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posted by aircloud7
is there really such a thing as a time machine.
The time machine in back to the future 4 runs on rasberry slurpies and hair restoring shampoo.
The flux capacitor is a dimesional convertor that converts 3D+ 2 of time to 10 D plus 2 of time.
Large spacial not curled up.
it converts Einsteins equation to 12 D two time dimensions don't mean one of past and one of future but two pasts and two fufures............
Graham Partis friends have done the math on a 3D model and 2 Dimensions of time works out perfectly.
The math is based on Newtons clock software that you can find on Kogregate.............
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Hi Stephen and Max,

I'm about to go teach a two-day workshop, so I don't have time to respond to all the posts, but let me make a few points.

1. You guys are funny. And you can take that in all its meanings and definitions.

2. The hourly rate is not just for the conversation--it includes time to read the material (1 page = 1.5 minutes)and create notes on structure, story, character, dialogue, etc.

3. If you don't use the whole hour up (it goes quickly, by the way) you can make use of it down the road for another project, or a revisit to revised material.

4. I do have a discounted rate, but it's contingent upon purchasing a package. When you go into a theatre, you either pay the ticket price or you don't. You don't get to say, "Listen, I only want to see the first act of Hamlet--I'll give you a fiver for it. Do we have a deal?"

5. But like I say, you're funny. Look forward to reading more emails

All the best,

Steve

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posted by aircloud7
Hi Stephen and Max,

I'm about to go teach a two-day workshop, so I don't have time to respond to all the posts, but let me make a few points.

1. You guys are funny. And you can take that in all its meanings and definitions.

2. The hourly rate is not just for the conversation--it includes time to read the material (1 page = 1.5 minutes)and create notes on structure, story, character, dialogue, etc.

3. If you don't use the whole hour up (it goes quickly, by the way) you can make use of it down the road for another project, or a revisit to revised material.

4. I do have a discounted rate, but it's contingent upon purchasing a package. When you go into a theatre, you either pay the ticket price or you don't. You don't get to say, "Listen, I only want to see the first act of Hamlet--I'll give you a fiver for it. Do we have a deal?"

5. But like I say, you're funny. Look forward to reading more emails

All the best,

Steve
So I’m not going to resubmit your script to you with dialogue changes, because your dialogue isn’t actually that bad!  Although there’s a few spelling mistakes here and there and some punctuation errors, I think your dialogue as a whole is strong. All your characters have their own voices… which is important, and conversations flow smoothly.

The tone of your script is consistent with the other Back to the Future movies which is crucial if you’re writing a sequel to it! There are a lot of light hearted conversations and your jokes flow well. You had me laughing at some of the jokes,...
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