'll enjoy this one as well. If you haven't read my first fanfiction, I always enjoy reading comments on it. I posted a link to it above. Anyways. let me actually get to the story now. Here it is and let me know if you want me to keep this going.
JASMINE: UNSPOKEN LOVE
PART ONE
It wasn’t a horrible life. I lived in a palace, after all. I had servants to tend to my every need and desire. I had an amazing best friend who wasn’t even human. The best part of the palace was my room. It had a spacious balcony that overlooked the town below, but it was the view above that I gazed at each night. I looked up at the stars and as a falling star flew through the dark night, I wish I could fly away through that same sky. It wasn’t a horrible life. It wasn’t what I had that troubled me. It was who I was expected to be. A stranger’s bride. To give my life to a man I didn’t know. To sleep next to someone and bear my body to him for the sake of children. To give myself completely to someone I didn’t love. I’d sacrifice life in the palace just to give away everything that came with it. I’d sacrifice everything just to speak, just to tell my father that maybe I don’t want to be a princess anymore. He doesn’t hear me, no one does. No one can. I was born mute and so I was born without a voice. I’ve never spoken a word and I never can.
The night sky was clear. A perfect starless night, but I longed to be that falling star so to fall away from all sadness and pressure. My mother had been my greatest voice, but that was a long time ago. Now it’s my father who tries his best and God bless his effort but even his greatest effort is not my voice. His voice speaks of wedding dresses and wedding bells and walking me down that horrid aisle to that horrid stranger. That’s not my voice. I gazed at the sky, hoping to catch a glimpse of my mother. She told me falling stars were loved ones sending us love from Heaven. It’s been so long since I’ve seen that star. I had to go after it somehow. I had to leave. To disappear. To maybe find a voice somewhere. I gazed at the sky one more time just thinking that if I looked hard enough, I’d be gifted with a voice.
As I climbed the palace wall, I felt a tug on my robe pull me back, and heard a growl.
“Oh Rajah,” I thought. I held my precious tiger close to me and almost regretted my decision to leave, but I couldn’t stay here and have my life lived for me. He whimpered in my arms. My heart broke. I nuzzle my face into his fur leaving him with my tears. I let go, knowing I’d never see him again but it was a choice I had to make. I climbed over the palace wall, giving him one last look. For once I was thankful I could not speak, for speaking a goodbye would break my heart forever.
I left the palace on that starless night, not once looking behind me.
To all disney princesses fans
My poll i created about the new icon has raised some negative feedback about the new proposed one. Mainly because I have not commented about it on the Disney Princesses forum.
Therefore I am very sorry I had no idea you had to voice out your idea first and the poll will be abandoned. I'm not sure how you delete a poll but it's fair to say that the original icon has 80% so it should win.
Please any questions or concerns please comment below.
I hope I haven't lost any popularity because of this.
Andy10B
My poll i created about the new icon has raised some negative feedback about the new proposed one. Mainly because I have not commented about it on the Disney Princesses forum.
Therefore I am very sorry I had no idea you had to voice out your idea first and the poll will be abandoned. I'm not sure how you delete a poll but it's fair to say that the original icon has 80% so it should win.
Please any questions or concerns please comment below.
I hope I haven't lost any popularity because of this.
Andy10B
1) Josh Groban
I have always been a fan of him and after listening to his rendition of If I Can't Love Her from the musical version on Youtube. I personally felt that Josh should have been cast as the Beast!
2) Urs Buhler & Carlos Marin (Il Divo)
Just so you know that Carlos Marin had previously played the Beast in the Madrid production of Disney's Beauty and the Beast, and I personally felt that his voice is more suitable.
The second choice was his Swiss bandmate, Urs Buhler because he has both the looks and voice for both Prince Adam and the Beast.
3) Il Volo
The Jonas Brother version of Il Divo, they sound perfect and Prince Adam would definitely sound very operatic. Do you agree?
Let The World Be Done with Me!
Here are my 3 choices, do you agree?
Snow white was like cinderella almost. cinderella and snow white both had to do all the chores. 1 difrince, snow white was born a princcess and cinderella was not. any way, snow white is 1 most famouse like ariel, cinderella (aready menchend her!), belle, etc........ It turns out that snow white is the youngest and has the shourtest hair, but her hair is not the only one black! Jasmine!
Here is a contest i did with my self the one day-
1) Who has black hair=snow white and jassmine. so who has magic carpit=JASSMINE!
2) who has blound hair=cinderella, arora,repunzle,elsa
who is my 1rst fav out of blound? REPUNZLE!!!!!!
3)who has red hair(this should be easy!)= ariel
and the answer is ARIEL!
4)who has orange/bown/red hair=anna, mrieda
none
the winners!
JASSMINE!
REPUNZLE!
ARIEL!
try it your self!
the end:D
Here is a contest i did with my self the one day-
1) Who has black hair=snow white and jassmine. so who has magic carpit=JASSMINE!
2) who has blound hair=cinderella, arora,repunzle,elsa
who is my 1rst fav out of blound? REPUNZLE!!!!!!
3)who has red hair(this should be easy!)= ariel
and the answer is ARIEL!
4)who has orange/bown/red hair=anna, mrieda
none
the winners!
JASSMINE!
REPUNZLE!
ARIEL!
try it your self!
the end:D
"Well well, isn't it a coincidence that 2 princesses and 2 princes from 2 different eras meet each other. I'm not surprise at all!" said Maleficent coolly.
"Who are you?" asks Cinderella, frightened and trying to keep her voice as calmly as ever. "I'm Maleficent, the Mistress of all Evil." replied Maleficent with pride, Aurora suspects that this isn't the Maleficent that she always knew, as she can tell from the glow onto her eyes. This is an evil Maleficent!
Aurora immediately yelled "You are not Maleficent! You're the evil Maleficent!" At this point, Maleficent declares "It's true! I'm not your Maleficent anymore and I was the one who magically transported you here!" She cracks into her evil laughter and vanishes.
At this point, Aurora bursts into tears and Cinderella, Prince Philip and Kit came to comfort her. Saying that the evil fairy will be perished.
"Who are you?" asks Cinderella, frightened and trying to keep her voice as calmly as ever. "I'm Maleficent, the Mistress of all Evil." replied Maleficent with pride, Aurora suspects that this isn't the Maleficent that she always knew, as she can tell from the glow onto her eyes. This is an evil Maleficent!
Aurora immediately yelled "You are not Maleficent! You're the evil Maleficent!" At this point, Maleficent declares "It's true! I'm not your Maleficent anymore and I was the one who magically transported you here!" She cracks into her evil laughter and vanishes.
At this point, Aurora bursts into tears and Cinderella, Prince Philip and Kit came to comfort her. Saying that the evil fairy will be perished.